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UNIT 3　War and peace
(单元主题语境：人与社会——战争与和平)
Section Ⅳ　Writing
1.写作词汇再现
①perseverance n．毅力；韧性
②persistence n．坚持不懈；坚持；锲而不舍
③perform v．履行；执行
④responsible adj.负责的
⑤generous adj.慷慨的
⑥strong adj.坚强的
⑦helpful adj.有用的
⑧friendly adj.友好的
⑨kind adj.友善的
⑩determined adj.下定决心的
gentle adj.温和的
considerate adj.考虑周到的
optimistic adj.乐观的
easy-going adj.随和的
warm-hearted adj.热心的
hard-working adj.勤奋的
have the spirit of commitment有奉献精神
be recognized in this area在这一领域得到了认可
2.精彩句式再练
单句填空/完成句子
①Hard work can pay ______．
②When ______________(fail) in exams，we should reflect on our weak points and do countless exercises rather than drown ourselves in sorrow or disappointment.
③他出生在贫穷/富裕的家庭。
He ____________________ a poor/rich family.
off
failing
was born in
④他把“治病救人”放在首位，难怪他赢得了人们的广泛尊重。
He puts “curing the sickness to save the patient” first，and _____________ _______ he wins wide respect from others.
⑤他是一个意志坚定且顽强不屈的人。
He is ________________________________．
it's no wonder
that
strong-willed and unyielding
⑥他参了军，在部队里他加入了中国共产党并参加了多次战斗。
He joined the army，during which he joined the Communist Party of China and _______________ many battles.
⑦我们把他当作我们的榜样。
We _________________ our model.
took part in
regard him as
Ⅰ 介绍一位英雄人物
写作指导
人物介绍是一种以写人记事为主的文体。写人时主要交代清楚人物的生平；介绍人物事迹时一般以事情发生的先后为顺序，包括出生与童年、兴趣与工作、勤勉与成功、成就与影响等方面。
写作时应注意以下几个方面：
1．突出重点，略加点评。一个人一生所做的事情很多，写作时要突出主要活动和事迹。在人物简介中，要对人物作简短的评论。点评可放在开头，也可放在中间或末尾。点评务必简洁明了。
2．叙述精练，避免渲染。人物简介，即使是介绍人物的重要活动和事迹，也务必做到高度精练，不可过度渲染。
典例展示
假定你是李华，校刊英语专栏正在征集以“A War Hero”为题的英文短文。请你根据所给提示，写一篇介绍战斗英雄的文章投稿。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[审题谋篇]
[实践应用]
1．完成句子
①董存瑞是一位战斗英雄，1929年出生于河北省怀来县的一户贫苦农民家庭。
Dong Cunrui，__________________，was born in a poor peasant family in Huailai county，Hebei province in 1929.(名词短语作同位语)
②1945年，他参加了八路军，并参加了多次战斗。
In 1945，he ______________________________ and _____________ many battles.
a war hero
joined the Eighth Route Army
took part in
③1947年3月，他加入了中国共产党。
In March，1947，he ____________________________________．
④1948年，在解放隆化县的战斗中，从一座桥上射出的六条火舌拦住了解放军的道路。
In 1948，during the battle for the liberation of Longhua county，six jets of fire from a bridge ______________________ the People's Liberation Army troops.
joined the Communist Party of China
blocked the path of
⑤这座桥是敌人建造的碉堡。
The bridge was a blockhouse ________________________________．
⑥董存瑞提出要炸掉它。在执行这一任务时，他英勇牺牲了。
Dong Cunrui offered to blow it up.___________________________，he died a hero.
(which was) built by the enemy
In doing so/When he did so
⑦他的故事激励着一代又一代的中国青年学习革命精神，为祖国做贡献。
His story has inspired generations of China's youth _____________________ __________________________________________．
to learn the revolutionary
spirit and make contributions to our country
2．句式升级
⑧用强调句升级句③
_____________________________________________________________
3．靓化成篇
结合以上句子写一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。
It was in March，1947 that he joined the Communist Party of China.
[参考范文]
A War Hero
Dong Cunrui，a war hero，was born in a poor peasant family in Huailai county，Hebei province in 1929.
In 1945，he joined the Eighth Route Army and took part in many battles.It was in March，1947 that he joined the Communist Party of China.In 1948，during the battle for the liberation of Longhua county，six jets of fire from a bridge blocked the path of the People's Liberation Army troops.The bridge was a
blockhouse (which was) built by the enemy.Dong Cunrui offered to blow it up.In doing so/When he did so，he died a hero.
His story has inspired generations of China's youth to learn the revolutionary spirit and make contributions to our country.
实战演练
假定你是李华，你们学校正在组织同学们学习中国工程院院士陈薇的典型事迹，请根据以下要点写一篇文章。内容主要包括：
1．研发疫苗的背景；
2．研发过程；
3．被授予“人民英雄”称号。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
There are still different viruses in the world，such as Ebola virus，which seriously threaten people's lives and property.
Chen Wei，an academician of the Chinese Academy of Engineering，often worked around the clock on the vaccines against viruses.After numerous calculations and innovations，Chen's team finally developed a series of vaccines after successful animal tests and clinical trials.
Having long been engaged in the systematic research of biological defense，new vaccines and new biological drugs，and breaking numerous technical barriers with remarkable achievements，Chen Wei is worthy of “the People's Hero”．
Ⅱ 读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
No matter how small you are，you can also give help or support to others.I didn't understand these words until I saw my grandfather weep that day.
I grew up in Southern California，and my family often went to Disneyland，Knott's Berry Farm，and Sea World.The highlight of those park visits for me was always the evening activities when there would be fireworks.
As I grew older and more observant，I noticed that my grandfather would go missing just before the fireworks were scheduled to start and reappear shortly after they finished.I asked my mother about this and was told that Grandpa didn't like to hear the noise of the explosions.They reminded him of the war and his fellows who died in the war.So every time there was fireworks he would go inside the bathrooms until they were done.I felt surprised because my grandfather was such a strong man.
One summer night，somewhere near my tenth birthday，my family and I exited a ride just in time to hear over the loudspeakers，“In only two minutes，the lights will be turned off around the rivers of America，and Disneyland will present their fireworks in the skies over the park.” At this moment，Grandpa was just in front of me，and when he heard the announcement，he started jogging ahead without a word to anyone.Without really thinking，I took off after him，against the orders of my mother，who repeatedly called after me to stay with the rest of the family.Grandpa，unaware that I was behind him，tried desperately to walk through the masses of people who were stopped in the street waiting for the show to begin.
As he tried to reach the restrooms，the first shell broke in the skies above us.Grandpa paused and looked up，just looking as if he had been hit by a shot.And then he kept moving forward.As shell after shell burst overhead，he struggled forward and almost fell over before he could sit onto a bench nearby.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：
Instantly，I went forward and was by his side.________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2：
When the fireworks show ended，he straightened suddenly and wiped the tears.______________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[巧读文]
1．读要素
Who：I，my grandfather，my mother
Where：Disneyland
When：one summer night
What：The author's grandfather was afraid of the sound of fireworks，which reminded him of the war and his comrades who died in it.On the night near the author's tenth birthday，the Disneyland will set off fireworks over the park.After hearing this，the author's grandfather ran forward without a word to find a restroom to hide.
2．读双线(情节线、情感线)
情节线：
情感线：
surprised→nervous
[妙构思]
1．读首句，定方向
Paragraph 1：
由续写第一段首句“Instantly，I went forward and was by his side.(我立刻走到他身边。)”可推知，第一段可写作者安慰祖父的详细过程。由续写第二段首句“烟花表演结束时，他突然直起身来擦眼泪”可知，第一段结束的时候要提到作者对祖父的安慰，祖父的情绪变化是高潮。
Paragraph 2：
由续写第二段首句“When the fireworks show ended，he straightened suddenly and wiped the tears.(烟花表演结束时，他突然直起身来擦眼泪。)”并结合上文提到的细节可推知，第二段可描写祖父感谢作者以及作者的感悟。
2．巧设问，定细节
Paragraph 1：
(1)What did the author see from Grandpa
___________________
(2)What happened to Grandpa
______________________________________________________________
fear on the face
trembling ...His breath was labored and quick，and he wept soundlessly.
(3)What would the author do
________________________________________
(4)How would the story develop
_______________________
kept perfectly still and didn't say a word ...
Grandpa recovered ...
Paragraph 2：
(1)What would Grandpa say
___________________
(2)What did they do
____________________
(3)What did the author think
__________________________________________________________
Thanks，child ...
find their family ...
However little one is，he can offer help and support to others.
[雕句式]
根据提示升级下列句子
1．He looked up at me in surprise.I saw fear on the face that had only shown strength and kindness before.
→_____________________________________________________________________________________________________(时间状语从句)
When he looked up at me in surprise，I saw fear on the face that had
only shown strength and kindness before.
2．People were absorbed in the show.No one noticed us on that bench as we sat for what seemed like hours ...a child supporting a grown man.
→_______________________________________________________________________________________...a child supporting a grown man.(形容词短语作状语)
Absorbed in the show，no one noticed us on that bench as we sat for
what seemed like hours
3．While I was walking through the crowd，I knew that I ought to never mention this to anyone.
→__________________________，I knew that I ought to never mention this to anyone.(省略句)
Walking through the crowd
[成美文]
Paragraph 1：
Instantly，I went forward and was by his side._______________________ _________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2：
When the fireworks show ended，he straightened suddenly and wiped the tears._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
Paragraph 1：
Instantly，I went forward and was by his side. And when he looked up at me in surprise，I saw fear on the face that had only shown strength and kindness before.I grasped his hand firmly.It was trembling and seemed much weaker than I remembered.Grandpa sunk into my arms.His breath was labored and quick，and he wept soundlessly.I kept perfectly still and didn't say a word.Absorbed in the show，no one noticed us on that bench as we sat for what seemed like hours ...a child supporting a grown man.
Paragraph 2：
When the fireworks show ended，he straightened suddenly and wiped the tears.He calmed himself for just a moment，and then put his arms around me and said，“Thanks，child.” Seconds later，he was on his feet，declaring that we should find the others and leading me into the crowd by the hand.I once again felt his strong hand.Walking through the crowd，I knew that I ought to never mention this to anyone.At the same time，I realized that however little one is，he can offer help and support to others.

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