资源简介

(共27张PPT)
Art and Spirits
2026届成都二诊英语应用文评讲
你校英文报将举行“艺术与心理健康”主题征文活动。请结合下图写一篇短文投稿，内容要求如下：
1．艺术对心理健康的好处；
2．发出倡议。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Art Lifts Spirits
I.三审一列
三审：
体裁：
人称：
时态:
征文投稿
主体：第一人称I（复数we/our），代表学生群体，增强共鸣。
呼吁对象：第二人称（you），直接面向同学发出倡议。
论述部分：可使用第三人称（it/art）来指代艺术。
①阐述艺术的好处：以一般现在时为主，描述客观事实和普遍作用。
②发出倡议：以一般现在时 / 一般将来时为主，表达呼吁和期望。
其他
写作身份：投稿人（学生）
写作目的：向校英文报 “艺术与心理健康” 主题征文投稿
写作对象：全校师生（报纸读者）
一列：列出要点
1.活动背景（交代时间、事件）
2.艺术对心理健康的好处
3.发出倡议
布局：三段式
para.1.活动背景（交代目的、时间、事件）
para.2.艺术对心理健康的好处（情绪宣泄、减压、提升自信、改善情绪）
para.3.发出倡议
Deep Thinking
1.这幅图的内容是什么？
●一只手正手持铅笔细致地素描苹果。
2.如何理解 “Art Lifts Spirits”
●可理解为 “艺术提振精神、治愈心灵”
3.如何将 “图画内容 + 标题” 同 “艺术与心理健康” 建立联系？
●素描苹果过程中的 “一笔一画”（具体艺术行为）→ 专注、观察、耐心、投入（创作过程的心理状态）→ 缓解压力 + 情感表达（心理健康层效益）
Deep Thinking
三个维度：
●情绪疏解：艺术帮助排解压力与负面情绪。
●认知专注：创作过程需要高度专注，从而暂时远离焦虑。
●自我成就：完成作品带来成就感，增强自信心与心理韧性。
逻辑链：表达情绪 → 进入专注 → 获得成长，完成从 “具体行为” 到 “抽象意义” 的功能。
Deep Thinking
4.基于前文，如何发出倡议？
●在阐述 “艺术有益心理健康” 之后，自然过渡到行动层面（可操作性），可鼓励读者将艺术融入日常生活，如绘画、音乐、写作等。
●建议学校 / 班级开展艺术体验活动。
●呼吁大家用艺术滋养心灵，关注心理健康。
II.写作构思
para.1.写作背景 (2 句)
1.以 “压力普遍存在” 切入现实背景，引出 “艺术作为调节方式” 的立意
2.联系标题 “Art Lifts Spirits”
●In our stressful school life,
●art can be a powerful way to relax and express ourselves.
●art plays an important role in lifting our spirits and improving our mental well-being.
para.2.点出艺术对心理健康的好处 (4-5 句)
1.如画中所示，素描苹果的细腻过程需要高度专注与持续投入。
As illustrated in the picture, the delicate process of sketching an apple requires deep concentration and continuous engagement.
2.认知专注
By focusing on every stroke一笔一画, we can enter a calm and focused state of mind and temporarily leave our worries behind.
3.情绪疏解
Art not only helps us express our feelings but also relieves stress and anxiety.
4.自我成就
Completing a piece of artwork brings a sense of achievement and boosts our confidence.
para.3.发出倡议 (3 句)
1.让我们把艺术融入日常生活，用它来提升心理健康。
Let’s make art a part of our daily life and use it to improve our mental health.
2.从现在开始行动起来，感受艺术带来的积极影响。
Take action now and experience the positive influence of art in your life.
III.失分点提示
1.内容维度：不能将图画与 “艺术与心理健康”建立联系
●大部分同学能够看懂图画内容，但不清楚该如何将其与 “心理健康” 建立联系，难以从中提炼出抽象主题；
●大部分听写能理解标题 “Art Lifts Spirits”，明确艺术对精神层面的积极影响，但没有具体说明其作用机制，停留在表层理解。
●好处只写 1 点，未展开，内容单薄。
2.语言维度：语言表达不当
●基础语法错误
●词汇使用不当 / 中式英语
Art can make our heart happy（应为 lift our spirits/improve our mental health）；
3.卷面维度：书写潦草
●涂改过多，字迹潦草，难以辨认；
●大小写、标点错误（比如句首小写、逗号句号不分）；
●拼写错误（sprit 漏写 i，healther 拼写错误）。
IV.范文展示
Art Lifts Spirits（范文1）
As the vivid sketch shows, drawing an apple is more than just creating art—it is a journey of calming the mind and nourishing the soul.
Art is a powerful healer for mental health. It offers a safe outlet to release stress, anxiety and negative emotions, allowing us to express what words cannot. Engaging in creative activities also boosts self-confidence, sharpens focus, and brings a sense of accomplishment, lifting our spirits and brightening our mood.
Let’s embrace art in daily life. Pick up a brush, a pencil, or an instrument, and let creativity heal our hearts. Art is not just for artists—it is for everyone to find peace and joy.
Art Lifts Spirits（范文2）
In our stressful school life , art can be a powerful way to relax and express ourselves. It plays an important role in lifting our spirits and improving our mental well-being.
As illustrated in the picture, the delicate process of sketching an apple requires deep concentration and continuous engagement. By focusing on every stroke (此处的 “stroke” 表示 “笔画”), we can enter a calm and focused state of mind and temporarily leave our worries behind. Moreover, art not only helps us express our feelings but also relieves stress and anxiety. Completing a piece of artwork even brings us a sense of achievement and boosts our confidence.
Let’s make art a part of our daily life and use it to improve our mental health. Take action now and experience the positive influence of art in your life.
V.语料积累
1.情绪宣泄
●Art provides a safe outlet to release stress, anxiety and negative emotions.
●It helps us express feelings that are hard to put into words, easing our inner pressure.
●Engaging in creative activities can calm our nerves and free us from daily worries.
●It is an effective way to relieve stress and keep a positive mindset.
2.自我提升 & 心态类
●Art boosts our self-confidence and brings a strong sense of accomplishment.
●It sharpens our focus, helps us stay in the moment and chase away negative thoughts.
●Creating art cultivates patience and mindfulness, making us more peaceful and optimistic.
●It allows us to discover our inner potential and build a stronger mind.
3.倡议
●Let us embrace art in our daily life, no matter how simple it is.
●Why not pick up a pencil, a brush or an instrument, and let creativity heal our hearts
●It is high time that we made art a part of our life to keep mentally healthy.
●Let’s take up art as a way to relax, grow and stay positive.
4.通用高阶替换（提升作文档次）
●mental health → mental well-being / psychological health
●good for → beneficial to / instrumental in / contributes to
●reduce stress → relieve stress / ease pressure / release tension
●make us happy → lift our spirits / brighten our mood / nourish our soul
Thank You!

展开更多......

收起↑