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UNIT 2　Improving yourself
(单元主题语境：人与自我——完善自我、提升自我)
Section Ⅳ　Writing
1.写作词汇再现
①unforgettable令人难忘的
②impress sb.deeply使某人印象深刻
③a valuable lesson宝贵的教训
④pay off取得成功
⑤turn out结果是，证明是
⑥describe描述
⑦in return作为回报
⑧in need of需要
⑨feel down感到沮丧；情绪消沉
⑩succeed in doing sth. 成功做某事
shocked震惊的
make progress取得进步
make up one's mind to do sth.下定决心做某事
2．精彩句式再练
单句填空/完成句子
①I was _______(shock) when she asked me this on this occasion.
②They grew ____ on a farm and believed that responsibility，hard work，and respect for the land were valuable lessons.
③That night，as they headed toward the house，John ____________ (inspire).
④A sense of inner peace he had never experienced in the city swept ____ him then.
shocked
up
was inspired
over
⑤自从第一次尝试后，我一直在考虑正确的答案。
___________________________，I have considered the correct answer.
⑥我们生而不同，我们生而要有所作为。
We are born different，and we are born to _________________．
⑦男孩们没有马上离开，而是在跑道旁等着，每次女孩经过时都为她加油。
The boys didn't leave right away，but waited by the track ____________________ each time she went by.
Since making my first attempt
make a difference
cheering the girl on
⑧由于他还年轻，杰斯被鼓励说他就像一个折翼的天使，为某事做着准备。
Due to his young age，Jayce was encouraged that he was just _____________ with one wing folded to prepare for something.
like an angel
Ⅰ　写一篇读后感
写作指导
读后感是指在读完一本书、一篇文章、一段话或几句名言之后，写出的感想、体会或评论等。读后感也可以叫作读书笔记，是一种常见的应用文体。
读后感的基本结构通常为：
1．第一部分，故事梗概(时间、地点、人物、主要事件及结局)；
2．第二部分，对故事的理解或感受；
3．第三部分，从故事中悟出的道理或结论。
典例展示
短文Madame Curie and Radium主要介绍了伟大的物理学家居里夫人是如何克服重重困难最终发现了镭元素的。请你以“Learning from Madame Curie”为题，结合文章内容写一篇读后感。内容包括：
1．故事总体介绍；
2．你的理解和感悟；
3．联系自己的学习实际，谈谈体会和决心。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Learning from Madame Curie
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[审题谋篇]
确定体裁、
话题 体裁：应用文
话题：读后感(居里夫人)
确定时态、
人称 时态：一般过去时和一般现在时
人称：第一人称为主
布局文章
架构 开头：总体介绍
中间：理解和感受
结尾：道理或结论
列出核心
要点 1.居里夫人发现了镭
2．学习居里夫人的精神
3．体会和决心
[实践应用]
1．完成句子
①我知道居里夫人是一位著名的物理学家和化学家。
I know that Madame Curie was ______________________________．
②经过数年的努力，她成功地发现了镭。
After several years of hard work，________________ discovering radium.
a famous physicist and chemist
she succeeded in
③让我印象最深的是居里夫人坚强的意志和毅力。
_____________________________ Madame Curie's strong will and perseverance.
④我总是害怕学习上的困难，最终进步甚微。
I ____________________ difficulties in my studies，making little progress finally.
⑤这肯定会鼓励我更加努力地学习。
It will certainly ____________________ harder.
What has impressed me most is
was always afraid of
encourage me to work
⑥在不久的将来，我会成为一个好学生和优秀的社会主义建设者。
I can become a good student and a fine builder of socialism __________ ___________．
in the
near future
2．句式升级
⑦将句④改写为并列句
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⑧将句⑤和句⑥升级为含有结果状语从句的复合句
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I was always afraid of difficulties in my studies，so I made little progress finally.
It will certainly encourage me to work harder in order that/so that I can become a good student and a fine builder of socialism in the near future.
3．靓化成篇
结合以上句子写一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。
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[参考范文]
Learning from Madame Curie
After reading the passage Madame Curie and Radium，I know that Madame Curie was a famous physicist and chemist.After several years of hard work，she succeeded in discovering radium.She will always be remembered as the discoverer of the element radium.
What has impressed me most is Madame Curie's strong will and perseverance.Before reading the passage，I was always afraid of difficulties in my studies，so I made little progress finally.Now I have made up my mind to learn from Madame Curie.It will certainly encourage me to work harder in order that/so that I can become a good student and a fine builder of socialism in the near future.
实战演练
请根据以下提示写一篇《阿甘正传》(Forrest Gump)的读后感。
1．阿甘天生智力低下，肌肉有问题。通常，人们总是认为这种人做任何事都不会成功。
2．然而，他凭借自己的努力取得了许多令人难以置信的成功。他是足球明星、战争英雄，后来成了百万富翁！
3．我被他的坚强意志、善良和乐观所感动。
4．在他的一生中，有许多奇迹对他来说似乎是不可能的。但我知道这是合理的，因为他以高尚的人格创造了这些奇迹。
5．这个故事向我们传达了这样一个信息：做好我们该做的事，生活就会回报我们。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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[参考范文]
Forrest Gump was born with a low IQ and a muscle problem.Usually，people always think that this kind of person can't succeed in doing anything.However，he has achieved lots of incredible success through his own efforts.He is a football star，a war hero，and later a millionaire!
I am moved by his strong will，kindness and optimism.There are many miracles all his life which seem impossible to him.But I know it is reasonable，because he creates them with his noble personality.
The story sends such a message to us：do what we should do well，and life will return us.
Ⅱ　读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The school picnic day was on Sunday，and on Saturday morning I decided to ask Mum some questions.As soon as Mum took the last bite of her toast，I decided I couldn't wait for her any longer and asked，“Mum，where is Italy？”
My mum pushed up her glasses and looked at me with her head to one side. Then she said，“Italy is an European country which is very far away from here，my love.Why do you want to know that？” I shrugged(耸肩)，“That's where Mike，the new boy in our class, is from.”
She nodded and invited me to go to fetch the geography book.The book was big and Mum always kept the very big books on the bottom shelf of our bookcase.I watched as Mum flipped to the index and then to a page near the middle.“Here we go，” she said，turning the map around to show me.I let my finger meet hers where it said the word “Italy” in capital letters.According to the introduction to the country on the page，Mum helped me know more about the country.
“You know，Mum，Mike's parents are extremely busy working in the downtown.He seldom eats regularly, let alone(更不用说) has his native food.I really want him to be very happy for his first picnic with us ...” I paused and observed Mum，worried that Mum would think that it was silly and maybe a waste of money buying food only to give it away.But she didn't.Instead，she said，“I think that's a brilliant idea！Go and get ready，and we'll head out on a big shopping.”
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：
I got ready so quickly that morning that I thought I must have beaten a world record._________________________________________________
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Paragraph 2：
We gathered on the grass on Sunday morning and I saw the Italian boy immediately._________________________________________________
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[巧读文]
1．读要素
Who：Mike，the new boy in our class；my mother；I
When：the day before the school picnic day
Where：at home
What：Make food for the Italian boy who doesn't eat regularly.
[妙构思]
1．读首句，定方向
Paragraph 1：
由续写第一段首句“I got ready so quickly that morning that I thought I must have beaten a world record.”可知，作者对即将进行的周末大采购非常兴奋。由此可推知，第一段可描写作者在学校野餐日前一天的早上与母亲一起去购物的情景。续写第二段首句“We gathered on the grass on Sunday morning and I saw the Italian boy immediately.”提到，星期天早上在草地上集合时，作者看到了那个意大利男孩。由此可知，第一段后半部分要描写妈妈把食材做成了意大利食物，作者很期待把惊喜送给Mike。
Paragraph 2：
由续写第二段首句“We gathered on the grass on Sunday morning and I saw the Italian boy immediately.”可知，该段首先要描写作者在野餐地点与这位意大利男孩分享意大利食物的经过；结合上文内容可知，文章结局可描述通过分享不同的经历来了解彼此，这种真诚的善意没有人会抗拒。
2．巧设问，定细节
Paragraph 1：
(1)What did I do in preparation for the purchase
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(2)What did we buy
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(3)What were our feelings like
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Pulled on my clothes/Put money in my pocket/ ...
Fresh fruit and vegetables/ ...
Proud，in high spirits/ ...
Paragraph 2：
(1)How did I draw Mike's attention
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(2)How did Mike react to my behavior
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(3)What did I do
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(4)What did I think about the experience
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Waved my hand/ ...
Looked around，approached me/ ...
Gestured for him to sit down，unpacked the package of his native food/ ...
A beautiful day，the sincere kindness/ ...
[雕句式]
根据提示升级下列句子
1．After I put all the money I saved carefully in my pocket，I rushed to meet my smiling Mum at the front gate.
→______________________________________________，I rushed to meet my smiling Mum at the front gate.(with复合结构)
2．We went to stands of fresh fruit and vegetables and selected some for making pizza.
→We went to stands of fresh fruit and vegetables，_______________ ________________．(分词作状语)
With all the money I saved carefully put in my pocket
selecting some
for making pizza
3．He was shy and quiet，and he approached me with a light-hearted pace.
→_____________，he approached me with a light-hearted pace.(形容词作状语)
Shy and quiet
[成美文]
Paragraph 1：
I got ready so quickly that morning that I thought I must have beaten a world record._________________________________________________
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Paragraph 2：
We gathered on the grass on Sunday morning and I saw the Italian boy immediately._________________________________________________
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[参考范文]
Paragraph 1：
I got ready so quickly that morning that I thought I must have beaten a world record. In five minutes I had my trousers and T-shirt pulled on，and hurriedly emptied my piggy bank.With all the money I saved carefully put in my pocket，I rushed to meet my smiling Mum at the front gate.We went to stands of fresh fruit and vegetables，selecting some for making pizza.Proudly looking at the products，Mum and I drove back home in high spirits.I could picture the perfect pizza which my mother was expert in cooking and the new boy's amazed face.
Paragraph 2：
We gathered on the grass on Sunday morning and I saw the Italian boy immediately. I waved my hand to draw Mike's attention.He looked around and finally made sure that he was my target.Shy and quiet，he approached me with a light-hearted pace.I patted the place beside me，gestured for him to sit down and unpacked the package of his native food.He hesitated at first but later focused his eyes on my sincere face and gave me a broad smile.What a beautiful day it was！We enjoyed the delicious pizza together and came to understand each other by sharing different experiences.No one would resist the sincere kindness.

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