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Unit4 History and Traditions
Reading for Writing
Describe a place that you like
learning objectives
To read and sort out the detailed information about Ireland;
To write about a place by describing different senses(感官） and using figures of speech(修辞）-- personification（拟人）.
What’s your impression of Ireland’s countryside
beautiful
amazing
fascinating
breathtaking
impressive/attractive
charming
Emerald Isle
绿宝石岛
Lead in
What did you see in the picture？
Green grass and hills, blue ocean, beautiful countryside and peaceful landscape.
Lead in
Read for the main ideas
It is mainly about Ireland's _________ and ________.
What is the text mainly about according to the title and the given picture.
beautiful scenery
traditions
Pre-writing
Read for the main idea and structure.
Introduction
Body(details)
Beautiful Ireland and its traditions
Ending
natural scenery
traditions
Q: What’s the topic sentence of the paragraph
Introductory sentence
A striking image; Sth. interesting; A quote or question
Purpose: to make readers eager to read
Identify and underline the paragraph’s introductory sentence(s) and the ending sentence(s).
ending sentence
Let the reader know that the passage ends.
Help the reader remember your writing.
衔接感官描写
、、
Read for transitional sentences
过渡句
Use transitional sentences to make writing cohesive
Transitions
Help the reader follow your ideas
Details and examples
Use sensory details感官细节.
Rhetoric devices修辞手法 (personification拟人…)
Give examples.
、、
By stopping by a village pub and relaxing with a drink and traditional meal while listening to music and watching dancing.
2. What are the best ways to
experience some Irish
traditions and culture
1.What makes the Irish countryside exciting and inspiring
Its beautiful countryside and it offers sth. for all the scenes.
3. What is the meaning of “breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song”
4. What are the best ways to experience Chinese traditions and customs
It means to not just smell but also breathe in the smell of fresh flowers early in the morning as the birds sing their first song of the new day.
By travelling to different places and using all your senses to experience everything and by interacting with local people.
What words does the writer use to describe sensory details
feast for the eyes
sweet scent
delicious
roar, cries, music of the
coast, morning song
feel the sun on your skin
sight:
smell:
taste:
hearing:
touch:
Read for details
hearing smell taste touch sight
Tip: Something for each of the senses.
Write the senses and places in the order that they appear.
Senses: Places:
1 ________ 1__________________________
2 ________ 2_______________
3 ________ 3_______________
4 ________ 4_______________
sight
hearing
touch
smell
in the green counties and hills
by the sea
in the mountains
in the mountains
Read for details
Read for details——sensory details.
sight
The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
“绿宝石岛”风光宁静秀美，郡县草木葱茏，青山连绵起伏，牛羊点缀其中，堪称一场名副其实的盛宴
仿写
The park in summer is _______________________ , with its __________ dotted with_________________.
夏天的公园真是一场赏心悦目的盛宴，绿地上点缀着五颜六色的花朵。夏天的公园真是一场赏心悦目的盛宴，绿地上点缀着五颜六色的花朵。
a true feast for the eyes
green land
colorful flowers
Read for details——sensory details.
hearing
And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.
海边波浪咆哮，海鸟鸣叫，奏响了海岸交响乐。
仿写
In the morning, the _______________________ , and _______________make up ____________________.
whisper(低语) of insects
singing of birds
the music of the forest
早晨，昆虫的窃窃私语和鸟儿的歌唱构成了森林的音乐。
Read for details——sensory details.
touch, smell, hearing
On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
在山里宁静的早晨，感受阳光洒落在你身上，呼吸着鲜花的芬芳，而鸟儿则用清晨的歌声迎接新的一天的到来。
仿写
On a quiet morning on the beach, ________________________, and _______________________
__while_ ________________________________.
在一个安静的早晨，感受太阳照在你的皮肤上，呼吸海风的咸味，而海鸟用晨歌迎接新的一天。
feel the sun on your skin
breathe in the salty scentof sea breeze(微风)
seabirds greet the
new day with their morning song.
Read for details——sensory details.
taste
To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional lrish Beef Stew.
想要体验这一切，不妨在乡村酒吧停下来，喝杯
葡萄酒或当地啤酒放松一下。更好的选择是，品尝
一顿美味的传统爱尔兰炖牛肉。
Stop by _________________ and relax with___________________________. Better yet,
enjoy a delicious traditional _________________.
在当地的餐馆停下脚步，喝一杯清补凉水放松一下。
a local restaurant
Wenchang chicken
refreshing(清爽的) Qingbuliang
Title
Introduction
Body
Ending
Make the reader eager to read your writing.
Keep it brief. Use a striking image, something surprising, a quote or question.
Transitions (in the order of places or time)
Help the reader follow your ideas
Details and examples
Use sensory details
Give detailed examples (various verbs)
Let the reader know that the passage ends.
Help the reader remember your writing.
Clear and brief, show the topic
Summary
How to write a descriptive passage
Sensory words:
sight; hearing; smell; touch; taste
Figures of speech( 修辞手法):
simile & personification
Writing
如何描述你喜欢的地方
体裁：说明文
时态人称：一般现在时，以第三人称为主
布局
para 1：Introduction 引出要介绍的地方并介绍其基本信息（地 理位置 历史 人口等）
para 2：Body 具体介绍其特色（利用亲身经历or感觉详细描述）
para 3：Ending 总结（尽最大可能吸引读者，引起兴趣）
Para1　引出要介绍的地方
一、必备语汇
1. 位置：be located in/ be situated in
2. 面积：have/ cover an area of...; with an area of...
3. 人口：have a population of...; with a population of ...
4. 历史：have a long history of...; with a long history of ...
5. 交通：transportation is convenient. 交通便利
Subway is within easy reach. 地铁方便
It is convenient for you to take Bus No. 1 to ...
表达“特产特色、名胜景观”的句式
…is rich in…/is abundant in (natural resources…) ……富含……
The city, known as…, attracts millions of visitors from all over the world. 这个城市，作为……，吸引了来自全世界的百万游客。
假定你是李华，你的笔友Mr.Smith想假期到北京旅游，请你给他写一封邮件，介绍你对北京的了解。内容包括：
1.基本概况；
2.旅游景点；
3.期待和祝愿
注意：
1．词数80词左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Practice
2. 旅游景点
历史与现代文化的交融
1. 基本概况
历史悠久/气候适宜/交通便利......
Para. 2
Para. 1
写信目的
很高兴得知......
......好的选择 / 给你介绍......
Para. 3
期待和祝愿
期待到来，祝愿玩的开心
1. 我很高兴听说你要去北京旅行。
I’m more than delighted to hear that you are going on a trip to Beijing.
Beginning
2. 你做了一个明智的选择，因为北京有很多旅游景点。
You've made a wise choice since Beijing is rich/abundant in tourist attractions.
①北京位于中国北部。②北京可以追溯到几千年前。
Beijing is located in/lies in the north of China, which can date back to thousands of years ago.
Body
定语从句
用with连接
作为首都，它是历史和现代文化的迷人融合体，拥有众多名胜古迹。
As the capital, it is a fascinating mix of history and modern culture, with a great number of places of interest.
①我强烈建议你参观长城和故宫。
②在那里你可以一睹中国古代文化的风采。
I strongly recommend that you visit the Great Wall and the Forbidden City, where you can gain a glimpse into the ancient Chinese culture.
定语从句
①国家体育场鸟巢是著名的地标。
②它绝对可以给你留下深刻的印象。
In addition, the National Stadium Bird’s Nest is a famous landmark, which can definitely leave a deep impression on you.
加衔接词 / 定语从句
最后，我敢打赌，当你抵达大兴国际机场时，你会惊叹于这座宏伟的现代建筑杰作。
Last but not least, I bet you will appreciate at this splendid modern architectural masterpiece when you arrive at Daxing International Airport.
状语从句
I'm sure you'll have a great time. Looking forward to your arrival.
Dear Mr.Smith,
I’m more than delighted to hear that you are going on a trip to Beijing. You've made a wise choice since Beijing is abundant in tourist attractions.
Located in the north of China, Beijing can date back to thousands of years ago. As the capital, it is a fascinating mix of history and modern culture, with a great number of places of interest. I strongly recommend that you visit the Great Wall and the Forbidden City, where you can gain a glimpse into the ancient Chinese culture.
In addition, the National Stadium Bird’s Nest is a famous landmark, which can definitely leave a deep impression on you. Besides, I bet you will marvel at this splendid modern architectural masterpiece when you arrive at Daxing International Airport.
I'm sure you'll have a great time. Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Lihua
【典例】 假定你是李华，请你给某英文报社的“城市风采”栏目写一篇短文，介绍我们伟大祖国的首都——北京，内容包括：
1.基本概况：人口约2，185万，面积16，410多平方千米，位于中国北部；
2.历史与文化：有3，000多年的历史，是我国的政治和文化中心，有很多大学，其中清华大学和北京大学是最著名的；
3.交通与旅游：交通便利，有天安门广场、故宫博物院、长城、鸟巢等很多旅游景点。
第一段：介绍基本概况，北京的人口、面积及位置；
第二段：介绍北京的历史与文化；
第三段：介绍北京的交通与旅游。
1.北京人口约2,185万，面积16,410多平方千米。
Beijing has a population of about 21.85 million and covers an area of more than
16,410 square kilometers.
2.北京位于中国北部。Beijing is located in the north of China.
3.北京是中国政治和文化中心Beijing is the political and cultural center of China.
4.北京成功举办了2022年冬奥会，吸引了世界的目光。　Beijing successfully hosted the 2022 Winter Olympic Games and drew the
attention of the world.　
5.北京有许多重点大学，其中北京大学和清华大学是最著名的。　Beijing has many key universities,of which Peking University and Tsinghua
University are the most famous.　
6.北京有许多名胜古迹，如天安门广场、故宫博物院、长城以及鸟巢。
There are many places of interest in Beijing,such as Tian’anmen Square,
the Palace Museum, the Great Wall as well as the Bird’s Nest.　
Simple version
Simple version
7.把句1和句2合并为含过去分词短语作状语的句子。
Located in the north of China, Beijing has a population of about 21.85 million and covers an area of more than 16,410 square kilometers.　
8.把句3和句4合并为含有动词-ing短语作状语的句子。
Being the political and cultural center of China, Beijing successfully hosted the 2022 Winter Olympic Games and drew the attention of the
world.
Simple version
Beijing, the capital of China, is a beautiful city. Located in the north of China, Beijing has a population of about 21.85 million and covers an area of more than 16,410 square kilometers.　
　Beijing has a history of over 3,000 years. Being is the political and cultural center of China. Beijing successfully hosted the 2022 Winter Olympic Games and drew the attention of the world.Beijing has many key universities, of which Peking University and Tsinghua University are the most famous.　
There are many places of interest in Beijing,such as Tian’anmen Square, the Palace Museum, the Great Wall as well as the Bird’s Nest.　
Now, Beijing is playing a more and more important role in the world.
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Homework
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Complete the exercises in the book.

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