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(共15张PPT)
Section Ⅴ　Writing
如何写图示作文
Unit 5 Learning from nature
本单元的写作任务是“看图写作”。看图作文要求对一幅或多幅图画进行分析，表现其内容和寓意。可以分三部分构思：
第一部分：确定标题。标题要切合图画内容。
第二部分：适当分析并简要描述图画内容。注意语言的简练，切记冗杂表达。
第三部分：图画隐喻。这部分要充分发挥想象，根据图画内容，详细描述图画隐含的寓意。提出的观点要有说服力，隐喻恰当，富有哲理。
1．描述图画
(1)The picture shows that...
(2)From the picture we can see that...
(3)It is illustrated in the picture that...
(4)In the picture there is...
2．阐明寓意
(1)We can conclude that...
(2)The picture symbolizes that...
(3)In my opinion/view...
(4)As far as I'm concerned...
(5)Personally speaking...
右图是一幅有关自然现象的图画。根据图画写一篇80词左右的短文，说一说这幅图画表现的自然现象以及你从中领悟到的道理。
Step One　审题谋篇
体裁 夹叙夹议文
话题 落叶
时态 一般现在时
人称 第三人称或第一人称
Step Two　词汇运用
1． 落叶
2． 象征
3． 留学的，海外的
4． 培养，滋养
5． 返回
6． 营养
7． 有助于
8． 建造，建设
fallen leaves
symbolize
overseas
cultivate
return to
nourishment/nutrition
contribute to
construct
Step Three　句式表达
1．完成句子
①落叶聚集在树的周围滋养树根。
The fallen leaves in order to cultivate the tree's roots.
②树根象征祖国。
The tree's roots ．
③他们已经在国外待了很长时间。
They abroad.
gather around the tree
symbolize one's motherland
have spent a long time
④他们将回归祖国。
They will their motherland.
2．句式升级
⑤请用定语从句将句①和句②合成一句复合句。
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⑥请用while将句③和句④合成一句复合句。
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return to
The fallen leaves gather around the tree in order to cultivate the tree's roots, which symbolize one's motherland
While they have spent a long time abroad, they will return to their motherland
Step Four　连句成篇
The picture above shows when autumn arrives，leaves from trees will fall to the ground.The fallen leaves gather around the tree in order to cultivate the tree?s roots，which symbolize one?s motherland.
More and more overseas Chinese are returning or have already returned to China.While they have spent a long time abroad，regardless of the life they may have led，they will return to their roots：home. Because they are grateful for their motherland's nourishment and support, they return to contribute to constructing their motherland with their knowledge，experience and wealth gained abroad.
动作神态描写之“高兴” 与“兴奋”
[词汇积累]
名词 pleasure，delight，enjoyment，joy，happiness
形容词 happy，joyful，pleased，glad，delighted，cheerful，excited，thrilled
副词 happily，gladly，cheerfully，joyfully，merrily
[词块必记]
1．be in high spirits精神高涨
2．be excited with joy at the success为成功而欣喜若狂
3．be/feel on top of the world非常高兴
4．a mixture of excitement and happiness既兴奋又开心
5．be wild with delight欣喜若狂
[佳句背诵]
1．He was so excited that he could hardly speak.
他兴奋得几乎说不出话来。
2．She could hardly contain her excitement.
她几乎无法抑制自己的兴奋。
3．Both Mark and I are feeling on top of the world.
我和马克都感到非常高兴。
4．His eyes glittered with excitement.
他的眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
5．Hearing the news, he jumped up and down with excitement.
听到这个消息， 他兴奋得上蹿下跳。
6．I couldn't help but grin from ear to ear.
我忍不住笑得合不拢嘴。
[完成句子]
1．得知孩子们的主意， Mrs. Meredith非常高兴，她笑得很灿烂。
Learning the children's idea, Mrs. Meredith was so . (用形容词＋面部表情)
pleased/glad/happy/
delighted/cheerful that she smiled brightly
2．孩子们开始高兴地准备爆米花。
The children got down to . (用副词)
3．他们带着一篮子爆米花，兴高采烈地前往伯纳德家同他分享这个好计划。
With a basket of popcorn, they to share with Bernard the good plan. (用副词)
preparing popcorn happily/cheerfully/
joyfully/merrily
left for Bernard's home cheerfully
4．听到他们的话， 伯纳德高兴地几乎跳了起来， 热泪盈眶。
Hearing what they said, Bernard was . (so ...that ...)
→Hearing what they said, Bernard was ．(with复合结构)
5．看到那篮爆米花，他的父母也欣喜若狂。
At the sight of the basket of popcorn, .
so delighted/glad/happy/pleased/
cheerful that he almost jumped up and tears filled his eyes
so delighted/glad/happy/pleased/
cheerful that he almost jumped up, with tears filling his eyes
his parents were also wild with delight

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