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(共22张PPT)
unit 2 Travelling Around
Reading For Writing
Learning Objectives(学习目标)
At the end of this class, you will be able to:
1. study the structure and language features of the
email about a travel plan.
2. know how to use proper words and phrases to
express emotion.
3. apply what you have learned in class to writing a
travel plan of your own.
Lead in
Lead in: The mind map about a trip
While drawing the mind map , what factors(因素) did you consider
Write to a friend about a travel plan
Reading
for structure and language features
Dear Xiao Li，
My time here in China is going well. I love my new school and classmates. Over the October holiday, my parents and I are planning to go to Xi’an to see the Terracotta Army. I’ve heard that it is an amazing sight, and I can’t wait to go. To me, the story of the Terracotta Army is almost unbelievable. It’s amazing that there are more than 8,000 statues, and no one in modern times knew about them until the 1970s.
sentence structures(重点句型)：
I've heard that...is an amazing sight ...
To me, ... is almost unbelievable.
It’s amazing that ..., and ... .
1.address, recent situation
2.travel plan:time, where, with whom
3.the reasons for the travel
Para.1: main purpose for the trip
We’re also planning to visit several other places in Xi’an. My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum，because my dad loves history and I have heard that this museum is known as a “Chinese treasure house”! We’re also going to the Xi’an City Wall and a few other famous sights.
several other plans: plan 1, reason, plan2
the present continuous tense(现在进行时） 用现在进行时表将来
1
Para.2: other plans for the trip
Sentence structures: 1. We are planning to visit...
重点句型 2. We are also going to....
We’re taking the train, leaving the day before the October holiday begins. We’re arriving at 9:30 a.m. and will start sightseeing right away, so I hope we sleep well on the train!
Para.3:transport(leaving and arriving time)
Sentence structures: 1. We are taking the train, leaving....
2. We are arriving at.... and will start ....
1.transportation
2.time of departure(离开) and arrival(到达)
the present continuous tense(现在进行时） 用现在进行时表将来
现在进行时表示计划或安排好要采取的行动或要做的事情，多用表位移的动词(短语)，如arrive,come,leave,return ,start,travel, take off ,fly,see off,set off 等。
例如：
1.We_______________ (leave) for Hangzhou this afternoon.
2.I _____________(start) at 3 p.m.
3.The train ___________(come).
也可用于某些非位移动词(短语)
1.下星期天你打算干什么。
What ______________ (do) next Sunday
2.等一下，我马上就要吃完饭了。
Wait a minute; I ____________(finish) my supper.
are leaving
am starting
is coming
are you doing
am finishing
I guess that’s all for now! I’ll write again soon and send photos! Do you have any plans for the coming holiday Hope to hear from you soon.
Your friend，
Richard
1.conclusion
2.ask for the receiver's travel plan
3.express the hope
4.signature
Para.4:final thoughts
para 1
para 2
para 3
email
main purpose for the trip
other plans for the trip
transport
structure of the email
para 4
final thoughts
para 1
para 2
para 3
email
beginning
body
ending
structure of the email
Writing a travel plan
假定你是小李，元旦你和家人要去海南岛旅游，
请你给Richard写一封回信，告诉他你的安排。
目的地 海南三亚
时间 1月1日------1月3日
活动 岛上远足，沙滩散步，海上
冲浪,看日出日落
Practice
交通/食宿 飞机，网上预订宾馆
感想 增长知识，放松心情
人称：第一人称
时态：将来时
主题：告诉Richard关于自己的旅行计划
体裁：应用文--回信
要点：
1.来信的评价和反馈，写信目的
2.具体旅游计划
3.体会和期盼
假定你是小李，元旦你和家人要去海南岛旅游，请你给Richard写一封回信，告诉他你的安排。
目的地 海南三亚
时间 1月1日------1月3日
活动 岛上远足，沙滩散步，海上冲浪，看日出日落
Discuss in groups for an outline
交通/食宿 飞机，网上预订宾馆
感想 增长知识，放松心情
1.Your comments on Richard's email and travel plan;I'm verypleased/delightedto learn that you...Thank you for sharing...2. Your purpose of writingI'm writing to tell ...素材准备3. Your plan，reason andactivitiesI'm planning to go/ travel /visit /see... with...I can't wait to go/see...It's said that...I've heard/I've been told that it is ...I’d like to ...first, and then ......is my favourite, besides , I also want to ...other than..., ... is also what I am lookingforward to.4. TransportWe're leaving for /going to... by train/bus/air...We're flying/driving to...We're leaving at ...We're returning home ...5. Final thoughtsI hope that we have a wonderful/amazing time.Travel cannot only...but also....Lookingforward to .... Exchange drafts. Assess each other's
work according to the checklist.
Is there a clear purpose for the trip
Does each paragraph have a clear main idea
Does the writer use the present continuous tense for future plans
Does the writer use commas, stops, and question marks correctly
Are all the words spelt correctly
Are all the proper nouns capitalised
Revise(修改) your draft according to your partner’s commentsDear Richard,Thank you for your letter about your trip in Xi'an,which is amazing.I am writing to tell you something about my travel plans for the coming holidays.(Comments and purpose of writing)With the New Year coming,my parents and Iareplanning to travel toSanya,to enjoy its beautiful scenery .I hear that it is a world-famous tourist city, which is well worth a visit. It’s amazing to enjoy its beautifulsights, white sandy beaches and pleasant weather.I can't wait to go.(Travel purpose, time and reasons)Weare leavingon the New Year’s Eve by plane and will spend three days there .We’restaying ata hotelby the sea, which has beenbooked online in advance.On arrival atthe hotel, wewill startsightseeing right away. (Transport arrangements)Other thanhiking on the island, weare also planningto takemanyotheractivities like walking on the beach,surfing in the sea,watching the sunrise and sunset and so on.(Activities)I am sure we will have a wonderful holiday.In my opinion, travel cannot onlymake me relaxed,but alsowiden my eyes.Lookingforward to your early reply.Yours,Xiao Li

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