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写作专项指导
对比利与弊
1.文本类型:写一篇由科技带来变化的文章,对比事物本身的利与弊,属于议论文范畴。
2.要点内容:
　　科技在不断进步,也在急剧改变人们的生活。面对越来越多的由科技产生的新事物、新现象,由于观察角度不同,人们不可避免地会产生不同的看法。这就经常会让我们写一些介绍由科技带来变化的观点类议论文。这种题型写作往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利与弊。有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求学生表明自己的态度或对事物前景提出预测。
1.精彩首段
(1)There is a widespread concern over the issue that...But it is well known that the opinions concerning this hot topic vary from person to person.
有一个引起广泛关注的问题……但众所周知,有关这个热点话题的观点因人而异。
(2)Nowadays many people prefer...because it plays a significant role in our daily life.
现如今很多人更喜欢……因为它在我们的日常生活中扮演着一个重要的角色。
(3)Everything has two sides and ...is not an exception.It has both advantages and disadvantages.
任何事物都有两面性……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
(4)People’s opinions on...vary from person to person.Some people say that ... To them ...
关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)…… 在他们看来……
2.正文描述
(1)There are several measures for us to adopt.First, we can ...
有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先,我们可以……
(2)Faced with...we should take a series of effective measures to ...For one thing...For another...
面对……我们应该采取一系列行之有效的措施来……一方面……另一方面……
(3)People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.
然而,在这个话题上人们的观点各不相同。
(4)Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as follows.
总的来说,它的优点如下。
(5)But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.
但凡事都有利有弊。消极的方面也是很明显的。
3.精彩结尾
(1)Only in this way can we solve the problem.
只有用这种办法,我们才能解决这个问题。
(2)It’s high time that we did something to improve our environment.
该是我们为改善环境做些事情的时候了。
(3)Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is waiting for us.
因此,我相信美好的未来正在等待着我们。
(4)As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.I think that...
就我而言,在某种程度上我同意后者的观点,我认为……
(5)In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of...Only in this way can we...in the future.
总而言之,整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样,我们才能在将来……
(6)If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society,it will be better and better.
如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自己的一份力量,这个社会将会变得越来越好。
请给你们学校的英文报纸SCIENCE栏目用英语写一篇以“Face-scanning Payment: Embrace It or Reject It ”为题目的文章,内容包括:
1.刷脸支付技术的利弊;
2.你的观点。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Ⅰ.对接话题词汇
1.potential adj.可能的;潜在的 n.潜力;可能性
2.innovation n.创新;创造
3.security n.保护措施;安全工作
4.crime n.犯罪活动;不法行为
5.on the one hand 一方面
6.on the other hand 另一方面
Ⅱ.巧用核心句式、语法
1.然而,刷脸支付这项新技术自从产生以来,就一直伴随着热烈的讨论。
There have always been heated discussions about face-scanning payment ever since this innovation came into being.
2.一方面,刷脸支付有其优点。例如,它可以使得支付更加迅速甚至更加方便,而无须使用手机或银行卡。
On the one hand,face-scanning payment has its advantages.For example,it will lead to faster or even more convenient payment with no mobile phone or bank card required.
3.另一方面,有些人会担心刷脸支付可能带来的潜在安全问题。
On the other hand,some people would worry about the potential security problems that face-scanning payment may bring about.
4.如果人们的面部信息被用作犯罪的工具而不是支付手段,那会怎么样
What if people’s facial information is treated as a tool for crime instead of means of payment
5.就我个人而言,我会看到这种新技术积极的一面,拥抱它而不是抗拒它。
As far as I’m concerned,I will look on the positive side of this new technology and embrace it rather than reject it.
6.当然,通过法律来恰当地规范面部信息的使用是至关重要的。
Of course,it is crucial to pass laws to regulate the use of facial information properly.
1.在句2中,用介词including引出例子以使句子表达更精简。
2.用过去分词作后置定语升级句3。
答案:1.On the one hand,face-scanning payment has its advantages,including leading to faster or even more convenient payment with no mobile phone or bank card required.
2.On the other hand,some people would worry about the potential security problems brought about by face-scanning payment.
Face-scanning Payment: Embrace It or Reject It
There have always been heated discussions about face-scanning payment ever since this innovation came into being.
On the one hand,face-scanning payment has its advantages,including leading to faster or even more convenient payment with no mobile phone or bank card required.The situation where people cannot make payments because they forget to bring payment tools will no longer occur.On the other hand,some people would worry about the potential security problems brought about by face-scanning payment.What if people’s facial information is treated as a tool for crime instead of means of payment
As far as I’m concerned,I will look on the positive side of this new technology and embrace it rather than reject it.Of course,it is crucial to pass laws to regulate the use of facial information properly.
最近某英文报社在征稿,主题为“The Advantages and Disadvantages of Electric Dictionaries”。假设你是李华,请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇文章,发给英文报社。
1.电子词典的利弊及理由;
2.你的看法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
One possible version:
The Advantages and Disadvantages
of Electric Dictionaries
Nowadays more and more students prefer electric dictionaries in their language learning.
Generally,electric dictionaries have many advantages.First,it is more convenient and faster.For example,the word can be accompanied with its pronunciation.Second,an electric dictionary usually has other functions and you may have access to a wider range of education resources,from which you can choose what suits you best.
But every coin has two sides.It also has some disadvantages.The important one is that it will do great harm to students’ eyes.To make matters worse,students tend to be easily distracted by other functions of electric dictionaries while using them.
As far as I’m concerned,electric dictionaries are convenient but should be used properly.写作专项指导
对比利与弊
1.文本类型:写一篇由科技带来变化的文章,对比事物本身的利与弊,属于议论文范畴。
2.要点内容:
　　科技在不断进步,也在急剧改变人们的生活。面对越来越多的由科技产生的新事物、新现象,由于观察角度不同,人们不可避免地会产生不同的看法。这就经常会让我们写一些介绍由科技带来变化的观点类议论文。这种题型写作往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利与弊。有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求学生表明自己的态度或对事物前景提出预测。
1.精彩首段
(1)There is a widespread concern over the issue that...But it is well known that the opinions concerning this hot topic vary from person to person.
有一个引起广泛关注的问题……但众所周知,有关这个热点话题的观点因人而异。
(2)Nowadays many people prefer...because it plays a significant role in our daily life.
现如今很多人更喜欢……因为它在我们的日常生活中扮演着一个重要的角色。
(3)Everything has two sides and ...is not an exception.It has both advantages and disadvantages.
任何事物都有两面性……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
(4)People’s opinions on...vary from person to person.Some people say that ... To them ...
关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)…… 在他们看来……
2.正文描述
(1)There are several measures for us to adopt.First, we can ...
有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先,我们可以……
(2)Faced with...we should take a series of effective measures to ...For one thing...For another...
面对……我们应该采取一系列行之有效的措施来……一方面……另一方面……
(3)People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.
然而,在这个话题上人们的观点各不相同。
(4)Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as follows.
总的来说,它的优点如下。
(5)But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.
但凡事都有利有弊。消极的方面也是很明显的。
3.精彩结尾
(1)Only in this way can we solve the problem.
只有用这种办法,我们才能解决这个问题。
(2)It’s high time that we did something to improve our environment.
该是我们为改善环境做些事情的时候了。
(3)Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is waiting for us.
因此,我相信美好的未来正在等待着我们。
(4)As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.I think that...
就我而言,在某种程度上我同意后者的观点,我认为……
(5)In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of...Only in this way can we...in the future.
总而言之,整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样,我们才能在将来……
(6)If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society,it will be better and better.
如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自己的一份力量,这个社会将会变得越来越好。
请给你们学校的英文报纸SCIENCE栏目用英语写一篇以“Face-scanning Payment: Embrace It or Reject It ”为题目的文章,内容包括:
1.刷脸支付技术的利弊;
2.你的观点。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Ⅰ.对接话题词汇
1.potential adj.可能的;潜在的 n.潜力;可能性
2.innovation n.创新;创造
3.security n.保护措施;安全工作
4.crime n.犯罪活动;不法行为
5.on the one hand 一方面
6.on the other hand 另一方面
Ⅱ.巧用核心句式、语法
1.然而,刷脸支付这项新技术自从产生以来,就一直伴随着热烈的讨论。
There have always been heated discussions about face-scanning payment ever since this innovation came into being.
2.一方面,刷脸支付有其优点。例如,它可以使得支付更加迅速甚至更加方便,而无须使用手机或银行卡。
On the one hand,face-scanning payment has its advantages.For example,it will lead to faster or even more convenient payment with no mobile phone or bank card required.
3.另一方面,有些人会担心刷脸支付可能带来的潜在安全问题。
On the other hand,some people would worry about the potential security problems that face-scanning payment may bring about.
4.如果人们的面部信息被用作犯罪的工具而不是支付手段,那会怎么样
What if people’s facial information is treated as a tool for crime instead of means of payment
5.就我个人而言,我会看到这种新技术积极的一面,拥抱它而不是抗拒它。
As far as I’m concerned,I will look on the positive side of this new technology and embrace it rather than reject it.
6.当然,通过法律来恰当地规范面部信息的使用是至关重要的。
Of course,it is crucial to pass laws to regulate the use of facial information properly.
1.在句2中,用介词including引出例子以使句子表达更精简。
2.用过去分词作后置定语升级句3。
最近某英文报社在征稿,主题为“The Advantages and Disadvantages of Electric Dictionaries”。假设你是李华,请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇文章,发给英文报社。
1.电子词典的利弊及理由;
2.你的看法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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