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Section Ⅴ　Writing Workshop
Activity 1　Read for details [细节把握]
Read the passage on page 40 and choose the best answer.
1．What’s the purpose of the survey report
A．To list some activities over saving water and energy.
B．To show people’s attitudes to environmental protection and actions taken by people.
C．To change people’s attitudes to protecting the environment.
D．To summarize people’s ideas about disposable packaging.
答案　B
2．What can we infer from paragraph 2
A．All people have finished these activities in the past month.
B．Most of people are using the disposable packaging.
C．People usually cycle or walk when going outside.
D．More than 90% of people are in favor of environmental protection.
答案　D
3．Which of the following should be paid more attention to according to the report
A．Saving water and energy.
B．Riding bikes or walking.
C．Reducing the use of paper.
D．Cutting down the use of disposable packaging.
答案　A
Activity 2　Read for structures [文章架构]
Activity 3　Read for language features [增分靓句]
Please find out the sentences using quantity expressions.
1．As the diagram shows，the percentage of those who felt that they needed to help protect the environment is as high as 96%.
2．More than half of those who took part in the survey had done four of the five activities in the past month.
3．Around 90% had tried to recycle waste such as glass，metal and paper；and more than two thirds (70%) had tried to cut back on the use of disposable packaging...
4．Also，the majority of residents had cycled or walked.
5．Unfortunately，not as many who took part had taken action to save water and energy in their homes.
6．Just under 40%(38%) tried to save water when they were washing dishes or taking showers.
7．Just over half (51%) tried to save energy by reducing the use of air conditioning or turning off lights.
8．However，not as many were saving water and energy.
本单元的写作项目是调查报告。调查报告属于应用文，一般是用简洁、生动的语言把图(或表格)中所提供的信息准确、完整地表达出来，还需要分析调查结果，揭示其规律，找出解决问题的对策。
1．篇章结构
(1)开头——简单介绍调查的基本信息；
(2)主体——分析调查数据及其反映出的问题，并得出结论；
(3)结尾——阐述作者个人的看法和建议。
2．注意事项
客观地介绍这项调查，例如它的目的、参与者的数量、总的发现；
描述调查中主要的发现及其支持数据；
使用定量的表述，正确运用图表信息；
总结你的发现并给出建议。
1．开头部分常用表达
Recently a survey has been done to find out...
最近进行了一项调查来查明……
The aim/purpose of this report is to...
这份报告的目的是……
Just as the chart/diagram shows...
正如图表所示……
2．主体部分常用表达
There are several disappointing facts and figures.
有一些令人失望的事实和数据。
There are also problems caused by...
还有一些问题是由……引起的。
On the other hand，there are some encouraging things.
另一方面，也有一些令人鼓舞的事情。
As a result of this，people now expect...
因此，人们现在期望……
What this means is that residents now expect...
这意味着居民们现在期望……
3．结尾部分常用表达
To sum up/In conclusion，the situation is...
总而言之，情况是……
All things considered，there seems to be...
综合考虑，似乎有……
目前，针对中学生零用钱(pocket money)的消费方向，你对你们市某中学的部分高中和初中学生进行了问卷调查，得出如下表的数据。现请你用英文写一篇调查报告并发表自己的看法，同时呼吁中学生树立正确的消费观。
第一步　审题谋篇
审题
写作要求是写一篇调查报告，并发表自己的看法，同时呼吁中学生树立正确的消费观。写作时应注意下面几点：
1．确定文体：这是一篇调查报告，写作中应注意调查报告的结构。
2．主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
3．主体人称：应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。
谋篇
1．首段：介绍调查时间、对象、问题等；
2．中段：说明主要的发现；
3．尾段：总结并发表自己的观点。
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇
1．大多数…… the majority of
2．在做……上花钱 spend money (in) doing
3．零食；快餐snack
4．总之to sum up
5．对……有害do harm to
6．导致result in
连词成句
1．如图所示，初高中学生都把大部分的钱用在买书、零食和玩游戏上。
As the diagram indicates，both juniors and seniors spend the majority of their money on books，snacks and playing games.
2．只有约32%的初中生会用零花钱买书。
Only about 32% of juniors will spend their pocket money buying books.
3．超过一半的初中生买零食，约46%的初中生把零花钱花在玩游戏上。
Over a half of juniors buy snacks and around 46% spend their pocket money (in) playing games.
4．我认为吃太多的零食会让我们更胖。
In my opinion，eating too many snacks will make us fatter.
5．吃太多零食会对我们的健康有害。
Eating too many snacks will do harm to our health.
6．如果我们无限制地玩游戏，我们就会失去很多宝贵的时间。
If we play games without limit，we’ll lose much precious time.
7．这会导致低分。
This results in low grades.
8．总之，我们学生应该珍惜我们的钱和时间。
To sum up，we students should value our money and time.
第三步　句式升级
1．请用while把句2和句3合成一句话。
Only about 32% of juniors will spend their pocket money buying books，while over a half buy snacks and around 46% spend their pocket money (in) playing games.
2．请用not only...but also...把句4和句5合成一句话。
In my opinion，eating too many snacks will not only make us fatter but also do harm to our health.
3.请用定语从句把句6和句7合成一句话。
If we play games without limit，we’ll lose much precious time，which results in low grades.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。
参考范文
Recently a survey has been done to find out how high school students spend their pocket money.
As the diagram indicates，both juniors and seniors spend the majority of their money on books，snacks and playing games，while some money goes to clothes，banks，sports and so on.The study shows that about 44% of seniors prefer books to snacks (37%)．On the other hand，only about 32% of juniors will spend their pocket money buying books，while over a half buy snacks and around 46% spend their pocket money in playing games.
In my opinion，eating too many snacks will not only make us fatter but also do harm to our health.Besides，if we play games without limit，we’ll lose much precious time，which results in low grades.To sum up，we students should value our money and time.
你校英文报正在针对高中生开展以After-school Activities为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．状况描述；
2．简单评论；
3．你的建议。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
参考范文
A recent survey regarding After-school Activities was conducted in our school.
As can be seen from the pie chart，the majority of the students surveyed，about 56%，tended to do homework after school.By contrast，playing computer games，doing sports and reading books proved to be less popular，accounting for 22%,13% and 9% respectively.
In my view，the trend mentioned above is basically due to the mounting pressure.To help students get fully developed，it’s sensible to balance study and relaxation—workout and book-reading should be given priority while less time should be spent on screens.Plus，more diverse extra-curricular activities should be provided to cater to different interests and talents.(共30张PPT)
Section Ⅴ
Writing Workshop
GREEN LIVING
UNIT 8
内容索引
Part 1　品读文本学写法
Part 2　熟悉技法练写作
品读文本学写法
Read the passage on page 40 and choose the best answer.
1.What’s the purpose of the survey report
A.To list some activities over saving water and energy.
B.To show people’s attitudes to environmental protection and actions
taken by people.
C.To change people’s attitudes to protecting the environment.
D.To summarize people’s ideas about disposable packaging.
Activity 1　Read for details [细节把握]
√
2.What can we infer from paragraph 2
A.All people have finished these activities in the past month.
B.Most of people are using the disposable packaging.
C.People usually cycle or walk when going outside.
D.More than 90% of people are in favor of environmental protection.
√
3.Which of the following should be paid more attention to according to the report
A.Saving water and energy.
B.Riding bikes or walking.
C.Reducing the use of paper.
D.Cutting down the use of disposable packaging.
√
Activity 2　Read for structures [文章架构]
introduction
conclusion
Please find out the sentences using quantity expressions.
1.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
4._____________________________________________________________
Activity 3　Read for language features [增分靓句]
As the diagram shows，the percentage of those who felt that they needed to help protect the environment is as high as 96%.
Also，the majority of residents had cycled or walked.
More than half of those who took part in the survey had done four of the five activities in the past month.
Around 90% had tried to recycle waste such as glass，metal and paper；and more than two thirds (70%) had tried to cut back on the use of disposable packaging...
5.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8._____________________________________________________________
返 回
Unfortunately，not as many who took part had taken action to save water and energy in their homes.
However，not as many were saving water and energy.
Just under 40%(38%) tried to save water when they were washing dishes or taking showers.
Just over half (51%) tried to save energy by reducing the use of air conditioning or turning off lights.
熟悉技法练写作
本单元的写作项目是调查报告。调查报告属于应用文，一般是用简洁、生动的语言把图(或表格)中所提供的信息准确、完整地表达出来，还需要分析调查结果，揭示其规律，找出解决问题的对策。
1.篇章结构
(1)开头——简单介绍调查的基本信息；
(2)主体——分析调查数据及其反映出的问题，并得出结论；
(3)结尾——阐述作者个人的看法和建议。
2.注意事项
客观地介绍这项调查，例如它的目的、参与者的数量、总的发现；
描述调查中主要的发现及其支持数据；
使用定量的表述，正确运用图表信息；
总结你的发现并给出建议。
常用表达
1.开头部分常用表达
Recently a survey has been done to find out...
最近进行了一项调查来查明……
The aim/purpose of this report is to...
这份报告的目的是……
Just as the chart/diagram shows...
正如图表所示……
2.主体部分常用表达
There are several disappointing facts and figures.
有一些令人失望的事实和数据。
There are also problems caused by...
还有一些问题是由……引起的。
On the other hand，there are some encouraging things.
另一方面，也有一些令人鼓舞的事情。
As a result of this，people now expect...
因此，人们现在期望……
What this means is that residents now expect...
这意味着居民们现在期望……
3.结尾部分常用表达
To sum up/In conclusion，the situation is...
总而言之，情况是……
All things considered，there seems to be...
综合考虑，似乎有……
分步演练
目前，针对中学生零用钱(pocket money)的消费方向，你对你们市某中学的部分高中和初中学生进行了问卷调查，得出如下表的数据。现请你用英文写一篇调查报告并发表自己的看法，同时呼吁中学生树立正确的消费观。
第一步　审题谋篇
审题
写作要求是写一篇调查报告，并发表自己的看法，同时呼吁中学生树立正确的消费观。写作时应注意下面几点：
1.确定文体：这是一篇调查报告，写作中应注意调查报告的结构。
2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
3.主体人称：应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。
谋篇
1.首段：介绍调查时间、对象、问题等；
2.中段：说明主要的发现；
3.尾段：总结并发表自己的观点。
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇
1.大多数……
2.在做……上花钱
3.零食；快餐
4.总之
5.对……有害
6.导致
_______________
______________________
______
__________
___________
________
the majority of
spend money (in) doing
snack
to sum up
do harm to
result in
连词成句
1.如图所示，初高中学生都把大部分的钱用在买书、零食和玩游戏上。
，both juniors and seniors spend the majority of their money on books，snacks and playing games.
2.只有约32%的初中生会用零花钱买书。
Only about 32% of juniors .
3.超过一半的初中生买零食，约46%的初中生把零花钱花在玩游戏上。
Over a half of juniors buy snacks and around 46% ___________________
.
As the diagram indicates
will spend their pocket money buying books
spend their pocket
money (in) playing games
4.我认为吃太多的零食会让我们更胖。
In my opinion， .
5.吃太多零食会对我们的健康有害。
Eating too many snacks .
6.如果我们无限制地玩游戏，我们就会失去很多宝贵的时间。
If we play games ，we’ll lose much precious time.
7.这会导致低分。
This low grades.
8.总之，我们学生应该珍惜我们的钱和时间。
To sum up，we students .
eating too many snacks will make us fatter
will do harm to our health
without limit
results in
should value our money and time
第三步　句式升级
1.请用while把句2和句3合成一句话。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.请用not only...but also...把句4和句5合成一句话。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Only about 32% of juniors will spend their pocket money buying books，while over a half buy snacks and around 46% spend their pocket money (in) playing games.
In my opinion，eating too many snacks will not only make us fatter but also do harm to our health.
3.请用定语从句把句6和句7合成一句话。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If we play games without limit，we’ll lose much precious time，which results in low grades.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。
参考范文
Recently a survey has been done to find out how high school students spend their pocket money.
As the diagram indicates，both juniors and seniors spend the majority of their money on books，snacks and playing games，while some money goes to clothes，banks，sports and so on.The study shows that about 44% of seniors prefer books to snacks (37%).On the other hand，only about 32% of juniors will spend their pocket money buying books，while over a half buy snacks and around 46% spend their pocket money in playing games.
In my opinion，eating too many snacks will not only make us fatter but also do harm to our health.Besides，if we play games without limit，we’ll lose much precious time，which results in low grades.To sum up，we students should value our money and time.
你校英文报正在针对高中生开展以After-school Activities为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.状况描述；
2.简单评论；
3.你的建议。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
达标检测
参考范文
A recent survey regarding After-school Activities was conducted in our school.
As can be seen from the pie chart，the majority of the students surveyed，about 56%，tended to do homework after school.By contrast，playing computer games，doing sports and reading books proved to be less popular，accounting for 22%,13% and 9% respectively.
In my view，the trend mentioned above is basically due to the mounting pressure.To help students get fully developed，it’s sensible to balance study and relaxation—workout and book-reading should be given priority while less time should be spent on screens.Plus，more diverse extra-curricular activities should be provided to cater to different interests and talents.
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