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8下译林版unit1作文专练
beautiful countryside
题目一（邀请函）
题目： 你的家乡在一个美丽的乡村。暑假将至，你想邀请你的好朋友李明来你家做客，体验乡村生活。请你给他写一封邀请函，内容包括：
1. 描述你的家乡乡村的美丽之处（至少两个特点，如青山绿水、新鲜的空气、田野风光等）；
2. 介绍你们可以一起做的有趣活动（如摘水果、钓鱼、爬山、看日出等）；
3. 说明来访的时间和交通方式，并表达你的期待。
教师思路精讲
这是一封邀请朋友来乡村做客的邀请函，语气要热情、亲切、有画面感。教师应引导学生用五感描写乡村的美——眼睛看到的（绿色的稻田、野花）、鼻子闻到的（泥土香、花香）、耳朵听到的（鸟鸣、溪水声）。活动要符合乡村特色，具体有趣。交通方式要简单明了（如坐公交车到镇上，我去接你）。结尾要表达强烈期待。结构：第一段热情邀请并总体介绍乡村之美；第二段具体描写美景和活动；第三段告知时间、交通并再次表达期待。
写作要点分析
1. 邀请函格式：称呼（Dear Li Ming）、正文、结尾（Yours sincerely / Your friend）、署名。语气亲切自然。
2. 描写生动：使用形容词（fresh, green, quiet, peaceful）和比喻（like a painting）。可运用感官描写。
3. 三个要点：①乡村美丽之处（至少两个特点）；②可以做的活动；③时间、交通及期待。注意活动要与乡村场景匹配。
重要句型和词组
· I am writing to invite you to my hometown in the countryside.
· My village is really beautiful. You can see... (green hills, clear rivers)
· The air is fresh, and the sky is blue. It is a perfect place to relax.
· We can do many interesting things together, such as... (picking fruits, fishing)
· I promise you will have a great time here.
· Please come on... (date). You can take Bus No. ... and I will meet you at the station.
· I am really looking forward to your visit.
高分范文
Dear Li Ming,
I am writing to invite you to my hometown in the countryside this summer vacation. I know you love nature, and my village is the perfect place for you.
My village is really beautiful. Around us are green hills covered with trees. A clear river runs through the fields, and you can see fish swimming in it. The air is so fresh that you will forget the noise of the city. We can do many fun things together: pick juicy peaches in my grandpa’s orchard, catch small fish by the river, or climb the hill to watch the sunrise. In the evening, we can sit in the yard and count the stars.
Please come on July 15th. You can take Bus No. 302 to the town, and I will ride my bike to pick you up. I promise you will have an unforgettable time. I am really looking forward to your visit!
Your friend,
Zhang Wei
题目二（倡议书）
题目： 你发现学校附近有一个美丽的乡村，但最近因为游客乱扔垃圾，环境受到了破坏。请你以学生会名义写一份倡议书，号召同学们去乡村游玩时要保护环境，并主动参与乡村清洁活动。内容包括：
1. 描述这个乡村的美丽景色（如金黄的稻田、安静的小路、古老的石桥等）；
2. 指出人们的一些不当行为如何改变了乡村的美丽（如乱扔塑料瓶、踩踏庄稼、在石墙上涂鸦等）；
3. 提出三项具体行动建议，呼吁同学们做“乡村守护者”（如自带垃圾袋、不摘花不踩苗、每月一次清洁志愿活动等）。
教师思路精讲
这是一份倡议书，既有对乡村之美的赞美，又有对破坏行为的批评，最后落脚到行动号召。教师应引导学生先描绘乡村之美，让读者心生向往；然后转折，用“But sadly...”引出人类行为如何破坏了这份美丽；最后提出具体、可行的保护措施。语气要诚恳、有感染力，不要过于指责，而是用“我们可以做得更好”的态度。行动建议要贴近学生能力，如“随手捡起垃圾”“劝阻不文明行为”等。
写作要点分析
1. 倡议书格式：标题（如“Proposal: Protect Our Beautiful Countryside”）、称呼（Dear fellow students）、正文、署名和日期。
2. 对比手法：先美后伤，形成情感落差，激发保护欲望。使用“used to be beautiful”或“is still beautiful, but...”等结构。
3. 三个要点：①乡村的美丽景色；②人类行为如何改变/破坏这份美丽（至少两个例子）；③三项行动建议。注意第二个要点不要过于负面，重点在“我们可以改变”。
重要句型和词组
· Dear fellow students, have you ever visited the beautiful countryside near our school
· The fields are golden with rice, and the old stone bridge stands quietly over the stream.
· It is a lovely place, but sadly, some human actions are changing it.
· People leave plastic bottles and snack bags everywhere. Some even draw on the ancient bridge.
· These behaviors harm the beauty of the countryside.
· We need to take action. Here are three things we can do:
· First, always bring your own trash bag and take everything back.
· Second, don’t pick flowers or step on the crops.
· Finally, join our monthly clean-up activity on the first Saturday of each month.
· Let’s work together to keep the countryside beautiful for everyone.
高分范文
Proposal: Protect Our Beautiful Countryside
Dear fellow students,
Have you ever walked through the beautiful countryside near our school Golden rice fields wave in the wind, and a small stream runs beside an old stone bridge. Wildflowers bloom along the paths, and birds sing from the trees. It is like a living painting.
But sadly, some human actions are changing this beauty. You can see plastic bottles and chip bags lying on the grass. Some visitors pick the wildflowers or step on young crops. A few have even written their names on the ancient bridge with markers. These small acts add up and hurt the countryside we love.
We need to take action right now. First, always bring a reusable bag and take your rubbish home. Second, stay on the paths and never pick flowers or damage plants. Third, join our “Countryside Guardians” club — we clean up the village on the first Saturday of each month. Let’s be the ones who protect the countryside, not the ones who destroy it. Together, we can keep this beauty alive forever.
Student Council
April 23, 2026

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