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读后续写-身体部位与情感描写
为了增添读后续写的表达效果，提倡通过文字所描述的事件/情境，让读者自行体验、感知，而非单纯地告诉他们。这种方式可以使得文本更加丰富、生动、引人入胜。
喜悦 惊讶困惑
眼睛（眼睫毛） His eyes sparkled with excitement as he talked about his plan. 他谈论自己的计划时，眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。 He stared at her with wide eyes, full of surprise.他睁大眼睛盯着她，充满了惊讶。
脸（脸颊） A wide smile spread across her face when she saw the surprise.看到这个惊喜，她的脸上绽放出灿烂的笑容。 He could hardly wait to share his trip, his face glowing with joy. 他迫不及待讲述他的旅行，脸上洋溢着喜悦 He had a surprised, slightly puzzled look on his face.他脸上有惊讶略带困惑的表情
嘴巴（嘴唇、下巴、牙齿） His lips parted in a delighted smile 他咧开嘴开心笑了 A smile played on her mouth as she remembered the happy moment.想起那个快乐的瞬间，她的嘴角挂着一丝微笑。 She covered her mouth with her hand, shocked by the news.听到这个消息，她用手捂住了嘴，十分震惊。
心脏 Her heart filled with joy when she heard the good news. 听到这个好消息，她的心里充满了喜悦。 Her heart leaped with joy.她的心高兴得都要跳出来了 My heart swelled up suddenly.
头 She rested her head on his shoulder,smiling broadly. 她的头靠在他肩膀上，露齿而笑 She tilted her head to one side, trying to understand the complex theory.她把头歪向一边，努力理解这个复杂的理论。
脚（腿、膝） She jumped to her feet.
嗓音 A trace of pleasure can be noticed in his voice.在他的声音中可以察觉到一丝愉悦。 A note of surprise/ confusion colored my voice我的声音中带着一丝惊讶/困惑”。
以下例句通过身体部位描写，呈现人物的感情。这些例句着重运用“普通”词汇描述细微动作，呈现人物的情感状态，凸显作者的词汇量和语言表现力。
悲伤难过沮丧 恐惧
眼睛（眼睫毛） As he looked at her, great sorrow/sadness clouded his eyes. 他看着她，满眼忧伤 His eyes were wide with horror. 他吓得瞪大双眼
脸（脸颊） She forced a smile, but her face betrayed her sadness.她强颜欢笑，但脸上的神情暴露了她的悲伤。 A look of panic appeared on his face as he realized his mistake.意识到自己的错误，他脸上露出恐慌的神情。
嘴巴（嘴唇、下巴、牙齿） Her mouth grew stiff with pain and distress. 她的嘴因痛苦和悲愤而紧绷 He prayed desperately with quivering lips. 他绝望地祈祷着，嘴唇颤抖着
心脏 Seeing her so upset really tore him apart/tore his heart out 看到她这么伤心，他感到很难过 His heart raced/ beat wildly with fear. 他吓得心狂跳 Her heart pounded in her chest, and her hands shook as she peered into the dark alleyway.她往漆黑的小巷里张望时，心怦怦直跳，双手也在发抖
脚（腿、膝） I felt so grieved that my knees felt weak.我感到如此悲痛，以至于双腿发软。 His face went white , and his knees were knocking in fright, 他脸色煞白，双腿吓得直打颤
嗓音 There was more than a hint of sadness in his voice 他的声音流露出深切的悲伤 A note of panic entered her voice 她的声音渗透一丝恐慌
愤怒生气 紧张焦虑担心不安
眼睛（眼睫毛） Luke’s face darkened as he shot her an angry glance. Luke沉下脸，生气地瞪了她一眼 She avoided his eyes, too nervous to look at him directly. 她避开他的目光，紧张得不敢直视他。
脸（脸颊） Her face turned red, and her voice rose to a shout as she ranted at her partner. 她的脸通红，她冲着她的伴侣发火时，声音提高到了喊叫的程度 A look of anxiety passed/ flashed across his face他脸上闪过焦虑神情
嘴巴（嘴唇、下巴、牙齿） His chin quivered with anger, and he clenched his fists.他气得下巴发抖，握紧了拳头。 She bit her lower lip nervously, waiting for the result. 她紧张地咬着下唇，等待结果。
心脏 His heart was filled with anger and grief. 他的内心充满了愤怒和悲伤 Her hands trembled, her heart raced, and she struggled to catch her breath as she approached the stage.靠近舞台时，她双手颤抖，心跳加速，还拼命地想喘口气
脚（腿、膝） She stamped 跺脚her foot in annoyance.她气得直跺脚 He was pacing nervously up and down in the room 他紧张地在屋里踱来踱去
嗓音 There was hurt and real anger in her voice她的声音里透着受伤与真切的愤怒 His voice betrayed the worry he was trying to hide 他的声音掩饰不了他内心的担忧
I 请根据描述看看是描写哪种感情，并把句子和选项配对
A The child was curious B He was scared. C He was angry. D I felt desperate. E We were surprised. F I am happy. G She felt depressed
1 Wide-eyed and eager, the child asked questions about everything they saw.
2 His eyes were flashing fire,but he managed to calm himself down.
3 My hopes were all dead, and my future was empty. I lay on the bed,while darkness swam around me.
4 His face paled when he saw that Rob had a knife.
5She felt desperately tired, and her spirits sank.
6 We all stared wide-eyed at him.
7 I’m in a good mood at the moment, just like the wide clouds in the blue sky.
答案A C D B G E F
II 阅读下面短文，找出文中身体肢体和部位描述感情的句子以及呈现哪种感情，然后熟读背诵（黄色部分为答案）
Passage 1 （She was excited and happy）
She was skipping beside the long wall of the secret wall when a most wonderful thing happened. She suddenly realized the robin was following her.She was pleased and thrilled by this, and cried out,“You like me. don't you And I like you too!”As he hopped along beside her,she hopped and sang too to show him that she was his friend. Just then he stopped where a dog had dug a hole in the ground. As Mary looked at the hole, something caught her eye.Mary’s heart was beating fast and her hands were shaking as she put her hand in and pulled it out. It was a key. A long. rusty key.
Passage 2 （She was scared ）
It was a cold and dreary night, with the rain pouring down. Someone pounded on the front door. Mom Dad Where were they She crawled out of bed and tiptoed downstairs. An unfamiliar figure showed through the damp glass in the front door.
She felt a surge of anger, but it lasted no more than a second. Then she was overcome with a feeling of fear. Mom’s voice echoed inside her head. “Remember, don’t answer the door when we’re away.” She crouched, back pressed against the wall, 　　　　　　　　　　　asking herself: What should I do What should I do
Passage 3 She was sad.
Cold December wind passed right through my worn coat. I might have wished to be at home, but those days it wasn’t much warmer there than it was standing at the bus stop. Mama had written a letter to the electric company explaining that we were late paying our bill because my sister was ill and Daddy had been laid off, but the power was cut off anyway. That’s why we were on our way into town to pay the bill in person. There was a sad look in her eyes. Her face, which was once so full of life, was now miserable and full of pain.I felt very sad. I tried to find something to say that would cheer her up. But I ended up covering my face with my hands, too upset to speak.
Passage 4 Joe was angry
On the way back Joe and I saw two horses and a heavy cart of bricks all stuck in the mud.“Get on!” roared the coachman, cruelly whipping the horses. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Joe felt a wave of anger sweep over him. “Stop!” shouted Joe, “Please don’t hurt those horses. It’s not their fault that the cart is stuck. If you take some of the bricks off it’ll be easier to pull the cart free. I’ll help you.” The coachman yelled angrily, “Just mind your own business.” Then he carried on beating the horses. 　　　　　　　 　　　　 Joe’s face turned to thunder. I’d never seen him so furious/Never had I seen him so furious.
III 请根据汉语提示完成下列短文（运用感官描述感情）（黄色部分为答案）
Passage 1
Wang Hua failed to work out the two questions on the math paper, and the bell rang, signaling the end of the exam. 1 ,怀着沉重心情
Wang Hua moved out of the classroom. 2 满眼忧伤
An air of sadness could be sensed ten meters away. Soon, 3 .
泪水涌上她的眼眶。
Definitely, she would fail the math exam! 3 , 失望与悲伤如潮水般涌上心头
and 4 The only thing she was desperate to do was rush
泪水顺着她的脸颊滚落。
back home and throw herself into her little bed and weep wildly!
1 With a sinking heart
2 Great sorrow/sadness clouded her eyes/
3 tears welled up in her eyes/
4 Disappointment and sadness came in waves
5 tears streamed down her cheeks.
Passage 2
She stood by the window, joyfully and patiently watching. Golden sunlight danced in her long hair and the children’s laughter floated in the air. She stared at the end of the road, hoping her close friend would come earlier. It seemed as if she had been standing there for a century. 1 .
突然看到那个熟悉的身影，一股喜悦与激动瞬间涌上她的心头。
2
她的心因喜悦而怦怦直跳，脸上绽开了灿烂的笑容。
.She ran to her friend and threw herself into her friend’s arms.
3
他们紧紧相拥，喜悦/幸福/激动的泪水在眼眶里打转。
1Suddenly a rush of happiness and excitement seized/took hold of/swept over/came over her at the sight of a familiar figure
2 Her heart leaped with joy, and a wide smile lit up her face
3 Tears of joy/happiness/excitement welled up in their eyes as they hugged tightly together.
IV 拓展（黄色部分为答案）
大家看看以下这些描述是想说什么？
1. Telling: The dog was friendly.
Showing: The dog wagged its tail enthusiastically and licked my hand, eager for attention.
2. Telling: The forest was peaceful.
Showing: The rustling 飒飒作响of the leaves and the chirping叽喳叫 of birds created a serene 平静的atmosphere in the forest.
3. Telling: The cake was delicious.
Showing: Each bite of the moist松软 chocolate cake was like heaven on my tongue.
4. Telling: The party was fun.
Showing: Laughter filled the air, and people danced wildly to the beat of the music.
5. Telling: The flowers were pretty.
Showing: A riot of colors bloomed in the garden, each petal vibrant and delicate.
6. Telling: The city was beautiful.
Showing: The sparkling 闪烁lights of skyscrapers gleamed闪烁 against the night sky, casting a magical glow over the city.
7 Telling: She was nervous.
Showing: Her hands trembled, her heart raced, and she struggled to catch her breath as she approached the stage.
8. Telling: The fire was hot.
Showing: The fierce heat from the roaring bonfire warmed my cheeks and lit up the night sky.
9. Telling: The room was messy.
Showing: Clothes were scattered on the floor, books piled high on the desk, and dishes left unwashed in the sink.水槽读后续写-身体部位与情感描写
为了增添读后续写的表达效果，提倡通过文字所描述的事件/情境，让读者自行体验、感知，而非单纯地告诉他们。这种方式可以使得文本更加丰富、生动、引人入胜。
喜悦 惊讶困惑
眼睛（眼睫毛） His eyes sparkled with excitement as he talked about his plan. 他谈论自己的计划时，眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。 He stared at her with wide eyes, full of surprise.他睁大眼睛盯着她，充满了惊讶。
脸（脸颊） A wide smile spread across her face when she saw the surprise.看到这个惊喜，她的脸上绽放出灿烂的笑容。 He could hardly wait to share his trip, his face glowing with joy. 他迫不及待讲述他的旅行，脸上洋溢着喜悦 He had a surprised, slightly puzzled look on his face.他脸上有惊讶略带困惑的表情
嘴巴（嘴唇、下巴、牙齿） His lips parted in a delighted smile 他咧开嘴开心笑了 A smile played on her mouth as she remembered the happy moment.想起那个快乐的瞬间，她的嘴角挂着一丝微笑。 She covered her mouth with her hand, shocked by the news.听到这个消息，她用手捂住了嘴，十分震惊。
心脏 Her heart filled with joy when she heard the good news. 听到这个好消息，她的心里充满了喜悦。 Her heart leaped with joy.她的心高兴得都要跳出来了 My heart swelled up suddenly.
头 She rested her head on his shoulder,smiling broadly. 她的头靠在他肩膀上，露齿而笑 She tilted her head to one side, trying to understand the complex theory.她把头歪向一边，努力理解这个复杂的理论。
脚（腿、膝） She jumped to her feet.
嗓音 A trace of pleasure can be noticed in his voice.在他的声音中可以察觉到一丝愉悦。 A note of surprise/ confusion colored my voice我的声音中带着一丝惊讶/困惑”。
以下例句通过身体部位描写，呈现人物的感情。这些例句着重运用“普通”词汇描述细微动作，呈现人物的情感状态，凸显作者的词汇量和语言表现力。
悲伤难过沮丧 恐惧
眼睛（眼睫毛） As he looked at her, great sorrow/sadness clouded his eyes. 他看着她，满眼忧伤 His eyes were wide with horror. 他吓得瞪大双眼
脸（脸颊） She forced a smile, but her face betrayed her sadness.她强颜欢笑，但脸上的神情暴露了她的悲伤。 A look of panic appeared on his face as he realized his mistake.意识到自己的错误，他脸上露出恐慌的神情。
嘴巴（嘴唇、下巴、牙齿） Her mouth grew stiff with pain and distress. 她的嘴因痛苦和悲愤而紧绷 He prayed desperately with quivering lips. 他绝望地祈祷着，嘴唇颤抖着
心脏 Seeing her so upset really tore him apart/tore his heart out 看到她这么伤心，他感到很难过 His heart raced/ beat wildly with fear. 他吓得心狂跳 Her heart pounded in her chest, and her hands shook as she peered into the dark alleyway.她往漆黑的小巷里张望时，心怦怦直跳，双手也在发抖
脚（腿、膝） I felt so grieved that my knees felt weak.我感到如此悲痛，以至于双腿发软。 His face went white , and his knees were knocking in fright, 他脸色煞白，双腿吓得直打颤
嗓音 There was more than a hint of sadness in his voice 他的声音流露出深切的悲伤 A note of panic entered her voice 她的声音渗透一丝恐慌
愤怒生气 紧张焦虑担心不安
眼睛（眼睫毛） Luke’s face darkened as he shot her an angry glance. Luke沉下脸，生气地瞪了她一眼 She avoided his eyes, too nervous to look at him directly. 她避开他的目光，紧张得不敢直视他。
脸（脸颊） Her face turned red, and her voice rose to a shout as she ranted at her partner. 她的脸通红，她冲着她的伴侣发火时，声音提高到了喊叫的程度 A look of anxiety passed/ flashed across his face他脸上闪过焦虑神情
嘴巴（嘴唇、下巴、牙齿） His chin quivered with anger, and he clenched his fists.他气得下巴发抖，握紧了拳头。 She bit her lower lip nervously, waiting for the result. 她紧张地咬着下唇，等待结果。
心脏 His heart was filled with anger and grief. 他的内心充满了愤怒和悲伤 Her hands trembled, her heart raced, and she struggled to catch her breath as she approached the stage.靠近舞台时，她双手颤抖，心跳加速，还拼命地想喘口气
脚（腿、膝） She stamped 跺脚her foot in annoyance.她气得直跺脚 He was pacing nervously up and down in the room 他紧张地在屋里踱来踱去
嗓音 There was hurt and real anger in her voice她的声音里透着受伤与真切的愤怒 His voice betrayed the worry he was trying to hide 他的声音掩饰不了他内心的担忧
I 请根据描述看看是描写哪种感情，并把句子和选项配对
A The child was curious B He was scared. C He was angry. D I felt desperate. E We were surprised. F I am happy. G She felt depressed
1 Wide-eyed and eager, the child asked questions about everything they saw.
2 His eyes were flashing fire,but he managed to calm himself down.
3 My hopes were all dead, and my future was empty. I lay on the bed,while darkness swam around me.
4 His face paled when he saw that Rob had a knife.
5She felt desperately tired, and her spirits sank.
6 We all stared wide-eyed at him.
7 I’m in a good mood at the moment, just like the wide clouds in the blue sky.
II 阅读下面短文，找出文中身体肢体和部位描述感情的句子以及呈现哪种感情，然后熟读背诵
Passage 1
She was skipping beside the long wall of the secret wall when a most wonderful thing happened. She suddenly realized the robin was following her.she was pleased and thrilled by this, and cried out,“You like me. don't you And I like you too!”As he hopped along beside her,she hopped and sang too to show him that she was his friend. Just then he stopped where a dog had dug a hole in the ground. As Mary looked at the hole, something caught her eye.Mary’s heart was beating fast and her hands were shaking as she put her hand in and pulled it out. It was a key. A long. rusty key.
Passage 2
It was a cold and dreary night, with the rain pouring down. Someone pounded on the front door. Mom Dad Where were they She crawled out of bed and tiptoed downstairs. An unfamiliar figure showed through the damp glass in the front door.
She felt a surge of anger, but it lasted no more than a second. Then she was overcome with a feeling of fear. Mom’s voice echoed inside her head. “Remember, don’t answer the door when we’re away.” She crouched, back pressed against the wall, ③　　　　　　　　　　　asking herself: What should I do What should I do
Passage 3
Cold December wind passed right through my worn coat. I might have wished to be at home, but those days it wasn’t much warmer there than it was standing at the bus stop. Mama had written a letter to the electric company explaining that we were late paying our bill because my sister was ill and Daddy had been laid off, but the power was cut off anyway. That’s why we were on our way into town to pay the bill in person. There was a sad look in her eyes. Her face, which was once so full of life, was now miserable and full of pain.I felt very sad. I tried to find something to say that would cheer her up. But I ended up covering my face with my hands, too upset to speak.
Passage 4
On the way back Joe and I saw two horses and a heavy cart of bricks all stuck in the mud.“Get on!” roared the coachman, cruelly whipping the horses. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Joe felt a wave of anger sweep over him. “Stop!” shouted Joe, “Please don’t hurt those horses. It’s not their fault that the cart is stuck. If you take some of the bricks off it’ll be easier to pull the cart free. I’ll help you.” The coachman yelled angrily, “Just mind your own business.” Then he carried on beating the horses. 　　　　　　　 　　　　 Joe’s face turned to thunder. I’d never seen him so furious/Never had I seen him so furious.
III 请根据汉语提示完成下列短文（运用感官描述感情）
Passage 1
　Wang Hua failed to work out the two questions on the math paper, and the bell rang, signaling the end of the exam. 1 ,怀着沉重心情
Wang Hua moved out of the classroom. 2 满眼忧伤
An air of sadness could be sensed ten meters away. Soon, .
泪水涌上她的眼眶。
Definitely, she would fail the math exam! 3 , 失望与悲伤如潮水般涌上心头
and 4 The only thing she was desperate to do was rush
泪水顺着她的脸颊滚落。
back home and throw herself into her little bed and weep wildly!
Passage 2
She stood by the window, joyfully and patiently watching. Golden sunlight danced in her long hair and the children’s laughter floated in the air. She stared at the end of the road, hoping her close friend would come earlier. It seemed as if she had been standing there for a century. 1 .
突然看到那个熟悉的身影，一股喜悦与激动瞬间涌上她的心头。
2
她的心因喜悦而怦怦直跳，脸上绽开了灿烂的笑容。
.She ran to her friend and threw herself into her friend’s arms.
3
他们紧紧相拥，喜悦/幸福/激动的泪水在眼眶里打转。
IV 拓展
大家看看以下这些描述是想说什么？
1. Telling: The dog was .
Showing: The dog wagged its tail enthusiastically and licked my hand, eager for attention.
2. Telling: The forest was .
Showing: The rustling 飒飒作响of the leaves and the chirping叽喳叫 of birds created a serene 平静的atmosphere in the forest.
3. Telling: The cake was .
Showing: Each bite of the moist松软 chocolate cake was like heaven on my tongue.
4. Telling: The party was .
Showing: Laughter filled the air, and people danced wildly to the beat of the music.
5. Telling: The flowers were .
Showing: A riot of colors bloomed in the garden, each petal vibrant and delicate.
6. Telling: The city was .
Showing: The sparkling 闪烁lights of skyscrapers gleamed闪烁 against the night sky, casting a magical glow over the city.
7. Telling: She was .
Showing: Her hands trembled, her heart raced, and she struggled to catch her breath as she approached the stage.
8. Telling: The fire was .
Showing: The fierce heat from the roaring bonfire warmed my cheeks and lit up the night sky.
9. Telling: The room was
Showing: Clothes were scattered on the floor, books piled high on the desk, and dishes left unwashed in the sink.水槽

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