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Unit7 A Good Read 书面表达12篇
（单元话题：文学阅读与感悟）
1．
Hello everyone! Today I’d like to share my favorite book with you.
My favorite book is The Little Prince, a warm and meaningful fairy tale. It tells the story of a little prince’s space journey, where he learns about love, friendship and the true meaning of life.
I think it is really meaningful. It teaches me to keep a pure heart and stay curious. I love this book and hope you will enjoy it too.
一、快速核对
2．例文
My Favorite Chinese Traditional Story
There are many traditional stories in China. Among all of the stories, I like Yu Gong moves the mountains best.
Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yu Gong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side, so he decided to move the mountains. Yu Gong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving them day after day, year after year. Finally, a god was so moved that he sent two gods to take the mountains away.
The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.
一、快速核对
3．例文：
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classical works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you.
I think it is one of the most famous classical novels in China. The stories are full of imagination and humor, which make the book very interesting to read. Among the four main characters, I like the Monkey King best. He is not only brave and clever, but also has magical powers to fight against bad people. From the book, I have learned that we should never give up when facing difficulties. Teamwork is also important if we want to achieve our dreams.
Yours,
Li Hua
一、快速核对
4．例文
I’d like to share the story of Yu Gong Moves a Mountain with all of you.
Yu Gong was an old man. There were two high mountains near his home, so he decided to move them with his family. A wise man laughed at him, but Yu Gong kept working hard. Finally, a god was moved and helped him move the mountains away.
From the story, I have learned that nothing is impossible if we work hard and never give up!
一、快速核对
5．例文
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad to share my favourite book with you.
My favourite book is Journey to the West. It is one of the four Chinese literary classics. The writer is Wu Cheng’en, a great writer in ancient China. The story tells us about four main characters. They get over many difficulties on the way to the West. Finally, they make it. The Monkey King is my favourite character. He is so smart and brave that he can protect the other three characters well. He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges.
The book is so interesting that I lose myself in it. It tells me that as long as I never give up, I can achieve my goals.
That’s all. Thank you for your attention.
一、快速核对
6．例文
A Book That Influenced Me A Lot
The book that changed me a lot is The Old Man and the Sea written by Ernest Hemingway.
It tells the story of an old fisherman who fights with a big marlin at sea alone. He faces great difficulties but never gives up, and he says “a man can be destroyed, but not defeated”. This sentence left a deep impression on me.
This book taught me to be brave when facing difficulties. Whenever I want to give up my study or hobbies, I think of the old fisherman. It also makes me realize that the process of striving is more important than the result. Reading it makes me a stronger person.
一、快速核对
7．例文
My favourite book
I enjoy reading in my free time, and I have already read many famous books. Of them, The Wizard of Oz is my favorite one.
The Wizard of Oz is a children’s book by L. Frank Baum. It describes the story of a young girl named Dorothy. Although she has many difficulties in the magical land, she doesn’t give up hope and succeeds in returning home in the end.
This book is exciting and educational. I have learned much from it. It teaches me to be brave in the face of difficulties. I think you will also love it if you read the book.
一、快速核对
8．例文
A book I have read
As a book lover, I have read a lot of books. Recently I have finished reading Robinson Crusoe.
This book is so interesting that I like it a lot. Robinson is a brave man. When he is young, he dreams of sailing on the sea. After an accident, he arrives at an island and lives there alone for 28 years. He always tries to face any danger.
His story encourages me deeply. The book helps me get over difficulties in my life. I really enjoy reading the book.
一、快速核对
9．例文
My favourite book is The Secret Garden by Frances Hodgson Burnett. It’s a classic novel about growth.
Mary, a selfish girl, finds a secret garden and brings it back to life. Once hidden and lifeless, it blooms with new energy. With her friends, she helps her weak cousin Colin stand up. I love it because it shows friendship and nature’s power. It teaches me that kindness and hope can change everything. I recommend everyone to read it!
一、快速核对
10．例文
My favourite book
My favourite thing from childhood is a book called Five Thousand Years of Chinese History. I have kept it for six years. I got it from my mother as a birthday gift when I was seven years old. It is special for me because it is full of my mother’s love. There are many stories about Chinese history in the book. I liked to share them with my mother. At that time, my mother read it for me during the bedtime every day. It was so interesting that I fell in love with it soon. I also felt my mother’s love for me.
一、快速核对
11．例文
Dear Mr Wang,
I’m Li Hua. I’m really willing to be a volunteer to assist the foreign students from our sister school and introduce traditional Chinese festivals to them.
I have several advantages. Firstly, I’m good at communicating and my English is fluent, which helps me explain festival stories and customs clearly. Moreover, I have a deep understanding of festivals like the Spring Festival and the Mid-Autumn Festival.
It would be a precious opportunity for me to spread Chinese culture and make foreign friends better understand our traditions.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
一、快速核对
12．参考例文一:
Journey to the West is a novel. It is written by Wu Cheng’en, from Ming Dynasty. It tells the story of the Monk Tang with three apprentices. Funny and humorous, it is popular among people, young and old. It inspires people to chase their dreams and never give up.
参考例文二:
Journey to the West is a novel, written by Wu Cheng’en. He is from Ming Dynasty. It tells the story of the Monk Tang and his three apprentices. It is funny and humorous, so it is popular with people, young and old. It inspires people to realize their dreams and never give up.
一、快速核对Unit 7 A Good Read书面表达12篇
（单元话题：文学阅读与感悟）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．每年的4月23日为“世界读书日”。人一生的成长和进步总是离不开书。假如学校下周将组织读书分享活动，请你介绍你喜欢的一本书。词数不少于70。需包含的信息：
(1) The name of the book and the kind of book;
(2) What the book is about;
(3) What you think of the book.
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2．假设China Daily网站中的Culture版块中有一项“Tell a Chinese Traditional Story”征文活动。假如你是李华，请你以“My Favorite Chinese Traditional Story”为题写一篇英语文章进行投稿。
提示：
1.描述故事内容。
2.故事带给你的影响和启发。
要求：
1.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名
2.语句连贯，字数100词左右。
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3．
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Mike 想阅读中国经典名著。请你写封邮件，向他推荐《西游记》内容提示： 1. What do you think of the book
2. Which character do you like best Why
3. What can you learn from the book
写作要求：
1. 词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 必须包括所给提示内容，可以适当增加细节；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名或校名。
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classical works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．假如你所在的英语俱乐部即将举办一场英语故事分享会，请你根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文参加这次活动。
要点：
1. 这个故事的名字是什么？
2. 这个故事的大致内容是什么？
3. 你从这个故事中得到了什么启示？
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
2. 词数80左右。
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5．假如你是李华，参加了国际学生读书会。这个周末由你来做读书报告，向来华读书的外国学生介绍一本中国读物。请你以“My favourite book”为主题，写一篇英语发言稿，在每周一次的读书会中介绍自己最喜欢的一本书。
写作内容：
（1）书名及作者、书的类型和主要内容；
（2）你喜欢这本书的理由。
写作要求：
（1）层次清晰，语言流畅；
（2）词数80左右，开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）书写规范，卷面整洁；
（4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad to share my favourite book with you.
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That’s all. Thank you for your attention.
6．假设你读过一本对你影响深远的书，请写一篇短文，内容包括：
1. 书籍的基本信息 (书名、作者)；
2. 书的核心内容或让你印象最深的部分；
3. 这本书对你的影响和你的阅读感悟。
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7．文学名著可以给我们带来乐趣，引发我们的思考，开阔我们的眼界。那么，你最喜欢的一本名著是什么呢？请你以“My favorite book”为题，根据下面提示，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. What’s your favorite book
2. Why do you like this book best
3. What can you learn from the book
注意：
1.内容齐全，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数80左右。
My favourite book
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8．根据要点内容，以“A book I have read”为题，介绍你读过的一本书——《鲁滨孙漂流记》。词数80~100。
要点：
1. 我是书迷，读过很多书；
2. 已经读完了《鲁滨孙漂流记》，它是一本有趣的书；
3. Robinson是一个勇敢的人，年轻的时候，他梦想着在大海上航行；在一次事故之后，他到达了一个小岛并在岛上独自生活了28年；他总是努力面对任何危险；
4. 这个故事激励着我。
参考词汇: book lover (书迷); dream of sailing (梦想航行); encourage (激励)
A book I have read
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9．假设你是学校读书俱乐部的成员，请写一篇短文，向同学们推荐一本你最喜欢的书。
提示：1. 书名及作者；
2.书的类型及主要内容；
3.你喜欢它的原因及从中得到的收获。要求：80 词左右，语句通顺，语法正确。
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10．每个人都有自己最喜欢的一本书，请你以“My favourite book”为题写一篇英语短文，向我们介绍一下它吧。
内容包括：
（1）你最喜欢的书是什么？
（2）这本书有什么特殊之处？
（3）你和这本书之间有什么难忘的故事？
注意：
（1）词数80左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My favourite book
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11．暑期将至，一批来自姊妹学校的外国学生将到你校参观交流，他们想了解中国的传统节日。为此，你校英语社团面向全校征集志愿者。假如你是李华，请根据下图内容，用英语给社团负责人王老师写一封自荐信。
表明意愿 愿意担任…… 介绍优势 善于沟通、英语流利、 熟悉中国传统节日…… 表达期望 希望成为……
要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 必须包含所给提示，并做适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4. 词数100 左右。
Dear Mr Wang,
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
12．限制性情境表达
小说《西游记》的作者是吴承恩，明朝人，小说讲述了唐僧四人的故事，风趣幽默，深受人们喜爱。它启示人们追逐梦想永不言弃。
注释：apprentice学徒；inspire启示
要求：用大约五句话描述上面的内容
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参考答案
1．
Hello everyone! Today I’d like to share my favorite book with you.
My favorite book is The Little Prince, a warm and meaningful fairy tale. It tells the story of a little prince’s space journey, where he learns about love, friendship and the true meaning of life.
I think it is really meaningful. It teaches me to keep a pure heart and stay curious. I love this book and hope you will enjoy it too.
写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：读书分享类说明文，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：①书名与书籍类型 ②书籍主要内容 ③个人评价与感受
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）
注意事项：不透露个人真实信息，不使用本卷已介绍过的书籍
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：礼貌开场，点明分享主题
主体段：介绍书籍基本信息（书名、类型）与核心内容
结尾段：表达个人看法与书籍带来的影响，发出推荐
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：书名与书籍类型
书名：The Little Prince/Little Women/Journey to the West
类型：fairy tale/novel/storybook/fiction
要点二：书籍主要内容
核心情节：a little prince’s space journey/tells the story of.../talks about...
主题内涵：learns about love, friendship and the true meaning of life/teaches people about.../shows the importance of...
要点三：个人评价与感受
总体评价：meaningful/great/wonderful/educational
具体收获：teaches me to keep a pure heart and stay curious/helps me learn.../makes me understand...
结尾推荐：I love this book and hope you will enjoy it too/I highly recommend it/I hope you will like it
2．例文
My Favorite Chinese Traditional Story
There are many traditional stories in China. Among all of the stories, I like Yu Gong moves the mountains best.
Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yu Gong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side, so he decided to move the mountains. Yu Gong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving them day after day, year after year. Finally, a god was so moved that he sent two gods to take the mountains away.
The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.
写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：说明文（征文投稿），以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
明确要点：介绍自己最喜欢的中国传统故事，需包含故事内容和故事带来的影响与启发
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）
注意事项：不得透露真实个人信息，语句连贯，词数100词左右
[第二步：构思布局]
开头段：点明主题，引出自己最喜欢的中国传统故事
主体段：介绍《愚公移山》的主要故事情节
结尾段：阐述故事带来的影响与启发，点明主题意义
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：点明主题
核心短语：many traditional stories in China/like Yu Gong moves the mountains best/my favorite Chinese folk tale/the most inspiring traditional story I’ve ever read
要点二：故事内容
核心短语：Once upon a time/an old man called Yu Gong/two high mountains near his home/decided to move the mountains/kept moving them day after day, year after year/a god was so moved/sent two gods to take the mountains away/determined to clear the obstacles in his path/persisted in his task despite doubts and difficulties
要点三：影响与启发
核心短语：reminds us that nothing is impossible/as long as we work hard/should not give up/teaches us the power of perseverance and determination/encourages us to keep going when facing seemingly impossible challenges
3．例文：
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classical works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you.
I think it is one of the most famous classical novels in China. The stories are full of imagination and humor, which make the book very interesting to read. Among the four main characters, I like the Monkey King best. He is not only brave and clever, but also has magical powers to fight against bad people. From the book, I have learned that we should never give up when facing difficulties. Teamwork is also important if we want to achieve our dreams.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：书信体推荐文（推荐中国经典名著），以一般现在时为主
明确要点：对《西游记》这本书的整体评价、最喜欢哪个角色及原因、从书中学到了什么
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）为主，第二人称（you）为辅（写给Mike的信件）
注意事项：不得出现真实的人名或校名；词数80左右（已给开头和结尾不计入）
[第二步：构思布局]
两段式结构：
开头段（已给出）：直接点明推荐的书目——《西游记》（Journey to the West）
主体段：对书的整体评价、最喜欢哪个角色及原因、从书中学到了什么
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：推荐书籍《西游记》
书籍名称：Journey to the West
地位描述：one of the most famous classical novels in China
内容特点：be full of imagination and humor、very interesting to read
推荐目的：recommend...to you
要点二：喜爱的角色与理由
角色选择：the Monkey King
角色特点：brave and clever、has magical powers
行为表现：fight against bad people
要点三：阅读感悟
收获内容：never give up when facing difficulties、teamwork is important
目标关联：achieve our dreams
4．例文
I’d like to share the story of Yu Gong Moves a Mountain with all of you.
Yu Gong was an old man. There were two high mountains near his home, so he decided to move them with his family. A wise man laughed at him, but Yu Gong kept working hard. Finally, a god was moved and helped him move the mountains away.
From the story, I have learned that nothing is impossible if we work hard and never give up!
写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：记叙文（故事分享），以一般过去时为主
明确要点：故事名称、故事大致内容（起因、经过、结果） 、个人启示
确定人称：第一人称（I, me, my）
注意事项：不出现真实姓名、校名，词数控制在80左右
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：点明要分享的故事名称
主体段：简要讲述故事的主要内容（谁、做了什么、结果如何）
结尾段：写出你从这个故事中学到的道理或启示
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：故事名称
常用表达：I’d like to share the story of…/The story I want to tell is…/Let me tell you a story called…等
要点二：故事大致内容
人物：an old man/a little girl/a clever animal等
起因：There were/was…/ He/She wanted to…等
经过：decided to…/kept doing…/didn’t give up…等
结果：Finally/In the end/A god/a friend helped him/her…等
要点三：个人启示
常用句型：From the story, I have learned that…/This story tells us that…/The lesson I get is that…等
常见道理：nothing is impossible if we work hard and never give up/be kind to others/we should help each other等
5．例文
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad to share my favourite book with you.
My favourite book is Journey to the West. It is one of the four Chinese literary classics. The writer is Wu Cheng’en, a great writer in ancient China. The story tells us about four main characters. They get over many difficulties on the way to the West. Finally, they make it. The Monkey King is my favourite character. He is so smart and brave that he can protect the other three characters well. He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges.
The book is so interesting that I lose myself in it. It tells me that as long as I never give up, I can achieve my goals.
That’s all. Thank you for your attention.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：介绍书名、作者、类型、内容及喜欢理由，需符合发言稿格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步：简要介绍自己，引出话题；
第二步：具体阐述书籍信息，包括书名、作者、类型、主要内容及喜爱理由；
第三步：总结书籍对个人的启示，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①one of the four Chinese literary classics中国四大文学名著之一
②get over many difficulties克服许多困难
③never give up永不放弃
④achieve my goals实现我的目标
[高分句型]
①He is so smart and brave that he can protect the other three characters well. (so … that … 引导结果状语从句)
②It tells me that as long as I never give up, I can achieve my goals. (that引导宾语从句，其中包含as long as引导的条件状语从句)
6．例文
A Book That Influenced Me A Lot
The book that changed me a lot is The Old Man and the Sea written by Ernest Hemingway.
It tells the story of an old fisherman who fights with a big marlin at sea alone. He faces great difficulties but never gives up, and he says “a man can be destroyed, but not defeated”. This sentence left a deep impression on me.
This book taught me to be brave when facing difficulties. Whenever I want to give up my study or hobbies, I think of the old fisherman. It also makes me realize that the process of striving is more important than the result. Reading it makes me a stronger person.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：需涵盖书籍信息、核心内容、个人影响。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，点明核心——介绍对自己影响深远的书《老人与海》及其作者海明威；
第二步，简述书的核心情节，即老人独自与大马林鱼搏斗的故事，并引出给自己留下最深印象的经典台词；
第三步，阐述这本书带来的影响与感悟，包括学会勇敢面对困难，以及认识到奋斗的过程比结果更重要。
[亮点词汇]
①influence影响
②face difficulties面对困难
③give up放弃
④think of想到
[高分句型]
①The book that changed me a lot is The Old Man and the Sea written by Ernest Hemingway. (that引导的限制性定语从句)
②Reading it makes me a stronger person. (动名词短语作主语)
7．例文
My favourite book
I enjoy reading in my free time, and I have already read many famous books. Of them, The Wizard of Oz is my favorite one.
The Wizard of Oz is a children’s book by L. Frank Baum. It describes the story of a young girl named Dorothy. Although she has many difficulties in the magical land, she doesn’t give up hope and succeeds in returning home in the end.
This book is exciting and educational. I have learned much from it. It teaches me to be brave in the face of difficulties. I think you will also love it if you read the book.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：需完整覆盖“最喜欢的书名”“喜欢的原因”“从书中收获”三大要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当补充细节增强感染力。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点明自己的阅读爱好，并直接引出最喜欢的书籍《绿野仙踪》；
第二步：简述书籍的作者与核心情节，说明喜欢它的原因（情节精彩、角色励志）；
第三步：阐述从书中获得的感悟（面对困难要勇敢、不放弃希望），并邀请读者阅读。
[亮点词汇]
①in one’s free time在某人的空闲时间
②give up hope放弃希望
③succeed in doing成功做某事
④in the face of difficulties面对困难时
[高分句型]
①Of them, The Wizard of Oz is my favorite one. （“Of them”衔接前文，清晰突出最喜欢的书籍）
②Although she has many difficulties in the magical land, she doesn’t give up hope and succeeds in returning home in the end. （Although引导让步状语从句）
③It teaches me to be brave in the face of difficulties. （“teach sb. to do”结构）
8．例文
A book I have read
As a book lover, I have read a lot of books. Recently I have finished reading Robinson Crusoe.
This book is so interesting that I like it a lot. Robinson is a brave man. When he is young, he dreams of sailing on the sea. After an accident, he arrives at an island and lives there alone for 28 years. He always tries to face any danger.
His story encourages me deeply. The book helps me get over difficulties in my life. I really enjoy reading the book.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“现在完成时”（描述读书经历）和“一般现在时”（介绍书籍内容、表达感受）为主；
③提示：需包含个人读书身份、书籍内容、主人公特点及书籍带来的影响，可适当发挥，使文章通顺、完整，词数80~100词，标题已给出。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明自己的书迷身份，引出要介绍的书籍《鲁滨孙漂流记》；
第二步，评价书籍的趣味性，并介绍主人公鲁滨孙的经历与品质；
第三步，阐述这本书对自己的激励作用及阅读收获；
第四步，总结表达对这本书的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①book lover书迷
②dream of sailing梦想航行
③get over difficulties克服困难
[高分句型]
①This book is so interesting that I like it a lot.（用“so … that …”结构强化对书籍的喜爱）
②When he is young, he dreams of sailing on the sea（用when引导时间状语从句）
9．例文
My favourite book is The Secret Garden by Frances Hodgson Burnett. It’s a classic novel about growth.
Mary, a selfish girl, finds a secret garden and brings it back to life. Once hidden and lifeless, it blooms with new energy. With her friends, she helps her weak cousin Colin stand up. I love it because it shows friendship and nature’s power. It teaches me that kindness and hope can change everything. I recommend everyone to read it!
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，属于推荐类材料作文；
②时态：全文以一般现在时为主，用于介绍书籍内容、表达个人感受与观点；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，需涵盖书名作者、书籍类型与内容、喜欢的原因及收获，注意控制篇幅在80词左右，语句连贯且突出核心要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇直接点明最喜欢的书《The Secret Garden》及其作者，并说明书籍类型，快速引出主题。
第二步：简述书籍核心内容，介绍主角玛丽的经历和故事主线。
第三步：阐述喜欢这本书的原因，分享从中获得的感悟，最后发出推荐的呼吁。
[亮点词汇]
①classic novel 经典小说
②bring…back to life 使……恢复生机
③recommend 推荐
[高分句型]
①It’s a classic novel about growth.(简洁点明书籍主题，about引导的介词短语作后置定语)
②I love it because it shows friendship and nature’s power.(because引导原因状语从句，清晰表达喜欢的理由)
10．例文
My favourite book
My favourite thing from childhood is a book called Five Thousand Years of Chinese History. I have kept it for six years. I got it from my mother as a birthday gift when I was seven years old. It is special for me because it is full of my mother’s love. There are many stories about Chinese history in the book. I liked to share them with my mother. At that time, my mother read it for me during the bedtime every day. It was so interesting that I fell in love with it soon. I also felt my mother’s love for me.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主，涉及过去经历时使用“一般过去时”；
③提示：需介绍书名、书的特别之处以及一个与书相关的难忘故事。
[写作步骤]
第一步：直接点明最喜欢的书的名称，引出话题；
第二步：先从内容、意义、情感价值等角度说明书的独特性，再结合个人经历，分享和书相关的具体故事；
第三步：简单总结这本书对自己的意义，升华主题，让文章结构完整。
[亮点词汇]
①special特殊的
②journey旅程
③unexpected意想不到的
[高分句型]
①It is a special book because it teaches me about love and friendship through simple stories. (原因状语从句)
②This book is not just a story; it is a friend that always stays with me. (定语从句)
11．例文
Dear Mr Wang,
I’m Li Hua. I’m really willing to be a volunteer to assist the foreign students from our sister school and introduce traditional Chinese festivals to them.
I have several advantages. Firstly, I’m good at communicating and my English is fluent, which helps me explain festival stories and customs clearly. Moreover, I have a deep understanding of festivals like the Spring Festival and the Mid-Autumn Festival.
It would be a precious opportunity for me to spread Chinese culture and make foreign friends better understand our traditions.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为自荐信；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：需包含表明意愿、介绍优势、表达期望三部分，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头表明写信目的，直接说明想担任志愿者。
第二步：分点介绍自身优势。
第三步：结尾礼貌表达期望获得机会。
[亮点词汇]
①be willing to do sth.愿意做某事
②introduce sth. to sb.向某人介绍某物
③have a deep understanding of sth.对某事有很深入的了解
[高分句型]
Firstly, I’m good at communicating and my English is fluent, which helps me explain festival stories and customs clearly. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
12．参考例文一:
Journey to the West is a novel. It is written by Wu Cheng’en, from Ming Dynasty. It tells the story of the Monk Tang with three apprentices. Funny and humorous, it is popular among people, young and old. It inspires people to chase their dreams and never give up.
参考例文二:
Journey to the West is a novel, written by Wu Cheng’en. He is from Ming Dynasty. It tells the story of the Monk Tang and his three apprentices. It is funny and humorous, so it is popular with people, young and old. It inspires people to realize their dreams and never give up.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇小作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“小说《西游记》的作者是吴承恩，明朝人，小说讲述了唐僧四人的故事，风趣幽默，深受人们喜爱”、以及“它启示人们追逐梦想永不言弃”展开。
[亮点词汇]
①Journey to the West 《西游记》
②Dynasty朝代
③the Monk Tang with three apprentices唐僧和三个学徒
④Funny and humorous风趣幽默
⑤inspire sb. to do sth.启示某人去做某事
⑥is popular with受……的欢迎
⑦give up放弃
[高分句型]
①Journey to the West is a novel, written by Wu Cheng’en. (过去分词作后置定语，表被动)

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