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Section Ⅴ　Writing
如何写读后续写
Unit 4 A glimpse of the future
所谓读后续写，就是一篇记叙文或议论文截去后面部分，考生续写截去的部分。一般原材料在350词以内，需要续写的词一般在150词左右。读后续写的技巧有以下几点：
1．精读原文，确定线索
读懂内容是续写的基础，找到该文章是以时间还是以空间为线索，有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜”，这样续写才会有根有据，情节发展才会合情合理。在读的过程中留意人物的语言、动作、神态、外貌和心理等细节描写，以细节描写为伏笔。留意文中反复出现或重点描写的特定物品，以特定物品为伏笔。留意续写部分的段首句，以续写段首句为伏笔。
2．仔细审题，明确续写要求
考生要立足段首句分析，合理构思情节，才能帮助自己理清思路，续写出符合逻辑且结构紧凑的故事。虽然续写鼓励情节的创造性，但创意须合理，应符合现实，符合情节内在的逻辑，故事应体现积极的情感态度和价值观。
3．回扣原文，制订续写思路
在开展续写之前，考生读懂原材料后，首先要解决好五个“W”和一个“H”的问题。考虑如何将段首句等提示信息转化为搭建读后续写的支架。
4．拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，展开丰富的想象和联想，围绕主题，基于已有知识和经验，写出合情合理的内容。所续写内容要衔接自然，前后情节互相照应。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性和语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。最后在誊写文字时，务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。
1．表示情感或心理活动
(1)All the frustration and stress that had been building up inside of me came to a complete stop.
(2)Struck by the situation，I was seized with sadness at the thought “all the blossoms are doomed to fall”．
(3)Seeing her condition，I immediately felt a huge surge of sympathy for her.
(4)I felt a sense of joy and happiness surging through me.
(5)The intelligence and beauty of the daughter makes her father extremely proud.
2．表示动作或事件
(1)It was the patient's dangerous condition that cost the doctors and nurses many a sleepless night.
(2)His rising fortune fueled a growing appetite for a lavish living.
(3)The days are gone when physical strength was all you needed to make a living.
(4)The war，which has been going on for a year，has claimed thousands of lives.
(5)As a new graduate，he doesn't know what it takes to start a business here.
3．评价人物或事件
(1)Face the past with the least regret，face the present with the least waste and face the future with the most dreams.
(2)Absolute determination leads to eventual fulfillment of dreams.
(3)It's typical of us to try to get what others have and turn a blind eye to what we have that others admire.
(4)If so，we are doomed to be the victims of the unlimited desire.
(5)Only by treasuring the things we have will it be accessible for us to make our life meaningful and colorful to the fullest.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I remember my first home，a small apartment on the second floor with a lovely and spacious balcony.When my mom was busy in the kitchen，she let me stay on the balcony watching the kids playing in the street.On that balcony I played sometimes with my elder sister，Maria. She was seven years old and when my mom was absent she was like a mother to me.The balcony was a great recreational spot for my father.After work he used to grow carnations(康
乃馨)in flower boxes.His carnations were red，pink and white，and everyone appreciated them for their beauty.
He took care of them with so much love and devotion.He dealt carefully with his flowers like a mother taking care of her baby.Many times I sat on the floor of the balcony for hours observing him and his lovely flowers with patience.He was always doing something on that balcony.He was watering them every day，cleaning the balcony floor，changing the potting soil and when the stems(茎)were thick，strong and high enough，he started his improvement operation like a doctor.
My dad took a tiny knife and with his left hand he held the stem of the carnation and measured the height. Then he made a small mark on the stem with his finger.Afterwards he made a sharp cut with the knife，just enough to fit in a grain of barley.Then he bandaged the stem with a small bandage.His job was then to water the plants and to take care of them.“No one should touch them，” he said to Mom.Every day，when he came home from work he went straight to the balcony.
Mom used to tell us，“Do not touch Daddy's flowers.”For us it was a fascinating experience to watch how the small stems were growing and
making new flowers. When the carnations had grown big enough，my dad enjoyed watching them every day.We the kids did too.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右。
2．请按照如下格式作答。
One day，my elder sister，who loved Dad very much，had a great idea.
When my dad arrived，he went as usual straight to the balcony and saw his flowers lying on the floor like dead animals.
Step One　审题谋篇
体裁 记叙文
话题 家庭生活
时态 一般过去时
人称 第一、三人称
Step Two　词汇运用
1． 同意某人的观点
2． 采取行动
3． 使某人感到惊讶的是
4． 对……很生气
5． 冲某人喊叫
Step Three　句式表达
1．完成句子
①她想买一束人造康乃馨用来观赏，这样爸爸就不用那么辛苦了。(不定式作定语)
agree with sb.
take action
to one's surprise
be mad about sth.
yell at sb.
She wanted to buy a bunch of artificial carnations , and this would save Dad so much hard work.
②然后我们回到阳台，把原来的康乃馨从花盆里拔出来，把假康乃馨漂亮地摆放进去。
Then we went back to the balcony, and there we pulled the original carnations
and arranged the false ones beautifully.
③一切都结束后，我们期待着爸爸的表扬。
, we were expecting Dad's praise.
to be appreciated
out of the flowerpot
When everything was finished
2．句式升级
④将句①改为含有定语从句的复合句。
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⑤将句②改为含有定语从句的复合句。
．
⑥将句③改为含有独立主格结构的句子。
．
She wanted to buy a bunch of artificial carnations to be appreciated, which would save Dad so much hard work
Then we went back to the balcony, where we pulled the original carnations out of the flowerpot and arranged the false ones beautifully
Everything finished, we were expecting Dad's praise
Step Four　连句成篇
One day，my elder sister，who loved Dad very much，had a great idea.She thought it was too tiring for Dad to take care of the delicate flowers，so she wanted to buy a bunch of artificial carnations to be appreciated，which would save Dad so much hard work.I agreed with her.We took action as soon as Mom and Dad went out for work.First，Maria went with me to the nearest grocery on our street to obtain the false flowers.Then we went back to the balcony，where we pulled the original carnations out of the flowerpot and arranged the false ones beautifully.Everything finished，we were expecting Dad’s praise.
When my dad arrived，he went as usual straight to the balcony and saw his flowers lying on the floor like dead animals.To our surprise，Dad was mad about it，yelling at us，“Don’t you know touching is not allowed？What on earth have you done？”We fled to our room with tears.Before long，Dad calmed down and talked with us patiently.We explained the reason，which moved him greatly.Since then, we have always planted carnations together，which enables us to understand each other better and is the fascinating time we treasure most.
动作神态描写之“感激”与“感动”
[词汇积累]
形容词/
副词 thankful, grateful, moving, moved, touching, touched / gratefully
名词/动词 gratitude, appreciation / move, thank, appreciate, touch
[词块必记]
1．tears of gratitude/appreciation感激的泪水
2．accept my sincere appreciation接受我真诚的感激
3．show one's gratitude表达感激
4．be deeply touched by...被……深深感动
5．appreciate timely help感激及时的帮助
[佳句背诵]
1．I can never thank you enough.
我对你感激不尽。
2．This small gift is only a tiny token of our gratefulness.
这件小小的礼物略表我们的感激之情。
3．Your sympathy has brought us great comfort.
你的慰问给我们带来了莫大的安慰。
4．Knowing what had happened, his mother shed tears of joy and gratitude.
了解事情的经过后，他的母亲流下了喜悦和感激的泪水。
5．When she told me about her daughter's story, I was too moved even to speak.
当她告诉我她女儿的故事时，我感动得甚至说不出话来。
[完成句子]
1．感激的泪水顺着彼得的脸颊流了下来，他感激地说：“今天你救了我。我对你感激不尽。”
down his cheeks, Peter said thankfully, “You saved me today. I can't thank you enough.”(with复合结构)
2．看到陌生人之间这般彼此关照， 实在令人感动。
how much strangers could care for each other.(“it is＋adj.＋to do”结构)
With tears of gratitude rolling
It was very moving to see
3．当接过一个小男孩给的鲜花时， 他报以感激的一笑。
as he accepted the flowers given by a small boy.
4．人群被深深地感动了， 于是更大声地拍手。
, the crowd clapped their hands even more loudly. (非谓语动词作状语)
He smiled with gratitude
Touched/ Moved deeply

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