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Reading for Writing
Unit 1
Festivals and Celebrations
新人教版必修第三册
By the end of this unit, you will be able to:
1. Learn about the Naadam Festival.
2. Know how to write a festival experience.
3. Master expressions related to Festivals.
4. Have a sense of responsibility to tell China's story well in English.
Learning objectives:
Have you ever been to Inner Mongolia What's your impression of it Mongolian tentsMongolian robesMongoliangrasslandLead-inWhat is the most important festival in Inner Mongolia
the Naadam Festival
Lead-in: Guess activites from incomplete pictures
horse racing
What are they doing
wrestling
archery
那达慕（Naadam）是蒙古族历史悠久的传统节日，其蒙古语意为“娱乐”或“游戏”，是集体育竞技、文化艺术和物资交流于一体的草原盛会，核心是展示被称为“男儿三艺”的摔跤、赛马和射箭。
历史渊源
那达慕的历史可以追溯到800多年前。早在公元1206年，成吉思汗被推举为蒙古大汗时，为了检阅部队、维护与分配草场，便会召集部落首领举行大型聚会，并进行摔跤、赛马、射箭等竞技活动以示庆祝和团结。元、明时期，这三项竞技正式结合，形成了那达慕的固定形式。
Cultural background
Step 1 Pre-reading
My amazing Naadam experience
The text is mainly about the writer’s __________ of taking
part in ___________________ in Mongolia and the writer feels _______at it.
amazed
the Naadam Festival
experience
A. Narration（记叙文）
B. Argumentation（议论文）
C. Exposition (说明文)
Diary
Step 2 While-reading (organization)
My amazing Naadam experience
What is the genre/type of this article
.In what order does the author write the diary
Step 2 While-reading (organization)
Time
order
According to the left information, we can divide the passage into______ parts.
3
Opening paragraph
Body paragraph
Closing paragraph
Tip 1:
Follow a clear structure and the time order when writing about an experience.
Step 2 While-reading : (Language features)
I experienced the Naadam Festival in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region for the first time this year. The festival falls on the fourth day of the sixth month of the lunar calendar, usually lasting for three days. Naadam means “games” in Mongolian, and it is represented by three events: horse racing, wrestling, and archery, which are all so exciting to watch
opening sentence
今年我第一次在中国内蒙古自治区体验了那达慕大会。这个节日通常在农历六月的第四天,持续三天。那达慕在蒙古语中是“比赛”的意思，它由三个项目代表:赛马、摔跤和射箭，这些项目看起来都很刺激
Opening Paragraph:
State the topic(e.g. where, when,and with whomyou celebrated thefestival, and alsoyour main feeling).
Step 2 While-reading : (Language features)
I experienced the Naadam Festival in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region for the first time this year. The festival falls on the fourth day of the sixth month of the lunar calendar, usually lasting for three days. Naadam means “games” in Mongolian, and it is represented by three events: horse racing, wrestling, and archery, which are all so exciting to watch
今年我第一次在中国内蒙古自治区体验了那达慕大会。这个节日通常在农历六月的第四天,持续三天。那达慕在蒙古语中是“比赛”的意思，它由三个项目代表:赛马、摔跤和射箭，这些项目看起来都很刺激
When does the Naadam festival fall on (part1)
fall on 适逢，正当
The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth month of the lunar calendar， usually lasting for one day.
仿写:
端午节在每年的农历五月初五，通常情况下只过一天
What can you learn about Naadam from the opening
where
when
what
how
On the first day, I set off to the games early with my friend Burin. I saw a lot of people wearing fancy Mongolian robes. Some were feeding their horses, some were practising archery, and others were chatting or taking photographs. Burin told me that Mongolians travel every year from near and far to attend the festival, just as their ancestors had done for centurie
Step 2 While-reading : (Language features)
Body part: (Para2)
What do people do to prepare for the festival
第一天，我和我的朋友Burin很早就出发去比赛了。我看到很多人穿着花哨的蒙古袍。一些人在喂马，一些人在练习射箭，还有一些人在聊天或拍照。布林告诉我，蒙古人每年都会从远近各处赶来参加这个节日，就像他们的祖先几个世纪以来所做的那样
First BodyParagraph:
Describe the startof the festival andthe surroundings.
On the first day, I set off to the games early with my friend Burin. I saw a lot of people wearing fancy Mongolian robes. Some were feeding their horses, some were practising archery, and others were chatting or taking photographs. Burin told me that Mongolians travel every year from near and far to attend the festival, just as their ancestors had done for centurie
Step 2 While-reading : (Language features)
Body part: (Para2)
What do people do to prepare for the festival
Description of sense:
sight
Sentence structure 1:
Some ... , some ... , and others ...
Tip 3：Describe senses with certain sentence patterns to enrich writing. (some ..., some ... , and others ...)
仿写:
People engage in various activities to commemorate the Dragon Boat Festival. Some participate in or watch dragon boat races, some make or eat zongzi, and others hang mugwort and calamus.
（What did the author see when arriving ）
Step 2 While-reading : (Language features)
After the opening ceremony and some amazing performances, the wrestling competition began. Mongolian wrestling is different from the wrestling in the Olympic Games. There are no rounds, and wrestlers are not separated by weight. The wrestler loses if any part of his body above his knee touches the ground. After singing some songs, the competitors danced onto the green field, waving their arms in the air as if they were eagles. I was quite moved by their show of strength and grace.
在开幕式和一些精彩的表演之后，摔跤比赛开始了。蒙古摔跤不同于奥运会摔跤。没有回合，摔跤手不分体重。如果摔跤手膝盖以上的任何身体部位接触到地面，他就输了。唱了几首歌后，选手们在绿茵场上翩翩起舞，像老鹰一样在空中挥舞手臂。我被他们展现的力量和优雅所感动。
Rules
There are no rounds, and wrestlers are not separated by weight. The wrestler loses if any part of his body above his knee touches the ground.
Second Body Paragraph:
Describe indetail the festivalactivities.
Tip4: Describe activities in detail by action chains (V-ing) or rhetorical device (eg: simile )to make our article vivid
Step 2 While-reading : (Language features)
I absolutely enjoyed the archery, too, but the horse races were my favourite part. However, I was surprised to see that the riders were boys and girls! I heard it is because children are lighter and the horses can run faster and farther. At first, I was a little worried about the children’s safety, but Burin said, “Don’t worry. They’ve been riding horses all their lives. They’ll be just fine.” That was the moment I started to understand why people say “Horses are at the heart of Mongolian culture”. ...
我也非常喜欢射箭，但赛马是我最喜欢的部分。然而，我很惊讶地看到，骑手是男孩和女孩！听说是因为孩子比较轻，马跑得更快更远。起初，我有点担心孩子们的安全，但布林说:“别担心。他们一辈子都在骑马。他们会很好的。”从那时起，我开始理解为什么人们说“马是蒙古文化的核心”。...
Third Body Paragraph:
Describe indetail the festivalactivities.
Describe horse races in detail
I was surprised to see that the riders were boys and girls! I heard it is because children are lighter and the horses can run faster and farther.
Rules
Scenes of the competitions
2. How is the scene of the competitors getting onto the green field described
Describe horse races
in detail
Body part: (Para3-4)
1. What events are described And how are the events described
Step 2 While-reading : (Language features)
After singing some songs, the competitors danced onto the green field, waving their arms in the air as if they were eagles.
Describe activities in detail by action chains (V-ing) or rhetorical devices (eg: simile )
Step 2 While-reading : (Language features)
Part3: Summary (Para.5) : appreciate the ending
I’m finally back home now, feeling really tired, but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it. He invited me back for the winter to stay in a traditional Mongolian tent and eat hot pot. I can’t wait!
我现在终于回家了，感觉真的很累，但是和我的朋友一起庆祝那达慕节是完全值得的。他邀请我回去过冬，住在传统的蒙古帐篷里，吃火锅。我等不及了！
Finally wrapping up the Dragon Boat Festival celebrations, we are physically exhausted, yet having been immersed in the festive bustle all day, with thunderous drumbeats still echoing in our ears and the blended fragrance of reed leaves and moxa lingering in the air.
Tip 5: use adverbs(副词) and v.ing(现在分词） to stress the feeling in the end.
仿写：我们最终结束了庆祝端午节的活动，虽然身体感到十分疲惫，但一整天都沉浸在节日的喧闹中，耳边似乎还回响着震耳欲聋的鼓声，空气中仿佛还弥漫着粽叶和艾草混合的清香。
Closing Paragraph:
Give a brief summary of the experience.
How to express the feelings and emotions
Underline the sentences that describe the writer's feelings and emotions.
excited; amazed; moved; surprised; worried; tired; satisfied; happy...
Tip6: To hold readers’ attention, we can add our feelings and emotions to our article.
I was deeply moved by the wonderful performance.
仿写：我被精彩的演出深深地感动了。
Step 2 While-reading : (Language features)
Title _______________________
I experienced the Naadam Festival in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region for the first time this year. The festival falls on the fourth day of the six month of the lunar calendar, usually lasting for three days. Naadam means “games” in Mongolian, and it is represented by three events: horse racing, wrestling, and archery, which are all so exciting to watch!
Structure and Feature
My amazing Naadam experience
What
Where
When
Major events
Main feeling
On the first day, I set off to the games early with my friend Burin. I saw a lot of people wearing fancy Mongolian robes. Some were feeding their horses, some were practicing archery, and others were chatting or taking photographs. Burin told me that Mongolians travel every year from near and far to attend the festival, just as their ancestors had done for centuries.
Structure and Feature
When
What dress
Who can attend
How often
After the opening ceremony and some amazing performances, the wrestling competition began. Mongolian wrestling is different from the wrestling in the Olympic Games. There are no rounds, and wrestlers are not separated by weight. The wrestlers loses if any part of his body above his knee touches the ground. After singing some songs, the competitors danced onto the green field, waving their arms in the air as if they were eagles. I was quite moved by their show of strength and grace.
I absolutely enjoyed the archery, too, but the horse races were my favorite part. However, I was surprised to see that the riders were boys and girls! I heard it is because children are lighter and the horses can run faster and farther. At first, I was a little worried about the children’s safety, but Burin said, “Don’t worry. They’ve been riding horses all their lives. They’ll be just fine.” That was the moment I started to understand why people say “Horses are at the heart of Mongolian culture”. ...
Structure and Feature
events
The events
rules
feeling
feeling
The most impressive thing
Place the keyword in the rihgt color
Body
Time-order
Activities
Partner
Surroundings
5. I’m finally back home now, feeling really tired, but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it. He invited me back for the winter to stay in a traditional Mongolian tent and eat hot pot. I can’t wait!
Closing Paragraph:Give a brief summary
The author’s feelings
Structure and Feature
feeling
feeling
feeling
Guess what will write about this ending
I’m finally back home now...
If you were Mike, imagine what would you write
Read for structure
The beginning of the festival
and its surroundings
A brief introduction to the festival
Mongolian wrestling details
Horse racing details
A brief summary of the experience
opening
body
ending
Step 3 Post-reading :
Review of the structure
How to share your festival experience ？
How to write a festival experience
Tip 1: Follow a clear structure and the time order while using past tense and first person to organize the article logically .
Tip 5: Use rhetorical devices to make the language vivid.
Tip 4: Describe activities in detail with shining sentences.
(action chains, V-ing, adv ,different clauses)
Tip 3: Describe senses with certain sentence patterns to enrich writing.
(Some ... , some ..., and others ... .)
Tip 6: Describe the change of emotions to make the content convincing.
Summary of writing tips
Logical
Vivid
Convincing
Language
Effective Writing
Structure
Tip 2: Use opening sentence to state the topic.
请用英语写一篇日记,介绍你经历的最难忘、最有意义的春节。内容包括：
1. 节日概况；2. 庆祝活动；3. 你的感受。
一般过去时
Step 1
审题立意
体裁
要点
时态
日记
①春节介绍
②庆祝活动
③感受
人称
第一人称
Step 2 谋篇布局
Para.1: 2 lines
Para.2: 7 lines
Para.3: 2 lines
Part 1: Opening sentence and introduce the Spring Festival(2 lines)
Step 3 遣词造句
请用英语写一篇日记,介绍你经历的最难忘、最有意义的春节。内容包括：
1. 节日概况；2. 庆祝活动；3. 你的感受。
①This year's festival was the most memorable and meaningful one I have ever experienced.
②the most important traditional festival in China, is a time for
enjoyed ourselves
Festival activities
Part 2: Body part (7 lines)
made dumplings
visited our relatives and neighbors
set off fireworks
clean the house
paste spring couplets
1.重要的:
This Spring Festival made me deeply feel the importance of family bonds and the charm of traditional culture.
2. 它教会了我…
It taught me to…
important significant
= of great importance / significance
Part 3: Conclusion+aspiration (2 lines)
Evaluation and Group Presentation
Use the checklist to better the drafts.
Is the structure clear
Does he/she introduce the topic in the first paragraph
Is there an opening sentence in the first paragraph
Does he/she apply the writing techniques learned in the class
Does he/she describe his/her feelings and emotions
Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes？
5c tips:
Clean & clear
Complete
Coherent
Correct
Colourful / vivid
1. 体裁：记叙文
2. 要点分配
Para.1（2行）：简要介绍春节的意义，点出“最难忘、最有意义”的主题
Para.2（7行）：详细描述除夕包饺子、放烟花，大年初一拜年、贴春联等庆祝活动
Para.3（2行）：表达对亲情和传统文化的感受，升华主题
3. 时态：全文使用一般过去时，符合日记记录过去经历的要求
4. 人称：第一人称 I/my，贴合日记的个人视角
写作思路解析
The Spring Festival, the most important traditional festival in China, is a time for family reunions and celebrating new beginnings. This year's festival was the most memorable and meaningful one I have ever experienced.
On New Year's Eve, my whole family gathered at my grandparents' home. We made dumplings together, chatting and laughing while wrapping the fillings. At midnight, we set off fireworks to welcome the new year, and the sky was lit up with colorful sparks. On the first day of the Lunar New Year, we visited our relatives and neighbors, exchanging greetings and red envelopes. I also helped my grandma clean the house and paste spring couplets, which made me feel the warmth of family and tradition.
This Spring Festival made me deeply feel the importance of family bonds and the charm of traditional culture. It taught me to cherish the time with my loved ones and look forward to a hopeful new year.
Do you know what other festivals are held by ethnic minorities Can you list some of them
Water-Splashing
Festival 泼水节
彝族 白族 纳西族
广西壮族 侗族 瑶族 苗族
傈僳族
[lì sù zú]贵州苗族
傣族 阿昌族 布朗族
The Torch Festival
火把节
Daogan Festival
刀杆节
Duān Festival (Shuǐ Ethnic Group
How to write an experience passage
Para 2. The start of the celebration:
1. The topic
2. When, where, activities included
3. Use the first person and the past tense
4. My feeling
Title_____________
Para 1. State the topic:
The time ，the route
The people, their dressing
My feeling and impression
Para 5. Give a summary:
Para 3-4. Describe the celebration activities in detail
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