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Unit 4: The Wonders of Nature
Section B 3a-3c Writing
Ready to explore Let's start!
Warm-up: Look and Discuss
Which place would you like to visit most Why
The amazing
snow-capped mountains
The breathtaking
waterfalls
The powerful
ocean
Share your ideas with your partner now!
Have you heard of this place Where is it
Great Barrier Reef
This is the Great Barrier Reef in Australia.
One of the most famous natural wonders in the world.
It's an amazing underwater world full of life.
Let's dive into the beauty of nature together!
Animals and plants living in the ocean (e.g., turtles).
below the surface of water.
Underwater
A colorful structure made of corals under the sea.
Coral Reef
Swimming underwater with a mask and breathing tube.
Pre-reading: Vocabulary Preview
When we dive into the ocean, what will we see
Life
Snorkel
Pre-reading: Let's Predict!
Look at the title "The Great Barrier Reef:
An Amazing Underwater World" and share your ideas.
Brainstorming: What should a travel ad include
最佳游览时节
Name and location
名称与位置
Main features and highlights
主要特色与亮点
Activities and experiences
活动与体验
Size and scale of the site
景点规模与面积
Best time or season to visit
联系方式与预订须知
Facilities and services
设施与服务
Cultural, historical, or scientific information
文化、历史及科普相关信息
Environmental protection tips
环保提示
Contact information and booking details
宣传语与邀请语
Slogans or invitation messages
While-reading: Skimming for Main Idea
Task: Match the title and paragraph main ideas.
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
Invitation to visit
Location and special facts.
Things to do and final invitation.
While-reading: Scanning for Details
Task: Read the passage again and complete the notes by filling in the blanks.
The Great Barrier Reef Details (Fill in the blanks)
Paragraph 1 (Call to visit) Do you love the _______ Do you want to visit one of the natural _______ of the world If so, visit the Great __________!
ocean
wonders
Barrier Reef
The Great Barrier Reef Details (Fill in the blanks)
Paragraph 2 Location:Located on the ___________ coast of Australia, it is one of the most amazing places to visit. It is the _________ ____ coral reef in the world.
Special facts:It takes up an area of __________ square kilometres and includes many___________ and __________________.
Paragraph 3 (& ) Things to do: If you visit it, you will see________________________________,and you can _________________ and see__________________________________.And you might even see____________________.
Final invitation:For people who love __________________, visiting the Great Barrier Reef is _____________________!
northeastern
biggest
islands
345,000
white sand beaches
the largest living structure
swim or dive
coral, plants, and colourful fish
large fish, turtles, and sharks
the ocean
the dream of a lifetime
1. The Great Barrier Reef is in Europe.
While-reading: True or False
2. People can see many kinds of fish there.
3. It is famous for its mountains.
4. Snorkeling is a popular activity at the Reef.
Correction: It's in Australia.
Correction: Famous for coral reefs and marine life.
Post-reading: Analyzing the Text
Key Focus: What makes the Great Barrier Reef amazing
2. Descriptive Words
amazing, biggest, largest, clear, colourful
3. Activities
swim, dive, snorkel, see marine life
1. Writer's Purpose
To introduce the Great Barrier Reef and attract tourists.
Language Features of the Advertisement
Fill in the table to analyze the language features used in the text.
Expression Type Example from the text
Do you love the ocean
Do you want to visit one of the natural wonders of the world
If so, visit the Great Barrier Reef!
For people who love the ocean, visiting the Great Barrier Reef is the dream of a lifetime!
one of the most amazing places to visit
the biggest coral reef in the world,
the largest living structure on earth
clear water
white sand beaches
colourful fish
Interactive (互动)
Persuasive (说服)
Comparative (比较)
Sensory (感官)
Language Focus 2: be famous for
Meaning
To be well known for something. (因...而著名)
Example
The Great Barrier Reef is famous for its beautiful coral reefs.
Practice"Paris is famous for the Eiffel Tower. What is your city famous for "
The Eiffel Tower, Paris
Writing Task: Introduction
Your Turn to Write!
Now, you are a travel writer! Your task is to write a travel advertisement.
Focus on: Qinghai Lake (China).
Qinghai Lake - A Natural Wonder
Pre-writing: Brainstorming - Qinghai Lake
What do you know about Qinghai Lake Let's list the key facts!
Look at the pictures of Qinghai Lake and discuss what makes it special with your partner.
1. Observe and Discuss
Pre-writing: Brainstorming - Qinghai Lake
What do you know about Qinghai Lake Let's list the key facts!
2. Title Ideas
Read the instructions for activity 3b and think about the unique features of Qinghai Lake.
How can we show this in a title
Here are some examples :
The Qinghai Lake: China's Largest Salt Lake
The Qinghai Lake: A Haven for Birds
The Qinghai Lake: A Blue Pearl on the Plateau
Pre-writing: Why visit Qinghai Lake
What can people see and do there
Scenery
See beautiful views: blue water, golden rapeseed flowers, and snow-capped mountains.
Wildlife
Photograph amazing wildlife such as birds and fish in their natural habitat.
Activity
Ride a bike or horse around the lake and enjoy the fresh air and freedom.
Discover the beauty of Qinghai Lake
Pre-writing: Sentence Rewriting
Let's write better sentences! (Rewrite the notes about Qinghai Lake)
3. Complete the sentences
1. Qinghai Lake is a __________ in __________, China.
2. It is the __________ in China.
3. It is __________ in size.
4. If you visit Qinghai Lake, you can __________.
Qinghai Lake
Do you love beautiful lakes Do you want to visit one of the amazing natural wonders in China If so, visit Qinghai Lake.
Located in the northeast of the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau, Qinghai Lake is one of the most wonderful places to visit. It is the largest inland saltwater lake in China. It takes up an area of about 4,635 square kilometers, and is surrounded by vast grasslands and snow-capped mountains.
Qinghai Lake is full of beauty and life. If you visit it, you will enjoy the most charming natural scenery on the plateau. Here, you can walk on the soft grasslands, take photos of the blue lake water, and watch lovely birds and yaks. For people who love beautiful nature, visiting Qinghai Lake is a dream of a lifetime.
Pre-writing: Writing Structure
4. How to structure your advertisement effectively
1. Title
grab attention!
"Come and See the Blue Pearl of Qinghai!"
2. Opening
Ask a question to interest readers.
"Do you want to escape the noisy city "
3. Body
Describe location, facts & activities.
（ Use key language points!）
"Located in ..., it has beautiful scenery... You can ride bikes..."
4. Closing
Call for action! Encourage people to visit now.
"Don't miss it! Come now!"
Peer Review: Let's check our work!
Writing Evaluation Rubric
Aspect Criteria Score (1-5)
_______
_______
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Structure and title
Include clear and attractive title;
Key information
Use accurate numbers about location, size, etc.;
Language skill
Ask engaging questions;
Advertising impact
Make people want to visit;
Include necessary elements of ads.
Introduce special facts.
Use second person (you/your);
Use proper adjectives/adverbs;
Use correct comparatives and superlatives.
Use effective promotional tone.
Writing Practice: Start Writing!
Now, use the information and structure we've discussed to
write your own travel advertisement for Qinghai Lake.
Requirements
Use at least 2 language points (e.g., amazing, famous for...)
Time Limit
You have 15 minutes to finish.
Include Title, Opening, Body & Closing
Focus on structure and key phrases first.
Showcasing Excellent Work: A Model Essay
Do you want to leave the noisy city and enjoy the beauty of nature Come to Qinghai Lake!
Qinghai Lake is in Qinghai Province, China. It is our country's largest saltwater lake. The water is amazingly blue and the scenery is beautiful all year round.It is a great place to take photos of wildlife and ride a bike around the lake.
Don't miss this wonderful place! Your amazing journey starts here!
Come and see Qinghai Lake!

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