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Unit 4 The Wonders of Nature
Section B (3a-3c) Writing
(新人教)英语
八年级下册
八年级英语备课组
Learning Objectives
理解自然奇观宣传广告的语篇特征，体会大堡礁旅游宣传广告中使用形容词比较级和最高级的效果，以及大数字对增强内容可信度的作用，掌握宣传广告提升感染力的策略；
分析写作范文中的内容要素，理解相关语言表达的意义和作用，并学习范文中生动的语言表达；
学会在写前通过列举要点构思文章内容，并用完整句表述要点内容，在此基础上为感兴趣的自然奇观创作一篇内容充实又有感染力的宣传广告。
通过本课时学习，我能够：
Lead in
What can you see in the pictures
We can see a man diving underwater.
There are lots of colourful fish in the underwater world.
We can see the coral reef.
What is the largest coral reef in the world What do you know about it
It’s on the northeastern coast of Australia.
[ k r l ri f]
Great Barrier Reef
Skimming
Read the title and the passage quickly, then answer the questions.
What’s the main idea of the passage
It’s about the Great Barrier Reef.
It’s an amazing underwater world.
What is the text type of this passage
It’s an advertisement.
How does the writer start the ad
By asking questions.
Tip 1: Starting with questions is a powerful way to attract readers’ interest in
an advertisement. 开篇提问使广告更吸引人。
水下世界
如果/要是这样
“if it is so”的省略形式，否定用if not
Scanning
Read the advertisement. Circle the numbers and underline the adjectives used to describe the Great Barrier Reef.
3a
Why
numbers
adj.s
make information more specific (更具体)
make descriptions more vivid (更生动)
Tip 2: Using large numbers and adjectives makes the advertisement more
persuasive and attractive (更具说服力和吸引力).
Scanning
amzing
alive
Great Barrier Reef: An Amazing Underwater World Location Located on _______________ , it is one of ______________ places to visit.
Special fact It is ____________ in the world. It takes up an area of __________ square kilometres and includes many ________ and ________________ .
the northeastern coast of Australia
the most amzing
the biggest coral reef
345,000
islands white sand beaches
be located in/at/on
位于/坐落于
珊瑚礁
占用(时间); 占据(空间)
Scanning
amzing
alive
Great Barrier Reef: An Amazing Underwater World Things to do If you visit it, you will see ______________, and you can _____________ and see ____________. And you might even see __________ .
Final invitation For people who love ____________ , visiting the Great Barrier Reff is ____________________ !
the largest living
structure on earth
swim or dive in
the clear water
coral, plants, and
colourful fish
large fish, turtles, and sharks
the ocean
the dream of a lifetime
活体结构
一生的梦想
Analyze
How can we write an advertisement for a natural wonder？
Title
+
Picture
Beginning
(hook 吸引点)
Body
(details &
experiences)
special fact
location
things to do
Ending
(Call to action)
Pre-writing
Read a student’s notes on Qinghai Lake.
Rewrite them in full sentences.
3b
1. Qinghai Lake is a ________ in ______________________.
2. Qinghai Lake is ______________ in China.
3. It is ___________ in size.
4. If you visit Qinghai Lake, you can ________________________________.
salt lake
Qinghai Province, China
the largest lake
4,340 km
photograph wildlife, like fish and birds,
visit islands, and ride a bike or horse
Writing
Write an advertisement for Qinghai Lake . Try to make your advertisement as persuasive as possible.
3c
Writing
Title
+
Picture
Beginning
(hook 吸引点)
Body
(details &
experiences)
special fact
location
things
to do
Ending
(Call to action)
Qinghai Lake
Do you love ... Do you want to visit one of the natural wonders of ... If so, visit the ...!
Do you love… / Are you tired of… and want to find… Welcome to...!
Located in /on… / It lies on the… coast of…
... is one of the most amazing places to visit. It is the.... , covering an area of… square kilometres. It is one of the most famous wonders in…
If you visit it, you will see ... Here, you can ...
It is perfect for… (photography / wildlife watching)
Don’t miss the chance to…. You might even see…
... is truly a wonderful place! Plan your trip and explore the beauty of this wonderful wonder. It is an experience you will never forget!
Writing
Do you love the beauty of nature Do you want to visit one of the natural wonders of China If so, visit Qinghai Lake!
Located in Qinghai Province, China, Qinghai Lake is one of the country’s most amazing places to visit. It is the largest salt lake in China. It takes up an area of about 4,340 square kilometres and includes lovely islands. It is also home to rich wildlife.
If you visit it, you will see some special lake fish in the water and many kinds of birds flying above the lake. Here, you can ride a bike or even ride a horse around the lake to enjoy the fresh air and beautiful views. If you visit the islands, you might even find some special plants and enjoy a peaceful life away from the city.
Qinghai Lake is truly a wonderful place! Plan your trip and explore the beauty of this wonderful wonder. It is an experience you will never forget!
Qinghai Lake
Post-writing
Share and evaluate your writing with the checklist.
Checklist Categories Items Stars Self-assessment Peer-assessment
Structure Is the structure of the advertisement clear ★★
Content Does the advertisement include: □ Location □ Special facts ★★★★
Language Does the advertisement describe the wonder by using large numbers, adjectives, adverbs, comparatives, and superlatives Does the advertisement start with questions to grab reader’s attention ★★★
Handwriting Is the handwriting neat and easy to read ★
In total
Nature makes us wonder. That is why it is wonderful.
大自然让我们产生好奇，这就是它的奇妙之处。
Homework
Must do：
Choose to do：
1. Recite the key words and sentences of this lesson.
2. Polish your writing according to the checklist and your partner's feedback.
Write an advertisement for another natural wonder.
THANK YOU

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