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Period 5
Writing
Space exploration
Unit 4
内容索引
写作一　应用文写作——正反观点对比类议论文
写作二　读后续写微技能
写作一　应用文写作——正反观点对
比类议论文
本单元的写作任务是写一篇正反观点对比类议论文。议论文是对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论，表明自己的观点和看法的一种文体。论点、论据和论证是议论文的三要素，论点是作者对所论问题所持的见解和主张；论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据；论证就是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说，议论文每段应有主题
句(topic sentence)来确定论点。文章结尾往往会提出自己的看法、意见或建议，表示对某一现象或论点的赞成或反对。此类议论文常用如图形式安排文章：
常用表达
1.首段常用句式
Different people have/hold different opinions on this matter，which are as follows.
不同的人对这件事有不同的看法，具体如下。
Opinions concerning this hot topic vary from person to person.
关于这个热门话题的看法因人而异。
Recently，our class has had a heated discussion over whether...
最近，我们班就是否……展开了热烈的讨论。
Opinions are divided on the question.
在这个问题上有意见分歧。
2.中段常用句式
People who are for/against the idea think that...赞成/反对这个观点的人认为……
However，...hold a different view./...hold the opposite opinion.
然而，……有不同的看法/持相反意见。
Some/Most/Few/60%/2/3 of them hold the opinion that...
他们中的一些/大多数/少数/60%/2/3的人认为……
50% of them are in favor of the idea that...
百分之五十的人赞成……
3.尾段常用句式
In a word，only in this way can we...
总之，只有这样，我们才能……
From my point of view...在我看来……
There’s no denying that...
不可否认的是……
As far as I am concerned，I’m in favour of the latter.就我而言，我赞成后者。
根据以下要点，写一篇讨论是否需要进行太空探索的议论文。
Are these arguments for or against exploring space Put them in the table below.Then add your own ideas and write your essay.
A.There are a lot of unsolved mysteries on Earth.So why are we going
into space to explore
B.It is necessary to find a new home for people in space，as the resources
on Earth will run out.
典例演练
C.I cannot understand spending all this money on expensive research
and experiments when so many people need food.
D.Exploring space encourages scientists to improve technology that can
help people in other ways，too.
For space exploration Against space exploration
1._____ 2._____
BD
AC
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1.太空探索
2.抱着……的希望
3.缺乏
4.弄明白
5.有限的资源
6.争论
________________
_____________________
_____
__________
_______________
______
space exploration
in the hope of doing sth
lack
figure out
limited resources
argue
7.导致；造成
8.地球；世界
9.最后
10.所以；结果(是)
________
______
__________
__________
result in
globe
in closing
as a result
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1.虽然太空探索带来了一些好处，但我不认为花大量的时间和金钱在这上面是一个明智的想法。
some benefits，but I don’t think it a wise idea to spend a great deal of time and money on it.
2.据说，每年有数亿人苦于缺乏食物，甚至每年有数百万人死于饥饿。
It is said that hundreds of millions of people and even millions of people die of starvation per year.
Space exploration has resulted in
suffer from lack of food
3.我不明白为什么我们把这么多钱都花在昂贵的研究和探索上。
we spend so much money on expensive researches and explorations.
4.地球上仍有很多的不解之谜。所以，进入太空去探索是毫无意义的。
There are still a lot of unsolved mysteries on the globe.As a result，_____
to go into space to explore.
5.有些人认为，我们应该找到一个新的家园，以希望能解决地球上资源有限的问题。
we should find a new home ________________________
on Earth.
I can’t figure out why
it is
pointless
Some argue that
in the hope of solving the
problem of limited resources
6.但我认为，回收资源比投资这么多钱去找一颗遥不可及的星球要更实际。
In my opinion，however，_______________________________________
than investing so much money in finding a planet far to reach.
7.最后，我认为这种探索外太空的做法不值得尝试。
，I don’t think such explorations into outer space are worth trying out.
recycling resources is much more practical
In closing
第三步　句式升级
用while引导的让步状语从句升级句1。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
While space exploration has resulted in some benefits，I don’t think it a wise idea to spend a great deal of time and money on it.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80个词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
While space exploration has resulted in some benefits，I don’t think it a wise idea to spend a great deal of time and money on it.
Firstly，some say space exploration can help deal with world hunger，but the reality is that hundreds of millions of people suffer from lack of food and even millions of people die of starvation per year.I can’t figure out why we spend so much money on expensive researches and explorations.
Secondly，there are still a lot of unsolved mysteries on the globe.
As a result，it is pointless to go into space to explore.Finally，some argue that we should find a new home in the hope of solving the problem of limited resources on Earth.In my opinion，however，recycling resources is much more practical than investing so much money in finding a planet far to reach.
In closing，I don’t think such explorations into outer space are worth trying out.
假定最近你们班进行了一次主题为“保护文化遗产是否很重要”的讨论。根据以下要点用英语向大家介绍一下讨论结果，并谈谈你自己的看法。
1.80%的学生认为重要及其理由；
2.20%的学生认为不重要及其理由。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
达标检测
参考范文
Recently our class had a heated discussion about whether it is significant to protect the cultural heritage. Different opinions are divided on it.
80% of us think it important to protect the cultural heritage. They think that the cultural heritage is a symbol of splendid ancient civilization.However，the others don’t think so，arguing that protecting the cultural heritage cannot promote the development of society.
As far as I am concerned，it is our responsibility to take more effective measures to preserve our cultural heritage and we can definitely benefit a lot from the cultural and historical inspirations it conveys.
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写作二　读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
读后续写高级句式升级：强调句
写文章时，可以使用强调句型突出句子的某一部分以引起他人的注意。强调句常用于读后续写结尾处，用来升华主题，主题即为强调的部分。强调句型公式：It is/was＋被强调部分＋that/who＋其他。
It was at that moment that a wonderful idea occurred to her.
就在那一刻，她有了一个绝妙的想法。
It was my teacher who was considerate enough to encourage me，urging me to take advantage of my potential in telling stories.正是我的老师体贴地鼓励我，敦促我发挥自己讲故事的潜力。
It wasn’t until that moment that I realized I was so desperate for the prize to prove myself.
直到那一刻，我才意识到我非常渴望用这个奖项来证明自己。
It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally.
正是他勇敢的心和坚定的信念，才使一些不同寻常的事情最终发生。
It was the special experience that made me realize family matters the most.
正是这次特别的经历使我明白家人才是最重要的。
[针对训练]　根据汉语提示补全句子
1.正是他做的那些小事对我的生活产生了巨大的影响。
made a big difference to my life.
2.在一场龙卷风之后，卢埃拉和我终于成了亲密的朋友。
Luella and I finally became close friends.
It was the little things he did that
It was after a tornado that
3.就在那时，我意识到，尽管他生病了，但没有人会嘲笑如此美丽的灵魂。
despite his disease，no one laughed at such a beautiful soul.
4.直到我的朋友帮我摆脱了困境，我才明白了患难见真情。
I was aware that a friend in need is a friend indeed.
It was then that I realized that
It wasn’t until my friend helped me out of trouble that
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 disappointed adj.失望的；沮丧的→disappoint vt.使失望→disappointing adj.令人失望的→disappointment n.失望；沮丧　desire n.渴望；欲望 vt.渴望；期望　keen adj.热衷的；渴望的
动作描写 leap vi.& vt.跳过；跃过　signal vt.& vi.标志着；标明；发信号　lack vt.缺乏；没有　float vi.浮动；漂流；漂浮 vt.使浮动；使漂流　argue vt.& vi.论证；争辩；争论；争吵　provide for sb 提供生活所需　run out 用完；耗尽　attach vt.系；绑；贴
句型 1.However，scientists were determined to realise that dream.(心理描写)
2.However，while such disasters brought much sadness and disappointment，the desire to explore the universe did not die.(情感描写)
3.Despite the difficulties，scientists hope to make more valuable discoveries that will enable human race to survive well into the future.(结尾升华句)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
和妈妈大吵之后，我砰的一声关上门，气呼呼地冲出房子。既失望又沮丧，我感觉好像漂浮在无限悲伤的海洋里。我渴望有人能理解和包容我。
1.___________________________________，I stormed out of the house，slamming the door heavily.2._____________________________，I
3.____________________________________________.I 4._______________
and tolerated.
Having argued with my mother fiercely
felt like floating in an ocean of limitless sadness
Disappointed and frustrated
desired to be
understood
我坐在广场上的长椅上啜泣，这时远处一位老人注意到了我。他问我为什么难过。我对他诉说了一切，他微笑着说：“孩子，正是你的妈妈从你出生那天起就一直在为你提供生活所需！你们之间缺乏有效的沟通。
I was sitting on a bench of the square，sobbing，when an old man in the distance noticed me.He asked why I was in a bad mood.I uttered everything to him.He said with a smile，“Girl，it is your mother 5._____
_______________________ from when you were born！There is 6.______
of effective communication between you two.
who
has been providing for you
a lack
学会换位思考，你就能理解你妈妈多爱你了。”听了这些，我擦干眼泪，跳了起来，像风一样跑回家。
Put yourself in your mother’s shoes and you will understand how much your mum loves you.”Hearing these words，I wiped my tears,7.________
________ and ran for home like the wind.
leapt to
my feet
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本课结束Period 5　Writing
写作一　应用文写作——正反观点对比类议论文
本单元的写作任务是写一篇正反观点对比类议论文。议论文是对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论，表明自己的观点和看法的一种文体。论点、论据和论证是议论文的三要素，论点是作者对所论问题所持的见解和主张；论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据；论证就是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说，议论文每段应有主题句(topic sentence)来确定论点。文章结尾往往会提出自己的看法、意见或建议，表示对某一现象或论点的赞成或反对。此类议论文常用以下形式安排文章：
1．首段常用句式
Different people have/hold different opinions on this matter，which are as follows.
不同的人对这件事有不同的看法，具体如下。
Opinions concerning this hot topic vary from person to person.
关于这个热门话题的看法因人而异。
Recently，our class has had a heated discussion over whether...
最近，我们班就是否……展开了热烈的讨论。
Opinions are divided on the question.
在这个问题上有意见分歧。
2．中段常用句式
People who are for/against the idea think that...赞成/反对这个观点的人认为……
However，...hold a different view./...hold the opposite opinion.
然而，……有不同的看法/持相反意见。
Some/Most/Few/60%/2/3 of them hold the opinion that...
他们中的一些/大多数/少数/60%/2/3的人认为……
50% of them are in favor of the idea that...
百分之五十的人赞成……
3．尾段常用句式
In a word，only in this way can we...
总之，只有这样，我们才能……
From my point of view...在我看来……
There’s no denying that...
不可否认的是……
As far as I am concerned，I’m in favour of the latter.就我而言，我赞成后者。
根据以下要点，写一篇讨论是否需要进行太空探索的议论文。
Are these arguments for or against exploring space Put them in the table below.Then add your own ideas and write your essay.
A．There are a lot of unsolved mysteries on Earth.So why are we going into space to explore
B．It is necessary to find a new home for people in space，as the resources on Earth will run out.
C．I cannot understand spending all this money on expensive research and experiments when so many people need food.
D．Exploring space encourages scientists to improve technology that can help people in other ways，too.
For space exploration Against space exploration
1.BD 2.AC
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1．太空探索space exploration
2．抱着……的希望in the hope of doing sth
3．缺乏lack
4．弄明白figure out
5．有限的资源limited resources
6．争论argue
7．导致；造成result in
8．地球；世界globe
9．最后in closing
10．所以；结果(是) as a result
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1．虽然太空探索带来了一些好处，但我不认为花大量的时间和金钱在这上面是一个明智的想法。
Space exploration has resulted in some benefits，but I don’t think it a wise idea to spend a great deal of time and money on it.
2．据说，每年有数亿人苦于缺乏食物，甚至每年有数百万人死于饥饿。
It is said that hundreds of millions of people suffer from lack of food and even millions of people die of starvation per year.
3．我不明白为什么我们把这么多钱都花在昂贵的研究和探索上。
I can’t figure out why we spend so much money on expensive researches and explorations.
4．地球上仍有很多的不解之谜。所以，进入太空去探索是毫无意义的。
There are still a lot of unsolved mysteries on the globe.As a result，it is pointless to go into space to explore.
5．有些人认为，我们应该找到一个新的家园，以希望能解决地球上资源有限的问题。
Some argue that we should find a new home in the hope of solving the problem of limited resources on Earth.
6．但我认为，回收资源比投资这么多钱去找一颗遥不可及的星球要更实际。
In my opinion，however，recycling resources is much more practical than investing so much money in finding a planet far to reach.
7．最后，我认为这种探索外太空的做法不值得尝试。
In closing，I don’t think such explorations into outer space are worth trying out.
第三步　句式升级
用while引导的让步状语从句升级句1。
While space exploration has resulted in some benefits，I don’t think it a wise idea to spend a great deal of time and money on it.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80个词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
While space exploration has resulted in some benefits，I don’t think it a wise idea to spend a great deal of time and money on it.
Firstly，some say space exploration can help deal with world hunger，but the reality is that hundreds of millions of people suffer from lack of food and even millions of people die of starvation per year.I can’t figure out why we spend so much money on expensive researches and explorations.Secondly，there are still a lot of unsolved mysteries on the globe.As a result，it is pointless to go into space to explore.Finally，some argue that we should find a new home in the hope of solving the problem of limited resources on Earth.In my opinion，however，recycling resources is much more practical than investing so much money in finding a planet far to reach.
In closing，I don’t think such explorations into outer space are worth trying out.
假定最近你们班进行了一次主题为“保护文化遗产是否很重要”的讨论。根据以下要点用英语向大家介绍一下讨论结果，并谈谈你自己的看法。
1．80%的学生认为重要及其理由；
2．20%的学生认为不重要及其理由。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
参考范文
Recently our class had a heated discussion about whether it is significant to protect the cultural heritage. Different opinions are divided on it.
80% of us think it important to protect the cultural heritage. They think that the cultural heritage is a symbol of splendid ancient civilization.However，the others don’t think so，arguing that protecting the cultural heritage cannot promote the development of society.
As far as I am concerned，it is our responsibility to take more effective measures to preserve our cultural heritage and we can definitely benefit a lot from the cultural and historical inspirations it conveys.
写作二　读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
读后续写高级句式升级：强调句
写文章时，可以使用强调句型突出句子的某一部分以引起他人的注意。强调句常用于读后续写结尾处，用来升华主题，主题即为强调的部分。强调句型公式：It is/was＋被强调部分＋that/who＋其他。
It was at that moment that a wonderful idea occurred to her.
就在那一刻，她有了一个绝妙的想法。
It was my teacher who was considerate enough to encourage me，urging me to take advantage of my potential in telling stories.正是我的老师体贴地鼓励我，敦促我发挥自己讲故事的潜力。
It wasn’t until that moment that I realized I was so desperate for the prize to prove myself.
直到那一刻，我才意识到我非常渴望用这个奖项来证明自己。
It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally.
正是他勇敢的心和坚定的信念，才使一些不同寻常的事情最终发生。
It was the special experience that made me realize family matters the most.
正是这次特别的经历使我明白家人才是最重要的。
[针对训练]　根据汉语提示补全句子
1．正是他做的那些小事对我的生活产生了巨大的影响。
It was the little things he did that made a big difference to my life.
2．在一场龙卷风之后，卢埃拉和我终于成了亲密的朋友。
It was after a tornado that Luella and I finally became close friends.
3．就在那时，我意识到，尽管他生病了，但没有人会嘲笑如此美丽的灵魂。
It was then that I realized that despite his disease，no one laughed at such a beautiful soul.
4．直到我的朋友帮我摆脱了困境，我才明白了患难见真情。
It wasn’t until my friend helped me out of trouble that I was aware that a friend in need is a friend indeed.
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 disappointed adj.失望的；沮丧的→disappoint vt.使失望→disappointing adj.令人失望的→disappointment n．失望；沮丧　desire n．渴望；欲望 vt.渴望；期望　keen adj.热衷的；渴望的
动作描写 leap vi.& vt.跳过；跃过　signal vt.& vi.标志着；标明；发信号　lack vt.缺乏；没有　float vi.浮动；漂流；漂浮 vt.使浮动；使漂流　argue vt.& vi.论证；争辩；争论；争吵　provide for sb 提供生活所需　run out 用完；耗尽　attach vt.系；绑；贴
句型 1.However，scientists were determined to realise that dream.(心理描写) 2.However，while such disasters brought much sadness and disappointment，the desire to explore the universe did not die.(情感描写) 3.Despite the difficulties，scientists hope to make more valuable discoveries that will enable human race to survive well into the future.(结尾升华句)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
和妈妈大吵之后，我砰的一声关上门，气呼呼地冲出房子。既失望又沮丧，我感觉好像漂浮在无限悲伤的海洋里。我渴望有人能理解和包容我。我坐在广场上的长椅上啜泣，这时远处一位老人注意到了我。他问我为什么难过。我对他诉说了一切，他微笑着说：“孩子，正是你的妈妈从你出生那天起就一直在为你提供生活所需！你们之间缺乏有效的沟通。学会换位思考，你就能理解你妈妈多爱你了。”听了这些，我擦干眼泪，跳了起来，像风一样跑回家。
1．Having argued with my mother fiercely，I stormed out of the house，slamming the door heavily.2.Disappointed and frustrated，I 3.felt like floating in an ocean of limitless sadness.I 4.desired to be understood and tolerated.I was sitting on a bench of the square，sobbing，when an old man in the distance noticed me.He asked why I was in a bad mood.I uttered everything to him.He said with a smile，“Girl，it is your mother 5.who has been providing for you from when you were born！There is 6.a lack of effective communication between you two.Put yourself in your mother’s shoes and you will understand how much your mum loves you.”Hearing these words，I wiped my tears,7.leapt to my feet and ran for home like the wind.

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