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Writing
Key question
主题范畴：人与自然
How can we save water
Unit 5 Water is life
Pre-writing
fix
public
tip
v. 修理
adj. 公众的；公开的
n. 建议
New words
撰写节水建议
科学俱乐部
全世界有很多地方设有足够的清洁饮用水。水是非常宝贵的，所以我们应该智慧地使用它。我们应该如何节约用水？与我们分享你的想法！
修理/报告漏水的水龙头
关闭水龙头
Water is precious, so we should use it wisely.
Free talk: How can we save water in our daily lives
Share your ideas with others.
Mind mapping
Organize your ideas in the mind map below. You may think of other situations as well.
wash more clothes together
take quick showers
turn off the tap when brushing teeth
fix/repair dripping taps
Use rainwater to water plants
Key words
Connecting lines
思维导图三要素：
Different colours
Translation Practice
take a shower instead of having a bath
一、短语翻译
1. 淋浴代替盆浴
Water is so valuable that we all should save water.
二、句子翻译
水是如此珍贵，以至于我们应该节约用水。
2. 让水龙头开着
leave the tap running
3. 重复利用水来浇花
reuse water to water plants
Think before writing
文体：
人称：
时态：
写作要点：
说明文
审题
第一人称
一般现在时
节水方法
Free writing
Steps:
1. Decide on what situations you are going to write about.
2. Think of a topic sentence for each paragraph.
3. Add details or examples to support the topic sentence.
4. Use the words and sentence patterns you learnt in this unit.
5. Use the necessary linking words.
Topic Sentence
Details/ Examples
每年的3月22日是世界水日，假设你是王萌，是一名七年级学生，你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛，主题是“Water-saving tips”。请你根据下面表格中的信息提示，用英语写一篇文章，与大家分享一些生活中节约用水的方法。要求：70词左右，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Writing
Water-saving tips ·Why important, valuable ...
·How turn off the tap when brush your teeth
take shorter showers
use rainwater to water plants
...
Step 1: 题干细审
主题：人与自我——生活与学习 文体：说明文
人称：以________人称为主
时态：________________
第一
一般现在时
Water is important in our (1) ______ _______ (日常生活), we can’t live without it.

(2) _____ _____(有) many ways to save water.
·(3) _____ _____ (关掉) the tap when you brush your teeth.
·(4) _____ rainwater _____ (使用……去) water plants.
·(5) _____ _______ ______(缩短淋浴时间).
·...

If we follow these ways, we will (6) ____ __ ___ ___________(产生很大影响) to the Earth.
daily life
There are
Turn off
Step 2: 谋篇布局
Water-saving
tips

Importance
Ways
Inclusion
Use to
Take shorter shower
make a
big difference
Step 3: 扩充成文
Water-saving tips
　Water is important in our daily lives. We can’t live without it. There is not enough fresh water on Earth, so we should try our best to save water. I want to share some tips with you.
First, it’s necessary for us to turn off the tap when we are brushing our teeth. We can save a lot of water by doing so. Second, we can collect rainwater on rainy days. We can use the rainwater to water flowers and plants. Third, taking a shorter shower can help to save water as well. For example, we can take a shorter shower instead of a long bath. Fourth, when we want to wash clothes, we should wash more clothes together.
If we follow these ways, we will make a big difference to the Earth.
Post-writing
Check and revise 检查和修改
Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it.
根据下面的清单检查和修改作文。
I provided water-saving tips for different situations,
such as .
I presented the information in a clear and logical way.
I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit.
I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.
Grade and share
Elements要素 Level档次
Content内容(6分) 要点齐全，切合题意
适当发挥
Accuracy准确性(6分) 语法，大小写，拼写等格式错误
语言使用恰当，丰富
Fluency流畅性(3分) 分段，书写，衔接，过渡
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