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高中英语读后续写高频高分句式(上)
Ⅰ情绪描写高频高分句式
情绪爆发
句式1:A wave/urge/sense of +情感名词 + seized/overwhelmed/took hold of/washed over/flooded over/swept over/flowed over/came over /crept upon/welled up in sb.
g.(2020年新高考Ⅰ卷)A wave of horror swept over me, and I was unable to move an inch. (一阵恐惧感席卷了我,我一动也不能动。)
The tension eased, and a sense of pride flooded over me. (紧张情绪有所缓解,一种自豪感涌上心头。)
变式1:sb. felt a great sense of + 情绪名词+ welling up in one's heart and surging through sb.某人感到一股强烈的......感觉在内心升腾、奔涌
E.g. (2025年1月浙江首考)Kevin felt a complex sense of guilt welling up in his heart and surging through him.(Kevin感到一种种复杂的内疚感涌上心头。)
Jane felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her.(Jane感到一股强烈的恐惧,在她心中升腾,奔涌。)
变式2:sb. was/were seized/overwhelmed/overcome/flooded with/by a great sense of + 情绪名词
再变:the sight/thought of sth. filled/overwhelmed sb. with +情感名词
E.g.(2020新高考Ⅰ卷)He was seized by panic and screamed loudly in fright. (他惊慌失措,惊恐地大声尖叫。)
The thought of working nights filled me with hopeless horror. (一想到要夜间工作我就觉得惨兮兮的。)
变式3:以上3个句式均可在句首或句尾加上状语(非谓语、介词短语、从句等),表示情绪的起因、结果、程度、条件等。
E.g.(2025八省联考卷)A wave of panic swept over me as I noticed a sea of bikers, all wearing insignia.(当我注意到一大群骑自行车的人都戴着徽章时,一阵恐慌席卷了我。)
Seeing the lion heading to her, Jane felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her.(看到狮子朝自己走来,Sunny感到一股强烈的恐惧在内心升腾,奔涌。)
身体部位展现情感
句式1:A(n)look/expression of +情感名词 + flashed through/spread across/crossed one's+身体部位
E.g.The expression of merriment on the girl's face flashed through my mind, urging me to ride faster.(女孩脸上喜悦的表情一直闪过我的脑海,催促我骑得更快。)
When they heard they were going to go camping, the look of excitement spread across their faces, and then they packed their backpacks with essentials. (一听说他们要去露营,他们脸上满是兴奋的表情,随后他们把必需品装进背包。)
句式2:one’s 身体部位 + trembled/shook/quivered/twitched + with + 情感名词
E.g.(2020新高考Ⅰ卷)My legs trembled and my palms sweated with great horror.(我惊恐不已,我觉得两腿发抖,手心冒汗。)
His hands trembled with anger as he listened to the unfair decision.(当他听到这个不公平的决定时,他的双手因愤怒而颤抖。)
句式3:one’s 身体部位 + burned/flushed/reddened + with + 情感名词
E.g.Her cheeks flushed with embarrassment when she realized her mistake.(当她意识到自己的错误时,她的脸颊因尴尬而泛红。)
句式4:one's heart pounded/thumped/raced/beat wildly(heavily)with +表情感的名词
E.g.Lotus' heart pounded with guilt, and tears sprang to her eyes. (Lotus的心因内疚而怦怦直跳,泪水夺眶而出。)
On hearing the news that he won the final, his heart thumped with excitement and joy. (听到他赢下决赛的消息,他的心因激动和喜悦而怦怦猛跳。)
句式5:one's face lit up/brightened up when
E.g.His face lit up when he saw me and he gave me an engaging smile. (当他看到我时,他的脸亮了起来,给了我一个迷人的微笑。
Her face brightened up when I gave her the long - prepared present. (当我把准备已久的礼物送给她时,她的脸上露出了笑容。)
句式6: (表高兴、激动的)情感名词 + was shining/twinkling/sparkling in one's eyes
E.g. (2020新高考Ⅰ卷)A wave of merriment was sparkling in their eyes as they left for Bernard's house to share with Bernard the good plan.(当他们前往伯纳德家告诉他这个好计划的时候,他们的眼中不禁闪烁着喜悦的光芒。)
While the old man enjoyed the beauty of the day, satisfaction was twinkling in his eyes. (当老人享受着这美好的一天时,他眼中闪烁着满足的光芒。)
情绪转移
表情感的名词A + gave way to/was swept away by/ was replaced by +表情感的名词B
E.g.His initial excitement was replaced by a deep sense of disappointment. (他最初的兴奋被深深的失望所取代。)
The fear and shock brought on by the quake are now swept away by hunger, cold and desperation. (地震带来的恐惧和震惊现在被饥饿、寒冷和绝望所替代。)
(情绪+动作)描写
句型1:情感adj. and/but情感adj., Sb did sth.
E.g. (2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟) Nervous and anxious, Norwood struggled to calm herself down and carried out first aid to Simmons.(尽管紧张和焦虑,诺伍德努力让自己镇静下来,并对Simmons进行了急救。)
Excited but anxious, Lily gripped the microphone and began her story.(既兴奋又紧张,她握住话筒开始讲述自己的故事。)
变式: 情绪adj as sb was,sb did sth.尽管某人感到 …, 某人仍做某事
E.g.(2025八省联考)Still nervous as I was, I tried to calm myself down, waiting for the film to start.(尽管我仍然很紧张,但我试图让自己冷静下来,等待电影开始。)
Nervous as he was, Peter plucked up courage and made his way to the stage. (尽管很紧张,Peter仍鼓起勇气走上舞台。)
句式2:To one’s+情感n., Sb did sth.
E.g.(2025年1月浙江首考)To everyone’s astonishment, there it was—an old watch, just as the man had described.(令所有人惊讶的是,它就在那里——一块旧表,正如那人所描述的那样。)
To their delight, the long-lost dog dashed toward them, tail wagging wildly.(令他们欣喜的是,走失已久的狗疯狂摇着尾巴朝他们冲来。)
句式3:Sb/sth was so+adj. +that +句子(某人/物如此xx以致于……)
So adj. was sb+ +that +句子
E.g. (2020新高考Ⅰ卷)听到他们的话,伯纳德高兴地几乎跳了起来,热泪盈眶。
Hearing what they said, Bernard was so delighted /glad /happy /pleased /cheerful that he almost jumped to his feet and tears filled his eyes.
Hearing what they said, so delighted / glad /happy /pleased / cheerful was Bernard that he almost jumped to his feet, with tears filling his eyes.
句式4:Feeling+情感adj., sb did sth.
E.g.(2025八省联考卷)Feeling confused and worried, I waited for the film to start.(感到困惑和担忧,我等待着电影的开始。)
Feeling slightly uneasy, the boy glanced over his shoulder and quickened his pace.(感到一丝不安,男孩回头瞥了一眼,加快了脚步。)
句式5:What+情感v.+sb was that+句子
E.g.What amazed Tom was that the missing dog had found its own way home.(让汤姆惊讶的是,走失的小狗竟自己找回了家。)
句式6:Sb did sth, with/in +抽象名词
E.g.My father drove in silence.(我父亲默默地开车。)
I took out the folded paper with great care, and opened it. (我小心翼翼地拿出折叠好的纸,打开了它。)
变式1:With growing +情绪n, Sb did sth
E.g.With growing fear,Elli and I packed up our camp as quickly as possible. (随着恐惧的增加,艾莉和我以最快的速度收拾了我们的营地。)
变式2:身体部位+非谓语动词,sb did sth.
Eyes filled with regretful tears, sb did sth. (眼里满含着…)
Eyes glittering with joy, sb did sth. (眼里闪着…)
Face shining with delight, sb did sth. (脸上闪耀着…)
Heart beating with happiness, sb did sth …(心砰砰直跳…)
Arms/legs/muscles aching and knees shaking, sb did sth. (胳膊/腿/肌肉酸痛,膝盖发抖)
E.g.(2022年新高考Ⅰ卷)Confident and determined, David kept on running, sweat streaming down his face.(自信而坚定,大卫继续奔跑,汗水顺着他的脸流下来。)
To our joy, David crossed the finish line smoothly, his face shining with satisfied delight.(让我们欣喜若狂的是,大卫顺利越过终点线,脸上闪耀着满足的喜悦。)
Ⅱ动作描写
句式1: 三连动作链:sb. + did A, did B and did C
E.g.(2024新高考Ⅰ卷)Gunter waved my apology aside with a generous smile, reached into his jacket pocket and handed me a stack of money.(冈特慷慨地微笑着把我的道歉抛在一边,把手伸进夹克口袋,递给我一堆钱。)
Ben also ran in my direction, gathered me into his arms, and kept patting my back. (Ben 也朝我这个方向跑过来,把我拥入怀里,不停地轻轻拍着我的后背。)
句式2: (1)主语 did A,非谓语动词 B and 非谓语动词 C
(2)主语 did A and B,非谓语动词 C
(3)非谓语动词 A,主语 did B + did C
E.g.(2025八省联考卷)Seeing their hard work and dedication, I was deeply touched but felt a bit ashamed of my earlier fear.(看到他们的辛勤工作和奉献精神,我深受感动,但也为之前的恐惧感到有点羞愧。)
Tears blurred my eyes for a long time and finally overflowed, streaming down my face. (眼泪让我的视线变得模糊,最后涌出,沿着我的脸滑落下来。)
句式3: 主语 did,with 复合结构[with + 名词/代词 + 非谓语动词/介词短语/形容词/副词
E.g.(2024年1月浙江首考)Soon Eva began to breathe hard, with her heart pounding and legs shaking.(很快,伊娃开始呼吸困难,心跳加速,双腿颤抖。)
He stormed to the room with his heart beating wildly and his face flushing red. (他冲向房间,心怦怦直跳,满脸通红。)
句式4: 主语+did,独立主格[逻辑主语 + 非谓语动词/介词短语/形容词/副词]
E.g.(2024新高考Ⅰ卷)I felt so depressed and sorry, an embarrassed smile creeping onto my face.(我感到既沮丧又抱歉,尴尬的微笑逐渐浮现在我的脸上。)
Perspiration pouring from my forehead, tiredness swallowed me entirely. (汗水从我额头上涌出,疲劳感完全吞噬了我。)
常见动作表达
行走动作:
句式1:sb. + walked/strolled/ wandered/marched + 地点状语 + with + 情感 / 状态描述.
E.g.She strolled in the garden, enjoying the sunshine.(她在花园里悠闲地散步,享受着阳光。)
He marched into the room angrily.(他怒气冲冲地大步走进房间。)
句式2:sb. + rushed/dashed/ sprinted/hurried + 方向状语 + to do sth.
E.g.Hearing the cry for help, he rushed to the scene immediately.(听到呼救声,他立刻冲向出事地点。)
She hurried to the station, afraid of missing the train.(她匆忙跑向车站,生怕错过火车。)
手部动作:
句式1:sb. + grabbed/grasped/ seized/clutched + 物体 + with + 情感 / 方式描述.
E.g.He clutched the life-saving straw tightly, with a strong desire for survival in his eyes.(他紧紧抓住救命稻草,眼中满是求生的欲望。)
She grabbed her schoolbag and rushed out of the door.(她一把抓起书包,冲出门去。)
句式2:sb. + waved/shook/ raised/lowered + one’s hand + 目的 / 方式状语.
E.g.She waved to her friend in the distance, with a big smile on her face.(她向远处的朋友挥手,脸上洋溢着笑容。)
He raised his hand, trying to catch the teacher's attention.(他举起手,想要引起老师的注意。)
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