资源简介

(共34张PPT)
Festivals and celebrations
Unit 1
Period 5
Writing
内容索引
写作一　应用文写作——与节日庆祝有关的叙事类记叙文
写作二　读后续写微技能
写作一　应用文写作——与节日庆祝
有关的叙事类记叙文
本单元的写作任务是写一篇和节日庆祝有关的叙事类记叙文。该类作文以叙述事件为主，通过完整的故事情节和生动形象的语言，使读者在享受故事情节的同时有所感悟。
常用表达
1.首段常用句式
I still remember how my family celebrated the...last year.
我还记得去年我的家人是如何庆祝……
Although it happened three years ago，I will never forget the...
虽然这是三年前的事了，但我永远不会忘记……
Last week I had an amusing experience.
上周我有一个有趣的经历。
The festival takes place on the...(序数词) day of the...(序数词) Chinese lunar month each year.这个节日是在每年农历的……月……日。
It has a long history (of about...years).
它有很长的历史(约……年)。
2.中段常用句式
I was walking in the street when...
我在街上走着，突然……
When we arrived，they gave us a warm welcome.当我们到达时，我们受到了他们的热烈欢迎。
At last，they saw us off and said goodbye.
最后，他们为我们送行并告别。
People will try to go back home to give best wishes to...人们会尽力回到家乡，给予……最好的祝福。
On...，we will climb mountains to have a bird’s-eye view of the beautiful scenery with family members.在……(节日)，我们将和家人一起爬山，鸟瞰美丽的风景。
During the festival，...are good places for people to admire the beauty of...，and the traditional food to enjoy is...
在节日期间，……是人们欣赏……之美的好去处，且有传统美食……以供享用。
People will decorate their homes with...，which symbolise(s)...
人们会用……来装饰他们的家，这象征着……
3.尾段常用句式
The festival experience made me realize the importance of...and inspired me to spend more time...节日的经历使我意识到……的重要性，并激励我花更多的时间……
It gave me a great sense of achievement.
这让我很有成就感。
One of my most unforgettable experiences/festivals was...
我最难忘的一次经历/一个节日是……
It is something that I can’t forget and will always recall.
这是我无法忘记并会一直想起的事情。
Not only did it broaden my horizons but it also made me take pride in...它不仅开阔了我的眼界，而且让我为……感到自豪。
假如你是李华，去年你第一次在农村的叔叔家度过春节，请根据下面的提示，以“My First Spring Festival in the Countryside”为题写一篇短文给你校英文报投稿。内容包括：
1.简要介绍该节日；
2.详细描述你参加的节日活动和你的感受；
3.总结这次经历。
注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
典例演练
第一步　审题谋篇
___________________________
_______
____________________
________
________
________
_______________
_______________________
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1.在新年除夕夜
2.聚集；集合
3.燃放鞭炮
4.庆祝
5.黎明时分
6.盛装打扮
7.从……到……变动
8.某人经常做某事
on the Chinese New Year’s Eve
gather
set off the firecrackers
celebrate
at dawn
dress up
range from...to...
It is typical of sb to do sth
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1.我第一次在乡下的叔叔家庆祝春节。
I in my uncle’s home in the countryside for the first time.
2.春节是在农历的第一个月的第一天。
the first day of the first month of the Chinese lunar calendar.
3.人们举办了各种活动来庆祝，从贴春联到看舞狮和舞龙。
People held various activities to celebrate it， putting up the Spring Festival couplets watching lion and dragon dances.
celebrated the Spring Festival
The Spring Festival falls on
ranging from
to
4.在除夕夜，家庭成员聚在一起吃大餐、观看春节联欢晚会，这是一贯的做法。
_______________________________________________________________
to have a big feast and watch the Spring Festival Gala.
5.黎明时分，我们盛装打扮，挨家挨户地拜年。之后，我们看了一场精彩的舞狮表演。
，we all and paid a New Year’s visit door to door.
After it，we watched an amazing lion dance.
It is typical of family members to gather on the Chinese New Year’s Eve
At dawn
dressed up
6.我们中午回到家，感觉有点累，但和我的堂兄弟们一起庆祝春节是完全值得的。我将永远珍惜那些甜蜜的回忆。
We returned home at noon，feeling a little tired，but ________________
was totally worth it.I will always
.
celebrating the
Spring Festival with my cousins
treasure the sweet memories
第三步　句式升级
1.用This was my first time doing...句型改写句1。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.用“介词＋which”引导的非限制性定语从句改写句5。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This was my first time celebrating the Spring Festival in my uncle’s
home in the countryside.
At dawn，we all dressed up and paid a New Year’s visit door to door，after which we watched an amazing lion dance.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80个词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
My First Spring Festival in the Countryside
Last year I visited my uncle’s family，and this was my first time celebrating the Spring Festival in my uncle’s home in the countryside.
The Spring Festival falls on the first day of the first month of the Chinese lunar calendar.People held various activities to celebrate it，ranging from putting up the Spring Festival couplets to watching lion and dragon dances.It is typical of family members to gather on the Chinese New Year’s Eve to have a big feast and watch the Spring Festival Gala.At dawn，we all dressed up and paid a New Year’s visit door to door，after which we watched an amazing lion dance.
We returned home at noon，feeling a little tired，but celebrating the Spring Festival with my cousins was totally worth it.I will always treasure the sweet memories.
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以“难忘的一次传统节日经历”为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.你的经历；
2.你的感悟。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
达标检测
参考范文
An Unforgettable Traditional Festival Experience
What impresses me most is an experience of last year’s Dragon Boat Festival in honour of Qu Yuan，a great poet in Ancient China.
In the morning，I watched a dragon boat race and then visited several memorial places where I learned about his life and the history of Chu kingdom.So touched by his ambition and love for his country that I couldn’t control the tears rolling down my face.At last，I joined a red song chorus with local people to celebrate our country which is becoming more and more powerful.
At the moment I can’t help thinking：If Qu Yuan were still alive，how proud he would be of our powerful country！
返 回
写作二　读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
读后续写高级句式升级：名词性从句
名词性从句是在句子中起名词作用的从句，使用名词性从句可以使表达更加丰富、地道。
1.主语从句：it作形式主语/what引导的主语从句
功能：为避免头重脚轻，英语中习惯将真正的主语放在句尾，句首用it作形式主语。
what引导的主语从句常用于句型：(最)令某人印象深刻/吃惊/震惊的是……
It suddenly occurred to him that the family inside was in danger.
他突然意识到屋里的那一家人正处于危险之中。
What impressed him most was that his mother never lost faith in finding him.
最让他印象深刻的是，他的母亲从未对找到他失去信心。
2.同位语从句
功能：that引导的同位语从句，对前面的抽象名词(fact，news，truth，idea，word，suggestion...)进行解释说明。
Harry doesn’t have the slightest idea what they are talking about.
Harry完全不知道他们在说什么。
3.宾语从句
She knew that she had to gather her courage to face the difficult situation in front of her.
她知道自己必须鼓起勇气去面对眼前的困境。
I am wondering if you could tell me more about this activity.我想知道你是否能告诉我有关这次活动的更多的信息。
4.表语从句
The reason why he wasn’t admitted into a key university was that his grades were too low.
他没被重点大学录取的原因是他的分数太低了。
[针对训练]　根据汉语提示补全句子
1.从她的表情我能看出，她对结果十分满意。 (宾语从句)
I could tell from her expression .
2.那只受伤的狗被好心的兽医救了，这让人松了一口气。(it作形式主语)
that the injured dog was saved by the kind-hearted vet.
that she was very satisfied with the result
It was a relief
3.我接受了父亲的建议，要成为一名医生。(同位语从句)
I accepted my father’s suggestion .
4.最让我感到难过的是我最亲密的朋友误解了我的意图。(what 引导的主语从句)
was that my closest friend misunderstood my intentions.
5.他希望他能够找到弥补错误的方法。(表语从句)
His hope was .
that I should become a doctor
What upset me most
that he could find a way to make up for the mistakes
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 joy n.高兴；喜悦→joyful adj.高兴的；快乐的→joyfully adv.开心地　gratitude n.感激之情；感谢→grateful adj.感激的；表示感谢的　horrible adj.令人震惊的；恐怖的；极坏的　belief n.信仰；信心；信任　faith n.宗教信仰；信任；相信　merry adj.愉快的；高兴的　pleased adj.高兴的；满意的→pleasant adj.令人愉快的→please vt.使满意；使愉快　frank adj.坦率的；直率的→frankly adv.坦率地；直率地
动作描写 gather vi.聚集；集合 vt.聚集；搜集；收割　dress (sb) up 穿上盛装；装扮　fade away 逐渐消失；(身体)变得虚弱　take advantage of 利用；欺骗；占……的便宜　set off 出发；动身；启程
句型 1.I saw a lot of people wearing fancy Mongolian robes.(人物描写)
2.I’m finally back home now，feeling really tired，but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it.(心理描写)
3.I can’t wait！(心理描写)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
我终于鼓起勇气去敲Mort的门。“你可以借给我一些钱吗？”我用颤抖、迟疑的声音低语道。我坦诚地告诉他我的爸爸发生了多么可怕的事情。
I finally 1. to knock at Mort’s door.“Could you lend me some money？” I whispered in a trembling and hesitant voice. I
2. ，
gathered my courage
frankly told him what a horrible thing had happened to my dad
由于重病，他的身体迅速变得虚弱。Mort相信我，说他非常高兴利用这个机会帮助我。感激的泪水模糊了我的双眼。我动身回家，心里涌起一股暖流。
who 3. due to a serious illness.Mort 4.______
_______________，saying that he 5.________________________________
____________________________________.My eyes clouded with 6.______
____________.I 7.__________________，a stream of warmth flowing in my heart.
had
was fading away fast
was more than pleased to take
advantage of the chance to do me a favor
返 回
tears
of gratitude
set off for my home
belief/faith in me
本课结束Period 5　Writing
写作一　应用文写作——与节日庆祝有关的叙事类记叙文
本单元的写作任务是写一篇和节日庆祝有关的叙事类记叙文。该类作文以叙述事件为主，通过完整的故事情节和生动形象的语言，使读者在享受故事情节的同时有所感悟。
1．首段常用句式
I still remember how my family celebrated the...last year.
我还记得去年我的家人是如何庆祝……
Although it happened three years ago，I will never forget the...
虽然这是三年前的事了，但我永远不会忘记……
Last week I had an amusing experience.
上周我有一个有趣的经历。
The festival takes place on the...(序数词) day of the...(序数词) Chinese lunar month each year.这个节日是在每年农历的……月……日。
It has a long history (of about...years)．
它有很长的历史(约……年)。
2．中段常用句式
I was walking in the street when...
我在街上走着，突然……
When we arrived，they gave us a warm welcome.当我们到达时，我们受到了他们的热烈欢迎。
At last，they saw us off and said goodbye.
最后，他们为我们送行并告别。
People will try to go back home to give best wishes to...人们会尽力回到家乡，给予……最好的祝福。
On...，we will climb mountains to have a bird’s-eye view of the beautiful scenery with family members.在……(节日)，我们将和家人一起爬山，鸟瞰美丽的风景。
During the festival，...are good places for people to admire the beauty of...，and the traditional food to enjoy is...
在节日期间，……是人们欣赏……之美的好去处，且有传统美食……以供享用。
People will decorate their homes with...，which symbolise(s)...
人们会用……来装饰他们的家，这象征着……
3．尾段常用句式
The festival experience made me realize the importance of...and inspired me to spend more time...节日的经历使我意识到……的重要性，并激励我花更多的时间……
It gave me a great sense of achievement.
这让我很有成就感。
One of my most unforgettable experiences/festivals was...
我最难忘的一次经历/一个节日是……
It is something that I can’t forget and will always recall.
这是我无法忘记并会一直想起的事情。
Not only did it broaden my horizons but it also made me take pride in...它不仅开阔了我的眼界，而且让我为……感到自豪。
假如你是李华，去年你第一次在农村的叔叔家度过春节，请根据下面的提示，以“My First Spring Festival in the Countryside”为题写一篇短文给你校英文报投稿。内容包括：
1．简要介绍该节日；
2．详细描述你参加的节日活动和你的感受；
3．总结这次经历。
注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1．在新年除夕夜on the Chinese New Year’s Eve
2．聚集；集合gather
3．燃放鞭炮set off the firecrackers
4．庆祝celebrate
5．黎明时分at dawn
6．盛装打扮dress up
7．从……到……变动range from...to...
8．某人经常做某事It is typical of sb to do sth
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1．我第一次在乡下的叔叔家庆祝春节。
I celebrated the Spring Festival in my uncle’s home in the countryside for the first time.
2．春节是在农历的第一个月的第一天。
The Spring Festival falls on the first day of the first month of the Chinese lunar calendar.
3．人们举办了各种活动来庆祝，从贴春联到看舞狮和舞龙。
People held various activities to celebrate it，ranging from putting up the Spring Festival couplets to watching lion and dragon dances.
4．在除夕夜，家庭成员聚在一起吃大餐、观看春节联欢晚会，这是一贯的做法。
It is typical of family members to gather on the Chinese New Year’s Eve to have a big feast and watch the Spring Festival Gala.
5．黎明时分，我们盛装打扮，挨家挨户地拜年。之后，我们看了一场精彩的舞狮表演。
At dawn，we all dressed up and paid a New Year’s visit door to door.After it，we watched an amazing lion dance.
6．我们中午回到家，感觉有点累，但和我的堂兄弟们一起庆祝春节是完全值得的。我将永远珍惜那些甜蜜的回忆。
We returned home at noon，feeling a little tired，but celebrating the Spring Festival with my cousins was totally worth it.I will always treasure the sweet memories.
第三步　句式升级
1．用This was my first time doing...句型改写句1。
This was my first time celebrating the Spring Festival in my uncle’s home in the countryside.
2．用“介词＋which”引导的非限制性定语从句改写句5。
At dawn，we all dressed up and paid a New Year’s visit door to door，after which we watched an amazing lion dance.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80个词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
My First Spring Festival in the Countryside
Last year I visited my uncle’s family，and this was my first time celebrating the Spring Festival in my uncle’s home in the countryside.
The Spring Festival falls on the first day of the first month of the Chinese lunar calendar.People held various activities to celebrate it，ranging from putting up the Spring Festival couplets to watching lion and dragon dances.It is typical of family members to gather on the Chinese New Year’s Eve to have a big feast and watch the Spring Festival Gala.At dawn，we all dressed up and paid a New Year’s visit door to door，after which we watched an amazing lion dance.
We returned home at noon，feeling a little tired，but celebrating the Spring Festival with my cousins was totally worth it.I will always treasure the sweet memories.
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以“难忘的一次传统节日经历”为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1．你的经历；
2．你的感悟。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
参考范文
An Unforgettable Traditional Festival Experience
What impresses me most is an experience of last year’s Dragon Boat Festival in honour of Qu Yuan，a great poet in Ancient China.
In the morning，I watched a dragon boat race and then visited several memorial places where I learned about his life and the history of Chu kingdom.So touched by his ambition and love for his country that I couldn’t control the tears rolling down my face.At last，I joined a red song chorus with local people to celebrate our country which is becoming more and more powerful.
At the moment I can’t help thinking：If Qu Yuan were still alive，how proud he would be of our powerful country！
写作二　读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
读后续写高级句式升级：名词性从句
名词性从句是在句子中起名词作用的从句，使用名词性从句可以使表达更加丰富、地道。
1．主语从句：it作形式主语/what引导的主语从句
功能：为避免头重脚轻，英语中习惯将真正的主语放在句尾，句首用it作形式主语。
what引导的主语从句常用于句型：(最)令某人印象深刻/吃惊/震惊的是……
It suddenly occurred to him that the family inside was in danger.
他突然意识到屋里的那一家人正处于危险之中。
What impressed him most was that his mother never lost faith in finding him.
最让他印象深刻的是，他的母亲从未对找到他失去信心。
2．同位语从句
功能：that引导的同位语从句，对前面的抽象名词(fact，news，truth，idea，word，suggestion...)进行解释说明。
Harry doesn’t have the slightest idea what they are talking about.
Harry完全不知道他们在说什么。
3．宾语从句
She knew that she had to gather her courage to face the difficult situation in front of her.
她知道自己必须鼓起勇气去面对眼前的困境。
I am wondering if you could tell me more about this activity.我想知道你是否能告诉我有关这次活动的更多的信息。
4．表语从句
The reason why he wasn’t admitted into a key university was that his grades were too low.
他没被重点大学录取的原因是他的分数太低了。
[针对训练]　根据汉语提示补全句子
1．从她的表情我能看出，她对结果十分满意。 (宾语从句)
I could tell from her expression that she was very satisfied with the result.
2．那只受伤的狗被好心的兽医救了，这让人松了一口气。(it作形式主语)
It was a relief that the injured dog was saved by the kind-hearted vet.
3．我接受了父亲的建议，要成为一名医生。(同位语从句)
I accepted my father’s suggestion that I should become a doctor.
4．最让我感到难过的是我最亲密的朋友误解了我的意图。(what 引导的主语从句)
What upset me most was that my closest friend misunderstood my intentions.
5．他希望他能够找到弥补错误的方法。(表语从句)
His hope was that he could find a way to make up for the mistakes.
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 joy n．高兴；喜悦→joyful adj.高兴的；快乐的→joyfully adv.开心地　gratitude n．感激之情；感谢→grateful adj.感激的；表示感谢的　horrible adj.令人震惊的；恐怖的；极坏的　belief n．信仰；信心；信任　faith n．宗教信仰；信任；相信　merry adj.愉快的；高兴的　pleased adj.高兴的；满意的→pleasant adj.令人愉快的→please vt.使满意；使愉快　frank adj.坦率的；直率的→frankly adv.坦率地；直率地
动作描写 gather vi.聚集；集合 vt.聚集；搜集；收割　dress (sb) up 穿上盛装；装扮　fade away 逐渐消失；(身体)变得虚弱　take advantage of 利用；欺骗；占……的便宜　set off 出发；动身；启程
句型 1.I saw a lot of people wearing fancy Mongolian robes.(人物描写) 2.I’m finally back home now，feeling really tired，but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it.(心理描写) 3.I can’t wait！(心理描写)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
我终于鼓起勇气去敲Mort的门。“你可以借给我一些钱吗？”我用颤抖、迟疑的声音低语道。我坦诚地告诉他我的爸爸发生了多么可怕的事情。由于重病，他的身体迅速变得虚弱。Mort相信我，说他非常高兴利用这个机会帮助我。感激的泪水模糊了我的双眼。我动身回家，心里涌起一股暖流。
I finally 1.gathered my courage to knock at Mort’s door.“Could you lend me some money？” I whispered in a trembling and hesitant voice.I 2.frankly told him what a horrible thing had happened to my dad，who 3.was fading away fast due to a serious illness.Mort 4.had belief/faith in me，saying that he 5.was more than pleased to take advantage of the chance to do me a favor.My eyes clouded with 6.tears of gratitude.I 7.set off for my home，a stream of warmth flowing in my heart.

展开更多......

收起↑