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沪教牛津版八年级下册
Unit 4
Arts and heritage
主题范畴：人与社会
Writing
Key question
What role do arts and crafts play in our lives
Look at these pictures. What are they
Lead in
wood carving 木雕
dough figurines
面塑
Suzhou embroidery
苏绣
Chinese knotting
中国结
paper cutting 剪纸
They are traditional Chinese crafts.
Do you know any people who make these crafts What do they do
Writing an article about a person devoted to traditional crafts
It is Traditional Arts Week. We are looking for articles about traditional crafts and the people doing them. The best articles will be posted on the school website.
1 Wang Yao wrote an article about a person devoted to traditional crafts. Read her article and see how she described the process of making dough figurines in detail.
Mr Chen’s fantastic dough figurines
Mr Chen makes toys from dough. He is an inheritor of a cultural heritage skill: dough figurines. He is over 50 years old now. His hands are rough because he works with dough all the time.
Mr Chen makes dough toys of different sizes. Only a small piece of dough and some simple tools are required to make a dough toy. Mr Chen uses his hands to turn the dough into different characters, like the Monkey King. Dough of different colours is used to make the toys more interesting. Both children and adults love dough toys made by Mr Chen. He is happy and proud to keep this traditional art alive.
I like Mr Chen’s toys because they are very lovely and lifelike. I hope that one day I can learn to make dough toys.
1. Who is the article about
2. What craft does he make
Mr Chen
Dough figurines
Reading & Analyzing the model
Pre-writing
Reading & Analyzing the model
Pre-writing
Para 1: Describe the person
Para 2: Describe the person’s work
Para 3: Give your opinion
Para 1:
age
education
famous works
his craft
personality
appearance
Mr Chen
His hands are _________ because he works with dough all the time.
rough
Learn from the language
He is an _________ of a cultural heritage skill: dough figurines.
inheritor
He is over 50 years old now.
Para 2:
Works
make…of different sizes/colours
Tools & materials
(1) … be required to …
(2) … be used to …
How he does it
(1) use…to… (2) turn…into…
Tense: The simple present
How he feels about his craft
be happy and proud
to keep … alive
Mr Chen makes dough toys of different sizes. Only a small piece of dough and some simple tools are required to make a dough toy. Mr Chen uses his hands to turn the dough into different characters, like the Monkey King. Dough of different colours is used to make the toys more interesting. Both children and adults love dough toys made by Mr Chen. He is happy and proud to keep this traditional art alive.
Para 3:
I like Mr Chen’s toys because they are very lovely and lifelike. I hope that one day I can learn to make dough toys.
Opinion: (Para 3)
It was wonderful / great / amazing to see his / her …
I was amazed / impressed by …
I wish …
Tense: The simple present
More sentence patterns:
I like … because …
I hope that …
A person devoted to traditional crafts
Person
Skills
Opinion
(1) name (2) job
(3) age (4) appearance
(5) other important information
(1) works
(2) tools / materials
(3) how he does it
(4) how he feels about his craft
(1) I like … because …
(2) I hope that …
…
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
Summary
Decide on what and whom to write about.
Writing
Plan the outline
Paragraph Topics Words and expressions
Para 1: Describe the person The craftsperson you want to write about What he / she looks like The traditional skill he / she has mastered Although he / she is …, he / she is still …
His / Her hands …
He / She looks …
Plan the outline
Paragraph Topics Words and expressions
Para 2: Describe the person’s work What he / she does How he / she does it Why he / she continues to do it He / She can …
He / She carefully …
He / She turns … into …
His / her designs are …
The pieces he / she makes are …
keep this traditional art alive
Plan the outline
Paragraph Topics Words and expressions
Para 3: Give your opinion How you feel about his / her work I am amazed by …
I was very impressed by …
It was wonderful to …
I wish / I hope …
Write an article based on your outline. Use the language you have learnt in this unit.
(Possible answer)
Mr Wang is an amazing craftsman. He is over 60 years old, and his hair is white. However, when he sits down to do a paper-cut, his hands move very quickly. He looks almost like a young person when he works!
Mr Wang’s skills are amazing. He carefully folds the paper, draws patterns, and then turns it into a beautiful artwork, such as a paper flower or an animal. All his paper-cuts are made with love and care, and his studio is full of wonderful works. Mr Wang tells me he loves paper-cutting, and he really wants to keep this traditional art alive. He hopes he can pass on his craft to young people.
I love Mr Wang’s works because they look so real. I am amazed by his beautiful designs, and each of them is cut from a single piece of paper. I wish I can one day learn to make beautiful paper-cuts too.
Level A
(Possible answer)
Yesterday, I visited Mr Li’s pottery studio. Although he is over 60, he is still very energetic. Mr Li has devoted his life to pottery—a craft tradition that has been passed down for centuries.
It was very interesting to see Mr Li work in the studio. He can shape clay into all kinds of beautiful shapes, and he decorates his vases, teapots and bowls with beautiful patterns, such as flowers, birds and scenes from ancient stories. His designs are clean and simple, and many people also think his pieces are very practical.
In fact, Mr Li’s works are loved by everyone in town. Last year, an exhibition of his ceramic works was held at a local art gallery, and there were several hundred visitors on the opening night.
It was wonderful to meet Mr Li, and I was very impressed by his works. I hope that more young people will study this craft and help keep this tradition alive.
Level B
Post-writing
Check and revise 检查和修改
Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it.
根据下面的清单检查和修改作文。
I provided basic information about the person devoted
to traditional crafts.
I described what the craftsperson does in detail.
I wrote what I think of his / her skill.
I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit.
I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.
03
More practice
Writing
竹编（bamboo weaving）是以竹子为原料，经多道工序制成器具或工艺品的传统手艺。陈云华是国家级非物质文化遗产竹编代表性传承人，请根据提示写一篇作文介绍陈云华。要求：80 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。
提示：
1. His basic information. 2. Describe his main work.
3. Comments.
主题：人与社会———文学、艺术与体育
文体：说明文
人称：以 _________为主
时态：以一般现在时和 ________________ 为主
第三人称
一般过去时
Step 1: 题干细审
Chen Yunhua (1) ______________ (出生于) Sichuan in 1947.
Chen started learning bamboo weaving when he was young and he (2) ____________________ (献身于) the craft for over sixty years.
Personal information
02
01
03
Comments
Step 2: 谋篇布局
1
Chen Yunhua
Achievements
was born in
has devoted himself to
He (3) _________ (研发了) colored bamboo weaving.
He (4) ______ (建立) workshops and trained over 5,000 villagers. This helped them increase income and (5) _____ the skill ____________ (使……更加著名).
He started international training for people (6) ______________________ (来自全世界).
He (7) ____________ (被授予) the title of “Master of Chinese Arts and Crafts”in 2022.
Personal information
02
01
03
Comments
Step 2: 谋篇布局
Achievements
developed
from all over the world
set up
made more famous
1
Chen Yunhua
was awarded
Chen is a great inheritor. He (8) ____________ the skill _________ (让……保持鲜活).
Personal information
02
01
03
Comments
Step 2: 谋篇布局
Achievements
keeps
alive
1
Chen Yunhua
★ 常用连接词：
1. 此外 _____________________
2. 更重要的是 _____________________
Step 3: 句子提升
in addition
what’s more
★ 高分表达：
5. 深受……影响 _________________
6. 打破传统双色限制 break the old two-color limit
7. 为了 _________________
8. 传承技艺 pass down the skill
9. 建立工坊 set up workshops
10. 被授予……称号 be honored as ...
11. 多亏了他不懈的努力 _________________
12. 在国内外大放异彩 shines brightly at home and abroad
Step 3: 句子提升
be deeply influenced by
in order to
thanks to his tireless efforts
基础版范文
Step 4: 扩充成文
Chen Yunhua is an inheritor of bamboo weaving, a traditional
Chinese craft. He was born in Sichuan in 1947. Chen loved this
craft from childhood and he has made bamboo weaving works
for over sixty years. He developed colored bamboo weaving and
created many amazing works.
He set up workshops and taught bamboo weaving skills to
people in the countryside to increase their income. Many villagers
have improved their lives because of his help. He also started
international training for people from different countries. What’s
more, he was awarded the title of “Master of Chinese Arts and
Crafts” in 2022.
I think Chen is a great inheritor. He keeps bamboo weaving
alive through innovation and spreads it to the world widely.
进阶版范文
Chen Yunhua is an inheritor of bamboo weaving, a traditional Chinese craft. Born in Sichuan in 1947, Chen was deeply influenced by his family and learned this skill from his grandfather. Now, he has devoted himself to the craft for over 60 years.
He broke the old two-color limit and developed colored bamboo weaving, creating many amazing works. In order to pass down the skill, he set up workshops and trained over 5,000 villagers. This not only helped them increase income, but also made the skill more famous. In addition, he started international training for people from all over the world. Because of his excellent work, he was awarded the title of “Master of Chinese Arts and Crafts”in 2022.
Chen is a great example of keeping our heritage alive. Thanks to his tireless efforts, bamboo weaving now shines brightly at home and abroad.
Grade and share
Elements要素 Level档次
Content内容(6分) 要点齐全，切合题意
适当发挥
Accuracy准确性(6分) 语法，大小写，拼写等格式错误
语言使用恰当，丰富
Fluency流畅性(3分) 分段，书写，衔接，过渡
互评总分
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