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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a sunny Saturday afternoon, I was driving my daughter to her weekly swimming lesson. As we came to a heavily traveled street, we saw an unusual procession approaching: a bony, wild-eyed cow followed by many cars, and boys on bicycles and on foot.
“That poor cow!” I said angrily. “Those ignorant city people are frightening her.”
At that time, my daughter, aged nine, believed that her papa was equal to any crisis. “What are you going to do ” she asked.
“See that piece of rope around her neck ” I said. “After I leave you at the swimming center, I’ll go back and catch her and hold her for her owner, who’s probably trying to find her.” Having milked cows as a boy and worked with beef cattle, I knew—so I thought—all about cows.
Later I learned that this particular cow had come from at least seven miles away and, on the way, had knocked down several people. She had passed a baseball field, breaking up the game and flattening the umpire(裁判) in passing. In brief, ruins lay behind her. The crowd was not following her with intent to harm her, but merely to see what she would do next.
I left my daughter at the swimming center, circled back and found the cow standing at the grassy edge of a side street, breathing heavily. The crowd surrounded her — at a respectful distance. I parked my car, pitying their ignorance, walked up to the cow in what the onlookers assumed to be a fearless manner.
She watched me narrowly as I approached, turning her head to view me with one big eye, then the other. At thirty feet from her I have a slight hesitation, at twenty a serious doubt. At ten feet I stopped and realized the truth. Here was a cow foreign to my experience. Driven completely crazy, she was ready to charge anything that moved.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Par.1 As I was about to turn and run, two policemen arrived.
Par.2 We tied the rope around the tree and began to discuss what to do with the cow
Step 1: 读划关键词
名词 情绪、情节相关 主题相关 用： 原词复现 同义词 反义词 修饰词+原词 来增加融洽度
动词 事件动态，推动情节的人物行为
形容词 副词 丰富的人物形象，细节场景 渲染氛围 环境描写
主旨或结尾 可能和主题有关的句子： 重述或改写
Step 2 plot （每段设置3个情节，先设置每段的第三层，然后再设置第一二层)
Par.1 As I was about to turn and run, two policemen arrived.
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Par.2 We tied the rope around the tree and began to discuss what to do with the cow
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Step 3 范文挖空练习：
A Gathering courage, I inched forward with my heart pounding wildly and whispered softly to the cow like I used to do with the farm animals. One step, two steps… Half an hour later, arrived the owner of the lost cow,who apologized for the trouble caused by his carelessness with his face flushed with embarrassment and thanked us repeatedly The crowd erupted in applause, and the police gave me a thumbs-up. Without delay, we fastened her to a nearby tree together. D Relieved and feeling more secure, I approached them, detailed the chaotic scene and mentioned my childhood experience with cattle E A surge of warmth and pride washed over me
Par.1
Just as I was about to turn and run, two police officers arrived on the scene. __________1___________. Seeing the cow was still terrified , the police guided the curious onlookers to step back. A moment later, the bony cow seemed to grow less scared with her wild eyes softening.______2_________Eventually, I managed to get close enough to take hold of the rope around her neck. I heaved a heavy sigh, feeling as if a weight had been lifted from my heart.
_3_____.The crowd erupted in applause, and the police gave me a thumbs-up. Without delay, we fastened her to a nearby tree together.
Par.2
After we managed to secure the cow to the tree, we began to discuss what to do with her. I offered to gather some grass to keep her calm while the officers worked on locating her owner___4_____.After he led the cow away,the officers extended hands to me“We’d have had a much harder time without your help.” one of them said. _5 ____When picking up Emma from her swimming lesson, I related the story to her. She grinned from ear to ear with eyes twinkling with admiration, throwing her arms around me .“You really did it, Dad—you saved her!” she beamed. The adventure turned a regular Saturday into a truly meaningful experience.
Step 4根据提示补全内容
Par.1
Just as I was about to turn and run, two police officers arrived on the scene. _________(欣慰的） and feeling more secure, I ______(靠近） them,_____(详述) the chaotic scene and ______(提到） my childhood experience with cattle. Seeing the cow was still terrified , the police guided the curious onlookers to step back. A moment later, the bony cow seemed to grow less scared with her wild eyes ________(变得柔和）. ___________(鼓起勇气）, I____________(缓慢挪动） with my heart pounding wildly and whispered softly to the cow like I used to do with the farm animals. One step, two steps…, eventually, I managed to ___________________(足够近去抓住这个绳子） around her neck. I heaved a heavy sigh, feeling as if ________________________________(心里的石头落了地). The crowd erupted in applause, and the police__________________(对我竖起大拇指）. _______________(没有耽误）, we fastened her to a nearby tree together.
Par.2
After we managed to secure the cow to the tree, we began to discuss what to do with her. I offered to gather some grass to keep her calm while the officers worked on locating her owner. Half an hour later, ______________________________(走失的牛的主人到来了) ,who apologized for the trouble caused by his carelessness with his face_______(通红） with embarrassment and thanked us repeatedly.After he ___________________(把牛领走）,the officer____________(向我伸出手）“We’d have had a much harder time without your help.” one of them said. A surge of warmth and pride washed over me.When picking up Emma from her swimming lesson, I related the story to her. She grinned from ear to ear with eyes twinkling with admiration, throwing________________(抱着我） .“You really did it, Dad—you saved her!” she beamed. The adventure turned a regular Saturday into a truly meaningful experience.
Step 5范文学习
Just as I was about to turn and run, two police officers arrived on the scene. Relieved and feeling more secure, I approached them, detailed the chaotic scene and mentioned my childhood experience with cattle. Seeing the cow was still terrified , the police guided the curious onlookers to step back. A moment later, the bony cow seemed to grow less scared with her wild eyes softening. Gathering courage, I inched forward with my heart pounding wildly and whispered softly to the cow like I used to do with the farm animals. One step, two steps…, eventually, I managed to get close enough to take hold of the rope around her neck. I heaved a heavy sigh, feeling as if a weight had been lifted from my heart. The crowd erupted in applause, and the police gave me a thumbs-up. Without delay, we fastened her to a nearby tree together.
After we managed to secure the cow to the tree, we began to discuss what to do with her. I offered to gather some grass to keep her calm while the officers worked on locating her owner. Half an hour later, arrived the owner of the lost cow ,who apologized for the trouble caused by his carelessness with his face flushed with embarrassment and thanked us repeatedly.After he led the cow away,the officers extended hands to me“We’d have had a much harder time without your help.” one of them said. A surge of warmth and pride washed over me.When picking up Emma from her swimming lesson, I related the story to her. She grinned from ear to ear with eyes twinkling with admiration, throwing her arms around me .“You really did it, Dad—you saved her!” she beamed. The adventure turned a regular Saturday into a truly meaningful experience.
Step 6 表达积累学习
1.arrive on the scene 赶到现场
2.feel more secure 感到更安心
3.detailed the chaotic scene 描述混乱的场景
4.childhood experience with cattle 与牲畜相处的童年经历
5.curious onlookers 好奇的围观者
6.wild eyes softening 狂躁的眼神变得柔和
7.gather courage 鼓起勇气
8.inch forward 一点点向前挪动
9.heart pounding wildly 心怦怦狂跳
10.take hold of 抓住，握住
11.a stone had been lifted from my heart 心里的石头落了地
12.erupt in applause 爆发出掌声
13 give sb a thumbs-up 向某人竖起大拇指
14.fasten...to... 把…… 拴在…… 上
15.work on locating sb 着手寻找某人
16.face flushed with embarrassment 满脸通红，面露尴尬
17.a surge of warmth and pride 一股温暖与自豪涌上心头
18.grin from ear to ear 笑得合不拢嘴
19.eyes twinkling with admiration 眼睛因敬佩闪闪发亮
Step 7 英语检测版
a surge of warmth and pride
fasten...to...
arrive on the scene
eyes twinkling with admiration
take hold of
gather courage
curious onlookers
a stone had been lifted from my heart
heart pounding wildly
erupt in applause
feel more secure
detailed the chaotic scene
grin from ear to ear
childhood experience with cattle
work on locating sb
inch forward
give sb a thumbs-up
wild eyes softening
face flushed with embarrassment
Step 8汉语检测版
心里的石头落了地
向某人竖起大拇指
感到更安心
爆发出掌声
把…… 拴在…… 上
眼睛因敬佩闪闪发亮
一股温暖与自豪涌上心头
抓住，握住
狂躁的眼神变得柔和
与牲畜相处的童年经历
心怦怦狂跳
赶到现场
笑得合不拢嘴
一点点向前挪动
鼓起勇气
描述混乱的场景
着手寻找某人
好奇的围观者
满脸通红，面露尴尬
Step 9 你的续写Step 1 关键词提取（修正版）
名词 cow, rope, crowd, onlookers, owner, crisis, policemen等
动词 drive, approach, frighten, catch, charge, tie, discuss 等
形容词、副词： wild-eyed, crazy, heavily, fearlessly, narrowly 等
主旨句 my daughter, aged nine, believed that her papa was equal to any crisis
Step 2 情节设计
Par.1 As I was about to turn and run, two policemen arrived.
1. 警察赶到，我说明情况与童年经验
2. 警察疏散人群，我慢慢靠近抓住绳子
3. 众人鼓掌，我们把牛拴到树上
Par.2 We tied the rope around the tree and began to discuss what to do with the cow.
1. 我安抚牛，警察联系主人
2. 牛主人赶到，道歉致谢
3. 女儿敬佩，感悟成长
Step 3 范文挖空（正确选项）
D A C B E
Step 4 根据提示补全
Par.1
Just as I was about to turn and run, two police officers arrived on the scene.
Relieved and feeling more secure, I approached them, described the chaotic scene and mentioned my childhood experience with cattle.Seeing the cow was still terrified, the police guided the curious onlookers to step back.A moment later, the bony cow seemed to grow less scared with her wild eyes softening.Gathering courage, I inched forward with my heart pounding wildly and whispered softly to the cow like I used to do with the farm animals.One step, two steps…, eventually, I managed to get close enough to take hold of the rope around her neck.I heaved a heavy sigh, feeling as if a weight had been lifted from my heart.The crowd erupted in applause, and the police gave me a thumbs-up.Without delay, we fastened her to a nearby tree together.
Par.2
After we managed to secure the cow to the tree, we began to discuss what to do with her.
I offered to gather some grass to keep her calm while the officers worked on locating her owner.Half an hour later, the owner of the lost cow arrived, who apologized for the trouble caused by his carelessness with his face flushed with embarrassment and thanked us repeatedly.After he led the cow away, the officer extended his hand to me.
“We’d have had a much harder time without your help.” one of them said.
A surge of warmth and pride washed over me.When picking up Emma from her swimming lesson, I related the story to her.She grinned from ear to ear with eyes twinkling with admiration, throwing her arms around me.“You really did it, Dad—you saved her!” she beamed.The adventure turned a regular Saturday into a truly meaningful experience.
Step 6 高分表达积累
arrive on the scene 赶到现场
feel more secure 感到更安心
describe the chaotic scene 描述混乱的场面
childhood experience with cattle 与牲畜相处的童年经历
curious onlookers 好奇的围观者
wild eyes softening 狂躁的眼神变得柔和
gather courage 鼓起勇气
inch forward 一点点向前挪动
heart pounding wildly 心怦怦狂跳
take hold of 抓住
a weight had been lifted from my heart 心里的石头落了地
erupt in applause 爆发出掌声
give sb a thumbs-up 向某人竖起大拇指
fasten…to… 把…… 拴在……
work on locating sb 着手寻找某人
face flushed with embarrassment 尴尬得满脸通红
a surge of warmth and pride 一股温暖与自豪涌上心头
grin from ear to ear 笑得合不拢嘴
eyes twinkling with admiration 眼里闪烁着敬佩
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