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8下译林版unit3作文专练
online travel
题目一（书信）
题目： 你的朋友 Mike 因为课业繁忙，很久没有出门旅行，感到很疲惫。请你给他写一封信，向他推荐“在线旅行”这种新的旅行方式，帮助他放松心情、开阔眼界。信中需要：
1. 解释什么是“在线旅行”（例如通过网站、视频、VR技术参观世界景点）；
2. 介绍两个可以通过在线旅行“到达”的地方（如卢浮宫、大峡谷、长城等），并说明其看点；
3. 推荐一个具体的在线旅行资源（如 Google 艺术与文化网站、故宫博物院全景游览等），并鼓励他尝试。
教师思路精讲
这是一封给朋友的建议信，语气要温暖、体贴，同时介绍一种新颖有趣的方式。教师应引导学生先共情（理解朋友累、没时间出门），然后自然引出“在线旅行”的概念。用简单易懂的语言解释（例如：不用买机票，打开电脑就能看世界）。推荐两个著名景点，描述其视觉魅力，最后给出一个具体、易操作的资源（如“搜索‘故宫全景’就能进去逛”）。结构：第一段表示理解并引出话题；第二段介绍在线旅行的方式和两个例子；第三段推荐具体资源并鼓励尝试。
写作要点分析
1. 书信格式：称呼（Dear Mike）、正文、结尾（Yours sincerely / Your friend）、署名。
2. 解释清晰：用初二学生能懂的词汇解释“online travel”，可对比传统旅行（不用花钱、不花时间）。
3. 三个要点：①在线旅行的定义和好处；②两个景点及其看点；③一个具体资源及鼓励尝试。
重要句型和词组
· I know you are very busy with schoolwork and have no time to travel. Let me tell you about a new way to “travel” — online travel.
· Online travel means you use the Internet to visit places around the world without leaving your home.
· You can see famous places like... and... through videos or 360-degree photos.
· For example, you can “walk” into the Louvre Museum and see the Mona Lisa up close.
· Another amazing place is the Great Wall. You can feel like you are standing on it.
· I suggest you try... (website name). Just search for it and start exploring.
· It is free, easy, and really fun. I hope you will give it a try!
高分范文
Dear Mike,
I know you have been feeling tired because of all the homework and exams. You said you want to travel but have no time or money. Well, let me tell you about a new way to “travel” — online travel.
Online travel means you can visit amazing places around the world using your computer or phone. You don’t need a plane ticket or a hotel. For example, you can “walk” through the Louvre Museum in Paris and see the Mona Lisa as if you were standing in front of it. You can also explore the Grand Canyon in the US by watching 360-degree videos. The views are so real that you will feel the wind on your face.
I strongly recommend you try the “Google Arts & Culture” website. It has virtual tours of thousands of museums and natural wonders. Just type it in your browser and start exploring. It is free, relaxing, and you will learn a lot. Give it a try when you finish your homework tonight. I think you will love it!
Your friend,
Li Hua
题目二（倡议书）
题目： 学校学生会计划推广“在线旅行”活动，鼓励同学们利用课余时间，通过网络了解中国和世界的文化遗产。请你以学生会名义写一份倡议书，内容包括：
1. 说明什么是在线旅行，以及它相比真实旅行的三个优点（省钱、省时、足不出户看世界）；
2. 推荐两个适合在线旅行的中国文化景点（如敦煌莫高窟、故宫、黄山等），并简要介绍其特色；
3. 提出三项具体行动建议（如：每周进行一次30分钟的在线旅行并写观后感、和同学分享最精彩的虚拟景点、参加学校“在线旅行小导游”比赛等）。
教师思路精讲
这是一份倡议书，旨在激发同学们对在线旅行的兴趣，并引导他们合理利用网络资源。教师应引导学生先点出传统旅行的门槛（花费高、耗时长、受天气影响），然后自然过渡到在线旅行的三大优势。推荐的文化景点要选择那些有丰富虚拟资源的（如故宫有全景故宫网站）。行动建议要具体、可操作，最好有分享和竞赛的元素，增加趣味性。语气要积极、有号召力，结尾要有力。
写作要点分析
1. 倡议书格式：标题（如“Proposal: Explore the World Through Online Travel”）、称呼（Dear fellow students）、正文、署名和日期。
2. 对比说服：用对比手法突出在线旅行的优势（不用花钱 vs 机票贵；随时开始 vs 等假期；在家 vs 累）。
3. 三个要点：①在线旅行的定义及三个优点；②两个中国文化景点及其特色；③三项行动建议。注意行动建议要可量化、有时限。
重要句型和词组
· Dear fellow students, have you ever dreamed of visiting faraway places but couldn’t because of time or money
· Now there is a solution: online travel. It means using the Internet to see real places through videos, photos, and VR.
· Compared to real travel, online travel has three big advantages: it is cheap (mostly free), it saves time (no long flights), and you can do it from your room any time.
· For example, you can visit the Dunhuang Mogao Caves online and see the ancient Buddhist paintings.
· Another great place is the Forbidden City. Its official website has a 360-degree tour of every hall.
· Here are three actions we suggest: First, spend 30 minutes each week on an online tour and write down three things you learned.
· Second, share your favorite virtual place with a classmate.
· Third, join our “Online Travel Guide” speech contest next month.
· Let’s start our online journeys today. The world is just a click away!
高分范文
Proposal: Explore the World Through Online Travel
Dear fellow students,
Have you ever wanted to see the pyramids of Egypt or walk on the Great Wall, but had no time or money Now there is a great solution: online travel. Online travel means you use the Internet to visit real places through 360-degree photos, videos, and virtual reality. Compared to real travel, it has three advantages: it is mostly free, it takes no travel time, and you can do it from your bedroom any day of the week.
China has many amazing places you can explore online. For example, the Dunhuang Mogao Caves have a wonderful virtual tour. You can see the colorful Buddhist paintings on the cave walls, zoom in to see every detail. Another is the Forbidden City in Beijing. Its official website lets you “walk” through each hall and even shows you the emperor’s bedroom.
Here are three actions we suggest: First, spend 30 minutes every weekend on an online tour and write down two interesting facts. Second, share your favorite virtual spot with a friend and discuss it. Third, join our school’s “Online Travel Guide” contest next month — you can give a two-minute speech about a place you visited online. Let’s start our journeys today. The world is just a click away!
Student Council
April 23, 2026

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