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Unit6 Crossing Cultures 书面表达12篇
(单元话题:跨文化沟通,文化差异与包容)
1.范文:
My Cross-Cultural Experience
Last month, I joined a cultural exchange activity. I met some foreign students from France. During the activity, we did many interesting things. We made French pastries together and I showed them how to write Chinese calligraphy. We talked a lot about our daily lives and different cultures.
From this experience, I learned a lot about French culture and improved my communication skills. I realized that although we come from different countries, we share similar interests and dreams.
I feel very excited to have this chance. I hope to have more cross-cultural experiences in the future.
一、快速核对
2.范文:
Dear Lucy,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to China this summer vacation. Let me tell you some manners and customs in our country.
Firstly, when meeting someone for the first time, you should shake hands instead of hugging or kissing him or her. Secondly, if you visit a Chinese friend, you should make a call in advance. It is polite to bring your friend a small gift and arrive on time. Thirdly, Chinese people usually use chopsticks at table and have some tea after meals. And you should eat up the food that the host gives you. Last but not least, remember that when in Rome, do as the Romans do.
I hope that the advice is helpful. Please feel free to ask me if you want to know more.
Yours,
Li Wei
一、快速核对
3.例文:
A Cross-Cultural Experience I Had
Last month, our school held an International Cultural Festival, and it was my most unforgettable cross-cultural experience.
I visited the Japan booth and tried to learn origami. At first, I couldn’t make the paper crane correctly and felt a little frustrated. But a Japanese student patiently showed me step by step. She couldn’t speak Chinese well, so we used gestures and simple English to communicate. Finally, I made my first paper crane! We both laughed and took a photo together.
This experience taught me that language is not the only way to communicate. A smile and patience can build bridges between cultures. I also learned that making mistakes is part of learning. Now I want to learn more about different cultures and make friends from around the world.
一、快速核对
4.
Hello, everyone! Welcome to China! I’m Lin Jia. Now, let me introduce some customs and manners to you in China.
First, about greeting customs. When we meet people, we usually shake hands to show friendliness. It’s polite to do so, but don’t hug or bow to others, as it’s not our common tradition. Second, about table manners. We should wait for the elderly to start eating first to show our respect. However, there are some things you mustn’t do: don’t stick your chopsticks into the food, don’t talk with a full mouth, and never point at others with your chopsticks, as these are considered very rude.
I hope you can follow these rules and have a wonderful time in China!
一、快速核对
5.例文
Before we go to another country, it is necessary for us to learn something about its customs and history. Take the UK as an example. People usually shake hands when they meet for the first time. We should say Mr and Mrs when we talk with elder people. People can only drink tea at a tea party, but not coffee or juice. In addition to the customs, we need to know about the history. London has a long history of about two thousand years. Liverpool was famous for industry in the 18th century. When we are in the UK, we can’t talk loudly in public. And we should stand in line when we wait for buses or trains. The golden rule is: Watch the other people, and do as they do.
一、快速核对
6.例文
Dear Jenny,
I’m so glad you’re coming to China! Before you come, you should know about some table manners in our country. Here is some advice.
If you’re invited to a dinner, there will be a lot of different dishes, not just three courses. You may find it difficult to use chopsticks if you haven’t tried before. It’s a good idea to get some practice before you come. Firstly, when the food is served, you are not supposed to start eating first if there are older people at the table. Secondly, you shouldn’t stick your chopsticks into your food and pointing to anyone with your chopsticks is impolite. Besides, don’t make any noise when you have your soup. Lastly, you should say “thank you” after dinner.
I hope this is helpful. E-mail me if you have any other questions.
Yours,
Wang Jie
一、快速核对
7.例文
Table manners are very important in China. First, we should wait for old people to start eating. Second, it is impolite to point at others with our chopsticks. Third, we couldn’t use chopsticks to hit an empty bowl. Also, we should use serving chopsticks and spoons to take food.
一、快速核对
8.例文
When you are invited to an American family, do remember the following rules: First, you should bring the host a small gift, such as a nice cup or some beautiful flowers. Second, please arrive on time. You shouldn’t be there too early or too late. Both of them are impolite. Third, while eating, you should say something good about the dishes and the cooking. Finally, don’t stay too long there. When you say goodbye, don’t forget to thank the family for their invitation again.
So do what Romans do in Rome and you will be welcomed wherever you go.
一、快速核对
9.例文:
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to China. To help you relax, I’d like to tell you something about Chinese manners.
First, when you meet someone for the first time, you are supposed to shake hands. Second, for visiting manners, please call your friends first. It’s polite to be on time and bring some gifts. Third, table manners are very important. You should let old people start eating first. Remember never to point at others with chopsticks.
I hope you have a wonderful time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
一、快速核对
10.例文
Dear Nancy,
You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me give you some suggestions about Chinese customs.
Firstly, when you are eating at the table, it’s impolite to stick your chopsticks into your food. You shouldn’t point at anyone else with your chopsticks. It’s also impolite to start eating first when there are elder people at the table. Secondly, when you’re at home, remember to serve your guests tea and fruit. Don’t jump in when others are talking. Lastly, when you invite others to go out, you are supposed to give a call first. If you want to go somewhere interesting with your friends, you’d better make plans.
Have a safe trip and hope to see you soon.
Best wishes,
Linlin
一、快速核对
11.例文
Dear Peter,
I’m very happy to hear that you’re coming to China this summer vacation. I hope to see you soon. Now let me tell you something about customs and manners in our country.
First, when meeting people in China, we usually shake hands and smile. It’s polite to greet others warmly and talk about general topics like the weather or travel plans. Next, for table manners, remember to use chopsticks correctly. Don’t stick them upright in your bowl. Also, avoid pointing at people with chopsticks. Wait until elderly people start eating before you begin. Finally, if you visit a Chinese family, take a small gift like fruit or tea to show respect. Always knock before entering, and it’s customary to remove your shoes unless the host says otherwise.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask!
Welcome to China. I hope you’ll have a wonderful time in our country.
Yours,
Teng Fei
一、快速核对
12.例文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad you’re coming to my birthday party in China. Let me tell you some party customs to help you feel more comfortable.
First, you’d better arrive a little late instead of being too early. Second, it’s a good choice to bring flowers or chocolate, but avoid giving clocks. When we have meals, wait for the elders to start first and use serving chopsticks to show respect. What’s more, we can talk about Chinese culture or food, which are always popular topics.
Looking forward to your coming!
Yours,
Li Hua
一、快速核对Unit 6 Crossing Cultures书面表达12篇
(单元话题:跨文化沟通,文化差异与包容)
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
一、书面表达
1.话题:一次跨文化经历 体裁:记叙文
提示: 1. What cultural experience did you have
2. What did you do during the experience
3. What did you learn from it
4. How do you feel about this experience
写作要求:包括提示中的四个要点,可适当发挥;文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;至少 80 词,结尾已给出,不计入总词数;字迹工整、语言精炼、表达准确、条理清晰。
My Cross-Cultural Experience
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I feel very excited to have this chance. I hope to have more cross-cultural experiences in the future.
2.假设你是李伟,你的新西兰笔友Lucy计划今年暑假来中国参观名胜并到中国朋友家做客,但她对中国的礼仪了解很少,于是向你寻求帮助。请你给她回复一封字数不少于70的邮件。邮件的格式已给出,不计入总字数。
Dear Lucy,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to China this summer vacation. Let me tell you some manners and customs in our country.
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Yours,
Li Wei
3.请以“A Cross-Cultural Experience I Had”为题,用英语写一篇短文,分享你的一次跨文化经历(如与外国朋友交流、参加国际文化节、品尝外国美食等),并谈谈这次经历给你的感受或启示。
要求:
1. 根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
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4.向世界传递中国文化,让世界倾听中国声音。 “汉语桥”活动即将开展,世界各国的青少年们即将来到中国体验中国文化。假如你是林嘉,是此次 “汉语桥”活动的志愿者之一。请你根据以下表格提示,用英文写一篇发言稿,向外国小伙伴们介绍我们中国的一些文化习俗。
Customs and manners Dos Don’ts
Greeting customs shake hands… hug; bow…
Table manners the old start eating first stick chopsticks into the food; talk with a full mouth;point at others with chopsticks …
写作要求:
1.短文应包括提示内容,条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3.短文不少于80词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! Welcome to China! I’m Lin Jia. Now, let me introduce some customs and manners to you in China.
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5.俗话说“入乡随俗”,去另一个国家前,先了解其习俗和历史是很有必要的。请你根据初中阶段所学到的关于英国的习俗和历史,写一篇词数80左右的文章,投稿到某英文版的旅游文化刊物。
Before we go to another country, it is necessary for us to learn something about its customs and history. Take the UK as an example.
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6.假如你是王洁,你的美国朋友Jenny发电子邮件想向你了解中国的餐桌礼仪,请你根据电子邮件里的内容回复她。词数80~100。
Dear Wang Jie, I’m going to China. I will probably be invited to a dinner. But I’m worried about what I should and shouldn’t do as a guest during the dinner. Please give me some advice. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Jenny
Dear Jenny,
I’m so glad you’re coming to China! Before you come, you should know about some table manners in our country. Here is some advice.
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I hope this is helpful. E-mail me if you have any other questions.
Yours,
Wang Jie
7.在中国,餐桌礼仪非常重要。请你根据所学知识,简单介绍几种中国的餐桌礼仪。(词数:50左右)
参考词汇:table manners, point at, serving chopsticks
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8.请根据以下写作要点,介绍一下在美国人家里做客时应注意的一些事项。可适当发挥,短文不少于80词。
写作要点:
1. The dos and don’ts when visiting an American family.
2. Your advice.
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9.假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter今年春节要来中国做客。他既兴奋又紧张,来信向你咨询中国的礼仪。请你根据以下提示用英语从初次见面礼仪、拜访礼仪、餐桌礼仪三个方面给他写一封回信。
Greeting manners shake hands
Visiting manners call your friends first be on time bring some gifts
Table manners let old people start eating first never point at others with chopsticks…
要求:
1. 必须包括要点,可以适当发挥;
2. 词数80词左右;
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名和人名。
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10.假设你是Linlin,你的笔友Nancy参加了一个交换生项目,她要来中国学习。请你根据下面的写作要点和写作要求给她写一封邮件,向她介绍中国的一些习俗。
写作要点:
1. What is polite/impolite at the table
2. What should you do in your house
3. What should you do when you go out with people
写作要求:
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文不少于80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me give you some suggestions about Chinese customs.
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Best wishes,
Linlin
11.随着中国经济的飞速发展,秀美乡村、名胜古迹引起了你的美国笔友Peter的极大关注。他计划今年暑假来中国,进乡村观名胜,并到中国朋友家做客,但他对中国的风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪了解很少,于是向你寻求帮助。假如你是腾飞,请你根据下面写作要点,用英语给Peter写一封电子邮件,向他介绍中国的习俗。
写作要点:
1. How do Chinese greet others
2. What are the table manners
3. What are the rules in the Chinese family
写作要求:
1. 邮件应包括所有写作要点,条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 邮件中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3. 邮件不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m very happy to hear that you’re coming to China this summer vacation. I hope to see you soon. Now let me tell you something about customs and manners in our country.
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Welcome to China. I hope you’ll have a wonderful time in our country.
Yours,
Teng Fei
12.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom将要来中国参加你的生日聚会,请你给他写一封邮件,介绍中国的聚会礼仪。
提示:
1. 到达时间(可稍晚,避免过早);
2.礼物(如鲜花、巧克力,避免钟表);
3.餐桌礼仪(等长辈先动筷、用公筷等);
4.交流话题(文化、美食等)。 要求:80 词左右,语句通顺,语法正确。
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参考答案
1.范文:
My Cross-Cultural Experience
Last month, I joined a cultural exchange activity. I met some foreign students from France. During the activity, we did many interesting things. We made French pastries together and I showed them how to write Chinese calligraphy. We talked a lot about our daily lives and different cultures.
From this experience, I learned a lot about French culture and improved my communication skills. I realized that although we come from different countries, we share similar interests and dreams.
I feel very excited to have this chance. I hope to have more cross-cultural experiences in the future.
写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文(经历分享),以一般过去时为主。
明确要点:跨文化经历的时间与活动内容、收获与感悟。
确定人称:第一人称(I/my/we/us)。
注意事项:语句通顺,逻辑清晰,词数不少于80词,不透露真实姓名与学校名称。
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
第一段:交代经历的时间、活动内容——参加文化交流活动、结识法国学生、制作糕点、教书法、交流生活与文化(叙事)。
第二段:总结收获与感悟——了解法国文化、提升沟通能力、认识到不同国家的人有共同兴趣与梦想(感悟)。
第三段:表达感受与期望——感到兴奋、希望未来有更多跨文化经历(升华主题)。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:经历的基本信息
活动名称:joined a cultural exchange activity, took part in an international camp, attended a cross-cultural event…
结识外国朋友:met some foreign students from France, made friends with students from the UK, got to know teenagers from Japan…
要点二:活动中的具体内容
制作美食:made French pastries together, baked cookies, cooked traditional food, learned to make pizza…
展示文化:showed them how to write Chinese calligraphy, taught them paper-cutting, introduced Chinese kung fu, demonstrated tea art…
交流内容:talked about our daily lives, shared our school life, discussed different customs, compared festivals and holidays…
要点三:收获与感悟
了解对方文化:learned a lot about French culture, knew more about European traditions, understood their way of life…
提升能力:improved my communication skills, practiced my English, became more confident in speaking…
要点四:感受与期望
感受:I feel very excited to have this chance, I am lucky to have this experience, I was so happy…
期望:I hope to have more cross-cultural experiences, I look forward to more exchange activities, I can’t wait to join another event…
2.范文:
Dear Lucy,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to China this summer vacation. Let me tell you some manners and customs in our country.
Firstly, when meeting someone for the first time, you should shake hands instead of hugging or kissing him or her. Secondly, if you visit a Chinese friend, you should make a call in advance. It is polite to bring your friend a small gift and arrive on time. Thirdly, Chinese people usually use chopsticks at table and have some tea after meals. And you should eat up the food that the host gives you. Last but not least, remember that when in Rome, do as the Romans do.
I hope that the advice is helpful. Please feel free to ask me if you want to know more.
Yours,
Li Wei
写作步骤
【第一步:审题立意】
确定文体:电子邮件,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:中国礼仪
确定人称:第二人称 (You/your)
注意事项:字数不少于70
【第二步:构思布局】
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,引出话题
主体段:介绍中国的礼仪
结尾段:表达愿望,升华主题
【第三步:要点展开】
要点一:中国的礼仪
shake hands instead of hugging or kissing him or her/make a call in advance/bring your friend a small gift/arrive on time/use chopsticks at table/have some tea after meals/eat up the food
3.例文:
A Cross-Cultural Experience I Had
Last month, our school held an International Cultural Festival, and it was my most unforgettable cross-cultural experience.
I visited the Japan booth and tried to learn origami. At first, I couldn’t make the paper crane correctly and felt a little frustrated. But a Japanese student patiently showed me step by step. She couldn’t speak Chinese well, so we used gestures and simple English to communicate. Finally, I made my first paper crane! We both laughed and took a photo together.
This experience taught me that language is not the only way to communicate. A smile and patience can build bridges between cultures. I also learned that making mistakes is part of learning. Now I want to learn more about different cultures and make friends from around the world.
写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文,经历分享类写作
确定时态:以一般过去时为主,结尾感受用一般现在时
明确要点:描述一次跨文化经历(时间、地点、经过)+表达感受或启示
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:词数不少于80,不出现真实姓名和校名,内容连贯
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:点明经历背景(时间、活动),引出主题
主体段:详细描述经历过程(遇到困难、交流方式、结果)
结尾段:总结感受与启示,升华主题
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:跨文化经历背景
内容:International Cultural Festival / meet foreign students / try new culture
表达:held / took part in / visited
要点二:具体经历过程
过程表达:at first / but / so / finally / step by step
交流方式:use gestures / simple English / help each other
要点三:感受与启示
内容:learn origami / communicate with difficulty / help each other
表达:learn that / not the only way / build bridges between cultures / want to learn more
4.
Hello, everyone! Welcome to China! I’m Lin Jia. Now, let me introduce some customs and manners to you in China.
First, about greeting customs. When we meet people, we usually shake hands to show friendliness. It’s polite to do so, but don’t hug or bow to others, as it’s not our common tradition. Second, about table manners. We should wait for the elderly to start eating first to show our respect. However, there are some things you mustn’t do: don’t stick your chopsticks into the food, don’t talk with a full mouth, and never point at others with your chopsticks, as these are considered very rude.
I hope you can follow these rules and have a wonderful time in China!
【第一步:审题立意】
确定文体:应用文(发言稿),以一般现在时为主 明确要点:围绕中国文化习俗,完整覆盖表格中见面礼仪和餐桌礼仪的Dos和Don'ts,词数不少于80词
确定人称:第一人称(I/we),面向第二人称(you/foreign friends)
注意事项:不得出现真实人名、校名、地名,条理清晰,行文连贯,开头已给出不计入总词数
【第二步:构思布局】
开头段:题目已给出问候与自我介绍,引出中国习俗介绍
主体段:分两部分介绍:①见面礼仪的正确与禁忌做法;②餐桌礼仪的正确与禁忌做法
结尾段:表达欢迎与祝福,礼貌收尾
【第三步:要点展开】
要点一:见面礼仪
核心词汇:shake hands/it’s polite to.../don’t hug or bow to others/greet each other/it’s a common tradition/avoid hugging or bowing
要点二:餐桌礼仪
核心词汇:wait for the elderly to start eating first/don’t stick chopsticks into the food/don’t talk with a full mouth/don’t point at others with chopsticks/show respect to the elderly/it’s impolite to.../avoid these rude behaviors
要点三:表达祝福
核心词汇:follow these rules/feel comfortable/have wonderful time in China/respect our traditions/enjoy your stay in China
5.例文
Before we go to another country, it is necessary for us to learn something about its customs and history. Take the UK as an example. People usually shake hands when they meet for the first time. We should say Mr and Mrs when we talk with elder people. People can only drink tea at a tea party, but not coffee or juice. In addition to the customs, we need to know about the history. London has a long history of about two thousand years. Liverpool was famous for industry in the 18th century. When we are in the UK, we can’t talk loudly in public. And we should stand in line when we wait for buses or trains. The golden rule is: Watch the other people, and do as they do.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:需完整覆盖“英国习俗”“英国历史”两大核心内容,结合“入乡随俗”的主题,给出实用建议,注意条理清晰、字数控制。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点题,说明去他国前了解其习俗与历史的必要性,并以英国为例引出下文;
第二步:分两部分展开:先介绍英国的社交与日常习俗,再补充其历史要点;
第三步:总结“观察他人、效仿做法”的黄金准则,呼应“入乡随俗”的主题。
[亮点词汇]
①for the first time第一次
②in addition to除……之外
③be famous for因……而闻名
④stand in line排队
[高分句型]
①Before we go to another country, it is necessary for us to learn something about its customs and history. (it is necessary for sb. to do sth.固定句型)
②Liverpool was famous for industry in the 18th century. (be famous for因……而闻名)
6.例文
Dear Jenny,
I’m so glad you’re coming to China! Before you come, you should know about some table manners in our country. Here is some advice.
If you’re invited to a dinner, there will be a lot of different dishes, not just three courses. You may find it difficult to use chopsticks if you haven’t tried before. It’s a good idea to get some practice before you come. Firstly, when the food is served, you are not supposed to start eating first if there are older people at the table. Secondly, you shouldn’t stick your chopsticks into your food and pointing to anyone with your chopsticks is impolite. Besides, don’t make any noise when you have your soup. Lastly, you should say “thank you” after dinner.
I hope this is helpful. E-mail me if you have any other questions.
Yours,
Wang Jie
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
② 时态:以一般现在时为主;
③ 提示:需完整覆盖“餐桌礼仪的注意事项”核心内容,分点说明“应该做”与“不应该做”的行为,同时保持语气友好、条理清晰,严格遵循邮件格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇表达对Jenny来中国的喜悦,直接点明主题——介绍中国餐桌礼仪;
第二步,分点阐述具体礼仪细节:先建议提前练习用筷子,再说明用餐时的礼仪(长辈先动筷、筷子的正确用法、喝汤不发出声响),最后补充用餐后的礼貌表达;
第三步,结尾总结,表达希望建议有帮助,并邀请对方进一步提问。
[亮点词汇]
①get some practice做些练习
②be not supposed to不应该
③make any noise发出声响
[高分句型]
①You may find it difficult to use chopsticks if you haven’t tried before.(运用“find it + adj. + to do”结构与条件状语从句,清晰表达“若没用过筷子可能会觉得难”的含义)
②Firstly, when the food is served, you are not supposed to start eating first if there are older people at the table. (包含时间状语从句与条件状语从句,分点说明礼仪,逻辑层次清晰)
③It’s a good idea to get some practice before you come. (使用“It’s a good idea to do...”句型,给出实用建议,语气自然友好)
7.例文
Table manners are very important in China. First, we should wait for old people to start eating. Second, it is impolite to point at others with our chopsticks. Third, we couldn’t use chopsticks to hit an empty bowl. Also, we should use serving chopsticks and spoons to take food.
【总体分析】①题材:本文是一篇小作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:简单介绍几种中国餐桌礼仪,需使用参考词汇,词数50左右。
【写作步骤】第一步:总述餐桌礼仪的重要性;
第二步:列举三条礼仪规则;
第三步:补充其他礼仪并总结意义。
【亮点词汇】①table manners餐桌礼仪
②point at指向
③serving chopsticks公筷
【高分句型】①First, don’t point at others with chopsticks.(运用了祈使句否定式)
②These rules show respect and make meals pleasant.(运用了and连接的并列谓语)
8.例文
When you are invited to an American family, do remember the following rules: First, you should bring the host a small gift, such as a nice cup or some beautiful flowers. Second, please arrive on time. You shouldn’t be there too early or too late. Both of them are impolite. Third, while eating, you should say something good about the dishes and the cooking. Finally, don’t stay too long there. When you say goodbye, don’t forget to thank the family for their invitation again.
So do what Romans do in Rome and you will be welcomed wherever you go.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:围绕做客时的注意事项展开,分“该做”和“不该做”两方面说明,最后给出建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山,点名主题;
第二步:列举具体该做和不该做的规则;
第三步:总结建议。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②impolite不礼貌的
③invitation邀请
④welcomed受欢迎的
[高分句型]
①When you are invited to an American family, do remember the following rules.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②So do what Romans do in Rome and you will be welcomed wherever you go.(祈使句和并列结构)
9.
例文:
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to China. To help you relax, I’d like to tell you something about Chinese manners.
First, when you meet someone for the first time, you are supposed to shake hands. Second, for visiting manners, please call your friends first. It’s polite to be on time and bring some gifts. Third, table manners are very important. You should let old people start eating first. Remember never to point at others with chopsticks.
I hope you have a wonderful time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不得遗漏,可适当添加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表达对Peter来华的欢迎,并说明写信目的是介绍中国礼仪;
第二步:依次详细介绍三种礼仪:见面时应握手,拜访前需预约、守时并带礼物,餐桌上要让长辈先吃且不能用筷子指人;
第三步:表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①shake hands握手
②for the first time初次
③on time准时
④polite礼貌的
⑤wonderful精彩的
[高分句型]
①First, when you meet someone for the first time, you are supposed to shake hands. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I hope you have a wonderful time in China. (宾语从句)
10.例文
Dear Nancy,
You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me give you some suggestions about Chinese customs.
Firstly, when you are eating at the table, it’s impolite to stick your chopsticks into your food. You shouldn’t point at anyone else with your chopsticks. It’s also impolite to start eating first when there are elder people at the table. Secondly, when you’re at home, remember to serve your guests tea and fruit. Don’t jump in when others are talking. Lastly, when you invite others to go out, you are supposed to give a call first. If you want to go somewhere interesting with your friends, you’d better make plans.
Have a safe trip and hope to see you soon.
Best wishes,
Linlin
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点围绕餐桌礼仪、居家礼仪和外出礼仪展开,考生需涵盖所有要点,适当补充细节,保证行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接已给开头,引出“介绍中国习俗”的主题;
第二步,分点说明餐桌礼仪、居家礼仪和外出礼仪的具体内容;
第三步,表达祝愿和期待。
[亮点词汇]
①customs 习俗
②polite 有礼貌的
③respect尊重
④chopsticks筷子
⑤stick ... into ...把……插入……
⑥point at指向
⑦jump in插话
⑧be supposed to应该
[高分句型]
①Lastly, when you invite others to go out, you are supposed to give a call first.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
②If you want to go somewhere interesting with your friends, you’d better make plans. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
③It’s impolite to stick your chopsticks into your food. (It's + 形容词 + to do sth. 句型,清晰表达礼仪规范)
11.例文
Dear Peter,
I’m very happy to hear that you’re coming to China this summer vacation. I hope to see you soon. Now let me tell you something about customs and manners in our country.
First, when meeting people in China, we usually shake hands and smile. It’s polite to greet others warmly and talk about general topics like the weather or travel plans. Next, for table manners, remember to use chopsticks correctly. Don’t stick them upright in your bowl. Also, avoid pointing at people with chopsticks. Wait until elderly people start eating before you begin. Finally, if you visit a Chinese family, take a small gift like fruit or tea to show respect. Always knock before entering, and it’s customary to remove your shoes unless the host says otherwise.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask!
Welcome to China. I hope you’ll have a wonderful time in our country.
Yours,
Teng Fei
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封实用类电子邮件,为美国笔友皮特介绍中国的风俗习惯、见面礼仪和餐桌礼仪;
②时态:以一般现在时为主,用于客观介绍中国的礼仪习惯;结合现在进行时表达对方的计划。
③提示:需完整包含“见面礼仪、餐桌礼仪、家庭拜访规则”三个写作要点,可适当补充细节,使内容更具体实用。
[写作步骤]
第一步:回应对方来访的消息,自然引出介绍中国习俗的主题。
第二步:用First、Next、Also、Finally等逻辑词,分点介绍见面、用餐和家庭拜访的礼仪,层次清晰。
第三步:邀请对方提问,并表达欢迎与祝福,符合邮件的友好语气。
[亮点词汇]
①greet others warmly热情问候
②point at people指向他人
③knock before entering进门先敲门
[高分句型]
①When meeting people in China, we usually shake hands and smile.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②If you visit a Chinese family, take a small gift like fruit or tea to show respect.(if引导的条件状语从句)
12.例文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad you’re coming to my birthday party in China. Let me tell you some party customs to help you feel more comfortable.
First, you’d better arrive a little late instead of being too early. Second, it’s a good choice to bring flowers or chocolate, but avoid giving clocks. When we have meals, wait for the elders to start first and use serving chopsticks to show respect. What’s more, we can talk about Chinese culture or food, which are always popular topics.
Looking forward to your coming!
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材: 本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:介绍中国生日聚会礼仪,涵盖到达时间、礼物、餐桌礼仪、交流话题4个要点,80词左右,语句通顺、语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步,邮件开头,点明来意;
第二步,按提示要点,逐一介绍礼仪;
第三步,邮件结尾,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
① custom习俗
② avoid避免
③ respect尊重
[高分句型]
①When we have meals, wait for the elders to start first and use serving chopsticks to show respect. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)

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