资源简介

写作专项指导
景点介绍
1.文本类型:景点介绍,属于说明文范畴。
2.要点内容:
(1)介绍著名的主题公园;
(2)说明主题公园的特点。
1.常用短语
(1)a dream trip 梦想之旅
(2)place of interest 名胜古迹
(3)a summer resort 避暑胜地
(4)a must-see place 必游之地
(5)appeal to 有吸引力;有感染力;呼吁;上诉;打动
(6)avoid traffic jam 避免交通堵塞
(7)be struck by被……迷住
(8)beyond description 难以形容
(9)book a single/double room 预订一个单人/ 双人房间
(10)catch one’s eye 吸引某人的注意
(11)have a good time/ have fun/enjoy oneself 玩得开心
2.亮点句式
(1)The West Lake is located in/ lies in the west of Hangzhou.
西湖位于杭州的西部。
(2)Along the roads/streets are many supermarkets.
沿着公路/街道有许多超市。
(3)It’s 10 kilometres from the destination to the railway station.
从目的地到火车站有10千米。
(4)Wolong Nature Reserve is home to/ is the home of pandas.
卧龙自然保护区是熊猫的家园。
(5)Xi’an is one of the oldest cities in China with a long history.
西安是中国最古老的城市之一,有着悠久的历史。
(6)Beijing is rich/abundant in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest.
北京有很多旅游景点,有许多世界闻名的名胜古迹。
(7)It’s very convenient to get there by taking Buses No.17,69 or 59 besides Subway Line 2.
除了乘坐地铁2号线,乘坐17路、69路或59路公共汽车到那里也很方便。
(8)As is known to us all,Mount Huashan is famous for its breathtaking cliffs and its unique characteristics.
众所周知,华山以它险峻的悬崖和独一无二的特征而闻名。
(9)On arriving at the top of the hill,we were deeply attracted by the beautiful scenery.
一到达山顶,我们就深深地被这里美丽的风景吸引住了。
(10)The moment we arrived,we were given a warm welcome by the local people.
我们一到达那里就受到了当地人的热烈欢迎。
假设你是李华,你的外国笔友Tony得知你前段时间去了香港海洋公园,发来邮件询问你那里的相关情况。请你根据以下提示给他用英语回一封电子邮件介绍这个公园,要点包括:
1.公园的介绍(占地超过915 000平方米,有40余年的历史);
2.公园的活动;
3.你的评价。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Ⅰ.对接话题词汇
1.entertainment n.娱乐;招待;娱乐活动;文娱节目
2.set out 出发;启程;(怀着目标)开始工作
3.ocean-themed park 海洋主题公园
4.appeal to 有吸引力;有感染力;呼吁;上诉;打动
5.live in harmony with 与……和谐相处
Ⅱ.巧用核心句式、语法
1.香港海洋公园是全球最大的海洋主题公园之一,占地面积超过915 000平方米。
Ocean Park Hongkong is one of the largest ocean-themed parks worldwide.It covers an area of more than 915,000 square metres.
2.自从40多年前开园以来,它已经吸引了来自国内外的大量游客。
Since it was opened over 40 years ago, it has appealed to numerous tourists from home and abroad.
3.公园里丰富的海洋物种和多样的娱乐活动使它深受欢迎。
The abundant marine species and various entertainments of the park have made it more than popular.
4.在那里,游客们可以踏上冒险之旅,体验各种娱乐项目,这对大人和小孩都有独特的吸引力。
There, visitors can set out on an adventurous trip, and experience a wide variety of shows.They hold special attraction for both adults and kids.
5.另外,这个公园还以许多富有教育意义的项目为傲,这些项目教会游客们要与自然和谐相处。
Additionally/In addition/Besides, the park also takes pride in plenty of educational programmes.They teach the visitors to live in harmony with nature.
1.用现在分词作状语升级句1。
2.用强调主语的强调句型升级句3。
3.用非限制性定语从句升级句4。
4.用定语从句升级句5。
假设你是李华,你所在学校的校英语报正在征集有关主题公园的文章。请你向校英语报投稿,介绍深圳世界之窗,要点如下:
1.有130多个模仿真实地标建造成的微型名胜;
2.有灯光秀、表演等,美食丰富。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词语:世界之窗Window of the World;微型名胜miniature monuments
Dear editor,
Yours,
Li Hua写作专项指导
景点介绍
1.文本类型:景点介绍,属于说明文范畴。
2.要点内容:
(1)介绍著名的主题公园;
(2)说明主题公园的特点。
1.常用短语
(1)a dream trip 梦想之旅
(2)place of interest 名胜古迹
(3)a summer resort 避暑胜地
(4)a must-see place 必游之地
(5)appeal to 有吸引力;有感染力;呼吁;上诉;打动
(6)avoid traffic jam 避免交通堵塞
(7)be struck by被……迷住
(8)beyond description 难以形容
(9)book a single/double room 预订一个单人/ 双人房间
(10)catch one’s eye 吸引某人的注意
(11)have a good time/ have fun/enjoy oneself 玩得开心
2.亮点句式
(1)The West Lake is located in/ lies in the west of Hangzhou.
西湖位于杭州的西部。
(2)Along the roads/streets are many supermarkets.
沿着公路/街道有许多超市。
(3)It’s 10 kilometres from the destination to the railway station.
从目的地到火车站有10千米。
(4)Wolong Nature Reserve is home to/ is the home of pandas.
卧龙自然保护区是熊猫的家园。
(5)Xi’an is one of the oldest cities in China with a long history.
西安是中国最古老的城市之一,有着悠久的历史。
(6)Beijing is rich/abundant in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest.
北京有很多旅游景点,有许多世界闻名的名胜古迹。
(7)It’s very convenient to get there by taking Buses No.17,69 or 59 besides Subway Line 2.
除了乘坐地铁2号线,乘坐17路、69路或59路公共汽车到那里也很方便。
(8)As is known to us all,Mount Huashan is famous for its breathtaking cliffs and its unique characteristics.
众所周知,华山以它险峻的悬崖和独一无二的特征而闻名。
(9)On arriving at the top of the hill,we were deeply attracted by the beautiful scenery.
一到达山顶,我们就深深地被这里美丽的风景吸引住了。
(10)The moment we arrived,we were given a warm welcome by the local people.
我们一到达那里就受到了当地人的热烈欢迎。
假设你是李华,你的外国笔友Tony得知你前段时间去了香港海洋公园,发来邮件询问你那里的相关情况。请你根据以下提示给他用英语回一封电子邮件介绍这个公园,要点包括:
1.公园的介绍(占地超过915 000平方米,有40余年的历史);
2.公园的活动;
3.你的评价。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Ⅰ.对接话题词汇
1.entertainment n.娱乐;招待;娱乐活动;文娱节目
2.set out 出发;启程;(怀着目标)开始工作
3.ocean-themed park 海洋主题公园
4.appeal to 有吸引力;有感染力;呼吁;上诉;打动
5.live in harmony with 与……和谐相处
Ⅱ.巧用核心句式、语法
1.香港海洋公园是全球最大的海洋主题公园之一,占地面积超过915 000平方米。
Ocean Park Hongkong is one of the largest ocean-themed parks worldwide.It covers an area of more than 915,000 square metres.
2.自从40多年前开园以来,它已经吸引了来自国内外的大量游客。
Since it was opened over 40 years ago, it has appealed to numerous tourists from home and abroad.
3.公园里丰富的海洋物种和多样的娱乐活动使它深受欢迎。
The abundant marine species and various entertainments of the park have made it more than popular.
4.在那里,游客们可以踏上冒险之旅,体验各种娱乐项目,这对大人和小孩都有独特的吸引力。
There, visitors can set out on an adventurous trip, and experience a wide variety of shows.They hold special attraction for both adults and kids.
5.另外,这个公园还以许多富有教育意义的项目为傲,这些项目教会游客们要与自然和谐相处。
Additionally/In addition/Besides, the park also takes pride in plenty of educational programmes.They teach the visitors to live in harmony with nature.
1.用现在分词作状语升级句1。
2.用强调主语的强调句型升级句3。
3.用非限制性定语从句升级句4。
4.用定语从句升级句5。
答案:1.Covering an area of more than 915,000 square metres,Ocean Park Hongkong is one of the largest ocean-themed parks worldwide.
2.It is the abundant marine species and various entertainments of the park that have made it more than popular.
3.There, visitors can set out on an adventurous trip, and experience a wide variety of shows, which hold special attraction for both adults and kids.
4.Additionally/In addition/Besides, the park also takes pride in plenty of educational programmes that teach the visitors to live in harmony with nature.
Dear Tony,
It’s my pleasure to introduce Ocean Park Hongkong to you.Covering an area of more than 915,000 square metres,Ocean Park Hongkong is one of the largest ocean-themed parks worldwide.Since it was opened over 40 years ago, it has appealed to numerous tourists from home and abroad.
It is the abundant marine species and various entertainments of the park that have made it more than popular.There, visitors can set out on an adventurous trip, and experience a wide variety of shows, which hold special attraction for both adults and kids.Additionally, the park also takes pride in plenty of educational programmes that teach the visitors to live in harmony with nature.
In a word,Ocean Park Hongkong will fill your day with wonder, delight and excitement, and reward you with satisfying memories.
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华,你所在学校的校英语报正在征集有关主题公园的文章。请你向校英语报投稿,介绍深圳世界之窗,要点如下:
1.有130多个模仿真实地标建造成的微型名胜;
2.有灯光秀、表演等,美食丰富。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词语:世界之窗Window of the World;微型名胜miniature monuments
Dear editor,
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear editor,
Knowing that you’re collecting articles about theme parks, I’m writing to introduce one to you.Window of the World, a well-known theme park in Shenzhen, is a must-visit place for us.
Entering this creative magical world, you can admire some special foreign architecture from different countries in a day! Modelled after the real landmarks, more than 130 miniature monuments there can get us occupied all day.At night when the whole park is lit up, you can feast your eyes on various kinds of light shows and circus performances.Besides, with all sorts of food available there, everyone can find tasty food for their appetite.
If you want to have fun and more than fun, come to Window of the World!
Yours,
Li Hua

展开更多......

收起↑