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读后续写情感链句型练习
速记满分写作素材（读后续写）
表情感的名词
- 喜：joy, delight, happiness, excitement, merriment
- 忧：worry, anxiety, nervousness
- 悲：grief, sadness, sorrow
- 惊：surprise, astonishment, amazement, shock
- 恐：fear, horror, terror, fright, panic
- 怒：anger, annoyance, rage
- 疑：disbelief, doubt, puzzle, suspicion
- 疚：guilt, shame, regret
- 尬：embarrassment, awkwardness
- 悯：sympathy, pity
- 丧：frustration, depression
- 暖：relief, warmth
- 傲：pride
- 心：curiosity, confidence, determination
- 望：hope, helplessness, hopelessness, disappointment, despair
- 恩：appreciation, gratitude
有灵动词（短语）
- 溢出：flow over, well up
- 难以禁受：overwhelm
- 控制：take hold of, seize（突然控制）
- 围绕：surround
- 渐渐出现：creep over
- 闪过：flash across, spread across, cross
- 闪烁：shine, twinkle, sparkle, glitter
- 充满：be full of, be filled with
- 突然袭来：strike（猛地意识到）
- 席卷：sweep over, wash over, flood over
高分表达公式：
公式1 表情感的名词 + 有灵动词（短语）+ sb.
1. 句型：A(n) look/expression of + 情感名词 + flashed across/ spread across/ crossed one’s face.
（……的神色从某人脸上掠过）
例：A look of annoyance crossed her face. 恼怒的神色从她脸上掠过。
1. When he failed the exam, ________________________________________________.
（失落的神色从他脸上掠过。）
2. ________________________________________________, he turned around and left quietly.
（一丝愤怒浮现在脸上，他转身默默离开。）
2. 句型：(A wave/surge/sense of +) 情感名词 + seized/overwhelmed/took hold of/washed over/flooded over/swept over/flowed over/came over + sb. (+ like …)
（某人感到（一阵）……）
例：A strong wave of fear sweeping over him, Mike couldn’t utter a single word. 一阵强烈的恐惧传遍他的全身，迈克一个字也说不出来。
1. When he received help from a stranger, ________________________________________________.
（一股暖意席卷了他。）
2. ________________________________________________, she stood there unable to say a word.
（一阵惊恐袭来，她站在原地说不出话。）
3. 句型：情感名词 + welled up inside/in/within sb.
（……在某人内心越发强烈）
例：Anger welled up within him. 他怒不可遏。
1. When he won the first prize, ________________________________________________.
（激动之情在他心中升腾。）
2. ________________________________________________, he made up his mind to try again.
（一股决心在心底涌起，他下定决心再试一次。）
4. 句型：A (slight) feeling of + 情感名词 + crept over sb.
（某人渐渐产生（一丝）……）
例：A slight feeling of suspicion crept over me. 我渐渐地产生了一丝疑虑。
When he walked alone in the dark, ________________________________________________.
（一丝恐惧悄悄爬上他的心头。）
5. 句型：（表高兴、激动的）情感名词 + was shining/twinkling/sparkling in one’s eyes.
（某人眼里闪着……的光芒）
例：Excitement was shining in her eyes. (= Her eyes were shining with excitement.) 她兴奋得两眼发光。
When he saw his parents waiting for him, ________________________________________________.
（温暖在他眼中闪烁。）
公式2 情感名词A gave way to/was swept away by/was replaced by/was overshadowed by … 情感名词B.
（……变为……/……为……所取代）
1. Her previous calm gave way to/was swept away by terror. 她先前的泰然自若已变为惊恐。
2. His initial excitement was replaced by a deep sense of disappointment. 他最初的兴奋被深深的失望所取代。
3. The joy she once felt was overshadowed by a wave of sadness. 她曾经感受到的喜悦被一股悲伤的浪潮所掩盖。
His initial fear ________________________________________________.（他最初的恐惧渐渐被勇气取代。）
练习：句子翻译
1. 看到满分试卷，喜悦的神情在他脸上绽放。
2. 恐惧涌上心头，他紧紧抓住身边的扶手。
3. 当他得到老师的表扬时，自豪感油然而生。
4. 一丝不安悄悄袭来，他放慢了前进的脚步。
5. 失落被希望取代，他重新鼓起了勇气。
6. 感动在眼中闪烁，他向帮助自己的人道谢。
三、2025全国I卷·第二段
He held a cookie in his hand and walked towards his brother slowly. ________________________________________（提示：紧张）. He stopped in front of his brother and held out the cookie gently. When his brother looked up at him, ________________________________________________________________________________________（提示：错愕）. His brother took the cookie from his hand quietly. ________________________________________________（提示：暖意）. His nervousness ___________________________________________________________________________（提示：释然）. They looked at each other and smiled. _________________________________________________________（提示：喜悦）. They hugged each other gently and made up with each other finally.
升级版（使用非谓语+独立主格进行改写）
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公式1 表情感的名词 + 有灵动词（短语）+ sb.
1. 句型：A(n) look/expression of + 情感名词 + flashed across/ spread across/ crossed one’s face.
（……的神色从某人脸上掠过）
例：A look of annoyance crossed her face. 恼怒的神色从她脸上掠过。
1. When he failed the exam, a look of sadness crossed/flashed across/spread across his face.
（失落的神色从他脸上掠过。）
2. A look of anger crossed/flashed across/spread across his face, he turned around and left quietly.
（一丝愤怒浮现在脸上，他转身默默离开。）
2. 句型：(A wave/surge/sense of +) 情感名词 + seized/overwhelmed/took hold of/washed over/flooded over/swept over/flowed over/came over + sb. (+ like …)
（某人感到（一阵）……）
例：A strong wave of fear sweeping over him, Mike couldn’t utter a single word. 一阵强烈的恐惧传遍他的全身，迈克一个字也说不出来。
1. When he received help from a stranger, a wave of warmth swept over/washed over/flooded over him.
（一股暖意席卷了他。）
2. A wave of panic swept over/washed over/flooded over her, she stood there unable to say a word.
（一阵惊恐袭来，她站在原地说不出话。）
3. 句型：情感名词 + welled up inside/in/within sb.
（……在某人内心越发强烈）
例：Anger welled up within him. 他怒不可遏。
1. When he won the first prize, excitement welled up inside/within him.
（激动之情在他心中升腾。）
2. A strong sense of determination welled up inside/within him, he made up his mind to try again.
（一股决心在心底涌起，他下定决心再试一次。）
4. 句型：A (slight) feeling of + 情感名词 + crept over sb.
（某人渐渐产生（一丝）……）
例：A slight feeling of suspicion crept over me. 我渐渐地产生了一丝疑虑。
When he walked alone in the dark, _a slight feeling of fear crept over him_.
（一丝恐惧悄悄爬上他的心头。）
5. 句型：（表高兴、激动的）情感名词 + was shining/twinkling/sparkling in one’s eyes.
（某人眼里闪着……的光芒）
例：Excitement was shining in her eyes. (= Her eyes were shining with excitement.) 她兴奋得两眼发光。
When he saw his parents waiting for him, _warmth was shining/sparkling in his eyes_.
（温暖在他眼中闪烁。）
公式2 情感名词A gave way to/was swept away by/was replaced by/was overshadowed by … 情感名词B.
（……变为……/……为……所取代）
1. Her previous calm gave way to/was swept away by terror. 她先前的泰然自若已变为惊恐。
2. His initial excitement was replaced by a deep sense of disappointment. 他最初的兴奋被深深的失望所取代。
3. The joy she once felt was overshadowed by a wave of sadness. 她曾经感受到的喜悦被一股悲伤的浪潮所掩盖。
His initial fear __gave way to/was replaced by courage__.（他最初的恐惧渐渐被勇气取代。）
句子翻译
看到满分试卷，喜悦的神情在他脸上绽放。
A look of joy spread across his face when he saw the full-mark paper.
恐惧涌上心头，他紧紧抓住身边的扶手。
Fear welled up within him, and he held the armrest tightly.
当他得到老师的表扬时，自豪感油然而生。
A strong sense of pride welled up inside him when he was praised by the teacher.
一丝不安悄悄袭来，他放慢了前进的脚步。
A slight feeling of unease crept over him, and he slowed down his steps.
失落被希望取代，他重新鼓起了勇气。
Sadness gave way to hope, and he took courage again.
6. 感动在眼中闪烁，他向帮助自己的人道谢。
Warmth was shining in his eyes, and he thanked the person who helped him.
三、2025全国I卷·第二段 完整段落·情绪挖空版（固定饼干兄弟情境）
He held a cookie in his hand and walked towards his brother slowly. _Nervousness welled up within him_（提示：紧张）. He stopped in front of his brother and held out the cookie gently. When his brother looked up at him, ___a look of surprise crossed his face_（提示：错愕）. His brother took the cookie from his hand quietly. _A wave of warmth flooded over him__（提示：暖意）. His nervousness _gave way to relief__（提示：释然）. They looked at each other and smiled. __Joy was shining in their eyes_（提示：喜悦）. They hugged each other gently and made up with each other finally.
升级版（非谓语+独立主格改写）
Holding a cookie in his hand, he walked towards his brother slowly, nervousness welling up within him. Stopping in front of his brother, he held out the cookie gently. When his brother looked up at him, a look of surprise crossing his face, the younger brother took the cookie quietly. A wave of warmth flooding over him, his nervousness gave way to relief. Looking at each other and smiling, joy shining in their eyes, they hugged each other gently and made up finally.

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