冀教版英语八年级下册UNIT 5~8单元话题作文导学案(原卷版+解析版)

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冀教版英语八年级下册UNIT 8单元话题作文导学案
一、 明确目标 —— 课标与考点导航
(一)单元主题:Unit 8 Natural disasters (自然灾害与安全防护)
(二)课标语境:人与自然 / 人与自我 —— 自然生态 / 生活与学习(自然灾害与防范措施,人身安全与自我保护;敬畏自然,珍爱生命)
(三)命题特点:常以说明文、记叙文或建议信的形式,考查学生对常见自然灾害(如地震、洪水等)及其破坏力的描述,要求运用构词法(Word formation)丰富词汇表达,并能用祈使句或情态动词给出灾害发生时的求生建议、逃生计划以及如何应对次生灾害。
二、 巧妇之炊 —— 核心素材积累
(一)主题词汇与金词短语
1. natural disasters (自然灾害)
2. earthquake / flood (地震 / 洪水)
3. secondary disasters (次生灾害)
4. when it comes to... (当涉及……时)
5. keep an eye out for (密切注意)
6. pull over (靠边停车)
7. deal with (解决;处理)
8. take action (采取行动)
9. fight against (与……作斗争)
10. plenty of (大量的;充足的)
(二)高分提分句型
1. 开头句(引出自然灾害的话题及严重性):
(1)Natural disasters are dangerous and they can happen anywhere. (自然灾害是危险的,它们可能在任何地方发生。)
(2)When it comes to natural disasters, it is very important for us to know how to protect ourselves. (当谈到自然灾害时,知道如何保护自己对我们来说非常重要。)
2. 支撑句(运用本单元语法及核心短语给出求生建议与应对措施):
(1)If an earthquake happens, you should keep calm and hide under a strong desk to protect your head. (如果发生地震,你应该保持冷静并躲在结实的桌子下以保护你的头部。)
(2)If you are driving, pull over to a safe place quickly. (如果你在开车,迅速靠边停车到一个安全的地方。)
(3)When you are outdoors, you must keep an eye out for falling objects. (当你在户外时,必须密切注意掉落的物体。)
(4)After a disaster, we must learn how to deal with secondary disasters and take action to help others. (灾难发生后,我们必须学会如何处理次生灾害,并采取行动帮助他人。)
3. 升华句(总结安全防范的意义):
(1)In a word, learning disaster safety tips can save our lives. (总之,学习灾害安全提示可以挽救我们的生命。)
(2)Let's fight against natural disasters together and keep safe! (让我们一起抗击自然灾害并保持安全!)
(三)过渡连接词
1. 表条件/时间:If (如果), When (当……时), Before / After (在……之前/之后).
2. 表顺序/步骤:First (首先), Second (其次), Next (接下来), Finally (最后).
3. 表转折/强调:However (然而), Most importantly (最重要的是).
4. 表总结/呼吁:In short / In a word (总之), Always remember (永远记住).
三、 以读促写 —— 经典范文研读
(一)范文赏析
How to Stay Safe in an Earthquake
Natural disasters are very dangerous. When it comes to earthquakes, they usually happen suddenly and bring down buildings. Therefore, knowing disaster safety tips is important for everyone.
What should we do when an earthquake happens First, you must keep calm. If you are indoors, do not jump out of the window. Hide under a strong desk or table to protect your head. Second, if you are outdoors, move to an open area and keep an eye out for falling objects. If you are driving, pull over your car to a safe place. Third, after the earthquake, you must be careful. Sometimes secondary disasters will happen. We need to take action to deal with problems like fires.
In a word, earthquakes are terrible, but we can fight against them with knowledge. Always remember these safety tips to protect yourself and save lives.
(二)结构解剖
1. Para 1 (Beginning): 开门见山,点明自然灾害(地震)的破坏性,引出学习安全知识的重要性
2. Para 2 (Body): 使用表示顺序的连接词和核心短语,分情况(室内、室外、驾车、震后)详细列出逃生和应对次生灾害的建议
3. Para 3 (Ending): 总结安全常识的作用,呼吁大家用知识武装自己、敬畏自然、珍爱生命
(三)亮点采撷
1. 找出文中的高级词组或短语:when it comes to, bring down, keep an eye out for, pull over, take action, fight against
2. 注意构词法的运用(Word formation):danger -> dangerous; sudden -> suddenly; safe -> safety
四、 实战演练
(一)真题再现
1. 自然灾害无情,但我们可以通过学习安全知识来保护自己。假设你是李华,你们学校英文报的“Safety First”专栏正在征集以“Safety Tips for Natural Disasters”为题的文章。请你写一篇英语短文,向同学们介绍一种常见的自然灾害(如地震、洪水等)发生时,我们应该怎么做。词数80左右。
(二)头脑风暴
1. Topic & Opening: Natural disasters (like floods / earthquakes) can happen anywhere. We must know how to stay safe.
2. Body (Safety Tips - use Imperatives & "If" clauses):
- Before: Prepare plenty of food and water.
- During: Keep calm. If you are in a flood, move to high places. Keep an eye out for danger.
- After: Take action to deal with secondary disasters (like diseases or no clean water).
3. Conclusion: In short, safety comes first. We can protect ourselves.
(三)提笔练习
Safety Tips for Natural Disasters
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五、 精益求精 —— 评价与修改
(一)写作评价表
1. 评分说明:请根据写作情况在对应的空格内填入符号。做到打“√”,没做到打“×”。
评价维度 评价细则 自评 互评
1. 内容 (1)是否明确指出了介绍的是哪种自然灾害? [ ] [ ]
(2)是否针对该灾害给出了至少三条具体、实用的安全建议? [ ] [ ]
(3)结尾是否总结了学习安全求生技能的意义? [ ] [ ]
2. 结构 (1)文章是否有清晰的开头、正文和结尾?步骤词/条件词是否恰当? [ ] [ ]
3. 语言 (1)是否准确使用了本单元核心短语(如keep an eye out for等)和构词法派生词? [ ] [ ]
4. 规范 (1)拼写、大小写、标点符号是否正确?字数是否达标? [ ] [ ]
(二)同伴给出的闪光点
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(三)同伴给出的修改建议
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____________________________________________________________________冀教版英语八年级下册UNIT 7单元话题作文导学案
一、 明确目标 —— 课标与考点导航
(一)单元主题:Unit 7 The value of money (金钱的价值 / 理财与消费观)
(二)课标语境:人与自我 / 人与社会 —— 生活与学习 / 社会服务与人际沟通(正确的金钱观、合理消费、个人理财计划、勤俭节约的传统美德)
(三)命题特点:常以记叙文、议论文或演讲稿的形式,考查学生对金钱的看法、零花钱(pocket money)的使用或一次不合理消费经历的描述,要求运用定语从句(Attributive clauses)表达个人观点,探讨如何明智地管理和使用金钱,树立健康的金钱观。
二、 巧妇之炊 —— 核心素材积累
(一)主题词汇与金词短语
1. the value of money (金钱的价值)
2. pocket money (零花钱)
3. spend money wisely (明智地花钱)
4. adopt a healthy attitude (树立健康的观念)
5. map out a plan (制定计划)
6. make a budget (做预算)
7. trade... for... (用……交换……)
8. in the shape of... (以……的形状)
9. be grateful for... (因为……而感激)
10. make a difference (产生影响;起重要作用)
(二)高分提分句型
1. 开头句(引出金钱话题及重要性):
(1)As we all know, money plays an important role in our daily lives. (众所周知,金钱在我们日常生活中扮演着重要的角色。)
(2)It is very important for us teenagers to adopt a healthy attitude towards money. (对我们青少年来说,树立健康的金钱观非常重要。)
2. 支撑句(运用本单元语法:定语从句 Attributive clauses 阐述观点和做法):
(1)The pocket money that we get from our parents should be spent wisely. (我们从父母那里得到的零花钱应该被明智地花掉。)
(2)I usually buy the things which / that I really need, such as books and school things. (我通常买我真正需要的东西,比如书和学习用品。)
(3)We can make a budget which helps us manage our money better. (我们可以做一个帮助我们更好地管理金钱的预算。)
(4)I want to learn from the people who donate their money to help others. (我想向那些把钱捐给别人以提供帮助的人学习。)
3. 升华句(总结金钱观/发出倡议):
(1)In a word, money is not everything. There are many precious things which money cannot buy. (总之,金钱不是一切。有很多珍贵的东西是金钱买不到的。)
(2)Let's learn to manage our money wisely and make a difference to the world! (让我们学会明智地管理金钱,并对世界产生积极的影响!)
(三)过渡连接词
1. 表列举/建议:First of all (首先), Secondly (其次), Finally (最后).
2. 表递进/补充:What's more (而且), Besides (此外), Also (也).
3. 表转折:However (然而), But (但是).
4. 表总结:In short (总之), All in all (总而言之), In my opinion (在我看来).
三、 以读促写 —— 经典范文研读
(一)范文赏析
How to Spend Pocket Money Wisely
Nowadays, many teenagers get pocket money from their parents, but some of them don't know how to spend it wisely. In my opinion, we should adopt a healthy attitude towards money.
Here is some advice on how to manage our money. First, we can make a list of the things that we really need before shopping. This can stop us from buying useless things. Second, it is a good idea to save some money in the bank. Third, we can use the money to buy books which can open up our minds. Finally, we can also donate some money to the children who live in poor areas.
In a word, money is useful, but it isn't everything. Let's spend our pocket money wisely and make it meaningful.
(二)结构解剖
1. Para 1 (Beginning): 引出零花钱的话题,点明中心论点:我们需要树立健康的金钱观
2. Para 2 (Body): 运用表示顺序的连接词和定语从句,提出合理使用和管理零花钱的具体建议
3. Para 3 (Ending): 总结金钱的作用与局限性,发出明智消费的呼吁
(三)亮点采撷
1. 找出文中的高级词组或短语:spend it wisely, adopt a healthy attitude, make a list of, open up our minds
2. 找出文中的定语从句:the things that we really need, books which can open up our minds, the children who live in poor areas
四、 实战演练
(一)真题再现
1. 假设你是李华,你校英语社团正在举办以“The Value of Money”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿,谈谈你对金钱的看法,并分享你是如何管理和使用自己的零花钱(pocket money)的。要求运用定语从句。词数80左右。
(二)头脑风暴
1. Topic & Opening: Hello everyone. Today I want to talk about the value of money.
2. Your attitude (Viewpoint): Money is important, but it is not everything. There are things which money cannot buy (e.g., time, health).
3. Your experience/actions (Use Attributive Clauses): As a student, I get pocket money every week. The money that I save is used to buy books. I also help people who are in need.
4. Conclusion: We should map out a plan. Let's spend money wisely. Thank you!
(三)提笔练习
The Value of Money
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五、 精益求精 —— 评价与修改
(一)写作评价表
1. 评分说明:请根据写作情况在对应的空格内填入符号。做到打“√”,没做到打“×”。
评价维度 评价细则 自评 互评
1. 内容 (1)是否明确表达了自己对金钱价值的看法(金钱观)? [ ] [ ]
(2)是否结合自身实际,分享了管理和使用零花钱的具体做法? [ ] [ ]
(3)结尾是否发出了合理消费或明智理财的倡议? [ ] [ ]
2. 结构 (1)演讲稿格式是否规范,是否有开头问候和结尾致谢? [ ] [ ]
3. 语言 (1)是否正确、熟练地使用了“定语从句(that/which/who)”来修饰名词? [ ] [ ]
4. 规范 (1)拼写、大小写、标点符号是否正确?字数是否达标? [ ] [ ]
(二)同伴给出的闪光点
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(三)同伴给出的修改建议
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____________________________________________________________________冀教版英语八年级下册UNIT 6单元话题作文导学案
一、 明确目标 —— 课标与考点导航
(一)单元主题:Unit 6 I love literature! (我爱文学 / 文学探索与故事)
(二)课标语境:人与社会 / 人与自我 —— 历史、社会与文化 / 生活与学习(中外优秀文学作品,如寓言、童话、诗歌等;文学阅读与创作体验;中华优秀传统文化故事)
(三)命题特点:常以记叙文、读后感或故事复述的形式,考查学生对文学作品(如寓言、童话或历史故事)的理解和描述,要求运用宾语从句(Object clauses)表达观点、复述情节,并提炼故事蕴含的道理(moral)。
二、 巧妇之炊 —— 核心素材积累
(一)主题词汇与金词短语
1. types of literature (文学类型)
2. fairy tale / fable (童话 / 寓言)
3. write a poem (写诗)
4. main character (主要人物)
5. find inspiration in... (在……中寻找灵感)
6. return the jade intact to Zhao (完璧归赵)
7. honesty is the best policy (诚实是最好的策略)
8. express one's thoughts and feelings (表达某人的思想感情)
9. learn a lesson (吸取教训)
10. once upon a time (从前)
(二)高分提分句型
1. 开头句(引出文学与故事话题):
(1)I am writing to share my favourite type of literature with you. (我写信是想与你分享我最喜欢的文学类型。)
(2)When it comes to reading, fairy tales and fables are my favourites. (当提到阅读时,童话和寓言是我的最爱。)
2. 支撑句(运用本单元语法:宾语从句 Object clauses 描述情节和观点):
(1)I think that reading literature can open up a whole new world for us. (我认为了解文学能为我们打开一个全新的世界。)
(2)The fable tells us that honesty truly is the best policy. (这则寓言告诉我们,诚实确实是最好的策略。)
(3)We know that Lin Xiangru promised he would return the jade intact to Zhao safely. (我们知道蔺相如承诺他会把和氏璧完好无损地安全带回赵国。)
(4)I hope that everyone can find inspiration in Chinese poems. (我希望每个人都能在中国诗歌中找到灵感。)
3. 升华句(表达对文学的热爱及感悟):
(1)I enjoy expressing my thoughts and feelings through words. (我喜欢用文字表达我的思想和感情。)
(2)Good books and stories make us wiser and better. Let's read more! (好书和好故事使我们变得更明智、更优秀。让我们多读书吧!)
(三)过渡连接词
1. 表时间/顺序:Once upon a time (从前), One day (有一天), At first (起初), Then / Next (然后), Finally / In the end (最后).
2. 表递进/补充:What's more (而且), Besides (此外), Also (也).
3. 表转折:However (然而), But (但是).
4. 表总结/感悟:In a word (总之), The story tells us that... (故事告诉我们……).
三、 以读促写 —— 经典范文研读
(一)范文赏析
My Favourite Story
I love literature very much. I think that reading can open my mind. My favourite type of literature is historical stories. Now I want to share a famous Chinese idiom story with you.
The story is called Return the Jade Intact to Zhao . Once upon a time, the King of Qin wanted the famous jade from the State of Zhao. Lin Xiangru went to Qin and told the king that he would bring the jade back safely if the king didn't keep his promise. He was very brave and smart. Finally, he tricked the King of Qin and sent the jade back to Zhao.
I think that Lin Xiangru was a great hero. The story tells us that we should be brave and wise when we face difficulties. I enjoy expressing my thoughts and feelings through such great stories.
(二)结构解剖
1. Para 1 (Beginning): 表达对文学的热爱,运用宾语从句引出最喜欢的中国成语故事
2. Para 2 (Body): 简述《完璧归赵》的起因、经过和结果,突出主人公的勇敢和智慧
3. Para 3 (Ending): 运用宾语从句提炼故事蕴含的道理,并表达自己对文学的情感
(三)亮点采撷
1. 找出文中的高级词组:type of literature, historical stories, return the jade intact to Zhao, face difficulties
2. 找出文中的宾语从句句型:I think that reading can..., told the king that he would..., The story tells us that...
四、 实战演练
(一)真题再现
1. 假设你是李华,你校英语报正在开展以“I Love Literature”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇英语短文投稿,介绍你最喜欢的一个经典故事(如《樵夫的寓言》等中外寓言、童话或历史故事)。内容包括:1. 你最喜欢的文学类型及作品名称;2. 简述该作品的主要内容(要求运用宾语从句);3. 你从中学到了什么道理。词数80左右。
(二)头脑风暴
1. Topic & Opening: Hello everyone! I love literature. My favourite type of literature is fables. Today I want to share The Woodcutter Fable with you.
2. Plot (Body - Use Object Clauses): Once upon a time, an honest woodcutter lost his axe in the river. A fairy showed him a gold axe and a silver axe. The woodcutter said that they were not his axes. Because he was honest, he got all the axes. Later, a greedy man lied that the gold axe was his. He got nothing.
3. Meaning & Conclusion: I think that this is a great fable. It tells us that honesty truly is the best policy. We should always be honest.
(三)提笔练习
The Woodcutter Fable
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五、 精益求精 —— 评价与修改
(一)写作评价表
1. 评分说明:请根据写作情况在对应的空格内填入符号。做到打“√”,没做到打“×”。
评价维度 评价细则 自评 互评
1. 内容 (1)是否写明了自己最喜欢的文学类型和作品名称? [ ] [ ]
(2)是否完整、简明地复述了该文学作品或故事的起因、经过和结果? [ ] [ ]
(3)结尾是否提炼了故事所蕴含的道理或个人的感悟? [ ] [ ]
2. 结构 (1)文章是否有清晰的开头、正文和结尾?表示顺序的词是否恰当? [ ] [ ]
3. 语言 (1)是否正确、熟练地使用了“宾语从句”来表达人物的话语和个人观点? [ ] [ ]
4. 规范 (1)拼写、大小写、标点符号是否正确?字数是否达标? [ ] [ ]
(二)同伴给出的闪光点
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一、 明确目标 —— 课标与考点导航
(一)单元主题:Unit 5 Great inventions (伟大的发明)
(二)课标语境:人与社会 —— 科学与技术(科技发明与创新的影响,科技改善生活;人类文明的演进与传承)
(三)命题特点:常以说明文或记叙文的形式,考查学生对某种伟大的科技发明(如计算机、互联网、交通工具以及中国古代四大发明等)的介绍,要求运用一般过去时等的被动语态(Passive voice II)说明发明的历史及被使用的场景,并探讨科技发明对人类生活的深远影响。
二、 巧妇之炊 —— 核心素材积累
(一)主题词汇与金词短语
1. invention / inventor (发明 / 发明家)
2. paper making (造纸术)
3. computers and the internet (电脑与互联网)
4. be invented by... (由……发明)
5. be widely used in... (被广泛应用于……)
6. change our lives (改变我们的生活)
7. play an important role (发挥重要作用)
8. make our lives easier and more convenient (使我们的生活更轻松、更便利)
9. come up with new ideas (提出新想法)
10. spread to the rest of the world (传播到世界各地)
(二)高分提分句型
1. 开头句(引出最喜欢的/伟大的发明):
(1)As we all know, there are many great inventions in the world. (众所周知,世界上有许多伟大的发明。)
(2)When it comes to great inventions, the computer is the first one that comes to my mind. (当提到伟大的发明时,电脑是我脑海中浮现的第一个。)
2. 支撑句(运用本单元语法:被动语态介绍发明的背景和用途):
(1)The first computer was invented in the 1940s. (第一台电脑是在20世纪40年代被发明出来的。)
(2)Today, computers are widely used in education, business and communication. (今天,电脑被广泛用于教育、商业和通信领域。)
(3)Paper was first created in ancient China. Then it was spread to other countries. (纸最早是在古代中国被创造出来的。然后它被传播到了其他国家。)
(4)With the help of the internet, we can search for information and buy things online easily. (在互联网的帮助下,我们可以轻松地在网上搜索信息和买东西。)
3. 升华句(表达科技影响及个人感悟):
(1)In a word, inventions have greatly changed the world. (总之,发明极大地改变了世界。)
(2)I am very proud of this great Chinese invention. I hope we can come up with more new ideas in the future. (我为这项伟大的中国发明感到非常自豪。希望未来我们能提出更多新想法。)
(三)过渡连接词
1. 表时间/历程:In the past (在过去), Later (后来), Nowadays / Today (如今).
2. 表对比/转折:At that time (在那个时候), However (然而), But (但是).
3. 表递进/补充:What's more (而且), Besides (此外), Also (也).
4. 表总结:In short (总之), All in all (总而言之).
三、 以读促写 —— 经典范文研读
(一)范文赏析
My Favourite Invention
There are many great inventions in the world, but my favourite invention is the computer. It has changed our lives in many ways.
The first computer was invented in the 1940s. At that time, it was huge and heavy. However, computers are becoming smaller and smarter today. Now, computers are widely used in our daily lives. With the help of the internet, we can easily search for information, send emails to friends, and even buy things at home. Also, computers are used to help students learn and help doctors save people.
In short, the computer is one of the greatest inventions in the world. It makes our lives easier and more convenient. I can't imagine what our world would be like without it.
(二)结构解剖
1. Para 1 (Beginning): 开门见山,点出最喜欢的发明是电脑,并总述其改变了我们的生活
2. Para 2 (Body): 灵活运用被动语态介绍电脑的发明时间(was invented),以及现在被广泛应用于各个领域(are widely used, are used to help...)
3. Para 3 (Ending): 总结电脑带来的便利,感叹其不可或缺的地位
(三)亮点采撷
1. 找出文中的高级词组:in many ways, with the help of, search for, more convenient
2. 找出文中的被动语态句型:was invented in the 1940s, are widely used in..., are used to help...
四、 实战演练
(一)真题再现
1. 假如你是李华,你校英文报正在开展以“A Great Invention”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文,向外国朋友介绍中国古代四大发明之一——造纸术(Paper making)。内容包括:1. 过去人们用什么记录文字(如竹简 bamboo slips 等);2. 造纸术是谁发明的,用什么材料制作的(如树皮 tree bark、破布 rags 等);3. 造纸术带来的影响。词数80左右。
(二)头脑风暴
1. Background: China has a long history and is famous for its Four Great Inventions. My favourite is paper making.
2. In the past (Problems): Books were made of bamboo slips. They were very heavy and hard to carry.
3. The invention (Use Passive Voice): Later, paper making was invented by Cai Lun. Tree bark and rags were used to make paper.
4. Meaning & Conclusion: It was much lighter and cheaper. It was spread to the world and changed the world. I am proud of it.
(三)提笔练习
A Great Invention
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五、 精益求精 —— 评价与修改
(一)写作评价表
1. 评分说明:请根据写作情况在对应的空格内填入符号。做到打“√”,没做到打“×”。
评价维度 评价细则 自评 互评
1. 内容 (1)是否介绍了该发明(如造纸术)出现之前的社会状况? [ ] [ ]
(2)是否说清了该发明是谁创造的以及用什么材料制作的? [ ] [ ]
(3)是否阐述了该发明对人类生活和文明发展的影响? [ ] [ ]
2. 结构 (1)文章是否有清晰的开头、正文和结尾?时间连接词是否恰当? [ ] [ ]
3. 语言 (1)是否正确、熟练地使用了不同时态的“被动语态”来描述历史? [ ] [ ]
4. 规范 (1)拼写、大小写、标点符号是否正确?字数是否达标? [ ] [ ]
(二)同伴给出的闪光点
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一、 明确目标 —— 课标与考点导航
(一)单元主题:Unit 8 Natural disasters (自然灾害与安全防护)
(二)课标语境:人与自然 / 人与自我 —— 自然生态 / 生活与学习(自然灾害与防范措施,人身安全与自我保护;敬畏自然,珍爱生命)
(三)命题特点:常以说明文、记叙文或建议信的形式,考查学生对常见自然灾害(如地震、洪水等)及其破坏力的描述,要求运用构词法(Word formation)丰富词汇表达,并能用祈使句或情态动词给出灾害发生时的求生建议、逃生计划以及如何应对次生灾害。
二、 巧妇之炊 —— 核心素材积累
(一)主题词汇与金词短语
1. natural disasters (自然灾害)
2. earthquake / flood (地震 / 洪水)
3. secondary disasters (次生灾害)
4. when it comes to... (当涉及……时)
5. keep an eye out for (密切注意)
6. pull over (靠边停车)
7. deal with (解决;处理)
8. take action (采取行动)
9. fight against (与……作斗争)
10. plenty of (大量的;充足的)
(二)高分提分句型
1. 开头句(引出自然灾害的话题及严重性):
(1)Natural disasters are dangerous and they can happen anywhere. (自然灾害是危险的,它们可能在任何地方发生。)
(2)When it comes to natural disasters, it is very important for us to know how to protect ourselves. (当谈到自然灾害时,知道如何保护自己对我们来说非常重要。)
2. 支撑句(运用本单元语法及核心短语给出求生建议与应对措施):
(1)If an earthquake happens, you should keep calm and hide under a strong desk to protect your head. (如果发生地震,你应该保持冷静并躲在结实的桌子下以保护你的头部。)
(2)If you are driving, pull over to a safe place quickly. (如果你在开车,迅速靠边停车到一个安全的地方。)
(3)When you are outdoors, you must keep an eye out for falling objects. (当你在户外时,必须密切注意掉落的物体。)
(4)After a disaster, we must learn how to deal with secondary disasters and take action to help others. (灾难发生后,我们必须学会如何处理次生灾害,并采取行动帮助他人。)
3. 升华句(总结安全防范的意义):
(1)In a word, learning disaster safety tips can save our lives. (总之,学习灾害安全提示可以挽救我们的生命。)
(2)Let's fight against natural disasters together and keep safe! (让我们一起抗击自然灾害并保持安全!)
(三)过渡连接词
1. 表条件/时间:If (如果), When (当……时), Before / After (在……之前/之后).
2. 表顺序/步骤:First (首先), Second (其次), Next (接下来), Finally (最后).
3. 表转折/强调:However (然而), Most importantly (最重要的是).
4. 表总结/呼吁:In short / In a word (总之), Always remember (永远记住).
三、 以读促写 —— 经典范文研读
(一)范文赏析
How to Stay Safe in an Earthquake
Natural disasters are very dangerous. When it comes to earthquakes, they usually happen suddenly and bring down buildings. Therefore, knowing disaster safety tips is important for everyone.
What should we do when an earthquake happens First, you must keep calm. If you are indoors, do not jump out of the window. Hide under a strong desk or table to protect your head. Second, if you are outdoors, move to an open area and keep an eye out for falling objects. If you are driving, pull over your car to a safe place. Third, after the earthquake, you must be careful. Sometimes secondary disasters will happen. We need to take action to deal with problems like fires.
In a word, earthquakes are terrible, but we can fight against them with knowledge. Always remember these safety tips to protect yourself and save lives.
(二)结构解剖
1. Para 1 (Beginning): 开门见山,点明自然灾害(地震)的破坏性,引出学习安全知识的重要性
2. Para 2 (Body): 使用表示顺序的连接词和核心短语,分情况(室内、室外、驾车、震后)详细列出逃生和应对次生灾害的建议
3. Para 3 (Ending): 总结安全常识的作用,呼吁大家用知识武装自己、敬畏自然、珍爱生命
(三)亮点采撷
1. 找出文中的高级词组或短语:when it comes to, bring down, keep an eye out for, pull over, take action, fight against
2. 注意构词法的运用(Word formation):danger -> dangerous; sudden -> suddenly; safe -> safety
四、 实战演练
(一)真题再现
1. 自然灾害无情,但我们可以通过学习安全知识来保护自己。假设你是李华,你们学校英文报的“Safety First”专栏正在征集以“Safety Tips for Natural Disasters”为题的文章。请你写一篇英语短文,向同学们介绍一种常见的自然灾害(如地震、洪水等)发生时,我们应该怎么做。词数80左右。
(二)头脑风暴
1. Topic & Opening: Natural disasters (like floods / earthquakes) can happen anywhere. We must know how to stay safe.
2. Body (Safety Tips - use Imperatives & "If" clauses):
- Before: Prepare plenty of food and water.
- During: Keep calm. If you are in a flood, move to high places. Keep an eye out for danger.
- After: Take action to deal with secondary disasters (like diseases or no clean water).
3. Conclusion: In short, safety comes first. We can protect ourselves.
(三)提笔练习
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Safety Tips for Natural Disasters
Natural disasters, such as floods and earthquakes, can be very dangerous. When it comes to a flood, what should we do to stay safe
Here are some useful tips. First, if a flood happens, you must keep calm. Try to move to high places like the roof of a strong building. Second, don't swim or walk in the water, because the water can bring down things and wash you away. If you are in a car, pull over and leave it quickly. Third, you should keep an eye out for secondary disasters. Prepare plenty of clean water and food, and wait for help.
In a word, we should take action to learn more survival skills. They can help us deal with dangers and save our lives.
(五)写作解析
1. 结构分析:文章是一篇安全建议型说明文。第一段引出自然灾害(洪水)的话题,设问激发兴趣;第二段按照逻辑顺序(First, Second, Third),分情况(往高处走、避开水流、远离车辆、防范次生灾害)给出具体的求生指导;第三段总结呼吁,强调掌握求生技能的重要性。
2. 内容要点:紧扣“Natural disasters”主题,涵盖了灾害类型(floods)、具体的求生避险措施(move to high places, don't walk in the water, pull over, prepare food and water)以及应对灾难的态度。
3. 语言亮点:
(1)精准使用了本单元的核心短语:When it comes to, pull over, keep an eye out for, secondary disasters, plenty of, take action, deal with,含金量极高,高度契合教材要求。
(2)条件状语从句和祈使句的混合使用:如“if a flood happens, you must keep calm.” 既表达了条件,又起到了强烈的指导作用。
(3)词汇的灵活转换体现了构词法(Word formation)的积累,如 danger -> dangerous, use -> useful, survive -> survival。
五、 精益求精 —— 评价与修改
(一)写作评价表
1. 评分说明:请根据写作情况在对应的空格内填入符号。做到打“√”,没做到打“×”。
评价维度 评价细则 自评 互评
1. 内容 (1)是否明确指出了介绍的是哪种自然灾害? [ ] [ ]
(2)是否针对该灾害给出了至少三条具体、实用的安全建议? [ ] [ ]
(3)结尾是否总结了学习安全求生技能的意义? [ ] [ ]
2. 结构 (1)文章是否有清晰的开头、正文和结尾?步骤词/条件词是否恰当? [ ] [ ]
3. 语言 (1)是否准确使用了本单元核心短语(如keep an eye out for等)和构词法派生词? [ ] [ ]
4. 规范 (1)拼写、大小写、标点符号是否正确?字数是否达标? [ ] [ ]
(二)同伴给出的闪光点
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一、 明确目标 —— 课标与考点导航
(一)单元主题:Unit 7 The value of money (金钱的价值 / 理财与消费观)
(二)课标语境:人与自我 / 人与社会 —— 生活与学习 / 社会服务与人际沟通(正确的金钱观、合理消费、个人理财计划、勤俭节约的传统美德)
(三)命题特点:常以记叙文、议论文或演讲稿的形式,考查学生对金钱的看法、零花钱(pocket money)的使用或一次不合理消费经历的描述,要求运用定语从句(Attributive clauses)表达个人观点,探讨如何明智地管理和使用金钱,树立健康的金钱观。
二、 巧妇之炊 —— 核心素材积累
(一)主题词汇与金词短语
1. the value of money (金钱的价值)
2. pocket money (零花钱)
3. spend money wisely (明智地花钱)
4. adopt a healthy attitude (树立健康的观念)
5. map out a plan (制定计划)
6. make a budget (做预算)
7. trade... for... (用……交换……)
8. in the shape of... (以……的形状)
9. be grateful for... (因为……而感激)
10. make a difference (产生影响;起重要作用)
(二)高分提分句型
1. 开头句(引出金钱话题及重要性):
(1)As we all know, money plays an important role in our daily lives. (众所周知,金钱在我们日常生活中扮演着重要的角色。)
(2)It is very important for us teenagers to adopt a healthy attitude towards money. (对我们青少年来说,树立健康的金钱观非常重要。)
2. 支撑句(运用本单元语法:定语从句 Attributive clauses 阐述观点和做法):
(1)The pocket money that we get from our parents should be spent wisely. (我们从父母那里得到的零花钱应该被明智地花掉。)
(2)I usually buy the things which / that I really need, such as books and school things. (我通常买我真正需要的东西,比如书和学习用品。)
(3)We can make a budget which helps us manage our money better. (我们可以做一个帮助我们更好地管理金钱的预算。)
(4)I want to learn from the people who donate their money to help others. (我想向那些把钱捐给别人以提供帮助的人学习。)
3. 升华句(总结金钱观/发出倡议):
(1)In a word, money is not everything. There are many precious things which money cannot buy. (总之,金钱不是一切。有很多珍贵的东西是金钱买不到的。)
(2)Let's learn to manage our money wisely and make a difference to the world! (让我们学会明智地管理金钱,并对世界产生积极的影响!)
(三)过渡连接词
1. 表列举/建议:First of all (首先), Secondly (其次), Finally (最后).
2. 表递进/补充:What's more (而且), Besides (此外), Also (也).
3. 表转折:However (然而), But (但是).
4. 表总结:In short (总之), All in all (总而言之), In my opinion (在我看来).
三、 以读促写 —— 经典范文研读
(一)范文赏析
How to Spend Pocket Money Wisely
Nowadays, many teenagers get pocket money from their parents, but some of them don't know how to spend it wisely. In my opinion, we should adopt a healthy attitude towards money.
Here is some advice on how to manage our money. First, we can make a list of the things that we really need before shopping. This can stop us from buying useless things. Second, it is a good idea to save some money in the bank. Third, we can use the money to buy books which can open up our minds. Finally, we can also donate some money to the children who live in poor areas.
In a word, money is useful, but it isn't everything. Let's spend our pocket money wisely and make it meaningful.
(二)结构解剖
1. Para 1 (Beginning): 引出零花钱的话题,点明中心论点:我们需要树立健康的金钱观
2. Para 2 (Body): 运用表示顺序的连接词和定语从句,提出合理使用和管理零花钱的具体建议
3. Para 3 (Ending): 总结金钱的作用与局限性,发出明智消费的呼吁
(三)亮点采撷
1. 找出文中的高级词组或短语:spend it wisely, adopt a healthy attitude, make a list of, open up our minds
2. 找出文中的定语从句:the things that we really need, books which can open up our minds, the children who live in poor areas
四、 实战演练
(一)真题再现
1. 假设你是李华,你校英语社团正在举办以“The Value of Money”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿,谈谈你对金钱的看法,并分享你是如何管理和使用自己的零花钱(pocket money)的。要求运用定语从句。词数80左右。
(二)头脑风暴
1. Topic & Opening: Hello everyone. Today I want to talk about the value of money.
2. Your attitude (Viewpoint): Money is important, but it is not everything. There are things which money cannot buy (e.g., time, health).
3. Your experience/actions (Use Attributive Clauses): As a student, I get pocket money every week. The money that I save is used to buy books. I also help people who are in need.
4. Conclusion: We should map out a plan. Let's spend money wisely. Thank you!
(三)提笔练习
The Value of Money
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The Value of Money
Hello, everyone! I'm glad to be here to share my ideas about the value of money.
Money is important in our daily lives. With money, we can buy the things that we need. However, money is not everything. There are many precious things which money cannot buy, such as time, friendship and health. As a middle school student, I get pocket money every week. I always try to spend it wisely. Usually, I buy books that can help me learn more about the world. Sometimes, I donate my pocket money to the people who are in trouble.
In a word, we should have a healthy attitude towards money. Let's map out a plan and learn to manage our money wisely. Thank you for listening!
(五)写作解析
1. 结构分析:这是一篇演讲稿。第一段亲切问候并开门见山引出“金钱的价值”这一主题;第二段辩证地看待金钱(重要但不是万能的),并熟练运用定语从句分享自己如何有意义地使用零花钱(买书、捐款);第三段总结发言,号召大家树立健康的金钱观并致谢。
2. 内容要点:紧扣“The Value of Money”主题,涵盖了对金钱的辩证看法(money is not everything)、零花钱的具体管理方式(buy books, donate money)以及对同龄人的建议(map out a plan, manage money wisely)。
3. 语言亮点:
(1)精准使用了本单元核心语法“定语从句 (Attributive clauses)”,如:the things that we need, things which money cannot buy, books that can help me..., people who are in trouble,从不同关系代词(that, which, who)的角度展现了出色的语法驾驭能力。
(2)使用了丰富的本单元重点词汇和短语,如:pocket money, spend it wisely, have a healthy attitude towards, map out a plan 等。
(3)名言或哲理句的使用增添了说服力:“There are many precious things which money cannot buy...” 使得文章思想深刻。
五、 精益求精 —— 评价与修改
(一)写作评价表
1. 评分说明:请根据写作情况在对应的空格内填入符号。做到打“√”,没做到打“×”。
评价维度 评价细则 自评 互评
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(3)结尾是否发出了合理消费或明智理财的倡议? [ ] [ ]
2. 结构 (1)演讲稿格式是否规范,是否有开头问候和结尾致谢? [ ] [ ]
3. 语言 (1)是否正确、熟练地使用了“定语从句(that/which/who)”来修饰名词? [ ] [ ]
4. 规范 (1)拼写、大小写、标点符号是否正确?字数是否达标? [ ] [ ]
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一、 明确目标 —— 课标与考点导航
(一)单元主题:Unit 6 I love literature! (我爱文学 / 文学探索与故事)
(二)课标语境:人与社会 / 人与自我 —— 历史、社会与文化 / 生活与学习(中外优秀文学作品,如寓言、童话、诗歌等;文学阅读与创作体验;中华优秀传统文化故事)
(三)命题特点:常以记叙文、读后感或故事复述的形式,考查学生对文学作品(如寓言、童话或历史故事)的理解和描述,要求运用宾语从句(Object clauses)表达观点、复述情节,并提炼故事蕴含的道理(moral)。
二、 巧妇之炊 —— 核心素材积累
(一)主题词汇与金词短语
1. types of literature (文学类型)
2. fairy tale / fable (童话 / 寓言)
3. write a poem (写诗)
4. main character (主要人物)
5. find inspiration in... (在……中寻找灵感)
6. return the jade intact to Zhao (完璧归赵)
7. honesty is the best policy (诚实是最好的策略)
8. express one's thoughts and feelings (表达某人的思想感情)
9. learn a lesson (吸取教训)
10. once upon a time (从前)
(二)高分提分句型
1. 开头句(引出文学与故事话题):
(1)I am writing to share my favourite type of literature with you. (我写信是想与你分享我最喜欢的文学类型。)
(2)When it comes to reading, fairy tales and fables are my favourites. (当提到阅读时,童话和寓言是我的最爱。)
2. 支撑句(运用本单元语法:宾语从句 Object clauses 描述情节和观点):
(1)I think that reading literature can open up a whole new world for us. (我认为了解文学能为我们打开一个全新的世界。)
(2)The fable tells us that honesty truly is the best policy. (这则寓言告诉我们,诚实确实是最好的策略。)
(3)We know that Lin Xiangru promised he would return the jade intact to Zhao safely. (我们知道蔺相如承诺他会把和氏璧完好无损地安全带回赵国。)
(4)I hope that everyone can find inspiration in Chinese poems. (我希望每个人都能在中国诗歌中找到灵感。)
3. 升华句(表达对文学的热爱及感悟):
(1)I enjoy expressing my thoughts and feelings through words. (我喜欢用文字表达我的思想和感情。)
(2)Good books and stories make us wiser and better. Let's read more! (好书和好故事使我们变得更明智、更优秀。让我们多读书吧!)
(三)过渡连接词
1. 表时间/顺序:Once upon a time (从前), One day (有一天), At first (起初), Then / Next (然后), Finally / In the end (最后).
2. 表递进/补充:What's more (而且), Besides (此外), Also (也).
3. 表转折:However (然而), But (但是).
4. 表总结/感悟:In a word (总之), The story tells us that... (故事告诉我们……).
三、 以读促写 —— 经典范文研读
(一)范文赏析
My Favourite Story
I love literature very much. I think that reading can open my mind. My favourite type of literature is historical stories. Now I want to share a famous Chinese idiom story with you.
The story is called Return the Jade Intact to Zhao . Once upon a time, the King of Qin wanted the famous jade from the State of Zhao. Lin Xiangru went to Qin and told the king that he would bring the jade back safely if the king didn't keep his promise. He was very brave and smart. Finally, he tricked the King of Qin and sent the jade back to Zhao.
I think that Lin Xiangru was a great hero. The story tells us that we should be brave and wise when we face difficulties. I enjoy expressing my thoughts and feelings through such great stories.
(二)结构解剖
1. Para 1 (Beginning): 表达对文学的热爱,运用宾语从句引出最喜欢的中国成语故事
2. Para 2 (Body): 简述《完璧归赵》的起因、经过和结果,突出主人公的勇敢和智慧
3. Para 3 (Ending): 运用宾语从句提炼故事蕴含的道理,并表达自己对文学的情感
(三)亮点采撷
1. 找出文中的高级词组:type of literature, historical stories, return the jade intact to Zhao, face difficulties
2. 找出文中的宾语从句句型:I think that reading can..., told the king that he would..., The story tells us that...
四、 实战演练
(一)真题再现
1. 假设你是李华,你校英语报正在开展以“I Love Literature”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇英语短文投稿,介绍你最喜欢的一个经典故事(如《樵夫的寓言》等中外寓言、童话或历史故事)。内容包括:1. 你最喜欢的文学类型及作品名称;2. 简述该作品的主要内容(要求运用宾语从句);3. 你从中学到了什么道理。词数80左右。
(二)头脑风暴
1. Topic & Opening: Hello everyone! I love literature. My favourite type of literature is fables. Today I want to share The Woodcutter Fable with you.
2. Plot (Body - Use Object Clauses): Once upon a time, an honest woodcutter lost his axe in the river. A fairy showed him a gold axe and a silver axe. The woodcutter said that they were not his axes. Because he was honest, he got all the axes. Later, a greedy man lied that the gold axe was his. He got nothing.
3. Meaning & Conclusion: I think that this is a great fable. It tells us that honesty truly is the best policy. We should always be honest.
(三)提笔练习
The Woodcutter Fable
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The Woodcutter Fable
I love literature very much. My favourite type of literature is fables because they can teach us a lot. Today, I want to share The Woodcutter Fable with you.
Once upon a time, an honest woodcutter lost his old axe in the river. A fairy appeared and showed him a gold axe and a silver axe. However, the woodcutter said that they were not his axes. The fairy was moved and gave him all the three axes. Later, a greedy man heard the story. He threw his axe into the river and lied that the gold axe was his. The fairy got angry and gave him nothing.
I think that this is a great fable. It tells us that honesty truly is the best policy. We should always be honest in our daily lives.
(五)写作解析
1. 结构分析:文章采用总分总结构。第一段直接点明最喜欢的文学类型是寓言(fables)并引出《樵夫的寓言》;第二段按照时间顺序复述故事情节,通过诚实的樵夫与贪婪的男人的对比突出主题;第三段发表个人感悟,升华出寓言的深刻寓意。
2. 内容要点:涵盖了文学类型(fables)、故事名称(The Woodcutter Fable)、主要情节(lost his axe, fairy showed him axes, said that they were not his, got all axes)以及蕴含的道理(honesty truly is the best policy)。
3. 语言亮点:
(1)精准使用了本单元核心语法“宾语从句 (Object clauses)”,如:said that they were not his axes, lied that the gold axe was his, think that this is a great fable, tells us that honesty truly is the best policy,展现了出色的语法驾驭能力。
(2)使用了丰富的单元重点词汇和短语,如:type of literature, once upon a time, honesty is the best policy 等。
(3)叙事条理清晰,起承转合自然,通过对比(However, Later)使故事充满张力。
五、 精益求精 —— 评价与修改
(一)写作评价表
1. 评分说明:请根据写作情况在对应的空格内填入符号。做到打“√”,没做到打“×”。
评价维度 评价细则 自评 互评
1. 内容 (1)是否写明了自己最喜欢的文学类型和作品名称? [ ] [ ]
(2)是否完整、简明地复述了该文学作品或故事的起因、经过和结果? [ ] [ ]
(3)结尾是否提炼了故事所蕴含的道理或个人的感悟? [ ] [ ]
2. 结构 (1)文章是否有清晰的开头、正文和结尾?表示顺序的词是否恰当? [ ] [ ]
3. 语言 (1)是否正确、熟练地使用了“宾语从句”来表达人物的话语和个人观点? [ ] [ ]
4. 规范 (1)拼写、大小写、标点符号是否正确?字数是否达标? [ ] [ ]
(二)同伴给出的闪光点
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____________________________________________________________________冀教版英语八年级下册UNIT 5单元话题作文导学案
一、 明确目标 —— 课标与考点导航
(一)单元主题:Unit 5 Great inventions (伟大的发明)
(二)课标语境:人与社会 —— 科学与技术(科技发明与创新的影响,科技改善生活;人类文明的演进与传承)
(三)命题特点:常以说明文或记叙文的形式,考查学生对某种伟大的科技发明(如计算机、互联网、交通工具以及中国古代四大发明等)的介绍,要求运用一般过去时等的被动语态(Passive voice II)说明发明的历史及被使用的场景,并探讨科技发明对人类生活的深远影响。
二、 巧妇之炊 —— 核心素材积累
(一)主题词汇与金词短语
1. invention / inventor (发明 / 发明家)
2. paper making (造纸术)
3. computers and the internet (电脑与互联网)
4. be invented by... (由……发明)
5. be widely used in... (被广泛应用于……)
6. change our lives (改变我们的生活)
7. play an important role (发挥重要作用)
8. make our lives easier and more convenient (使我们的生活更轻松、更便利)
9. come up with new ideas (提出新想法)
10. spread to the rest of the world (传播到世界各地)
(二)高分提分句型
1. 开头句(引出最喜欢的/伟大的发明):
(1)As we all know, there are many great inventions in the world. (众所周知,世界上有许多伟大的发明。)
(2)When it comes to great inventions, the computer is the first one that comes to my mind. (当提到伟大的发明时,电脑是我脑海中浮现的第一个。)
2. 支撑句(运用本单元语法:被动语态介绍发明的背景和用途):
(1)The first computer was invented in the 1940s. (第一台电脑是在20世纪40年代被发明出来的。)
(2)Today, computers are widely used in education, business and communication. (今天,电脑被广泛用于教育、商业和通信领域。)
(3)Paper was first created in ancient China. Then it was spread to other countries. (纸最早是在古代中国被创造出来的。然后它被传播到了其他国家。)
(4)With the help of the internet, we can search for information and buy things online easily. (在互联网的帮助下,我们可以轻松地在网上搜索信息和买东西。)
3. 升华句(表达科技影响及个人感悟):
(1)In a word, inventions have greatly changed the world. (总之,发明极大地改变了世界。)
(2)I am very proud of this great Chinese invention. I hope we can come up with more new ideas in the future. (我为这项伟大的中国发明感到非常自豪。希望未来我们能提出更多新想法。)
(三)过渡连接词
1. 表时间/历程:In the past (在过去), Later (后来), Nowadays / Today (如今).
2. 表对比/转折:At that time (在那个时候), However (然而), But (但是).
3. 表递进/补充:What's more (而且), Besides (此外), Also (也).
4. 表总结:In short (总之), All in all (总而言之).
三、 以读促写 —— 经典范文研读
(一)范文赏析
My Favourite Invention
There are many great inventions in the world, but my favourite invention is the computer. It has changed our lives in many ways.
The first computer was invented in the 1940s. At that time, it was huge and heavy. However, computers are becoming smaller and smarter today. Now, computers are widely used in our daily lives. With the help of the internet, we can easily search for information, send emails to friends, and even buy things at home. Also, computers are used to help students learn and help doctors save people.
In short, the computer is one of the greatest inventions in the world. It makes our lives easier and more convenient. I can't imagine what our world would be like without it.
(二)结构解剖
1. Para 1 (Beginning): 开门见山,点出最喜欢的发明是电脑,并总述其改变了我们的生活
2. Para 2 (Body): 灵活运用被动语态介绍电脑的发明时间(was invented),以及现在被广泛应用于各个领域(are widely used, are used to help...)
3. Para 3 (Ending): 总结电脑带来的便利,感叹其不可或缺的地位
(三)亮点采撷
1. 找出文中的高级词组:in many ways, with the help of, search for, more convenient
2. 找出文中的被动语态句型:was invented in the 1940s, are widely used in..., are used to help...
四、 实战演练
(一)真题再现
1. 假如你是李华,你校英文报正在开展以“A Great Invention”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文,向外国朋友介绍中国古代四大发明之一——造纸术(Paper making)。内容包括:1. 过去人们用什么记录文字(如竹简 bamboo slips 等);2. 造纸术是谁发明的,用什么材料制作的(如树皮 tree bark、破布 rags 等);3. 造纸术带来的影响。词数80左右。
(二)头脑风暴
1. Background: China has a long history and is famous for its Four Great Inventions. My favourite is paper making.
2. In the past (Problems): Books were made of bamboo slips. They were very heavy and hard to carry.
3. The invention (Use Passive Voice): Later, paper making was invented by Cai Lun. Tree bark and rags were used to make paper.
4. Meaning & Conclusion: It was much lighter and cheaper. It was spread to the world and changed the world. I am proud of it.
(三)提笔练习
A Great Invention
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A Great Invention
China has a long history and is famous for its Four Great Inventions. Among them, my favourite invention is paper making.
In the past, books were made of bamboo slips or animal bones. They were very heavy and difficult to carry. Later, paper making was invented by Cai Lun during the Han Dynasty. Tree bark and old rags were used to make paper. This kind of paper was much lighter and cheaper. Soon, this great invention was spread to the rest of the world. It made writing, reading and spreading knowledge much easier for everyone.
In a word, paper making plays an important role in the history of human civilization. I am very proud of this great Chinese invention.
(五)写作解析
1. 结构分析:文章采用时间顺序与总分总结构。第一段引出中国四大发明之一的造纸术;第二段详细叙述造纸术发明前的窘境(竹简沉重)、造纸术的发明者及材料,并阐述其传播与影响;第三段总结造纸术的历史地位,抒发民族自豪感。
2. 内容要点:涵盖了征文要求的所有信息:过去的记录方式(were made of bamboo slips)、发明的细节(invented by Cai Lun, tree bark and old rags were used)、深远影响(spread to the rest of the world, made reading easier)。
3. 语言亮点:
(1)精准运用了本单元核心语法“被动语态 (Passive voice)”,涵盖了一般过去时的被动语态,如:were made of, was invented by, were used to make, was spread to 等,完全契合单元考点。
(2)高级词汇及句型运用得当:如 is famous for(以……闻名), play an important role(发挥重要作用), make it easier for sb.(使……对某人更容易)。
(3)逻辑连贯:巧妙运用 In the past, Later, Soon, In a word 等表示时间推进和总结的连接词,行文自然流畅。
五、 精益求精 —— 评价与修改
(一)写作评价表
1. 评分说明:请根据写作情况在对应的空格内填入符号。做到打“√”,没做到打“×”。
评价维度 评价细则 自评 互评
1. 内容 (1)是否介绍了该发明(如造纸术)出现之前的社会状况? [ ] [ ]
(2)是否说清了该发明是谁创造的以及用什么材料制作的? [ ] [ ]
(3)是否阐述了该发明对人类生活和文明发展的影响? [ ] [ ]
2. 结构 (1)文章是否有清晰的开头、正文和结尾?时间连接词是否恰当? [ ] [ ]
3. 语言 (1)是否正确、熟练地使用了不同时态的“被动语态”来描述历史? [ ] [ ]
4. 规范 (1)拼写、大小写、标点符号是否正确?字数是否达标? [ ] [ ]
(二)同伴给出的闪光点
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