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2025-2026学年八年级下册英语期中复习考点培优沪教版（五四学制）
（新教材）专题17 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假设你是李华，学校英语社团正在举办主题为“Art and Inventions”的征文活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文参赛。提示：
1.你最喜欢的艺术形式及原因；
2.对你影响最大的发明及它的作用；
3.艺术与发明对你的生活的意义。
要求：
1.词数：80-100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.内容完整，语句通顺，可适当发挥，贴合单元主题。
Art and Inventions
Art and inventions are important parts of our life. They make our life better.
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2．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom来信询问你最近在读的一本书。请你写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 书名及作者；
2. 书的主要内容（2-3句）；
3. 你最喜欢的情节或角色及原因；
4. 你对这本书的评价。
要求：80-100词，语句通顺，语法正确。
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3．请以 “The importance of art and artists” 为题写一篇短文，词数不少于60。应包括以下信息点：
(1)艺术对人类很重要，它能丰富我们的生活;
(2)目前许多人忽视艺术，艺术家得不到足够支持;
(3)我们应如何支持艺术：
①多欣赏艺术作品；②鼓励艺术创作。
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4．中国的传统艺术形式极其丰富，蕴含着五千年文明古国深厚的文化底蕴。为宣传中国传统艺术，请你用英文向外国朋友介绍你最喜欢的一种中国传统艺术形式。
提示：1. What is your favourite traditional Chinese art form
2. How are the art pieces usually made
3. Why do you like this art form
要求：1. 文中应包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 90词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Art
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, ________ is my favourite.
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5．假如你是Daming，你的外国朋友Peter想了解中国卡通电影，同时他对孙悟空特别感兴趣。请你根据以下提示，给Peter写封邮件。
Chinese Cartoon Films Monkey King What do you think of Chinese cartoons
In 1926: the first Chinese cartoon film; In the 1960s and 1980s: more and more Chinese cartoon films; The famous one: Havoc in Heaven. The main hero of Havoc in Heaven. What can he do What do you think of him and why …
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于60词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Dear Peter，
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese cartoon films.
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Yours,
Daming
6．很多同学的爱好是看卡通片，它们不仅能给我们带来欢乐，还能教会我们许多做人的道理。本周校园英语广播站的主题是“Cartoon Characters That Inspire (启发) Us”，现向广大同学征稿。内容包括：
1.介绍一个你最喜爱的卡通角色；
2.分析这个角色的特质以及对你的启发（特质、卡通片里的相关事件、你学会的道理）；
3.谈谈你如何将这种启发运用到生活中。
要求：
1.文中不能出现真实姓名和班级；
2.词数不少于80词；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favorite Cartoon Character
Cartoons are not just for fun. Many characters teach us important life lessons. Let’s take my favorite cartoon character as an example.
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7．张先生是一位50多岁的剪纸艺人，他7岁开始学习剪纸。每年春节期间，他都义务在社区 (community) 或学校教授他人剪纸。假设你是学校报社的一名记者，请你根据以下提示，写一篇文章介绍张先生以及他的剪纸手艺。80词左右。
内容包括：
1. 介绍艺人张先生基本信息；
2. 张先生的手艺：剪纸工具 (剪刀 scissors)、剪纸作品、剪纸步骤等。(任选两点)；
3. 你对张先生及其手艺的评价。
A Paper-Cutting Artist
Mr. Zhang is a skilled paper-cutting artist.
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8．命题作文：My Favorite Invention
要求：
1. 紧扣单元发明主题，介绍你最喜欢的一项发明，说明喜欢的原因及它对生活的影响；
2. 适当使用连接词，层次清晰、逻辑连贯；
3. 不少于80词，语法正确，无明显拼写错误；
4. 书写工整，卷面整洁。
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9．以“The most useful invention in my view”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文，阐述你认为最有用的发明，说明至少两个原因，适当使用连接词，观点明确。
要求：
1. 语法正确，语句通顺，无明显拼写错误；
2. 层次清晰，逻辑连贯；
3. 字迹工整。
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10．伟大的发明与发现深刻地改变了世界。假设你是八年级(5)班的王伟，学校正在举办“科技与创新周”，你需参加以“Great inventions and discoveries”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下表格内容用英语写一篇不少于60词的短文，介绍伟大发明与发现带来的不同方面的变化及优点。
发生变化的方面 优点
通讯 (communication) 让远距离交流更快、更方便；手机应用帮助人们学习新知识
医疗 (medical care) 帮助医生更有效地治疗疾病；让人们更健康、更长寿
（至少补充一个方面） （至少一个优点）
…… ……
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11．如果将来你成为一名科学家并制造了一个机器人，你会把它制造成什么样子？它将会有 哪些功能？你将从哪些方面努力成为一名科学家？请根据提示用英语写一篇短文，畅谈自己的“机器人梦”。
提示：1.机器人外表：look like a person, friendly face, big hands
2.机器人功能：do housework, take care of old people, help with schoolwork...
3.你今后努力的方向：keep healthy, study hard, go to college...
要求：
1.文章需包含提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.不得出现真实的个人信息（人名、地名、校名等）；
3.词数80左右。开头第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
My robot
In the future, I want to be a scientist and make a wonderful robot.
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12．假如你是李华，学校英语报正在举办征文比赛，主题是“An Invention that is Changing the World”(正在改变的世界的一个发明)。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文投稿，介绍智能手机 (smartphones) 给我们的生活带来的变化。
Invention: Smartphones Invented by: IBM Time: 1992 Place: New York, the US
要点提示：
1. 简要介绍 (What do you know about smartphones )
2. 对比变化 (How have our lives changed compared with the past because of smartphones )
3. 你的观点 (How do you like smartphones )
要求：
1. 100词左右；
2. 书写规范，要点齐全，包括图片全部信息；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息。
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13．假设你校即将举办“科技创新设计竞赛”。请你以学生代表的身份，准备一个发言，介绍一项你认为能改善校园或家庭生活的“小发明”。
内容要点：
1.这项发明的名称和功能；
2.它是如何工作的；
3.它会给人们的生活带来怎样的积极变化。
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14．**写作主题**：A Plan for Our School Charity Sale
**写作要求**：
1. 120词左右；
2. 紧扣主题，制定一份学校慈善义卖的具体计划，包含义卖准备、物品、资金用途等；
3. 适当使用连接词（firstly, besides, finally, in short等），层次清晰；
4. 语法正确，单词拼写无误，适当使用从句/并列句。
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15．金钱在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。它帮助我们满足基本需求，但也可能带来一些问题。作为一名八年级的学生，你可能已经开始管理自己的零用钱。请以“The Power of Money”为题，写一篇文章，词数不少于60。内容要包括：
(1) 拥有金钱带来的结果（积极/消极）；
(2) 如何明智地使用金钱；
(3) 从管理金钱中受到的启发。
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16．请以A Great Invention of Ancient China为题, 写一篇短文, 介绍中国古代的一项伟大发明（如算盘、豆腐、茶、瓷器、丝绸等）。
要求：
1. 包含以下要点：①这项发明是什么；②它的历史 / 起源；③它给人们生活带来的影响；④你对它的看法；
2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4. 词数：80~100 词。
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17．学校英语社团正在举办科技节，你应邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的英语演讲比赛，要求介绍一项你认为最具有影响力的科技产品。请根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括：
1. 简要介绍一项对我们生活影响最大的科技产品(computers, mobile phones, robots, Internet, electric cars...)；
2. 它对我们生活的影响 (至少选择两方面进行详细介绍)；
(1) make our lives more convenient and efficient.
(2) helps us work, study, and communicate easily.
(3) get information and entertainment anytime.
(4) improves healthcare (医疗保健) and transportation (交通运输).
3. 你的看法。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua from Class1, Grade 8 at Sunshine Middle School. Among all the inventions,
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18．最近，你们学校附近的商店正在促销，吸引了大量同学前往消费。为了帮助大家养成理智消费的习惯，校英语报发起了“Shopping Wisely”的征文活动。请你根据右面提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，给出合理建议。
Before shopping Make a shopping list…
While shopping Check the dateThink again …
写作要求：
1. 短文须包含表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数70左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Shopping Wisely
These days, many stores near our school have big sales and lots of students go shopping there. To help everyone shop wisely, I want to share some useful tips.
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19．假设你是李华，你的同学Peter给你发了一封电子邮件，他想了解你是如何使用你的零花钱的。请你以“My Pocket Money”为主题，给Peter回一封英文邮件，谈谈你的零花钱是怎么用的。词数80左右。提示：
1. How do you usually get pocket money
2. How do you usually spend your pocket money wisely
3. What do you think of the use of your pocket money
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
I’m happy to tell you about how I use my pocket money.
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Yours,
Li Hua
20．假如你是李华，学校英语社团正在以“How to use money wisely ”为主题开展征文活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文投稿。
提示：
1.金钱的重要性，但不是万能的；
2.区分“需要(needs)”和“想要(wants)”；
3.如何明智使用金钱的建议（如列购物清单、理性消费等）。
要求：
4.词数80-100；
5.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
6.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范。
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Art and Inventions
Art and inventions are important parts of our life. They make our life better.
My favourite art form is Chinese painting. It’s full of traditional beauty and can help me calm down. I often draw Chinese paintings in my free time.
The Internet is the most important invention to me. It helps me get information quickly and learn art knowledge online. It also lets me share my paintings with others easily.
Art makes my life colourful and the Internet makes my life convenient. I will keep loving art and learning new things to be creative.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍性说明文，以一般现在时为主
明确核心要点：最喜欢的艺术形式及原因；对你影响最大的发明及其作用；艺术与发明对你生活的意义
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）
注意事项：不得透露真实个人隐私信息；贴合“艺术与发明让生活更美好”的主题
[第二步：构思布局]
四段式结构：
开头段：总起句，点明艺术与发明对生活的重要性
主体段一：介绍最喜欢的艺术形式及原因
主体段二：介绍对你影响最大的发明及其作用
结尾段：总结艺术与发明对自己生活的意义
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：最喜欢的艺术形式及原因
艺术形式选择：Chinese painting/music/calligraphy/photography等
原因：It’s full of traditional beauty and can help me calm down./It can relax my mind when I feel stressed and brings me endless joy./It helps me record beautiful moments in life and see the world from a new angle.等
要点二：影响最大的发明及作用
发明选择：the Internet/smartphone/camera等
作用：It helps me get information quickly and learn art knowledge online./It helps me listen to music anytime and learn music knowledge online./It makes it easy for me to take clear photos.等
要点三：艺术与发明对生活的意义
对生活的意义：makes my life colourful/makes my life convenient/helps me keep precious memories/makes my life full of warmth等
情感表达：I will keep loving art and learning new things to be creative./I will keep loving music and creating more beautiful works./I will keep taking photos and discovering more beauty in life.等
2．
例文：
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to tell you about the book I’m reading recently. It’s The Little Prince written by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry.
The story follows a pilot who meets a little prince from another planet. The prince shares his travels and lessons about love, friendship and what truly matters in life. My favorite part is when the prince talks about his rose, showing that true love means taking responsibility.
This book is simple but full of wisdom. It makes me think deeply about life and is definitely worth reading.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】第一步：审题立意
确定文体：应用文，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：书名及作者、书的主要内容、最喜欢的情节/角色及原因、对书的评价
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）
注意事项：80-100 词，语句通顺，语法正确
第二步：构思布局
三段式结构：
开头段：回应来信，点明书名及作者
主体段：介绍书的主要内容，说明最喜欢的情节及原因
结尾段：评价书籍，收束全文
第三步：要点展开
要点一：书名及作者
书名选择：The Little Prince
作者：Antoine de Saint-Exupéry。
要点二：书的主要内容
内容概括：a pilot/meets a little prince from another planet/prince/ shares his travels and lessons about love, friendship/what truly matters in life
要点三：最喜欢的情节及原因
情节选择：the prince talks about his rose
原因：true love means taking responsibility。
要点四：对书的评价
评价内容：simple but full of wisdom/think deeply about life/definitely worth reading
3．例文
The importance of art and artists
As we all know, art is very important in our daily life. It enriches our lives and brings us beauty and inspiration. However, many people ignore art today, and artists do not get enough support. Therefore, we should take action to change this. We can appreciate more artworks by visiting galleries or museums. Also, we should encourage artistic creation by supporting local artists.
Let’s help art shine in our world.
【详解】[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：议论文（说明类短文），一般现在时为主
明确要点：艺术很重要，丰富生活，现在很多人忽视艺术，艺术家缺少支持，多欣赏艺术、鼓励创作
确定人称：第一人称复数(we)
注意事项：不少于 60 词，要点齐全，语句通顺
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段：点明艺术很重要，能丰富生活、带来美与灵感。
主体段：指出问题 —— 人们忽视艺术，艺术家缺乏支持，并提出两条解决办法。
结尾段：发出呼吁，总结全文，升华主题。
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：艺术的重要性
重要性解释：art is very important等
要点二：存在的问题
问题剖析：ignore art/don’t get enough support等
要点三：我们应该怎么做
多欣赏艺术作品： appreciate more artworks/visit galleries or museums等
鼓励艺术创作：encourage artistic creation/support local artists等
要点四：结尾升华
呼吁句：Let’s help art shine in our world.
4．例文
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Art
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, paper-cutting is my favourite. It’s a kind of traditional Chinese art with a history of more than 1,500 years. People cut paper into shapes of flowers, animals and landscapes with knives or scissors.
I like paper-cutting because it’s not only beautiful and interesting but also very useful. People usually put them up on doors or windows to decorate their houses. They are always seen as a symbol of good luck and best wishes for the future.
Paper-cutting is such a wonderful art form that I hope more people know the beauty of it and become interested in it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：围绕作者最喜爱的中国传统艺术——剪纸展开介绍，包含剪纸的历史、制作方式、作者喜爱的原因以及其象征意义和作者的期望等要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明在所有中国传统艺术形式中，剪纸是作者最喜爱的，并说明剪纸是一种拥有1500多年历史的中国传统艺术；
第二步，详细介绍了剪纸的制作方式，以及作者喜爱剪纸的原因，如美丽有趣且实用，还说明了人们通常将剪纸贴在门窗上装饰房子，以及剪纸作为好运和对未来美好祝愿的象征意义；
第三步，总结剪纸是一种美妙的艺术形式，表达作者希望更多人了解剪纸的美并对它产生兴趣的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional Chinese art中国传统艺术
②paper-cutting剪纸
③a symbol of……的象征
④best wishes美好祝愿
[高分句型]
①Paper-cutting is such a wonderful art form that I hope more people know the beauty of it and become interested in it. (such…that…引导的结果状语从句)
5．
Dear Peter,
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese cartoon films.
Chinese cartoons have a long history. The first one came out in 1926. Then in the 1960s and 1980s, more and more were made. The most famous one is Havoc in Heaven. It tells the story of Monkey King.
Monkey King is the main hero. He can change into 72 different forms. He can also fly on clouds. I like him very much because he is brave, clever and always fights for what is right. He never gives up, no matter how hard things get.
I hope you can watch this film. I’m sure you will like Monkey King too.
Yours,
Daming
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：应用文（电子邮件）
明确要点：中国卡通电影历史、著名作品《大闹天宫》、孙悟空的能力、对孙悟空的看法及原因
确定人称：第一人称（I）
注意事项：需包含所有提示要点，开头已给出，注意邮件格式和语言得体
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：已给出，表达高兴并引出话题
主体段：分两部分介绍中国卡通电影历史和孙悟空
结尾段：表达希望，鼓励对方观看
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：中国卡通电影历史
起源时间：The first one came out in 1926/the first Chinese cartoon film was made in 1926等
发展时期：in the 1960s and 1980s, more and more were made/more films appeared等
著名作品：The most famous one is Havoc in Heaven/the famous one is Havoc in Heaven等
电影内容：tells the story of Monkey King/about Monkey King等
要点二：孙悟空的能力
变身能力：change into 72 different forms/turn into 72 things/72 changes等
飞行能力：fly on clouds/ride a cloud/fly in the sky等
其他能力：use a magic stick/have superpowers等
要点三：对孙悟空的看法
性格特点：brave/clever/funny/strong/never gives up等
喜欢原因：fights for what is right/stands up for justice/protects the weak等
坚持精神：never gives up, no matter how hard things get/keeps trying etc.
要点四：结尾表达
希望表达：I hope you can watch this film/hope you will like it等
确信喜欢：I’m sure you will like Monkey King too/you will enjoy it等
6．
范文：
My Favorite Cartoon Character
Cartoons are not just for fun. Many characters teach us important life lessons. Let’s take my favorite cartoon character as an example.
My favorite cartoon character is Nezha from the movie Nezha: Birth of the Demon Child. He was born as a demon, but he never gave up. People feared him and called him a monster, yet he chose to be good. He shouted, “My fate is decided by myself, not by heaven.” That really inspired me. From Nezha, I learned that we decide who we want to be. No matter what others say, we should follow our hearts and fight for what is right.
In my life, when I face difficulties or unfair words, I remember Nezha’s courage. I tell myself to be strong and believe in my own path.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：记叙文/观点类文章，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
明确要点：介绍最喜爱的卡通角色、角色的特质及启发（特质、相关事件、学到的道理）、如何将启发运用到生活中
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）和第三人称（he/him）为主
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和班级，需涵盖所有内容要点
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：已给出，引出卡通角色的教育意义
主体段：介绍喜爱的卡通角色、特质、相关事件及学到的道理
结尾段：说明如何将启发运用到生活中
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：卡通角色介绍
角色名称：Nezha/Mickey Mouse/Mulan/Simba/SpongeBob等
角色来源：from the movie.../in the cartoon.../from Disney等
要点二：角色特质与事件
角色特质：brave/kind/never give up/strong-willed/independent等
相关事件：born as a demon but chose to be good/people feared him but he kept fighting等
经典台词：My fate is decided by myself, not by heaven./I can do anything.等
要点三：学到的道理
人生道理：we decide who we want to be/follow our hearts/fight for what is right/never judge others by their looks等
感受表达：that really inspired me/I was deeply moved/I learned a lot等
要点四：运用生活
具体场景：when I face difficulties/when others say unkind words/when I feel lost等
实际行动：remember Nezha’s courage/tell myself to be strong/believe in my own path/keep trying等
7．范文：
A Paper-Cutting Artist
Mr. Zhang is a skilled paper-cutting artist. Mr. Zhang is a paper-cutting artist in his fifties, but he is very healthy. He likes paper cutting and he began to learn paper cutting at the age of seven. Every Spring Festival, he voluntarily teaches others paper cutting in the community or at school. He could cut out various shapes with his scissors, such as people, animals, flowers. He held many exhibitions and his works were very popular. People often use paper cutting on weddings or festivals because they think paper cutting can bring them happiness and good luck.
In my opinion, love of paper-cutting techniques makes me deeply impressed. I hope that one day I can learn paper cutting like Mr. Zhang.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出剪纸艺术家张先生；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍张先生的个人信息及其剪纸手艺；
第三步，书写结语。总结并对张先生的手艺进行评价。
[亮点词汇]
①in one’s+整十基数词复数 在某人几十岁时
②bring sb. sth. 带给某人某物
③make sb.+adj. 使某人……
[高分句型]
①He likes paper cutting and he began to learn paper cutting at the age of seven. (并列句)
②People often use paper cutting on weddings or festivals because they think paper cutting can bring them happiness and good luck. (because引导的原因状语从句)
③I hope that one day I can learn paper cutting like Mr. Zhang. (含that引导的宾语从句)
8．例文
My Favorite Invention
My favorite invention is the smartphone. It is a great invention that has changed my life a lot and become my most important daily tool.
First, it makes communication really easy. I can call or video chat with my family and friends anytime and anywhere, even if we are far away from each other. Besides, it is a perfect helper for my study. I can look up new words, read electronic books and watch online lessons on it whenever I need. What’s more, it brings me a lot of fun in my spare time. I can listen to music, take beautiful photos and play interesting games to relax myself.
The smartphone is small but powerful. It not only makes my life more convenient but also makes it more colorful. I really love this amazing invention, and I believe it will become smarter in the future.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍性说明文，以一般现在时为主。
明确要点：点明最喜欢的发明（如智能手机/互联网/电灯等）→阐述喜欢的原因→分析它对日常生活的影响。
确定人称：第一人称I/my/me
注意事项：不得透露真实个人信息。
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：总起句，直接点明自己最喜欢的发明。
主体段：分点说明喜欢它的具体原因以及它对生活的影响。
结尾段：总结感受，升华主题。
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：介绍发明
发明选择：the smartphone/the computer/the robot等
功能介绍：take photos/send messages/watch videos/look up information等
喜欢原因：useful/helpful/save a lot of time/make life easier等
要点二：对生活的影响
对个人正面影响：bring convenience to our life/keep in touch with…/change the way we live/study/work等
对社会简短评价：have a great influence on/play an important role in/bring great changes to the world等
要点三：衔接短语
逻辑连接类短语：first of all/besides/what’s more/in addition/for example等
9．例文
The most useful invention in my view
In my view, the most useful invention is the Internet. It has become a necessary part of our daily life.
First, it makes communication much more convenient. We can talk with family and friends by video or send messages quickly no matter how far away they are. Besides, it helps a lot with study and work. We can search for useful information and take online classes easily. Also, it brings us fun in our free time, such as watching movies and listening to music.
The Internet makes our lives easier and more colorful. I think it will bring us more surprises in the future.
【详解】写作步骤
【第一步：审题立意】
确定文体：议论文，以一般现在时为主。
明确核心要点：亮明核心观点（互联网是最有用的发明）；分角度论述互联网的作用（方便交流、助力学习工作）；适当补充生活娱乐，结尾总结
确定人称：第一人称（we/my）
写作要求：逻辑分层清晰、论据充分、衔接自然，无真实信息泄露，观点明确且积极正向
【第二步：构思布局】
三段式结构：
开头段：直接表明观点 —— 互联网是最有用的发明。
主体段：分点说明理由，用连接词串联，层次清晰。
结尾段：总结互联网的作用，简单展望未来。
【第三步：要点展开】
要点一：开头亮观点（总起句）
核心句式：In my view/the most useful invention is…等
要点二：阐述原因
方便沟通：makes communication much more convenient/by video or send messages等
助力学习：search for useful information/take online classes等
丰富生活：watching movies/listening to music等
要点三：总结升华
总结：makes our lives easier and more colorful/will bring us more surprises in the future等
10．例文
Good morning, everyone. I’m Wang Wei from Class 5. Great inventions and discoveries have truly changed our world. Today, I’d like to talk about how they impact our daily lives.
In communication, tools like smartphones make long-distance communication faster and more convenient. Various mobile apps also help people acquire new knowledge effectively. In medical care, advanced equipment helps doctors treat diseases more effectively, allowing people to live healthier and longer lives. Moreover, in transportation, inventions like airplanes and high-speed trains save us a lot of time and make travelling more convenient.
These innovations continue to make our lives better. Thank you!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：英文演讲稿（应用文），以一般现在时为主
明确要点：从通信、医疗、交通三个领域，说明伟大发明如何影响日常生活
确定人称：第一人称（I）、第三人称（客观说明）
注意事项：演讲语气正式、清晰，不透露真实个人敏感信息
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：问候、自我介绍并引出主题（伟大发明改变世界，影响日常生活）
主体段：分领域展开说明（通信→医疗→交通），分别举例并阐述影响
结尾段：总结观点并致谢
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：通信领域
核心选择：smartphones/computers/social media apps等
功能描述：make long-distance communication faster and more convenient/help us talk to people far away quickly/get new knowledge easily等
要点二：医疗领域
核心选择：advanced equipment/portable first-aid kits/electronic blood pressure monitors等
功能描述：helps doctors treat diseases more effectively/are very useful when people get hurt outside/let old people check their health at home等
要点三：交通领域
核心选择：airplanes/high-speed trains/subways/drones/electric cars等
功能描述：save us a lot of time and make travelling more convenient/send things quickly to far places/help people avoid heavy traffic等
11．
My robot
In the future, I want to be a scientist and make a wonderful robot. It will look like a person with a friendly face and big hands.
My robot will be very helpful. It can do housework like cleaning the rooms and washing dishes. It can also take care of old people and help them walk. When I have problems with my schoolwork, it will help me solve difficult math problems.
To make my dream come true, I will keep healthy by doing sports every day. I will study hard and go to a good college to learn more about science.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：记叙文，主要时态为一般将来时
明确要点：机器人外表、机器人功能、个人努力方向
确定人称：第一人称
注意事项：不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名；词数控制在80左右（不含已给开头句）
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：已给开头句，直接引入主题
主体段：分别描述机器人的外表和功能
结尾段：阐述自己为实现梦想将付出的努力，升华主题
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：机器人外表
外貌特征：look like a person / like a human / have a friendly face / have big hands / wear a smile / be tall and strong
形象描述：It will look kind and cute. / It will have bright eyes and a warm smile.
要点二：机器人功能
家务劳动：do housework / clean the rooms / wash dishes / cook meals / sweep the floor / water flowers
照顾老人：take care of old people / look after the elderly / keep them company / help them walk / remind them to take medicine
辅导功课：help with schoolwork / solve math problems / teach English / check homework / explain difficult questions
要点三：努力方向
保持健康：keep healthy / do sports every day / eat healthy food / get enough sleep
努力学习：study hard / work hard at all subjects / listen carefully in class / finish homework on time
升学深造：go to college / go to a good university / learn more about science / study robotics / read many books
12．例文
An Invention that is Changing the World
Smartphones are one of the greatest inventions in the world. They were first invented by IBM in New York, the US, in 1992.
In the past, people used phones only to talk. Now, with smartphones, we can do almost everything: chat with friends, take photos, shop online and even study. We can share our happy moments with others anytime. They make our life much easier and more colorful.
In my opinion, smartphones are really helpful, but we should use them in a right way. Don’t spend too much time on them, or they will be bad for our study and health.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：根据所给提示介绍智能手机给我们的生活带来的变化，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍手机；
第二步，详细描述手机带来的变化；
第三步，表达自己对手机的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①chat with friends和朋友聊天
②In my opinion在我看来
③be bad for对……有害
[高分句型]
①They were first invented by IBM in New York, the US, in 1992. (被动语态)
②In my opinion, smartphones are really helpful, but we should use them in a right way. (but表示转折)
13．例文：
I want to introduce a “Smart Lunchbox”. It doesn’t seem like a major invention, but it can turn cold food into a warm meal in just one minute by using solar energy. This makes it possible for students to have a hot and healthy lunch at school every day. How convenient it is!
It might be costly, but I believe with further development, it will become inexpensive. If I can create it, I hope it will win an award in our science competition. This small invention can truly make our daily lives better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：讲稿；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：需以学生代表身份发言，介绍一项小发明的名称、工作原理及积极影响。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开场问候并直接说明发明名称和功能（智能午餐盒自动加热午餐）。
第二步：简单描述其工作原理。
第三步：对其进行简单的评价，结尾点出其对人们生活的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①seem like看起来像
②turn into变成
[高分句型]
①This makes it possible for students to have a hot and healthy lunch at school every day.（it作形式宾语）
②How convenient it is!（感叹句）
③If I can create it, I hope it will win an award in our science competition.（if引导条件状语从句，宾语从句）
14．例文
A Plan for Our School Charity Sale
Our school will hold a charity sale next Sunday, and we have made a plan. Firstly, we will collect different kinds of things for the sale like books and paintings. All the things will be checked to make sure they are in good condition, and we will set low prices for them. Besides, we will design colorful posters and put them up around the school. During the sale, we will take turns to work as volunteers to sell the things. Finally, all the money we raise will be donated to the children in a village school to buy extracurricular books.
In short, this charity sale is not just about raising money, but also about learning to share and care for others. We hope all students can take part in it.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：这是一篇计划类说明文，以一般将来时为主
明确要点：义卖准备、义卖物品、资金用途
确定人称：第一人称（we/our）
注意事项：紧扣“计划”核心，覆盖所有要点，语言简洁清晰，适当使用连接词和复合句
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：简要说明义卖的目的与意义
主体段：详细阐述具体安排，分层次说明
结尾段：重申义卖的意义
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：义卖准备
宣传推广：design posters/use campus radio/use social media等
征集物品：books/pens/schoolbags/paintings等
要点二：义卖物品
books/pens/schoolbags/paintings等
要点三：资金用途
捐赠对象：village schools/children’s home/animal protection organization等
具体用途：buy extracurricular books/support environmental protection activities等
15．
例文
The Power of Money
Money plays an important part in our life. It can bring us happiness and help us get what we need. But sometimes it may also cause problems if we don’t use it wisely.
To use money wisely, I always make a plan before spending. I save some pocket money every week for future use. I also compare prices when shopping to choose good but cheap things. I never buy things I don’t really need.
From managing my money, I learn that money is a tool, not the goal of life. It teaches me to be responsible and careful. The most important thing is to use it in the right way to help ourselves and others.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：议论文，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：拥有金钱带来的结果、如何明智使用金钱、从管理金钱中受到的启发
确定人称：第一人称（I）
注意事项：需包含三个要点，词数不少于60
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：总述金钱的作用及两面性
主体段：分两点阐述如何明智使用金钱
结尾段：总结从管理金钱中得到的启发
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：金钱带来的结果
积极方面：bring us happiness/help us get what we need/meet basic needs/make life comfortable等
消极方面：cause problems/bring worries/make people greedy/lead to bad habits等
要点二：明智使用金钱
制定计划：make a plan before spending/plan my money/make a budget等
储蓄习惯：save some pocket money/save for future/put money in a piggy bank等
理性消费：compare prices/choose good but cheap things/buy things on sale等
避免浪费：never buy things I don’t really need/avoid useless spending等
要点三：受到的启发
金钱本质：a tool, not the goal of life/just a tool/not the most important thing等
个人成长：be responsible/be careful/learn to control myself等
正确观念：use it in the right way/help ourselves and others/money can’t buy happiness等
16．例文
A Great Invention of Ancient China
Tea is one of the greatest inventions of ancient China. It is said that Shennong, an ancient Chinese emperor, discovered tea when a tea leaf accidentally fell into boiling water.
Tea has a history of thousands of years. It is not only a popular drink all over the world, but also good for people’s health. It has become an important part of Chinese culture and has spread to many countries.
Tea is a great gift from ancient China to the world. I love drinking tea and I am proud of this great invention.
【详解】写作步骤
【第一步：审题立意】
确定文体：说明文（材料作文），以一般现在时为主
明确要点：介绍中国古代伟大发明茶，讲述发现传说、历史、作用与文化意义
确定人称：第一人称/第三人称
注意事项：要点完整不遗漏；语法拼写正确，句式通顺。
【第二步：构思布局】
总分总结构：
开头段：点明茶是伟大发明；
主体段：介绍起源、历史与价值；
结尾段：表达自豪的情绪。
【第三步：要点展开】
要点一：发明介绍
one of the greatest inventions/ancient China
要点二：起源传说
Shennong/discover tea/tea leaf fell into boiling water
要点三：历史与价值
a history of thousands of years/popular drink/good for health/important part of Chinese culture/spread to many countries
要点四：情感与总结
a great gift/love drinking tea/be proud of
17．例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua from Class1, Grade 8 at Sunshine Middle School. Among all the inventions, I think the Internet is the most powerful and influential one.
It makes our lives much more convenient and efficient. We can get useful information and enjoy entertainment anytime and anywhere. Besides, it helps us study and communicate easily with friends and family, even if we are far away from each other.
In my opinion, the Internet is truly a great invention. It keeps changing the world and making our lives better. We should use it wisely to create a brighter future.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：演讲稿，属于议论文的一种，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：介绍一项对我们生活影响最大的科技产品；它对我们生活的影响（至少两方面）；个人看法
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称（除开头已给信息外）；词数为80左右
[第二步：构思布局]
开头段：引入主题，点明要介绍的科技产品
主体段：详细介绍该科技产品对我们生活的影响，至少两个方面
结尾段：表达个人看法，总结全文
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：简要介绍一项对我们生活影响最大的科技产品
产品选择：Internet/computers/mobile phones/robots/electric cars等
拓展词汇：revolutionary/groundbreaking/life-changing
要点二：它对我们生活的影响
方面一：make our lives more convenient and efficient
具体表达：It makes our lives much more convenient and efficient./It has greatly improved the efficiency and convenience of our daily lives./We can get useful information and enjoy entertainment anytime and anywhere.
拓展词汇：access information/on-the-go entertainment
方面二：helps us work, study, and communicate easily
具体表达：Besides, it helps us study and communicate easily with friends and family, even if we are far away from each other./Moreover, it facilitates easy communication and collaboration among friends and family, regardless of geographical distance.
拓展词汇：facilitate/collaboration/ geographical distance
方面三（可选）：get information and entertainment anytime（已包含在方面一中，可合并或替换为其他方面）
方面四（可选）：improves healthcare and transportation
拓展句型：Additionally, it has also contributed to advancements in healthcare and transportation, making these sectors more efficient and accessible.
拓展词汇：advancements/healthcare sector/transportation sector/accessible
要点三：你的看法
具体表达：In my opinion, the Internet is truly a great invention. It keeps changing the world and making our life better. We should use it wisely to create a brighter future./Personally, I believe the Internet is an extraordinary invention that continues to reshape our world and enhance our quality of life. It is imperative that we utilize it judiciously to pave the way for a brighter tomorrow.
拓展词汇：extraordinary/reshape/quality of life/imperative/utilize/judiciously/pave the way for
18．
例文
Shopping Wisely
These days, many stores near our school have big sales and lots of students go shopping there. To help everyone shop wisely, I want to share some useful tips.
First, you should make a shopping list before you go. It helps you focus on what you really need. Second, while shopping, remember to check the production date to make sure the food is fresh. More importantly, think again before you pay. Ask yourself whether the item is truly necessary. Don’t buy things just because they are cheap.
By following these tips, you will save money and be a wise shopper.
【详解】[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：建议类说明文，用一般现在时为主。
明确要点：购物前建议、购物中建议。
确定人称：第一人称（I）与第二人称（you）。
注意事项：需包含表格所有信息，词数70左右，不得透露真实个人信息。
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：承接给定开头，引出分享建议的主题；
主体段：分阶段列举建议，先说购物前，再说购物中；
结尾段：总结建议带来的好处，发出号召。
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：购物前建议
准备工作：make a shopping list/focus on/what you really need等
要点二：购物中建议
具体做法：check the date/make sure/fresh/think again/truly necessary等
避坑指南：don’t buy things/just because/cheap等
要点三：总结好处
作用感受：save money/wise shopper/follow these tips等
19．
例文
Dear Peter,
I’m happy to tell you about how I use my pocket money.
I usually get it from my parents when I help with housework. I spend it wisely. First, I buy books to improve my knowledge. Second, I save some for future needs. Sometimes, I use it to buy small gifts for friends or donate to people in need.
I think using pocket money in this way not only helps me but also teaches me to be responsible. By doing so, I learn how to manage money, which is important for my future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍性应用文，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：如何使用你的零花钱
确定人称：第一人称
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：总起句，引出主题，分享零花钱的使用
主体段：介绍如何使用零花钱
结尾段：分享如何认为使用零花钱
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：零花钱的使用：buy books/save some for future needs等
要点二：看法：helps me/teaches me to be responsible/learn how to manage money等
20．范文：
How to use money wisely
Money is important in our life, as it helps us buy the things we need. But money is not everything. There are many things more valuable than money, such as health, family and love.
Needs are things we must have, like food and clothes. Wants are things we desire but can live without.
We can follow some tips to make smart choices. For example, make a shopping list before shopping to avoid buying unnecessary things. When you want something, wait for a day or two before buying it.
Let’s use money wisely and responsibly.
【详解】写作步骤
［第一步：审题立意］
确定文体：介绍性说明文，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：金钱的重要性，但不是万能的、区分“需要(needs)”和“想要(wants)”、如何明智使用金钱的建议
确定人称：第一人称（we/us）
注意事项：不得出现真实姓名和学校名称
［第二步：构思布局］
三段式结构：
开头段：总起句，提出金钱的重要性及其并不是万能的
主体段：分别介绍并区分“需要(needs)”和“想要(wants)”
结尾段：如何明智使用金钱的建议，然后呼吁明智使用金钱
［第三步：要点展开］
要点一：提出金钱的重要性及其并不是万能的
金钱的重要性：important in our life/helps us buy the things we need
金钱并不是万能的：not everything/things more valuable than money/such as health, family and love
要点二：区分“需要(needs)”和“想要(wants)”
介绍“需要(needs)”：must have/like food and clothes
介绍“想要(wants)”： desire/but can live without
要点三：如何明智使用金钱的建议
明智使用金钱的建议：follow some tips/make a shopping list before shopping to avoid buying unnecessary things/wait for a day or two before buying it
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