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Section Ⅴ　Writing
如何写故事评论
UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE
本单元的写作任务是根据课文故事写一篇短评。写作时需要注意以下几点：
1．简要介绍故事发生的时间、地点、人物；故事发生的起因、经过、结果；
2．对故事中的人物进行评论；
3．最后阐述你对这个故事的感受。
1．adaptation n.　　　　　 改编本；改写本
2．drama n. 戏剧
3．masterpiece n. 代表作
4．literature n. 文学
5．fiction n. 小说
6．background n. 背景
7．character n. 角色；人物
8．share a classic book 分享经典书籍
9．exchange our views 交换我们的观点
10．gain a lot from the reading activity 从阅读活动中获益良多
11．talk about his or her life and works 谈谈他/她的生活和作品
12．enrich our everyday life 丰富我们的日常生活
13．have a book salon 举办书友会
14．broaden our horizons 开阔我们的眼界
15．share reading experience 分享阅读经验
1．I think the book is well worth reading as it carries the main idea that justice can always beat evil.
我认为这本书很值得一读，因为它的主要思想是正义总是可以战胜邪恶。
2．It is one of my favorite novels，published in 1903.
这是我最喜欢的小说之一，出版于1903年。
3．Maybe the report should be objective but I have to say this story touches my heart deeply.
也许这份报告应该是客观的，但我不得不说，这个故事深深地触动了我的心。
4．Reading Jane Eyre is a process full of pleasure and motivation.
阅读《简·爱》是一个充满快乐和动力的过程。
5．It is a good choice to read The Sun Also Rises.
读《太阳照常升起》是一个很好的选择。
6．He thinks to read the original works is better than to see the films based on them.
他认为读原著总比看根据原著改编的电影要好。
请根据下面的提示写一篇故事短评。词数80左右。
1．欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们一起登上了名字为“坚忍”号的大船。途中“坚忍”号被冰困住了，大家弃船后逃到了象岛。沙克尔顿乘小船去寻求帮助。最后，尽管困难重重，但船员们还是都活了下来。
2．故事中船员之间真诚的关心和爱以及他们在困难面前的忍耐力和毅力使我深受鼓舞。
3．从这个故事中我领悟到一个道理：无论遇到任何困难，都不要放弃！
Step 1　审题谋篇
[审题]
写作要求是根据本单元的课文故事写一篇短评。写作时应注意以下几点：
1．确定文体：故事短评。
2．时态：介绍故事以一般过去时为主，谈感受以一般现在时为主。
3．人称：由于是短评，所以介绍故事时应该以第三人称为主，谈感受时应该以第一人称为主。
[谋篇]
第一段：介绍背景。
第二段：简要介绍这个故事。
第三段：表达自己对这个故事的感受。
Step 2　词汇运用
1．上船
2．在途中
3．被……困住
go aboard
on the way
be/become stuck in
4．沉入
5．放弃；抛弃
6．逃跑
Step 3　句式表达
1．完成句子
①欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们登上了名字为“坚忍”号的轮船。(aboard)
Ernest Shackleton and his crew whose name was Endurance.
sink into
abandon
escape
went aboard the ship
②不幸的是，去南极的途中，“坚忍”号被冰块困住，沉入了大洋中。(unfortunately；be/become stuck in；sink into)
，on the way to Antarctica，Endurance
the ice and ．
③在放弃那艘船后，他们逃到了象岛上。(abandon)
After they had abandoned the ship， Elephant Island.
2．句式升级
④用非谓语动词改写句①。
Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship ．
Unfortunately
became stuck in
sank into the ocean
they escaped to
named Endurance
⑤用非谓语动词改写句②。
Unfortunately，on the way to Antarctica，Endurance became stuck in the ice， ．
⑥用非谓语动词改写句③。
, they escaped to Elephant Island.
sinking into the ocean
Having abandoned the ship
Step 4　连句成篇
One possible version：
This story is about a great expedition in history.
Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship named Endurance. Unfortunately，on the way to Antarctica, Endurance became stuck in the ice，sinking into the ocean. Having abandoned the ship，they escaped to Elephant Island. Shackleton left them to find help. The crew were able to survive in spite of so many difficulties.
I'm deeply moved by the genuine concern and love between them and I'm also inspired by their endurance and perseverance in face of difficulties. In a word，I have learned an important lesson from the inspiring story. That is，whatever difficulties we meet，never give up.
动作描写之“嘴部动作”
[词汇积累]
名词 lip
动词(短语) cover，water，widen，bite，chew，hang open，drop open
形容词 open-mouthed
[词块必记]
1．open-mouthed目瞪口呆的
2．widen one's mouth 咧开嘴
3．cup/cover one's mouth捂住某人的嘴
4．one's mouth drops/hangs wide open张大嘴巴
5．one's heart in one's mouth 提心吊胆
[佳句背诵]
1．He covered his mouth to hide his yawn.
他捂住嘴偷偷打了个哈欠。
2．He straightened up and looked at me，open-mouthed.
他直起身，目瞪口呆地看着我。
3．She froze，with mouth hanging open.
她呆住了，嘴张开着。
4．My mouth started watering when I smelled the food.
闻到食物的香味，我开始流口水了。
5．My heart was in my mouth when I walked into her office.
我走进她的办公室时，心都提到了嗓子眼儿。
[完成句子]
1．闻到三明治的香味，饥饿的小女孩开始流口水了。
when she smelled the sandwich. (mouth作主语)
2．她刚要拿起三明治咬一口，突然一只手捂住了她的嘴。
She was about to pick up the sandwich and take a bite ．
The hungry girl's mouth started watering
when suddenly a hand cupped/covered her mouth
3．她的哥哥一把抢走了她的三明治放入自己口中。
It was her brother who grabbed her sandwich and ．
4．她抬起头，目瞪口呆地看着他。
She looked up at him， ．
5．三明治没了，当泪水顺着脸颊流下来时，她咬住她的下嘴唇以免嘴唇发抖。
With the sandwich gone，she as tears ran down her cheeks.
put it into his own mouth
open-mouthed
bit her lower lip to keep it from trembling

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