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沪教牛津版八年级下册
主题范畴：人与自然
Writing
Key question
Unit 5
Saving animals in danger
What efforts has China made to save the giant panda
Writing a blog post about an animal in danger
What makes a good blog post
a Appearance
b Behaviour
c Food
d Home
e Life
f Why in danger
Read the blog post about Asian elephants and choose the correct subheading for each part.
Appearance
Home
Food
Behaviour
Life
Why in danger
(1) How many parts are there in the blog post
What are they


(2) What tense did the writer mostly use
Six parts.
Present simple.
Our huge friend
— the Asian elephant
They weigh up to 5,400 kilograms.
They can be up to 3.2 metres tall at the shoulder.
They may live for up to 60–70 years.
Appearance
Home
Behaviour
Food
Life
Why in danger
blog
post
attractive title
Clear structure
interesting
facts
relevant
pictures
Part I
Part II
Part III
Part IV
Part V
…
What do they look like
Where do they live
What do they eat
How do they live and how long can they live
Why are they endangered
…
What can we write in a blog post
Pre-writing
Follow the example:
Appearance:
重达 _______________
……米高 _______________
……米长 _______________
出生时的体重 _______________
成年体重 _______________
Home:
居住在…… _______________
在野外 _______________
Useful expressions
weight at birth
live in
... meters tall
weigh up to
adult weight
in the wild
... meters long
Food:
主要以……为食 ________________
最喜爱的食物 ________________
Behavior:
成群结队地行走 ________________
独自生活 ________________
Life:
寿命长达 ________________
寿命将近 ________________
In danger:
砍伐 ________________
濒危动物 ________________
live for up to
live mainly on ...
live for about
favourite food
live alone
move in large groups
cut down
endangered animals
use sub-headings to help readers quickly
find what they are looking for;
(Sub-headings in the form of questions are
also helpful. Wh- questions make great
sub-headings.)
add a picture of the animal to attract reader’s
attention.
Tip
小标题
Choose one animal from the list below, or choose your own animal. Do some research on it. Then make a mind map.
◇ giant panda ◇ South China tiger
◇ red-crowned crane ◇ blue whale
Animal in danger
Home:
__________
Food:
__________
Appearance:
__________
Behaviour:
_________
Life:
_______
Why in danger:
___________
Plan
Home
forests and mountains of south-west China
bamboo
Food
spends most of its time eating and sleeping; likes climbing trees
Behaviour
can live for up to 20 years in the wild (up to 35 years in zoos)
Life
Why in danger
habitat loss
black and white fur;
black patches around its eyes
Appearance
The giant panda
Example:
a Appearance
b Home
c Behaviour
f Why in danger
d Food
e Life
_______________________
Writing a blog post about an animal in danger
Writing
Post-writing
Check and revise 检查和修改
Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it.
根据下面的清单检查和修改作文。
I used subheadings to present the information.
I included interesting facts about the animal.
I added a picture of the animal to attract readers’ attention
I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit.
I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.
03
More exercise
03
写作任务
假如你是李华，你的英语老师希望每人介绍一种濒危动物。你对川金丝猴（Sichuan golden hair monkey）非常感兴趣，请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文介绍这种动物。要求：80词左右，给出部分不计入总词数，可适当发挥。
提示：
1. Their basic information.
2. The reason why they are in danger.
主题：人与自然——自然生态
文体：说明文
人称：以________________为主
时态：以________________为主
第三人称
一般现在时
Step 1: 题干细审
Golden snub-nosed monkeys Appearance (1)_______________ (拥有金色的毛), blue faces and big mouths, they have a special appearance. They weigh from 13 to 30 kilograms and can be (2)__________________ (高达70厘米).
Home They live in the high mountain forests in China.
Food They mainly (3) _________ (以……为食) leaves and fruits.
Step 2: 谋篇布局
With golden fur
up to 70 cm tall
feed on
Golden snub-nosed monkeys Behaviour They live in groups (4)__________________ (寻找食物) easily and stay safe.
Life They live for about 25 years (5)____________ (在野生环境中).
Why in danger People (6)_____________ (砍伐) trees and (7)________ them ________ (杀死……以获取) their fur and body parts. It’s important for us (8)_________________ (保护它们免受) danger.
Step 2: 谋篇布局
to look for food
in the wild
cut down
kill for
protect them from
★ 常用连接词（组）：
1. 因为 because
2. 此外 _________________
3. 因此 as a result
4. 以便 _________________
Step 3: 句子提升
what’s more
so that
★ 高分表达：
1. 群居 live in groups
2. 寻找 _________________
3. 大量的…… _________________
4. 做某事是我们的责任 _________________ 5. 采取行动 take action
6. 无忧无虑 _________________
Step 3: 句子提升
search for
a large number of ...
It’s our duty to do sth.
without a care in the world
基础版范文
Step 4: 扩充成文
Today, I want to introduce Sichuan golden hair monkeys.
They have a special appearance. They have golden fur, blue face and big mouths. They are about 70 cm tall and weigh from 13 to 30 kilograms. They live in the high mountain forests in China and mainly eat leaves and fruits. They usually live in groups. The monkeys can live for about 25 years in the wild.
Sadly, they are endangered because people cut down many trees. This makes them lose their homes. Some people even kill them for their fur. This makes their number become smaller and smaller. Therefore, we need to stop these activities. If we don’t protect them, the beautiful animals might disappear. We can’t let these lovely monkeys leave us.
Let’s work together to protect such lovely animals, so that they can have a better life.
进阶版范文
Today, I want to introduce Sichuan golden hair monkeys.
With golden fur, blue faces and big mouths, they have a special appearance. They are about 70 cm tall and weigh as much as 30 kg. Living in the high mountain forests in China, they mainly feed on leaves and fruits. They usually live in groups to keep safe and search for food easily. The monkeys can live for up to 25 years in the wild. They are smart and friendly to humans.
Sadly, they are in danger because people cut down a large number of trees, which makes them lose their homes. The food is also not enough for them to live on. What’s worse, some people kill them for their fur. As a result, their number drops sharply. It’s cruel of humans to do so. It’s our duty to protect them. If we take action in time, we can stop these lovely animals from disappearing.
Let’s work together to protect such lovely animals and let them live without a care in the world.
Grade and share
Elements要素 Level档次
Content内容(6分) 要点齐全，切合题意
适当发挥
Accuracy准确性(6分) 语法，大小写，拼写等格式错误
语言使用恰当，丰富
Fluency流畅性(3分) 分段，书写，衔接，过渡
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