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Unit 8
Making a Difference
人教版2024版八年级下册
Section B (3a—3c ) 写作课
Learning Objectives
1. 能够基于志愿者申请邮件的写作需求，在阅读3a范文后，梳理志愿者招募广告的标准结构，明确申请邮件的写作框架，完成3b写作提纲的信息梳理。
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2. 能够将本单元所学志愿活动相关词汇、现在完成时等目标语法，以及申请邮件常用句式迁移应用到自己的申请邮件写作中，完成完整的邮件初稿。
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3. 通过自评和互评，改进写作初稿，优化语篇逻辑、丰富内容细节、打磨语言表达，提升志愿者申请邮件的写作质量。
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Look and Say
What are these posters all about
They are all about volunteer recruitment(招募).
Read the advertisement and label each part with the main topic.
A. what qualities and skills
volunteers need to have
B. what the volunteering
programme is about
C. how to sign up as a
volunteer
D. what duties volunteers
will carry out
(= ad)广告；启事
履行；实施
3a
Do you want to make a difference in someone’s life Join us to be a friend to our international students!
STUDENT VOLUNTEERS WANTED
Your tasks as a volunteer
Take the students on a tour of your hometown.
Teach them useful Chinese expressions for daily use.
Introduce Chinese culture to them.
B
D
We hope ...
you are willing to help others.
you are familiar with the arts: Chinese dance, calligraphy, music, etc.
you speak good English.
you are good at expressing yourself.
To volunteer with us, just drop us an email! We’d love to know more about you, your skills and talents, and your experience as a youth volunteer.
A
C
通晓；熟悉
等等； 以及诸如此类
才能；天赋；天才
What is the structure of the ad
Headline
Beginning
Body
Ending
To arouse readers’ attention with an opening question
What duties do volunteers carry out
What qualities and skills do volunteers need to have
Call to Action: How do you sign up as a volunteer
Imagine that you are planning to be a student volunteer. Make notes with the help of these questions.
Beginning
Body
Ending
What would you like to be/do
Why do you want to be a volunteer
What skills or talents do you have
What experience do you have as a volunteer
When can you start volunteering
What other thoughts do you have about volunteering
3b
What would you like to be/do
e.g.
I want to be/would like to be a student volunteer to help international students with Chinese culture.
I’d like to be friends with them and guide them to travel around my hometown.
...
Why do you want to be a volunteer
e.g. I want to be a volunteer because I enjoy helping others and I’m passionate about sharing Chinese culture with people from different backgrounds.
Because I like communicating with different people all around the world.
...
What skills or talents do you have
e.g. Fluent in English.
Familiar with Chinese dance and calligraphy.
Good at expressing myself and communicating clearly.
...
What experience do you have as a volunteer
e.g. I have previously volunteered as a tutor for foreign students and helped organize a cultural exchange event at my school.
When can you start volunteering
e.g. I think I can start volunteering after the final exam.
What other thoughts do you have about volunteering
e.g. I believe volunteering is a wonderful way to build connections between different cultures and I’m excited to contribute to making international students’ experience in China more enjoyable and meaningful.
Write an email to the school to sign up as a volunteer. Use your notes in 3b to help you.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I saw your advertisement, and I’m writing to ...
（正式、礼貌的称呼）女士；夫人
3c
本单元的话题是“帮助他人”，3c要求写一封电子邮件报名成为志愿者，使用3b中的笔记来帮助写作。文体为应用文，采用第一人称进行叙述，主要使用一般现在时，用于陈述自身的能力、习惯和目前的时间安排；写作时应突出个人优势和能力，以获取志愿者工作机会，涉及过往经历时可用一般过去时和现在完成时。
审题
在具体的书写过程中，要明确电子邮件的格式， 行文中注重语句之间的衔接和连贯，灵活运用First, ... Second, ... Third, ... Besides/Additionally, ...等衔接词，使各条建议之间过渡流畅。
审题
Useful expressions:
1. I think it’s everyone’s duty to look after ...
我认为照顾……是每个人的责任。
2. In fact, I’ve been a volunteer at ... for two years now．
事实上，到现在我是……的志愿者已经两年了。
3. It’s fun to volunteer together.
一起做志愿工作很有趣。
素材积累
Useful expressions:
4. Together we can make a difference!
齐心协力，我们就能有所作为！
5. ... shows us that anyone can make a difference． ……向我们表明，任何人都能有所作为。
6. Help others, help yourself.
帮助别人，就是帮助自己。
素材积累
写作框架
开篇点题，明确邮件的主题是报名成为志愿者
介绍想成为志愿者的原因、个人优势及对志愿工作的看法
总结全文，表示感谢与期待
开头
中间
结尾
开篇点题，明确邮件的主题是申请成为志愿者:
I saw your advertisement, and I'm writing to apply to be ...
详细介绍成为志愿者的原因、个人优势及对志愿工作的看法:
First, I love being a volunteer! ...
Second I can speak English fluently and understand body language ...
Third, I am skilled at ...
写作框架
总结全文，表示感谢与期待。
I would appreciate the opportunity to ...
I am looking forward to your reply.
Evaluation Form 评价表 Items 评价项目 Standard Scores 标准分值 Scores
得分
Format 格式 1
Person 人称 2
Simple present tense 一般现在时为主 2
Content 内容 1. What 2.How 3. Why 8
Hand-writing 书写 2
语法或单词拼写错误酌情扣分 Total 总分 15
Sample
Dear Sir or Madam,
I saw your advertisement, and I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the activity—Welcome Traditional Chinese Culture into Communities.
First, I love being a volunteer! I have worked with a sports organization for almost three years now. So I have volunteer experience and good teamwork spirit. Second, I can speak English fluently and understand body language which helps me communicate with foreigners effectively. Third, I am skilled at paper-cutting and can introduce its history patterns and usage.
I believe voluntary work is meaningful. It not only helps others but also enriches my knowledge. Besides, it promotes cultural exchange and strengthens community bonds.
I would appreciate the opportunity to contribute to the activity. I believe together we can make a difference! I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
1.We’d love to know more about you, your skills and talents. . . 我们很乐意进一步了解你，你的技能、天赋……
talent n.才能；天赋；天才
(1)才能；天赋，同义词为gift。
have/show a talent/gift for. . . 在……方面有天赋
Everyone has a special talent, even if he or she doesn’t know it yet. 每个人都有特殊的才能，即使他或她还不知道。
Mike, a 7-year-old boy, has a great talent for art. 迈克是一个7岁的男孩，他很有艺术天赋。
(2)天才
He was such a creative talent and not just an artist.
他是个极具创造力的天才，而不仅仅是个艺术家。
talented adj. 有才能的；天才的
He is a talented player.
他是一位天才运动员。
2. I saw your advertisement and I’m writing to. . .
我看见了你们的广告，我写信是为了……
advertisement n.广告；启事 可缩写为ad，读作/ d/。复数形advertisements可缩写为ads。
an advertisement 一则广告
I saw an advertisement for cars in the newspaper. 我在报纸上看到了一则关于汽车的广告。
advertise [动词]做广告；登广告
They advertised for a new English teacher.
他们登广告招聘一位新英语老师。
申请成为志愿者
素材积累
写作思路
1. I think it’s everyone’s duty to look after ...
2. In fact, I’ve been a volunteer at ... for two years now．
3. It’s fun to volunteer together.
4. Together we can make a difference!
5. ... shows us that anyone can make a difference．
6. Help others, help yourself.
开头：开篇点题，明确邮件的主题是报名成为志愿者。
中间：介绍想成为志愿者的原因、个人优势及对志愿工作的看法。结尾：总结全文，表示感谢与期待。
Homework
1．Revise your email based on peer feedback and submit it in the next class.
2．Prepare for the project lesson by thinking about what kind of volunteer group you would like to start.

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