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Unit 6　Nurturing nature
Developing ideas & Presenting ideas
课文理解
阅读P68－69教材课文，选出最佳选项。
1．If you live on the Great Barrier Reef，how can you report back your findings
A．Via weekly blogs.
B．Via photos on computer.
C．Via telephone.
D．Via express company.
2．How large is the Great Barrier Reef
A．Larger than Japan.
B．About the same as outer space.
C．About 25 million square metres.
D．Almost Japanese whole field.
3．What did Ben mean by saying “not as the best，but the busiest job in the world”？
A．He didn't love the job actually.
B．He thought it so busy a job.
C．He meant it is not a simple common job.
D．He wanted to advertise for one to replace.
4．What is the most important thing that we can do for the Great Barrier Reef
A．To work and accommodate on the island.
B．To make people know the beauty there and protect it.
C．To advertise to employ more and more employees.
D．To give Ben more salaries to make him adapt there.
要点精析
Words and Phrases
知识要点1　disturb v．干扰，扰乱
(教材P67)　However，the local people worry that building the hotel is not eco friendly and will disturb the wildlife，in particular the turtles which lay their eggs on White Beach.
然而，当地人担心，修建这家酒店不环保，会干扰野生动物，特别是在白沙滩上产卵的海龟。
[例]　I'm sorry to disturb you，but can I talk to you for a moment
对不起，打扰你一下，我能跟你谈一会儿吗？
[知识拓展]
(1)disturbed adj. 被扰乱的；感到不安的
be disturbed by/about/at 对……感到忧虑/不安
be disturbed to do sth. 对做某事感到不安
be disturbed that... 担心……
(2)disturbing adj. 令人不安的；使人烦恼的
disturbance n. 骚乱；打扰
[即学即练]　单句语法填空/完成句子
①We were very _________ (disturb) at the loud noise made by the working machines throughout the night.
②She was disturbed ________ (hear) you had been injured in the accident.
③There are __________ (disturb) reports of killings at the two centres.
④If you get up early，try ______________ everyone else.
如果你起得早，尽量不要打扰别人。
知识要点2　in favour of支持，赞同；有利于……
(教材P69)　...he made a number of appearances on television to argue in favour of its defence.
……他还频频上电视，据理力争主张保护大堡礁。
[例]　Some are in favour of it，some are against it.
有的赞成，有的反对。
[知识拓展]
do sb. a favour＝do a favour for sb. 帮某人的忙
ask sb. for a favour＝ask a favour of sb. 请求某人帮忙
in sb.'s favour 对某人有利，有助于某人
[即学即练]　单句语法填空/一句多译
①Even though we have some trouble right now，I think the final result will be __ our favour.
②All the people present at the meeting are in favour __ the plan.
③I asked a favour __ him，but he refused immediately.
④通过给她一些极有价值的建议，他帮了她一个大忙。
a．He ______________________ by giving her some valuable suggestions.
b．He __________________________ by giving her some valuable suggestions.
知识要点3　negotiable adj.可协商的
(教材P71)　Salary negotiable...
薪水可协商……
[例]　The price I am offering will no longer be negotiable.
我现在报的价格不可以再协商了。
[知识拓展]
(1)negotiate vt. 谈判；协商
negotiate with sb. about/over/for sth.
＝(be) in negotiation with sb. over sth. 与某人协商某事
negotiate an agreement/contract with sb. 与某人商定协议/合同
(2)negotiation n. 协商，谈判
under negotiation 在协商中
[即学即练]　单句语法填空/完成句子
①We negotiated ____ an American firm about the purchase of computers.
②He has negotiated a new contract ____ the seller.
③It is said it remains in ___________ (negotiate) with the Russian authorities.
④It's said that the details of the contract are still _________________．
据说合约的细节仍在协商中。
知识要点4　(教材P71)　All applications welcome，but preference will be given to those with diving qualifications．
欢迎所有申请，但有潜水证书者优先。
(1)preference n．优先(权)；偏爱，喜爱
[例]　Many people expressed a strong preference for the original plan.
许多人强烈表示偏爱原计划。
[知识拓展]
(1)have a preference for 对……偏爱
in preference to 而不是
(2)prefer vt.(preferred；preferring) 更喜欢；选择某事物 (而不选择其他事物)
prefer doing/to do sth. 更喜欢做某事
prefer (doing) A to (doing) B 比起(做)B更喜欢(做)A
prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不做B
prefer sb. to do sth. 宁愿某人做某事
prefer that... 宁愿……(从句谓语用 “should＋动词原形”，should可省略)
[即学即练]　单句语法填空/完成句子
①Parents should not have a preference ___ any one of their children.
②She chose to learn the violin in __________ (prefer) to the piano.
③I prefer _______________ (wear) clothes made of natural fibers.
④I'd prefer you ________(cycle)，if you don't mind.
⑤He __________________________________ to the enemy.
他宁死也不屈服于敌人。
(2)qualification n．资格，合格证书；技能条件
[例]　He left school with no formal qualifications.
他离开学校没有获得正式学历。
[知识拓展]
(1)a qualification for ……的资格
(2)qualify v. 使具备资格
qualify sb. to do sth. 使某人有资格做某事
(3)qualified adj. 有资格的，合格的，胜任的
be qualified to do sth. 有资格做某事
be qualified for 具备……资格的；适合担任……的
[即学即练]　单句语法填空/完成句子
①He has no qualification ___ this job.
②He knew he was not qualified _____ (be) a teacher.
③Strictly speaking，he's not qualified ___ the job.
④The test ______________________ heavy vehicles.
这一考试使你有资格驾驶重型车辆。
Sentence Pattern
重点句式　状语从句的省略
(教材P69)　He also worked as a presenter for the National Geographic Channel，before going on to write a book about his experiences．
他还曾在国家地理频道做过节目主持人，后来写了一本关于个人经历的书。
句式分析：本句中before going on to write a book about his experiences为before引导的时间状语从句的省略句。
[例1]　Wood gives off much smoke while (it is) burning.
木头燃烧时产生很多烟。
[例2]　When (it is) heated，ice can be turned into water.
加热的时候冰可以变成水。
[知识拓展]
省略句的结构和用法
(1)在when，while，if，as if，though，although，as，until，once，whether，unless，whenever等连接的状语从句中，当从句主语跟主句的主语相同且从句谓语中含有系动词be或从句的主语为it时，则从句中主语和be动词常被省略。
(2)在than，as等引导的比较状语从句中常省略某些成分。
[即学即练]　单句语法填空/把下列句子改为省略句
①When _______ (surf) the Internet，I downloaded the film.
②Video games can be a poor influence if ____ (leave) in the wrong hands.
③He shook his head as if ______ (say) “no”．
④If it is so，I hope you will have a wonderful time.
→_____，I hope you will have a wonderful time.
⑤The winters in Hangzhou are not so mild as they are in Guangzhou.
→The winters in Hangzhou are not _______________________．
【参考答案】
课文理解1—4　ADCB
要点精析
Words and Phrases
知识要点1 ①disturbed ②to hear ③disturbing ④not to disturb
知识要点2 ①in ②of ③of ④a．did her a great favour　b．did a great favour for her
知识要点3 ①with ②with ③negotiation ④under negotiation
知识要点4 ①for ②preference ③wearing/to wear ④to cycle ⑤prefers to die rather than give in
知识要点5 ①for ②to be ③for ④qualifies you to drive
Sentence Pattern
重点句式 ①surfing ②left ③to say ④If so ⑤so mild as in GuangzhouUnit 6　Nurturing nature
Starting out & Understanding ideas
重点词汇
1．steady adj.平稳的→________ adv.平稳地
2．________ adj.脆弱的→delicately adv.脆弱地
3．________ adj.壮丽的→splendidly adv.壮丽地
4．______ v．徘徊→wanderer n．流浪者；漂泊者
5．radiate v．辐射→_________ n．辐射
一词多义
wander v．徘徊；漫游；闲逛；游荡；走神
1．During these waits, the brain slips away from the body and wanders about until the water runs over the edge of the counter and onto your socks. __________
2．The boys wandered around the town with nothing to do yesterday evening. _____
要点精析
Words and Phrases
知识要点1　put into operation投入运行；(使)施行；(使)实行；(使)生效
(教材P62)　In which year was the completed Qinghai-Tibet Railway put into operation
建成的青藏铁路是哪一年投入运行的？
[例]　Over the next year，Beijing will put into operation three new mass transit lines.
明年一年，北京三条新的主要运输线将投入运营。
[知识拓展]
put into practice 实施；实行；实践
put into effect 实施(计划)；实现(想法)
put into prison 关进监狱；监禁；投入监狱
put into use 投入使用；使用，利用
[即学即练]　单句语法填空/完成句子
①This all looks simple on paper but is hard to put ____ practice.
②The new methods ________ (put) into use following the meeting.
③The project which was agreed on last month __________________________ soon.
上个月通过的那个工程很快就要操作了。
知识要点2　among the top concerns最重要的事情之一
(教材P63)　How to protect the delicate ecosystem was among the top concerns.
如何保护(这里)脆弱的生态系统是人们最关心的问题之一。
[例]　As we know，these issues are now among the top concerns for public health in every region of the world.
众所周知，这些问题现已成为世界各地公共卫生领域最令人关注的问题。
[知识拓展]
(1)express concern for sb. 表达对某人的关心
concern oneself about/for... 为……担心
(2)be concerned about/for... 对……担忧/忧虑
be concerned with... 与……有关的
(3)as far as sb. is concerned 就某人而言
[即学即练]　单句语法填空/完成句子
①This country has launched a campaign to ban smoking in public places，which is concerned ____ most people.
②She concerns herself __________ her son's future.
③________________________，parents are too ___________________ the future of their children.
在我看来，父母太过于关心他们孩子的未来了。
[小片段填空]
As far __ I am concerned，educators should be concerned _____ the problems that are concerned ____ the healthy growth of the children.
知识要点3　catch one's eye引起某人注意；引人瞩目
(教材P63)　The first landmark to catch my eye is the splendid Qingshuihe Bridge，the world's longest bridge built over permafrost.
第一个吸引我眼球的地标是壮丽的清水河大桥，世界上最长的建在永久冻土层上的桥。
[例]　The beautiful flowers catch my eye when I am crossing the city garden.
当我穿过城市花园的时候，那些美丽的鲜花吸引了我的目光。
[知识拓展]
keep an eye on 注意，留意
have a good eye for 对……有眼光/鉴赏力
look sb. in the eye 直视(正视)某人
[即学即练]　单句语法填空/完成句子
①Please keep an eye __ the stove in case the milk boils.
②He has a good eye ___ detail and notices almost everything.
③Can you look me in ___ eye and tell me you're not lying
④He was walking in the park when a massive dark cloud ______________．
他正在公园里散步，这时一大片乌云映入眼帘。
知识要点4　at one's leisure 空闲时
(教材P63)　A group of Tibetan antelopes is moving under the bridge，with some stopping to eat grass at their leisure.
一群藏羚羊正从桥下通过，有几只停下来在从容地吃草。
[例]　He could read all the national papers at his leisure.
空闲时他可以阅读所有的全国性报纸。
[知识拓展]
at one's best 某人处于最佳状态
at one's convenience 在某人方便的时候
at one's service 听凭某人吩咐
at one's heels 紧跟在……后面
[即学即练]　选用上述短语填空
①You had better think over the matter _______________．
②I wasn't feeling __________ at the party so I didn't enjoy it.
③The thief ran off with an angry crowd ____________．
④I told my professor I would be ______________．
知识要点5　reach out伸出(手)
(教材P63)　Cuona Lake is so close to the railway that I want to reach out and touch its pale blue mirror-like surface.
措那湖离铁路那么近，因此我想伸手去触摸它那淡蓝色的如镜的湖面。
[例]　I could almost reach out and grab it right then and there.
当时在那儿我几乎伸手就能把它抓住了。
[知识拓展]
reach out to sb. 向某人提供帮助
reach an agreement 达成协议
out of/beyond one's reach 某人够不到
within one's reach/within the reach of sb. 在某人可以承受的范围内
[即学即练]　单句语法填空/完成句子
①The purpose of the meeting was to reach __ agreement on next year's prices.
②The shelf is so high that it is ______ my reach.
③The new mobile phone is priced well ______ the reach of most people.
④When you need help，____________ the people who care about you.
当你需要帮助时，向那些关心你的人寻求帮助。
知识要点6　(教材P63)　Water birds playing in the lake，and cattle and sheep wandering the grasslands bring the scenery to life.
湖中水鸟嬉戏，草原上牛羊漫步，使景色更加生动有趣。
(1)wander v．漫游；游荡；闲逛；徘徊；走神
[例]　Half way through the meeting my mind started to wander.
会议开到了一半，我开始走神了。
[知识拓展]
wander off 漫步；漫游；离群走散
wander about/around 徘徊；流浪；漫步
wander from 离题；离开；走神
[即学即练]　单句语法填空/完成句子
①Instead of going straight，they always wander ___ to one side or the other.
②Don't let your mind wander ____ the main point as issue.
③He loves to wander ____________ the beach with little on to show off his muscles.
④The child was found ______________________________．
那孩子被发现独自在大街上闲逛。
(2)bring...(back)to life带给……生机；使复活；使苏醒了过来；使……更有趣
[例]　They brought the drowned swimmer back to life.
他们使溺水的游泳者苏醒了过来。
[知识拓展]
bring about　　 引起；使掉头
bring up 提出；教育；养育；呕吐
bring out 出版，生产；使显示；说出
bring in 引进；生产；增加
[即学即练]　单句语法填空/完成句子
①What brought _____ the change in his attitude
②The firm decided to bring __ a new management team.
③He was so shocked that he could hardly bring ___ a word.
④It is said that she is a doctor who can _______________________．
据说她是个妙手回春的医生。
(3)scenery n．风景，景色；场面，景观
[例]　There is no scenery comparable to that of the West Lake.
西湖之景无与伦比。
[名辨异同]　scenery/scene/sight/view
scenery 指自然景色的全称，常用来描述静态的乡村景色；
scene 指包含人的活动的风景，属于scenery的一部分；
sight “风景，名胜”，常用复数形式，指人文景观；
view 即指从某处所见的景色；也可指“观点、看法”。
[即学即练]　选词填空(scenery/scene/sight/view)
①Do you remember the _____ in the play where Susan meets Alan for the first time
②We passed through some beautiful _______ on our journey through the Lake District.
③You'll get a fine ____ of the town from the top of the hill.
④The Great Wall is one of the most breathtaking ______ in the world.
⑤If you stand on the stage and share your ____ of the world，people will connect with you.
Sentence Pattern
重点句式　be about to do sth. 将要做某事
(教材P62)　Sitting back in my seat，I can't quite believe that I'm about to travel along the railway that many foreign experts claimed was “impossible”．靠坐在座位上，我不太相信自己将要沿着这条许多外国专家断言“不可能建成”的铁路旅行。
句式分析：be about to do sth. 表示“将要做某事”，一般不与表示将来的具体的时间状语连用。它常与并列连词when构成 “be about to do sth....when...”句型，表示 “正要做某事，这时(突然)……”。
[例1]　We are about to start off. 我们就要出发了。
[例2]　He was just about to stand up when the teacher came in.
他刚要站起来，这时老师进来了。
[知识拓展]
将来时的其他表达法：
(1)will/shall＋do：一般将来时最基本的表达方法，表示即将发生的动作，也可表示临时决定做某事。
(2)be going to do：表示打算、计划要做某事或有迹象表明要发生的动作。
(3)be to do：表示预先安排好的计划或约定，也可表示注定要发生的事。
(4)现在进行时：表示按计划、安排即将发生的动作，有此用法的动词多为go，come，leave等趋向性动词。
(5)一般现在时：表示按规定、时间表、日程安排要发生的动作，句中常常有时间状语，但只限于少数动词，如begin，come，leave，go，arrive，start，return 等。
[即学即练]　单句语法填空/完成句子
①As I was about _______ (give) up hope，a man driving an old dirty car came to my aid.
②We were about to climb up the mountain ____ it began to rain heavily.
③—The movie ______ (start) at 8：30，and we can have a quick bite of our dinner before we go.
—Sounds great.See you at 8：10.
④It's 10 o'clock now.It seems that she ______________ late.
现在已经十点了，她似乎要迟到了。
【参考答案】
重点词汇 1．steadily 2．delicate 3．splendid 4．wander 5．radiation
一词多义 1．(思想)开小差，走神 2．漫步；闲逛
要点精析
Words and Phrases
知识要点1 [即学即练] ①into ②were put ③will be put into operation
知识要点2 [即学即练] ①with ②about /for ③As far as I am concerned; concerned about/for [小片段填空] as; about; with
知识要点3 [即学即练] ①on ②for ③the ④caught his eye
知识要点4 [即学即练] ①at your leisure ②at my best ③at his heels ④at his service
知识要点5 [即学即练] ①an ②beyond ③within ④reach out to
知识要点6 [即学即练] (1)①off ②from ③about/around ④wandering in the streets alone (2) [即学即练] ①about ②in ③out ④bring the dying to life (3) [即学即练] ①scene ②scenery ③view ④sights ⑤view
Sentence Pattern
[即学即练] ①to give ②when ③starts ④is going to beUnit 6　Nurturing nature
Using language
现在完成进行时
[观察例句]
观察下列句子，并指出黑体部分的时态及语法作用
1. He has been writing a novel，which will be finished next month.
_______　表示______
2. He has written a novel，which is being prepared to come out now.
_____　表示______
3. I have been visiting my hometown recently，and it impresses me differently each time.
_______　表示_____
4. I have visited my hometown recently，whose changes have left a deep impression on me.
_____　表示_____
5. Recently she has always been helping me.
_______　具有____
6. Recently she has helped me a lot.
_____　陈述____
[归纳用法]
一、现在完成进行时
1. 基本结构：have/has been doing
2. 基本用法：
(1)表示一个在过去开始，而在最近刚刚结束的动作
We have been waiting for you for half an hour. (动作刚结束)
我们一直等了你半个小时。
I'm rather tired. I have been playing basketball since breakfast. (动作刚结束)
我很累。自从吃过早饭以来一直在打篮球。
(2)表示一个从过去开始，持续到现在并将继续进行的动作
The Chinese have been making paper for over two thousand years. (动作还将继续下去)
中国人已有2 000多年的造纸历史。
I have been learning English since three years ago. (动作还将继续下去)
自从三年前以来我一直在学英语。
(3)表示一个从过去开始延续到现在，可以包括现在在内的一个阶段内，重复发生的动作，通常表示一种感彩(关切、惊异、愤怒、赞许等)。
You have been coughing a lot lately. (关切)
近来你一直咳嗽。
Too much has been happening today. (感慨)
今天真是个多事的日子啊。
He has always been studying hard. (赞许)
他学习一直很刻苦。
[即学即练1]　单句语法填空
①Inventors ________________ (try) to make flying cars since the 1930s.
②Dashan，who _________________ (learn) crosstalk，the Chinese comedic tradition，for decades，wants to mix it up with the Western stand up tradition.
③—Excuse me，which movie are you waiting for
—The new Star Wars. We _________________ (wait) here for more than two hours.
④—Tony，why are your eyes red
—I _________________(cut) up peppers for the last five minutes.
⑤It is reported that the project __________________ (complete).
二、现在完成进行时与现在完成时的区别
1. 现在完成时强调动作的完成，而现在完成进行时强调动作的延续或反复，因此，表示动作的完成，只能用现在完成时，而不能用现在完成进行时。
I have written a book. (动作已经完成)
我已经写了一本书。
They have been building a bridge. (动作还将继续下去)他们一直在建造一座桥。
2．现在完成时强调动作行为的结果、影响，而现在完成进行时只强调动作行为本身。
The repairman has been repairing the car all the afternoon.
整个下午，这位修理工一直在修那辆车。
The repairman has repaired your car，and you can have it now.
修理工已修好了你的车，现在你可以把它开走。
[名师点津]
有些动词不能用于现在完成进行时，但可用于现在完成时，这些动词为：
状态动词：be，have，exist等；
情感动词：like，love，hate等；
感官动词：see，hear，know，feel，sound等；
短暂性动词：finish，marry，get up，come，go 等。
I have known him for years.
我认识他已经好几年了。
They have finished the work.
他们已经完成了工作。
[即学即练2]　单句语法填空
①There ___________ (exist) an old temple since the Ming Dynasty.
②I __________________ (teach) English for almost twenty years，and I will step in another new teaching year.
③He ___________ (not feel) himself since yesterday.
④The manager ________________(tell) the workers how to improve the program since 9 a．m.
跟踪练习
Ⅰ.单句语法填空
1．In the last few years，China ________ (make) great achievements in this field.
2. Despite the previous rounds of talks，no agreement ________________ (reach) so far.
3. Marty ________________ (work) hard on his book and he'll have finished it by Friday.
4. They _________________ (work) on the perfection of the new model.
5. Oh no！We're too late. The train ________ (leave).
6. He ________________(read) in the library since it opened this morning.
7. —Take a break，Amy. You ____________________ (practise) the piano all the morning.
—I'd like to，but this time next week I will be giving a concert at the concert hall.
8. Tom _________________(work) in the library every day over the last three months.
9. I _________________ letters this morning and I ____________ for four hours so far. (write)
10. —What bad weather! I am sick of it here.
—So am I. It ________________ (rain) since last Friday. Wish we could see the sun tomorrow.
Ⅱ.短文语法填空
My wish is 1. _____(go) to a key university. I 2. __________________(study) for many years. But I 3. _________(be) poor in English since I went to junior school. My English teacher insists 4. __ my listening and writing. I 5. ___________________(listen) English every morning to improve it. Because I 6. _________________(waste) a lot of time，it is hard to catch up with other students. After 7. _____(go) to high school，I 8. _________________(stay) up late into the night and 9. _________________(get) up early in the morning. I 10. _________________(write) two compositions every day. I think I should spare no effort to improve my English and achieve my dream.
【参考答案】
[观察例句] 1．现在完成进行时; 未完成的动作 2．现在完成时; 动作已经完成 3．现在完成进行时; 动作的重复 4．现在完成时; 一次性动作 5．现在完成进行时; 感彩 6．现在完成时; 一种事实
[即学即练1] ①have been trying ②has been learning ③have been waiting ④have been cutting ⑤has been completed
[即学即练2] ①has existed ②have been teaching ③hasn't felt ④has been telling
跟踪练习
Ⅰ. 1．has made 2．has been reached 3．has been working 4．have been working 5．has left 6．has been reading 7．have been practising 8．has been working 9．have been writing have written 10．has been raining
Ⅱ. 1. to go 2. have been studying 3. have been 4. on 5. have been listening 6. have been wasting 7. going 8. have been staying 9. have been getting 10. have been writingUnit 6　Nurturing nature
Writing
写一则招聘广告
文体指导
[基本框架]
1. 开头(beginning)——招聘的职位
2. 主体(body)——职位的具体要求
3. 结尾(ending)——期待
[常用词块]
1. be in good condition身体健康
2. have some relevant knowledge about. . . 有……方面的相关知识
3. be qualified for. . . 有……资格
4. spare no effort to do sth. 不遗余力地做某事
5. be skilled at擅长
6. a graduate of a key university一位重点大学的毕业生
[常用语句]
精彩开头
1. Our company is looking for an editor for our newspaper.
我们公司正在寻求一位报纸编辑。
2. An experienced driver is wanted in our company.
我们公司需要一位有经验的司机。
3. Our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English study advisor next term.
我们学校决定下学期邀请一名国际学生担任英语学习顾问。
正文佳句
1. The other is to pick out articles from students in our school and edit them for use.
另一个是从我们学校的学生那里挑选文章并编辑使用。
2. First，he/she is willing to devote some of the spare time to serving others.
首先，他/她愿意奉献一些为他人服务的空闲时间。
3. It's necessary for him/her to be good at both English and arts.
他/她必须精通英语和艺术。
余味结尾
1. Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview.
服务费用将在面试期间讨论。
2. If you are interested in the position，please email us.
如果你对这个职位感兴趣，请给我们发邮件。
3. Those who are interested in the job，please get in touch with the Students' Union this week.
那些对此工作感兴趣的人，请于本周与学生会联系。
写作示例
假定你是正在新西兰留学的李华。你校将和当地动物保护组织合作绘制一系列墙体宣传画。请你写一份招聘广告在你校招聘一批志愿者帮助完成这项工作。内容包括：
1. 宣传主题：提高公众的野生动物保护意识；
2. 志愿者的条件；
3. 活动时间；
4. 报名方式和截止时间。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[学生习作]
Volunteers Needed!
In order to raise public awareness of wildlife protection in the whole society，our school will cooperate with the local animal protection organisation to create a series of posters on the walls. Some volunteers are needed to help complete the work. The project will take place on weekends. Please sign up at the Students' Union before July 11th.
点评：
1. 遗漏要点：志愿者的条件。
2. 通篇使用简单句，缺少复杂句式。
3. 使用了一些高级词汇，如cooperate with，a series of，sign up等。
[升格作文]
Volunteers Needed!
In order to raise public awareness of wildlife protection in the whole society，our school will cooperate with the local animal protection organisation to create a series of posters on the walls. Some volunteers who are good at painting and calligraphy are needed to help complete the work. The project will take place on weekends. It's not only a good chance to sharpen your skills but also a way to show your concern and love for wildlife! If you are interested in it，please sign up at the Students' Union before July 11th.
跟踪练习
你校校报急需在校内招聘一位同学担任英文版编辑，请你以学生会的名义用英文以“An English Editor Wanted”为题写一则招聘启事，要点如下：
1. 工作内容：从英文报刊、杂志及互联网上选择适合学生的文章；挑选和编辑同学们的来稿。
2. 要求：乐意贡献出一些业余时间为同学们服务；英文、美术皆好；能熟练使用电脑。
3. 请感兴趣的同学在本周内与学生会联系。
注意：词数80左右。
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【参考答案】
【参考范文】
An English Editor Wanted
Our school paper is badly in need of an editor from us students for its English edition. The job mainly includes choosing English articles from other newspapers，magazines or the Internet suitable for us students and picking out suitable articles from us and edit them for use.
The editor should be willing to devote some of the spare time to serving others and good at both English and art. What's more，the ability to use the computer is important as well.
Those who are interested in the job please get in touch with the Students' Union this week.
The Students' Union

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