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Unit 2 Healthy Lifestyle
Using Language in Writing
Write A Letter To The Editor About Your Lifestyle
· Style:
· The main idea of the text:
Prediction
Write a letter to the editor about your lifestyle
Two students attended the summer camp organised by the magazine Healthy Life and wrote to the editor. Read the letters and then complete the chart.
A letter（应用文）
healthy lifestyle
Read these two passage carefully and finish the table on P21.
Reading for details
sleepy and dizzy
passion
flu easily
many toothaches
eat no sugar
exercise regularly
buying sweets, biscuits, and sugary drinks
at least 30
minutes and did something active
dynamic and stronger
both body and mind
soundly
suffers from flu
or toothaches
in control of her own life
well
Reading for details
Reading for details
stressed out
worn out
playing computer games
take control of his life and
find other ways to relax
rock climbing monthly with
his dad
energetic
change himself for the better
Divide each letter into four parts and try to match the main ideas below to each part.
identify problems
consider what to do
describe what he / she has done to change
give the results
Problem
Decision
Action(s)
Result(s)
Problem-solution pattern
Problem
Problem
Decision
Decision
Action(s)
Action(s)
Result(s)
Result(s)
Reading for structures
Dear Editor,
After I attended your summer camp about health and lifestyle choices, I realised I hardly ever felt well, either physically or mentally.
亲爱的编辑：
在我参加了你们关于健康和生活方式选择的夏令营后，我意识到我几乎感觉不到身体或心理的健康了。
after 引导时间状语从句
参加夏令营
宾语从句,省略that
很少，几乎从不
要么...要么...；不是...就...
I often felt sleepy and dizzy, and lacked passion. Most worrying, though, I got the flu easily and experienced many toothaches, too.
我经常感到困倦和头晕，也缺乏激情。最让我担心的是，我很容易得流感，还经常牙痛。
adj. 头晕目眩的；使人眩晕的
n. 激情，热情
adj. 短语作状语
adv. 不过，可是，然而
感冒
n. 牙痛
At the end of the camp I heard, “Change the world by changing yourself.” This stimulated my motivation.
在夏令营结束时，我听说：“通过改变自己来改变世界。”这激发了我的动力。
在...结束时
by + V-ing作方式状语
v. 促进，激发，鼓励
n. 动力，诱因；积极性
A dentist once examined me and told me that too much sugar in my meals had damaged my teeth and health. I made up my mind to change two things in my life: to eat nothing with sugar and to exercise regularly.
有一次，一位牙医给我做了检查，他告诉我，我吃的饭里糖太多，已经损害了我的牙齿和健康。我下定决心改变我的生活中的两件事：吃不含糖的食物、定期锻炼。
that引导宾语从句
下定决心做...
adv. 定期地，有规律地
同位语
to do 作后置定语
After that I stopped buying all the sweets, biscuits, and sugary drinks that I used to have every day. Whenever I went out with friends，I brought snacks from home, things that didn’t have any added sugar: fruit, nuts, dried meat, etc.
从那以后，我不再买以前每天吃的所有糖果、饼干和含糖饮料。每当我和朋友出去的时候，我都会从家里带一些零食，一些没有添加任何糖分的东西：水果、坚果、肉干等等。
停止做...
n. 饼干
adj. 含糖的；甜的
n. 饮料
that引导定语从句，作宾语，修饰drinks
过去常常做...
whenever引导时间状语从句时，
意为“每次...都...”，强调动作发生是有规律的
that引导定语从句，作主语，修饰things
V-ing 作宾语
My exercise was very simple: I went outside every day for at least 30 minutes and did something active. Sometimes I played table tennis or badminton with my cousins.
我的锻炼很简单：我每天至少出去30分钟，做一些活动。有时我和堂兄弟姐妹打打乒乓球或羽毛球。
至少
adj. 作后置定语
打乒乓球
Other times I jumped on my skateboard and rode around my neighbourhood, or just took a long walk.
其他时间我跳上滑板，在我的社区转悠，或只是走很长一段路。
跳上
ride - rode - ridden
散步
The results have been fantastic. I feel more dynamic and stronger than ever, in both body and mind. I sleep soundly at night now. I no longer suffer from a flu virus or toothaches either.
结果非常好。我感到身体和精神都比以前更富有活力，更加强健。我现在晚上睡得很香，也不再受流感病毒或牙痛的折磨了。
adj. 极好的，非常棒的
adj. 充满活力的，精力充沛的
adv. 酣畅地
睡得安稳
不再
遭受，患病
Best of all, in my opinion, is how I feel about myself. I feel like I’m in control of my own life. To make choices about myself is within my own power. I CAN change myself. I just need to try.
在我看来，最棒的是我对自己的感觉。我觉得我能掌控自己的生活。对自己做出选择是我力所能及的，我可以改变自己，我只需要去尝试。
宾语从句，省略that
how引导表语从句
控制
to do 作主语
在某人能力之内
Dear Editor,
As I took part in the summer camp about personal life choices, I started to analyse my choices, especially what I did to relax and how it was affecting my whole life.
亲爱的编辑：
当我参加了关于个人生活选择的夏令营时，我开始分析我自己的生活选择，尤其是为了放松而做的事情，以及它是如何影响我的整个生活的。
as 引导时间状语从句
参加
同位语从句
同位语从句
After starting high school, I felt stressed out and always relaxed by playing computer games. I got so absorbed that I played the games day and night. Playing was fun, but I felt even more worn out afterwards!
在开始上高中以后，我感到焦虑不安，总是通过打电脑游戏来放松自己。我太投入了，日日夜夜都在打游戏。打游戏很开心，但后来我甚至觉得更累了！
时间状语，V-ing作宾语
压力大的，焦虑不安的
by + V-ing作方式状语
“如此...以至于”，that引导结果状语从句
日日夜夜
V-ing作主语
疲惫不堪的
wear - wore - worn
So after the camp, I realised that it was very, very important to adjust my lifestyle. I decided to take control of my life and find other ways to relax.
所以在夏令营结束后，我意识到调整我的生活方式是非常非常重要的。我决定掌控自己的生活，找到其他放松的方式。
that引导宾语从句，it为形式主语，to do为真正的主语
v. 调整
控制
to do 作后置定语
It was a big struggle not to join my friends in playing online games as I’m mad for them. However, I realised that to succeed in quitting, I had to replace it with something else.
当我为游戏疯狂的时候，很难不加入我的朋友们一起玩网络游戏。然而，我知道到要想成功戒掉（游戏），必须做些其他事情来替代它。
V-ing作宾语
as引导时间状语从句
it为形式主语，to do为真正的主语
to do 作目的状语
that引导宾语从句
成功做...
为...而疯狂
用…代替
So I thought about what to try. Rock climbing, bowling, watching comedies, and playing basketball were the things I thought of doing instead.
所以我想什么东西可以尝试。攀岩、打保龄球、看喜剧和打篮球就是我想代替游戏的事情。
what + to do 作宾语
V-ing作主语
定语从句，省略that，修饰things
V-ing作宾语
Now my dad and I go rock climbing together monthly! It has enhanced the quality of my life, improving my health and increasing my happiness. I get refreshed through climbing, spend more time with my dad, and get to meet new friends.
现在我和爸爸每个月都一起去攀岩！他提高了我的生活质量，改善了我的健康，增加了我的快乐。通过攀岩，我变得神清气爽，有更多的时间和爸爸在一起，还能认识新朋友。
攀岩
adv. 每个月，每月一次
v. 增强，提高，改善
V-ing作伴随状语
神清气爽
After six months of trying out new ways of relaxing, I feel much more energetic. I feel that I can change myself for the better.
尝试新放松方式的六个月后，我感到精力更加充沛了。我觉得我可以让自己变得更好。
V-ing作宾语
adj. 精力充沛的，充满活力的
尝试，试验
that引导宾语从句
And if that’s true for me, then it might truly be possible to change the world for the better. As Gandhi said, “Be the change you want to see in the world.”
Sincerely,
George Fielding
如果这对我来说是真的，那么有可能把世界变得更好也是真的。正如甘地所言：“欲变世界，先变其身。”
真诚地，
乔治·菲尔丁
if 引导条件状语从句
it为形式主语，to do为真正的主语
as引导非限制性定语从句，作宾语，修饰主句
引导定语从句，省略that / which，修饰change
Letter 1
仿写1：参加了你们举办的有关健康和生活方式选择的夏令营之后，我意识到我对数码产品上瘾。
Para. 1
After I attended your summer camp about health and lifestyle choices, I realized I was addicted to digital devices.
Reading for features
after引导的时间状语从句
Para. 1
仿写2：最令我担心的是，我睡眠不好。它已经影响到我的学业.
Most worrying, I couldn’t sleep well. It already affected my study.
Most worrying, I couldn’t sleep well, which already affected my study.
Reading for features
most worrying :
现在分词作状语，意为“最令人担忧的是”
Para. 2
仿写3：我下定决心要掌控自己的生活。
I made up my mind to take control of my life.
仿写4：我下定决心要改变这个不健康的习惯。
I made up my mind to change the unhealthy habit.
下定决心改变……
Para. 3
仿写5：每次我想玩电脑游戏的时候，我就出去慢跑。这不仅提高了我的生活质量，也改善了我的身体状况。
Whenever I wanted to play computer games, I went jogging instead, which not only enhanced my quality of life but also improved my health.
whenever引导的时间状语从句
Para. 5
仿写6：结果棒极了。我能为自己做决定，我能使自己变得更好。
The results have been fantastic. To make choices about myself is within my own power, and I can change myself for the better.
动词不定式作主语
Reading for features
Para. 1
Letter 2
仿写7：我开始审视我的习惯循环，尤其是如何影响我的学习和生活。
I started to examine my habit cycle, especially how to affect my study and life.
especially what … 和 how...两个并列部分是同位语，补充说明前面的choices
Reading for features
Para. 2
仿写8：我意识到早睡早起是非常必要的。因此，我下定决心要养成这个好习惯，并控制我的生活。
I realized that it was very necessary to get up and sleep early. Hence, I made up my mind to form the good habit and take control of my life.
Reading for features
It be +adj. (for sb.) to do sth.句型
Para. 5
仿写9：在改变了我的坏习惯之后，我感到更加精力充沛了。甚至我感到我能够使自己变得更好。
After changing my bad habits, I feel much more energetic. Even I feel that I can change myself for the better.
after引导的时间状语从句
Reading for features

　　假定你是李华，请你给某报社编辑写一封信，介绍你改变某种不良生活习惯的过程及带来的影响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
Writing

合理布局，精心谋篇
Bad habits
overeating
暴饮暴食
Bad Results
Changes
overweight
超重
lack confidence
缺乏自信
①keep a balanced diet
保持膳食平衡
②eat less junk food
少吃垃圾食品
③do more exercise
多锻炼
being addicted to computer games
沉迷于电脑游戏
have eyes problem
有视力问题
worn out
疲惫不堪
①go outside to do something active
去外面积极活动
② find other ways to relax
找其他放松的方式
常用词汇
参考范文
Dear Editor，
　I am writing to tell you the changes of my lifestyle. 　
　In the past I liked junk food and therefore I was overweight.My great passion for a well-shaped body drove me to change my lifestyle.My plan is to change my improper diet and exercise regularly.Working out in the gym is my routine while it is a must for me to keep a balanced diet.I have only been carrying out my plan for several months， but I’m now starting to feel better.I feel confident that I will reach my goal.　
　Best wishes.　
　Yours sincerely，
　　Li Hua
I am writing to tell you the changes of my lifestyle. 　
　In the past I liked junk food and therefore I was overweight. My great passion for a well-shaped body drove me to change my lifestyle. My plan is to change my improper diet and exercise regularly. Working out in the gym is my routine while it is a must for me to keep a balanced diet. I have only been carrying out my plan for several months, but I’m now starting to feel better.
_________________________________________________
Best wishes.　
I feel confident that I will reach my goal.　
Thank you !

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