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Writing
Describe a Place
假如你是李华，某英文报社正在开展“Speak for my hometown”主题征文活动，请你写一篇投稿介绍你的家乡江西，要点包括：
1.基本概况
2.著名景点、人文景观等
3.欢迎前来游玩。
词数80左右
Genre
Topic
Tense
Person
说明文
介绍一个地方
以一般现在时为主
以第三人称为主
Describe a place
Introduction
Body
Ending
To make the reader eager to read your writing
A general image 总体印象
Something surprising 突出特征
Transitions
Help the reader follow your ideas
Details and examples
Use sensory details.使用五感描写
Give examples.举例子
A concluding statement to attract readers to visit.
引起读者的阅读兴趣
过渡句
细节和例子
总结陈述以吸引读者前去旅游
To be the best Publicity Ambassador
江西最美宣传大使
Jiangxi is a/an ____________________________place.
beautiful/rapidly developing…
Description of Jiangxi
What can you see
What can you taste
What can you hear
What can you smell
How does the place feel
What do you think of the place
...
In groups, discuss how to introduce Jiangxi.
What can you see
In groups, discuss how to introduce Jiangxi.
What can you taste
What can you smell
In groups, discuss how to introduce Jiangxi.
jar soup瓦罐汤
rice noodle
What can you hear
In groups, discuss how to introduce Jiangxi.
sentence pattern 句式仿写
1.The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
原文：绿宝石岛和它的许多绿色郡的宁静风景是一场真正的视觉盛宴，起伏的绿色山丘上点缀着绵羊和牛。
仿写：The peaceful landscape of Jiangxi and its many counties is a true feast for the eyes, with _____________________ dotted with __
________________and________________.
江西风光宁静秀美，郡县草木葱茏，青山连绵起伏，瀑布、鲜花点缀其中，堪称一场名副其实的视觉盛宴。
its green mountains
striking waterfalls
beautiful flowers
2.Down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.
sentence pattern 句式仿写
在海边，海浪的咆哮和海鸟的鸣叫构成了海岸的音乐。
仿写：And down by the Poyang Lake, _______________________and ____________________make up the unique
music of Jiangxi.(murmur n/v.低语,呢喃)
在鄱阳湖边，水波的轻响和水鸟的啼鸣交织成了江西独特的乐章。
the murmur of the waves
cries of the water birds
3.On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning songs.
在山里宁静的早晨，感受阳光洒落在你身上，呼吸着鲜花的芬芳，而鸟儿则用清晨的歌声迎接新的一天的到来。
feel the sun on your skin
感受阳光照在脸上的感觉
breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers 闻鲜花香甜的气息
greet...with...
以...来问候/迎接
sentence pattern 句式仿写
sentence pattern 句式仿写
在婺源宁静的清晨，感受阳光洒在脸庞，呼吸着油菜花田(rapeseed flower fields )传来的香气，鸟儿用轻柔的歌声迎接新的一天。
仿写：On a quiet morning in , feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the scent of while birds greet the new day with their .
rapeseed flower fields
(油菜花田)
rapeseed flowers fields
gentle songs
Wuyuan
4.To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew.
sentence pattern 句式仿写
仿写：To have a chance of experiencing local food, stop by _______________ and treat yourself to______________________________ . Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional ________.
a plate of rice noodles
a local restaurant
jar soup
jar soup瓦罐汤
rice noodle
想要体验当地美食，不妨走进一家本地餐馆，犒劳自己一份拌粉。更妙的是，再来一碗美味的传统瓦罐汤。
想要亲身体验这份风情，
不妨走进乡村小酒馆，点上一杯葡萄酒或本地啤酒，悠
闲放松。更妙的是，品尝一份美味的传统爱尔兰炖牛肉。
Introduction：介绍旅游景点的基本信息，如地理位置、人文环境等。
Body：具体介绍其旅游特色。可以介绍一下景点的历史、特色以及它在当地的地位等。要注意安排好说明顺序，描述要详略得当。
Ending：总结陈述以吸引读者前去旅游。
Senses Imitate（仿写）
Sight The peaceful__________and its many green_________ is a true feast for the eyes.
Hearing the tinkling（叮咚声）of__________and cries of__________ make up the music of the _____
Smell breathe in the scent of__________
Touch feel the breeze（微风）on our__________
Taste Stop by__________and relax with__________ and enjoy delicious__________
Beginning
It lies/is located in...with an area of...
It covers an area of...with a history of...
...located in...and covering an area of...，...is one of China’s most famous scenic spots.
The history of...dates back to...
It has become the most popular tourist attraction since...
Body
There are many places of interest，such as...
You can enjoy...which has a high reputation both at home and abroad.
...is/are attracting more and more tourists.
An interesting feature of...
With its pleasant climate, rich natural resources and beautiful scenery，
...is one of China’s major tourist cities.
A trip along...will enable you to get to know...
Ending:
...is well worth visiting.
...is a place you have to visit and the extraordinary view will make you unwilling to leave.
Speak for My Hometown — Jiangxi
My hometown is Jiangxi, a province in eastern China with a long history and profound culture. It is well-known for its stunning natural scenery and unique local traditions.
The peaceful landscape of Jiangxi and its many counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its green mountains dotted with striking waterfalls and beautiful flowers. In Wuyuan, on a quiet morning, you can feel the sun on your skin and breathe in the scent of rapeseed flower fields while birds greet the new day with their gentle songs. Down by the Poyang Lake, the murmur of the waves and cries of the water birds make up the unique music of Jiangxi. To experience local life, stop by a local restaurant and treat yourself to a plate of rice noodles. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional jar soup.
Welcome to Jiangxi, where you will find both natural beauty and warm local charm!
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have a great influence on
have a long history of
excite and inspire all
a true feast for the eyes
rolling green hills
be dotted with
the roar of the ocean waves
the cries of the seabirds
对……有重要的影响
有久远的……历史
使所有人激动和受到启发
一场真正的视觉盛宴
起伏的绿色山丘
被……点缀着
海浪的咆哮声
海鸟的叫声
key phrases
9 greet the new day with their morning song
10 it is not surprising that
11 a glass of wine
12 better yet
13 a friendly face
14 be more than likely to do sth
15 experience local culture and customs first-hand
用清晨的歌声迎接新的一天
毫不意外……
一杯葡萄酒
更好的是
一个友好的人
非常可能做某事
亲身经历当地文化习俗
拟人
_______________________ the West Lake is _____________________,
with its ___________dotted with ___________________. And down by ________, ________________________, and ____________________
make up ___________________________. On a quiet morning, ______ _______________, ______________________, and ________________
________________________ while birds ______ the new day with their morning song. Stop by _______________ and _______________ the delicious fish and Dongpo meat. Better yet, _____________a cup of Longjing tea.
西湖的宁静景色是一场真正的视觉盛宴，两岸点缀着五颜六色的小花。湖边，泉水的叮当声(tinkling)，鸟儿的叫声，构成了大自然美妙的音乐。在一个宁静的早晨，漫步在公园里，感受阳光洒落在你皮肤上，呼吸鲜花的芬芳，而鸟儿则用晨歌迎接新的一天的到来。去一家老餐馆，用美味的鱼和东坡肉犒赏自己。更好的是，喝一杯龙井茶。
The peaceful landscape of
a true feast for the eyes
both banks
little colorful flowers
the lake
the tinkling of ripples
the song of the birds
the wonderful music of nature
wander
around the park
feel the sun on your skin
breathe in the
sweet scent of fresh flower
greet
an old restaurant
treat yourself to
enjoy / go with

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