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Section Ⅴ　Writing
如何写人物介绍类作文
Unit 3 War and peace
人物介绍是一种以写人记事为主的文体。写人时主要交代清楚人物的生平；介绍人物事迹时一般以事情发生的先后为顺序，包含出生及童年、兴趣与工作、勤勉与成功、成就与影响等方面。提示要点：
1．突出重点、略加点评：一个人一生所做的事情很多，突出主要活动和事迹来写。在人物简介中，要对人物作简短的评论。点评可放在开头，也可放在中间或末尾。点评务必做到简洁明了，一语道破。
2．叙述精炼、防止渲染：人物简介，即使是介绍人物的重要活动和事迹，也务必做到表达准确、简洁。
1．介绍人物的出身及外貌特征：
(1)So poor was his family that he had to drop out at the age of 15.
(2)She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair.
(3)Sue is a young woman who is studying art.
(4)His slim but strong body is just like that of millions of Chinese farmers.
2．表达人物的情感：
(1)I like playing the piano very much.
(2)He only seems to be interested in personal gain.
(3)Tom may be tired of watching TV now, for he seldom talks about the TV programs.
(4)Day by day I am becoming happier and more satisfied.
3．介绍人物的影响及人们的评价：
(1)He became famous for his new theory.
(2)The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader.
(3)Our biology teacher has been a model teacher for many years.
(4)Our Chinese teacher and maths teacher are both strict with us and kind to us.
(5)Such is our English teacher，a simple person of great achievements.
(6)People spoke highly of him and all respected him.
4．介绍人物的性格和爱好：
(1)Being kind and helpful，she always enjoys helping others.
(2)In her spare time，she spends lots of time listening to music and reading books.
(3)She gets on well with almost everyone and is always welcome wherever she goes.
保定市身残志坚青年医生宁学雷，凭着其过人的医术和高尚的医德为乡邻所敬重。请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇个人故事类记叙文，简要介绍好医生宁学雷。
1．宁学雷出生在河北省保定市，1岁时患小儿麻痹症，导致下身瘫痪，疾病的磨难激发了他学医救人的志向；
2．经过多年的刻苦学习，他最终实现了梦想，考入了一所医学院；
3．大学毕业后，他开了一家诊所，边行医边学习，不断提高自己的医术；
4．他医德高尚，不计较报酬，始终把“治病救人”放在首位，赢得了人们的尊重。
注意：
1．80词左右；
2．短文要求包含所有要点，但不必逐条翻译；
3．可以适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词：小儿麻痹症poliomyelitis
Step One　审题谋篇
体裁 记叙文
话题 身残志坚的好医生
时态 一般现在时和一般过去时
人称 第三人称
第一段：介绍人物的基本信息，包括出生地、遭遇等；
第二段：重点叙述宁学雷刻苦学习、学医救人的故事；
第三段：对宁学雷的客观评价。
Step Two　词汇运用
1． 在……岁时
2． 被医学院录取
3． 实现梦想
4． 赢得广泛尊重
5． 尽某人最大努力做某事
at the age of
be admitted to a medical college
realize one's dream
win wide respect
try one's best to do sth.
Step Three　句式表达
1．完成句子
①经过多年的刻苦学习，他终于实现了自己的梦想，考上了医学院。
, he finally realized his dream and was admitted to a medical college.
②宁学雷是一位医德高尚的医生，从来没想从病人那里获得回报。
Ning Xuelei is and he never expects rewards from his patients.
③他把“治病救人”放在首位，难怪他赢得了人们的广泛尊重。
He puts “curing the sickness to save the patient” first, and he wins wide respect from others.
After he had studied hard for many years
a noble doctor
it's no wonder
that
2．句式升级
④把句①改为含有现在分词短语作状语的句子。
．
⑤用without把句②改为简单句。
．
⑥把句③改为含有现在分词短语作结果状语的句子。
．
Having studied hard for many years, he finally realized his dream and was admitted to a medical college
Ning Xuelei is a noble doctor without expecting rewards from his patients
He puts “curing the sickness to save the patient” first, thus winning wide respect from others
Step Four　连句成篇
Ning Xuelei，born in Baoding of Hebei Province, suffered from poliomyelitis at the age of one and never regained the use of his legs.The hardship and sufferings never defeated him but inspired him to study medicine to save people's lives in the future.
Having studied hard for many years, he finally realized his dream and was admitted to a medical college.After graduating, he started a clinic and began to give medical treatments to people.In the meanwhile, he tries his best to improve his medical skills by learning from other experienced doctors.
Ning Xuelei is a noble doctor without expecting rewards from his patients.In addition, as a doctor, he puts “curing the sickness to save the patient” first, thus winning wide respect from others.
情感描写之“悲伤”“沮丧”与“孤独”
[词汇积累]
形容词/副词 sorrowful, sad, depressed, frustrated, lonely, upset, depressing / sadly
名词 sorrow, loneliness, sadness, depression, frustration
[词块必记]
1．a sense/wave of loneliness/sadness (一阵)孤独/悲伤感
2．numb with sorrow/sadness悲伤到麻木
3．look upset看起来沮丧
4．one's heart sinks某人的心沉下去
5．with a sinking heart心情沉重
6．in an unpleasant mood/in low spirits情绪低落
7．sadness comes in waves悲伤如潮涌
8．an ocean of sadness悲伤的海洋
9．feel left out感到被冷落
[佳句背诵]
1．The next following days, she felt like she was floating in an ocean of sadness, no wanting to do anything.
接下来的几天， 她觉得自己漂浮在悲伤的海洋中， 什么也不想做。
2．She threw herself down onto the bed, and couldn't help crying bitterly.
她一头倒在床上， 情不自禁地痛哭起来。
3．When she heard the news that she failed to win a prize, her heart sank.
听到她没获奖的消息， 她的心沉了下去。
[完成句子]
1．她咬着下唇， 心中充满悲伤。
She bit her bottom lip， . (with复合结构)
2．一进入自己的卧室， 她就觉得悲伤如潮涌。
On entering her bedroom, . (夸张的修辞手法)
3．简感到被冷落，她感到孤独绝望。
, Jane was getting desperate with loneliness. (非谓语动词)
4．那位母亲由于悲伤到麻木， 说不出话来。
The mother, ,has trouble speaking. (形容词短语)
with sadness filling her heart
she felt that sadness came in waves
Feeling left out
numb with sorrow/sadness

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