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(共15张PPT)
Unit
HEALTHY LIFESTYLE
2
— Period 5 Reading and Writing
Write A Letter To The Editor About Your Lifestyle
To analyze the organization of a letter;
To learn the“problem-solution” pattern in the body part ;
To study language features of the letters;
To learn to write a letter about one aspect of your own lifestyle that you would like to change;
To develop a healthy lifestyle.
Learning Objectives
What information do you get
Lead-in
What did she receive
Why did they write the letters
What did she ask you to do
Two letters from two students.
To share their changes in lifestyle.
To write a letter to her.
Dear Editor,
Yours truly,/Sincerely,
signature
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
body
Body
Salutation
Complementary close
Read for structure
Tip1: A good structure makes the writing
clear and logical.
problem-solution pattern
What he/she has done to change(Actions)
Considering what to do (Decisions)
Identifying problems
(Problems)
The results
1
2
3
4
5
1
2
3
4
5
Read for details
Tip2: Sufficient elements make the writing more convincing.
Wang Lu George Fielding
Problem Did not feel _____ Felt _______________, lacked ________ Got _________, experienced _________ Felt ____________
Felt even more __________ After _____________________________
Decision To ____________________ To ____________________ To ___________________________
______________________________
well
sleepy and dizzy
passion
the flu easily
toothaches
stressed out
worn out
playing computer games
eat nothing with sugar
exercise regularly
take control of his life and find other ways to relax
Read for details
Action Stopped ______________ Exercise every day for _________ Goes _______________________
_______________________
Result More ______________________ in __________________ Sleeps ________, no longer ____ ___________________________ Feels like __________________ Feel much more ________
Feels he can _________________
buying all the sweets
at least 30 minutes
rock climbing,bowling,watching,
comedies and playing basketball
dynamic and stronger
both body and mind
soundly
suffer from a flu virus or toothaches
in control of her own life
energetic
change himself for better
similarities: through a healthy lifestyle to become better .
keeping a positive attitude to life
working out regularly
keeping a balanced diet
Para.1
Most worrying, though, I got the flu easily and experienced many toothaches, too.
Appreciate the language
仿写：最令我担忧的是，我常睡眼不足。它已经影响到我的学习。
Most worrying, I could’t sleep well, which already affected my study.
What worried me most is that I could’t sleep well, which already affected my study.
the V-ing form as adverbial,意为“最令人担忧的是...”
What worried me most is that I got the flu easily and experienced many toothaches, too.
Subject clause
Para.4
Sometimes I played table tennis or badminton with my cousins. Other times I jumped on my skateboard and rode around my neighbourhood, or just took a long walk.
Appreciate the language
仿写：有时，我跟我的朋友一起打篮球。其他时间，我去图书馆写写作业，看看书。
Sometimes I played basketball with my friends. Other times I went to the library, did my homework ,and read some books.
Para.4
I get refreshed through climbing, spend more time with my dad, and get to meet news friends.
Action Chains: S+v1+v2, and v3
Tip3:Good sentence patterns make the writing a feast for the eyes.
Structure of a letter:
Salutation
Body
Closing
Summary
Decisions
Actions
Results
Yours, xx
1.A well-organised structure makes the writing clear and logical.
2.The elements : problem, decision, action and result should be included.
3.Good sentence patterns enriches the writing.
Dear xx,
Problems
Writing tips:
Writing
假如你是高中生Li Hua, 在看了“健康生活”夏令营的编辑Sara的视频后，你决定用英文给她回信，分享你生活方式改变的个人经历。
内容包括：
1.你存在的问题，采取的行动，以及预期结果。
2.字数要求： 100字左右。
unhealthy lifestyle
do sth. else instead,like working out
electronic device addict
limit the time spending on them
have a balanced diet
lay emphasis on breakfast
go to bed early
Writing
online game addict
overeating
skipping breakfast
staying up too late
Problems
Actions
Results
Decisions
more energetic, dynamic, confident
Brainstorm
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to share my life-changing experience with you.Like most teenagers,I was addicted to computer games as well. However, as time went on, the negative impacts of excessive gaming began to surface.Most worrying, I could’t sleep well, which already affected my academic performance. Moreover, my physical health was at risk. Sitting for long periods while gaming caused me to gain weight and experience back and neck pain. My eyes were constantly strained from staring at the bright screen.
Realizing the severity of the situation, I knew I had to make a change. I started by setting strict time limits for gaming. I allocated specific hours during the weekend for playing, ensuring that it didn't affect my schoolwork. Sometimes I played basketball with my old friend.Other times I went to the library,and did my homework,or just listened to the music.
By taking control of my habits and making positive changes, I have regained my academic focus, improved my social skills, and adopted a healthier lifestyle.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(Problem)
(Decision & action)
(Results)
Sample writing
1.Revise & polish your letter with your partner or by using Deepseek.
2.Search for more information about how to keep a healthy lifestyle by using AI technology,such as Deepseek,豆包,文心一言,ect.
Homework
We cannot change our future,
but we can change our habits,
and surely our habits will change our future.

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