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UNIT 1　Face values
(单元主题语境：人与自我——外表与内心的关系)
Section Ⅳ　Writing
1.写作词汇再现
①masterpiece n．代表作
②vividly adv.生动地
③reflect v．反映
④grow up长大
⑤run away from ...从……逃跑
⑥more than不仅仅
⑦all walks of life各行各业
⑧be considered as ...被认为……
⑨elegant adj.优雅的
⑩fashionable adj.时髦的
untidy adj.不整洁的
well-dressed adj.衣着华丽的
surprised adj.惊讶的
sigh v．& n．叹息
disappointed adj.失望的
desperate adj.绝望的
lose heart 丧失信心
think of 考虑到；想到
2.精彩句式再练
单句填空/完成句子
①Jane Eyre never ________(feel) herself inferior as a tutor before Mr. Rochester.
②There's no doubt ________ it's the best book that I've ever read.
③这本小说是我最喜欢的书，因为它很有意义，我可以从中学到很多。
This novel is my favorite book ___________________________________ ______________．
felt
that
because it's so meaningful that I can learn
a lot from it
④这本书揭示了这样一个真理：人不是为失败而生的，一个人可以被毁灭，但不能被打败。
______________________________：people are not born for defeat；a man can be destroyed，but not defeated.
⑤她说这话时面无表情，非常严肃。(with)
She said this _______________________________．
This book reveals such a truth
with a completely straight face
⑥阳光照射进来，他们的眼睛里闪耀着喜悦的光芒。
The sun shined in and their eyes _________________．
⑦他不高不矮，长着一张圆脸、一张大嘴巴和一双灰色的眼睛，看上去很和蔼可亲。
He is ______________________，with a round face，a wide mouth and grey eyes，_________________．
sparkled with joy
neither tall nor short
looking very kind
Ⅰ 介绍文学作品
写作指导
介绍文学作品的文章属于说明文的范畴，内容包括作者简介、作品的主要内容、写作背景、作品的评价、作品的影响以及给读者的启示等。注意语言要简洁，表述要清晰有条理。
写作布局一般是“三段式”，具体为：
第一段：整体介绍该作品(书名、作者和作品类型)；
第二段：概述作品的主要内容(通常用一般现在时)；
第三段：讨论作品的主题和意义，也可适当发表自己的感悟和评论。
典例展示
假设你们班要办一期英语角，主题是“我最喜欢的英文文学作品”。请你写一篇短文介绍一下马克·吐温(Mark Twain)的《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》(The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn)。内容包括：
1．作者：马克·吐温，美国作家，在密西西比河(the Mississippi River)畔的一个小城长大；
2．内容简介：这部小说讲述了男孩哈克贝利·费恩从家中逃走，和奴隶吉姆在密西西比河流浪的故事；
3．评价：小说生动地反映了当时的社会，被认为美国文学史上最伟大的作品之一。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
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[审题谋篇]
确定体裁、话题 体裁：说明文
话题：介绍马克·吐温的《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》
确定时态、人称 时态：一般现在时为主
人称：第三人称为主
布局文
章架构 首段：作者和作品简介
中段：情节介绍
尾段：评价
列出核
心要点 1.简要介绍马克·吐温及其作品
2．介绍作品《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》
3．评价《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》
[实践应用]
1．完成句子
①马克·吐温是一位美国作家。
Mark Twain is __________________．
②他以写故事而闻名。
He was famous for _______________．
③马克·吐温在密西西比河畔的一座小城长大。
Mark Twain _____________________ on the banks of the Mississippi River.
an American writer
writing stories
grew up in a small town
④他的代表作之一是《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》。
_______________________ is The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn.
⑤在小说中，男孩哈克贝利·费恩从家中逃走，和一个名叫吉姆的奴隶沿着密西西比河游荡。
In the novel，a boy，Huckleberry Finn，___________________ and ____________ the Mississippi River with a slave named Jim.
One of his masterpieces
runs away from home
wanders down
⑥哈克贝利遇见了来自各行各业的人，因此这部小说生动地反映了当时的社会状况。
Huckleberry meets people ________________________________．So the novel _________________________________________________．
⑦《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》在美国文学史上一直被称为“最伟大的作品之一”。
The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn has been considered as ____________ _______________________________________________．
(who are) from all walks of life
vividly reflects the social conditions at that time
one of the
greatest works in the history of American literature
2．句式升级
⑧将句①和句②合并为含有同位语的句子
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⑨用无灵主语句以及定语从句合并句③和句④
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3．靓化成篇
结合以上句子写一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。
Mark Twain，an American writer，was famous for writing stories.
A small town on the banks of the Mississippi River saw the growth of Mark
Twain，one of whose masterpieces is The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn.
[参考范文]
Mark Twain，an American writer，was famous for writing stories.A small town on the banks of the Mississippi River saw the growth of Mark Twain，one of whose masterpieces is The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn.
In the novel，a boy，Huckleberry Finn，runs away from home and wanders down the Mississippi River with a slave named Jim.But the story is more than that.Huckleberry meets people (who are) from all walks of life.So the novel vividly reflects the social conditions at that time.
The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn has been considered as one of the greatest works in the history of American literature.
实战演练
假定你是李华，你校举办了“名著助我成长”的征文比赛，请你写一篇介绍美国作家欧内斯特·米勒尔·海明威(Ernest Miller Hemingway)的小说《老人与海》(The Old Man and the Sea)的短文参赛。内容包括：
1．主要人物：老渔夫Santiago(乐观自信，勇于面对困难)；
2．主要内容：Santiago在捕获大马林鱼(marlin)后与鲨鱼搏斗的冒险故事；
3．作品主题：面对挫折和困难要坚持不懈、勇往直前，展现自己的精神力量。
注意：词数80左右。
[参考范文]
The Old Man and the Sea is a novel written by Ernest Miller Hemingway. This book tells the story of Santiago，an experienced but lonely old fisherman who is optimistic，confident，and brave in facing setbacks and difficulties.He caught a marlin，which is one of the world's largest fish，but his adventure is not over yet.On the way back，he had to fight against a number of sharks.The book praises the old fisherman's determination and encourages people not to give in to any difficulties.
Personally，I think this is a touching story that will motivate those who read it.
Ⅱ 读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I first became conscious of my body image last year in the fifth grade.One day I was walking by my mirror getting ready for bed and I noticed that my stomach looked big.I started to really hate that and think I was fat even though my family always told me how skinny I was.It wasn't only my stomach—I started to think my nose was ugly and that my laugh was disgusting.I was even afraid to laugh or smile in public.
Then，in the sixth grade，a popular guy in my class named Luke made it worse.He told his table group that my body looked swollen in skinny jeans.I heard about it from someone else，but then Luke even told me to my face！I couldn't stop thinking about what Luke had said.Even worse，I started to believe it was true，and I hid my skinny jeans all the way at the bottom of my drawer.
I know I cared too much about what other people said and thought about me.I guess I just wanted to be liked.In fact，I really wish I could have just brushed off comments like that，but I couldn't change my personality and what I care about that easily.
Luke's mean comment affected me in a big way.I lost confidence in more than just my body—I started to think that I didn't matter and that I didn't have a place in the world.To make it worse，some people also started telling me that I was not meant to be an author，which is what I really want to be.That especially hurt and I started to feel really sad all the time.
I hadn't really told anyone how I'd been feeling until a couple of months ago when I got a call from my cousin.I'm really close to her，and hearing her voice and laugh made me feel so good inside.I thought about how I used to be that way too，and how I was so sick of feeling sad.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：
Then I started telling her and it all came out.______________________
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Paragraph 2：
When I went back to my bedroom，I looked at myself in the mirror for a long time._______________________________________________________
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[巧读文]
1．读要素
Who：I，my family，Luke，my cousin
Where：my home
When：a couple of months ago
What：I had no confidence in my body.
Why：Some people made mean comments on me.
2．读双线(情节线、情感线)
情节线：
情感线：
worried→upset and unconfident→sad
[妙构思]
1．读首句，定方向
Paragraph 1：
由续写第一段首句“Then I started telling her and it all came out.(然后我开始告诉她，把一切都说出来。)”可知，“我”要告诉表姐自己的遭遇，因此第一段可以接着描写表姐听了“我”的诉说之后，给“我”建议，让“我”不要在乎别人对“我”的评价，“我”要学会接受自己并爱自己。由续写第二段首句“当我回到我的卧室，我长时间地看着镜子里的自己”可知，第一段结束的时候要提到对自我的认识。
Paragraph 2：
由续写第二段首句“When I went back to my bedroom，I looked at myself in the mirror for a long time.(当我回到我的卧室，我对着镜子看了自己很长一段时间。)”并结合上文可知，该段应写在镜中“我”发现了自己的美，同时“我”告诉自己，尽管别人还会恶语攻击，但“我”要看到自己的优点，“我”认为“我”是完美的——这一点没有人能改变。结合上文情节可知，文章结尾可重点写作者接受表姐的建议后的改变。
2．巧设问，定细节
Paragraph 1：
(1)What did my cousin do
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(2)What did my cousin tell me
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(3)What did my cousin add
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(4)What did I think
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She started listing all my good qualities ...
Don't listen to people who are so mean ...
I shouldn't let them tell me how to feel about myself or my body.
I must learn to love and accept myself for who I am.
Paragraph 2：
(1)What did I see
______________________________________
(2)What did I know
____________________________________________________________________________
My nice grey eyes and my cute smile/...
Some people might make hurtful comments again/I may feel like I am
fat again ...
(3)How did I deal with it
_____________________________________
(4)What did I think
_____________________
I will be prepared/think well of myself ...
I am perfect myself/...
[雕句式]
根据提示升级下列句子
1．She started listing all my good qualities，saying I shouldn't listen to people who are so mean.They were probably just feeling bad about themselves or trying to look cool.
→She started listing all my good qualities，saying I shouldn't listen to people who are so mean ___________________________________________ ____________or trying to look cool.(原因状语从句)
because they were probably just feeling bad about
themselves
2．I saw what I had never seen in myself before，like my nice grey eyes，my cute smile，and the fact：I am beautiful in my own way.
→I saw what I had never seen in myself before，like my nice grey eyes，my cute smile，and the fact _______________________________．(同位语从句)
that I am beautiful in my own way
[成美文]
Paragraph 1：
Then I started telling her and it all came out._______________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2：
When I went back to my bedroom，I looked at myself in the mirror for a long time._______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
Paragraph 1：
Then I started telling her and it all came out.She seemed so surprised and said how special I was.She started listing all my good qualities，saying I shouldn't listen to people who are so mean because they were probably just feeling bad about themselves or trying to look cool.Definitely，she added，I shouldn't let them tell me how to feel about myself or my body.It was like a sudden wake-up call：focusing on what other people thought of me only made things even worse，and I must learn to love and accept myself for who I am.
Paragraph 2：
When I went back to my bedroom，I looked at myself in the mirror for a long time.I saw what I had never seen in myself before，like my nice eyes，my cute smile，and the fact that I am beautiful in my own way.I know some people might still make hurtful comments again，and sometimes I may feel like I am fat again，but next time I will be prepared.I will only think well of myself even when I am feeling sad，and stand up for myself when someone puts me down.In my eyes，I am perfect myself—no one can change that.

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