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Reading for Writing
Unit 1
Festivals and Celebrations
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教学目的
By the end of this unit, you will be able to:
1.Learn about the Naadam Festival.
2.Know how to write a festival experience.
3.Master expressions related to Festivals.
4.Have a sense of responsibility to tell China's story well in English.
Have you ever been to Inner Mongolia
What's your impression of it
Mongolian tents
Mongolian robes
roast mutton
Mongolian
grassland
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Lead-in
What is the most important festival in Inner Mongolia
the Naadam Festival
Leading in
Watch some videos about the Naadam Festival
Guess activites from incomplete pictures
wrestling
horse racing
shooting arrows/archery
What are they doing
Step 1 Pre-reading
Look at the title and the pictures,guess what the text will talk about:
The text is mainly about the writer’s __________ of taking
part in ___________________ in Mongolia and the writer feels _______at it.
amazed
the Naadam Festival
experience
My Amazing Naadam Experience
1.The passage is a(n) ___________
A. Narration（记叙文）
B. Argumentation（议论文）
C. Exposition (说明文)
2.In what order does the author write the diary
_______________
Diary
Step 2 While-reading (organization)
My amazing Naadam experience
In what order does the author write the diary
Time order
tense？(时态)
past tense
According to the left information, we can divide the passage into______ parts.
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Opening paragraph
Body paragraph
Closing paragraph
1. Describe the start of the festival and the surroundings.
2. Describe in detail the festival activities.
3. Describe in detail the festival activities.
State the topic (e.g. where, when and with whom you celebrated the festival, and also your main feelings).
Give a brief summary of the experience
Tip 1: Follow a clear structure and the time order when writing about an experience.
I experienced the Naadam Festival in China's Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region for the first time this year. The festival falls on the fourth day of the sixth month of the lunar calendar, usually lasting for three days. Naadam means "games" in Mongolian, and it is represented by three events: horse racing, wresting, and archery, which are all so exciting to watch!
Opening Paragraph:
State the topic (e.g. where, when, and with whom you celebrated the festival, and also your main feeling.
place
date
duration
the meaning
and the main
activities of
the festival
Theme + General introduction
Step 2 While-reading
Read para1 and answer the questions.
(Part1) How does the author introduce the topic
How does the writer express the date of the festival
What did the writer think of the things
1.春节在每年的农历初一，通常持续15天,是中国的传统节日。
仿写:
The Spring festival falls on the first day of the first month of the lunar calendar, usually lasting for 15 days,which is a traditional festival in China.
Tip 2: Properly use Verbs , V-ing form and different clauses(从句)
节日日期的表达：
fall on 适逢，正当
On the first day, I set off to the games early with my friend Burin.
I saw a lot of people wearing fancy Mongolian robes. Some were feeding their horses, some were practising archery, and others were chatting or taking photographs. Burin told me that Mongolians travel every year from near and far to attend the festival, just as their ancestors had done for centuries.
with whom
a grand scene
a significant
festival
Read para2 and answer the questions.
Body part: (Para2)
What were people doing when I arrived at the game
仿写:人们做不同的活动来庆祝春节。有的贴对联，有的舞龙舞狮，还有的放烟花。
Description of sense: sight
Sentence structure 1:
Some ... , some ... ,and
others ...
Tip 3：Describe senses with certain sentence patterns to enrich writing. (some ..., some ... , and others ...)
People do different activities to celebrate the Spring Festival. Some paste couplets, some perform dragon dance and lion dance, and others set off fireworks.
After the opening ceremony and some amazing performances , the wrestling competition began. Mongolian wresting is different from the wresting in the Olympic Games. There are no rounds, and wrestlers are not separated by weight. The wrestler loses if any part of his body above his knee touches the ground. After singing some songs, the competitors danced onto the green field, waving their arms in the air as if they were eagles. I was quite moved by their show of strength and grace.
rules
feelings
Read para3 and answer the questions.
2. How did the competitors appear onto the green field
1. What events are described
Tip4: Describe activities in detail by action chains (V-ing) or rhetorical device (eg: simile )to make our article vivid
I absolutely enjoyed the archery, too, but the horse races were my favourite part. However,
I was surprised to see that the riders were boys and girls! I heard it is because children are lighter and the horses can fun faster and farther. At first, I was a little worried about the children's safety, but Burin said, "Don't worry. They've been riding horses all their lives. They'll be just fine." That was the moment I started to understand why people say "Horses are at the heart of Mongolian culture". ...
Read para4 and answer the questions.
1. What events are described
2. What did the writer think of the horse races
I'm finally back home now, feeling really tired, but celebrating Naadam with my tired was totally worth it. He invited me back for the winter to stay in a traditional Mongolian tent and eat hot pot. I can't wait!
Brief summary
Part3: Summary (Para.5) : appreciate the ending
Tip 5: use adverbs(副词) to stress the feeling in the end.
仿写：我们最终完成了大扫除，真的感到又累又宽慰。
We finally finished the thorough cleaning , feeling really tired but relieved.
How to express the feelings and emotions
Underline the sentences that describe the writer's feelings and emotions.
excited; amazed; moved; surprised; worried; tired; satisfied; happy...
Tip6: To hold readers’ attention, we can add our feelings and emotions to our article.
I was deeply moved by the wonderful performance.
仿写：我被精彩的演出深深地感动了。
Language features
Review of the structure
Step 3 Post-reading :
Tip 1: Follow a clear structure and the time order while using past tense and first person to organize the article logically .
Tip 5: Use rhetorical devices to make the language vivid.
Tip 4: Describe activities in detail with shining sentences.
(action chains, V-ing, adv ,different clauses)
Tip 3: Describe senses with certain sentence patterns to enrich writing.(Some ... , some ..., and others ... .)
Tip 6: Describe the change of emotions to make the content convincing.
Summary of writing tips
Logical
Vivid
Convincing
Language
Effective Writing
Structure
Tip 2: Use opening sentence to state the topic.
Writing Practice
某英文报社正在举行一次主题为“中国传统节日”的写作比赛，请你写一篇介绍中国传统节日的短文参赛。
注意：词数80左右
Make notes of your ideas
Para 1: Brief introduction
Para 2: Details
Para 3: Conclusion
Name
Customs
Time
Place...
Importance...
Interaction with readers...
the Mid-Autumn Festival
the lunar calendar
enjoy mooncakes
admire the moon
have a big dinner...
play a role in...
谋篇布局
Practice
遣词造句
1.中秋节在每年的农历八月十五。
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth month of the lunar calendar.
2.在中秋节时，要吃月饼。
During the Mid-Autumn Festival, people enjoy mooncakes.
3.晚上，家人聚在一起吃大餐。
In the evening, families get together to have a big dinner.
4.饭后，人们通常会和家人、朋友一起赏月。
After dinner, people usually admire the moon with their families and friends.
遣词造句
5.中秋节是中国最古老的传统节日之一。
The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the oldest traditional festivals in China.
It plays an important role in Chinese history and culture.
6.它在中国的历史和文化中有着重要作用。
The Mid-Autumn Festival is my favorite festival. What about you What’s your favorite festival Feel free to share your ideas.
7.中秋节是我最喜欢的节日。你呢？你最喜欢哪个节日？欢迎分享你的想法。
Practice
连句成篇
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth month of the lunar calendar.
During the Mid-Autumn Festival, people enjoy mooncakes. In the evening, families get together to have a big dinner. After dinner, people usually admire the moon with their families and friends.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the oldest traditional festivals in China. It plays an important role in Chinese history and culture.
升级修改（Sentence 1）
② Chinese people have been celebrating the Mid-Autumn Festival for centuries, which falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth month of the lunar calendar.
① When it comes to Chinese traditional festivals, the Mid-Autumn Festival is expected to be mentioned. This festival falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth month of the lunar calendar.
1.中秋节在每年的农历八月十五。
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth month of the lunar calendar.
Chinese people have been celebrating the festival for centuries.
升级修改（Sentence 2）
2.在中秋节时，要吃月饼。
During the Mid-Autumn Festival, people enjoy delicious mooncakes.
② During the Mid-Autumn Festival, people enjoy delicious mooncakes unique to this festival.
① During the Mid-Autumn Festival, people enjoy delicious mooncakes, which are in the shape of the full moon on the Mid-Autumn night. It is for this reason that they are called “moon” cakes.
升级修改（Sentence 3）
3.晚上，家人聚在一起吃大餐。
In the evening, families gather together to have a big dinner.
① In the evening, families gather together to celebrate the festival with a big meal.
② In the evening, families gather together to have a big dinner. No matter how far they are from their homes, they will spare no effort to come back for the reunion.
升级修改（Sentence 4）
4.饭后，人们通常会和家人、朋友一起赏月。
After dinner, people usually admire the shining moon with their families and friends.
① After dinner, people usually admire the shining moon with their families and friends. They can look back on the past and look forward to the future.
② After dinner, people usually admire the shining moon with their families and friends. The roundness of the full moon on the Mid-Autumn night is regarded as a symbol of reunion and happiness by Chinese people.
升级修改（Sentence 5）
5.中秋节是中国最古老的传统节日之一。
The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most ancient traditional festivals in China. It plays a significant role in Chinese history and culture.
① The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most ancient traditional festivals in China, playing a significant role in Chinese history and culture.
② As one of the most ancient traditional festivals in China, the Mid-Autumn Festival plays a significant role in Chinese history and culture.
升级展示
When it comes to Chinese traditional festival, the Mid-Autumn Festival is expected to be mentioned. This festival falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth month of the lunar calendar.
During the Mid-Autumn, Festival people enjoy delicious mooncakes, which are in the shape of the full moon on the Mid-Autumn night. It is for this reason that they are called “moon” cakes. In the evening, families gather together to celebrate the festival with a big meal. After dinner, people usually admire the shining moon with their families and friends.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most ancient traditional festivals in China, playing a significant role in Chinese history and culture.
Homework
假如你是李华，请根据下面五幅图画写一篇短文介绍你和家人庆祝春节的经过。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：春晚the Spring Festival Gala；
除夕夜the Lunar New Year Eve
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is a great occasion to the Chinese people.
Homework
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is a great occasion to the Chinese people. It lasts about the first four days of the year, during which people do not work, students do not go to school, and shops are closed.
On the Lunar New Year Eve, we all gathered around/round and had a big dinner, the Spring Festival Gala followed then. It was reported that the Spring Festival Gala was really nice. Many stars turned up on the stage and they brought us so much pleasure. The midnight we set off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year. Then we ate dumplings. At dawn, we all dressed up and paid a visit door to door.
We do hope we will have a good luck in the following new year.

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