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Unit 5 What a Delicious Meal 作文素材
一、单元话题说明
本单元话题为“美食与烹饪”，核心围绕家常菜制作、食谱介绍、美食承载的回忆与情感展开，同时涉及感叹句（What/How 引导）、顺序连接词（First, Next, Then, After that, Finally）及 cook, stir-fry, mix 等烹饪相关动词。
写作思路：先引出喜欢的家常菜，再详细介绍食材和制作步骤，最后表达对菜品的喜爱、烹饪感受或美食背后的情感。
二、经典例题
一阶段 审题立意
美食能满足味蕾、承载温暖回忆。假如你是李华，英国笔友 Tom 对中国美食感兴趣，来信询问你最喜欢的中国家常菜及其做法，请你用英语回复邮件，介绍菜品的食材、制作步骤及喜欢的原因。
要求：1. 包含“食材、制作步骤、喜欢的原因”三个要点，可适当发挥；
2. 不少于 100 词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 正确使用感叹句和表示顺序的连接词。
Dear Tom,
I'm so glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese home-cooked dishes.
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I hope you can try making it by yourself. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
审题：
要点：介绍家常菜的食材、制作步骤、喜欢的原因
人称：以第一人称（I）为主，介绍步骤时可用第二人称（you）
时态：一般现在时（描述做法、喜好）
文体：应用文（邮件）
核心考点：顺序连接词、感叹句及烹饪相关动词。
二阶段 谋篇布局
开篇点题：I'm so glad that...My favorite Chinese home-cooked dish is... It is delicious and easy to make.
具体介绍（核心部分）：
1. 食材：To make it, we need...（列出主要食材及用量）
2. 制作步骤：First,... Next,... Then,... After that,... Finally,...（按顺序描述步骤，搭配烹饪动词）
3. 表达感受：I love this dish because.../ It brings me warm memories.../ Cooking it makes me happy.
三阶段 积句成篇
开头句（引出话题）
1. My favorite Chinese home-cooked dish is stir-fried eggs and tomatoes. It is simple to make but very delicious.
2. There are many delicious Chinese dishes, and my favorite is stir-fried eggs and tomatoes—it’s easy to cook and full of love.
3. I'm so glad to share my favorite dish with you. It’s stir-fried eggs and tomatoes, which my mother often cooks for me.
4. What a delicious dish stir-fried eggs and tomatoes is! It is one of the most popular home-cooked dishes in China.
5. Cooking is a great way to show love, and my favorite dish to cook is stir-fried eggs and tomatoes.
中间句（介绍食材、制作步骤，用连接词、烹饪动词和感叹句）
1. To make stir-fried eggs and tomatoes, we need two tomatoes, three eggs, a little salt and sugar.
2. First, cut the tomatoes into small pieces. Next, mix the eggs in a bowl until they are smooth.
3. Then, heat some oil in a pan and add the eggs to it. Stir-fry for one minute and then take the eggs out of the pan.
4. After that, cook the tomatoes in the pan until they are soft. Then add some salt and sugar to taste.
5. Finally, put the eggs back into the pan and mix them with the tomatoes. What a delicious smell it is!
6. How easy it is to make this dish! You can finish it in just 15 minutes.
7. What a wonderful taste it has! It is not too sweet and full of love.
结尾句（表达喜爱、感受或情感）
1. I love this dish because it is not only delicious but also reminds me of my mother’s love.
2. Cooking this dish brings me happiness. It is a great way to share love with my family, just like what the saying goes “Cooking is love made visible”.
3. I hope you can try making it by yourself. I'm sure you will love its delicious taste too.
4. Every time I cook this dish, I think of my mother. It carries warm memories of my family.
5. What a great experience it is to cook this dish! It makes me understand that cooking is love made visible.
名言警句
1. Cooking is love made visible. 烹饪是看得见的爱。
2. Good food warms the heart and fills the stomach. 美食暖人心，饱腹又暖心。
3. The best memories are made around the table with delicious food. 最美好的回忆，都藏在餐桌与美食之间。
三、范文欣赏
Dear Tom,
I'm so glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese home-cooked dishes. My favorite Chinese home-cooked dish is stir-fried eggs and tomatoes.
To make it, we need two tomatoes, three eggs, a little salt and sugar. First, cut the tomatoes into small pieces. Next, mix the eggs in a bowl until they are smooth. Then, heat some oil in a pan and add the eggs to it. Stir-fry for one minute and then take the eggs out of the pan. After that, cook the tomatoes in the pan until they are soft. Then add some salt and sugar to taste. Finally, put the eggs back into the pan and mix them with the tomatoes. What a delicious smell it is!
I love this dish because it is not only tasty but also easy to cook. I hope you can try making it by yourself. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua

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