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Unit 3 Growing up
Unit 3 Growing up
Period6(3a-3c+Project)
(3a-3c)
Section B 读写
What should we do when someone helps us
We should say “Thank you”.
Read the story and focus on the words and phrases in red
Dear Mrs Thompson,
I want to thank you for being my teacher. You took the time to help me, although you were so busy.
Your classes always made me happy. I used to think that science was boring and difficult, and I did badly in class. I never liked science until I took your class. You encouraged me and made science lessons fun, and slowly, I grew more confident.
take time to do sth. 花时间做某事
used to do sth过去常常做某事
do badly in 在...上表现不好
grow+形容词 变得……
thank sb for (doing) sth
因（做）某事感谢某人
While-reading
Read the story and focus on the words and phrases in red
I also want to thank you for being kind to me. You helped me a lot, especially after my grandmother passed away. I couldn't talk about my feelings to anybody until you sat with me during lunch that day. You listened to me and talked with me so that I felt much better. That day will always remain in my mind. Thank you so much for being not only my teacher but also my friend.
Sincerely,
Kelly Smith
remain in one’s mind 铭记在心
not only...but also 不仅...而且... 就近原则
be kind/nice/friendly to sb. 对某人友好
Kelly is thankful because Mrs. Thompson helped her both in study and life.
Salutation(称呼）
Opening thanks(开篇致谢）
Difficulties in schoolwork & Teacher’s help(学业困难及帮助,感谢老师在学业上的帮助 (让科学课变得有趣，重拾信心)）
Difficulties in personal life & Teacher’s help(生活困难及帮助,感谢老师在情感上的支持 (祖母去世后的倾听与陪伴)）
Signature(署名）
Closing(总结）
Who
What
How
my mother
I failed my math exam and felt upset. I didn't know how to improve.
She made a study plan with me and helped me with problems every night
Post-reading
Work on 3b
Who would you like to thank the most Make notes.
The person I want to thank: ________
How he / she helped me
What difficulties I faced
my teacher
I felt very nervous about speaking English in class.
It was hard for me to remember new words.
She always smiled at me to make me feel relaxed.
She taught me fun ways to memory new words.
写作思路：三段式
第一段：开头点题（1–2 句）
直接告诉阅卷老师：你要感谢谁，他 / 她大概是什么样的人，不用铺垫，开门见山最加分
第二段：中间叙事（3–5 句）
这是全文最重要的一段，写一件小事：你遇到了什么困难→他 / 她怎么安慰 / 帮助你→你有什么变化，用上单元短语，立刻显得很地道
第三段：结尾抒情（2–3 句）
表达感谢、说说收获、表个决心，简单真诚，不喊口号，就是高分结尾
Pre-writing
Beginning开头段
1. I am writing to thank you for your help. Although you were busy, you always took time to help me.
我写信是为了感谢你的帮助。虽然你很忙，但你总是抽出时间来帮助我
Pre-writing
Body中间段
这是全文最重要的一段，写一件小事：你遇到了什么困难→他 / 她怎么安慰 / 帮助你→你有什么变化，用上单元短语，立刻显得很地道
（困难+帮助+改变）
困难：
帮助：
改变：
上个月，我在一次重要的考试中失败了。我感到难过，不知道该怎么办。
你注意到了我的问题，并且帮了我很多。你给了我一些有用的建议，鼓励我再试一次。
由于你的帮助，我取得了很大的进步。我变得更加自信，对学习更感兴趣。
Last month, I failed an important exam. I felt upset and didn’t know what to do.
You noticed my problem and helped me a lot. You gave me some useful advice and encouraged me to try again.
Thanks to your help, I made great progress. I become more confident and interested in learning.
Pre-writing
Ending结尾段
第三段：结尾抒情（2–3 句）
表达感谢、说说收获、表个决心，简单真诚，不喊口号，就是高分结尾
1. Thank you again for your kindness. I will never forget your help.
2. Thank you so much for being my +（家人/朋友/老师）. Your words will remain in my mind forever. I hope I can be a person like you in the future.
非常感谢你做我的+（家人/朋友/老师）。你的话将永远留在我心中。我希望将来我能成为一个像你一样的人。
再次感谢您的好意。我永远不会忘记你的帮助。
Possible Version
Dear Miss Li,
I am writing to thank you for your help. Although you were busy, you always took time to help me.
Last month, I failed an important exam. I felt upset and didn’t know what to do.You noticed my problem and helped me a lot. You gave me useful advice on studying and shared your notes with me. What’s more, you encouraged me to try again. Thanks to your help, I get better grades now. I also become more interested in learning math.
Thank you again for your kindness. I will never forget your help.
Sincerely,
Lily
Dear Mom,
I want to say thank you for being my mother.
I failed my math exam and felt upset. I didn't know how to improve. My grades were low, and I felt really unconfident. I was also very worried about the exams. I was scared my bad maths grades would stop me from getting into a good school.
But you helped me a lot. You made a study plan with me and helped me with problems every night . You never got mad at my bad grades. Instead, you always encouraged me not to give up easily.
You also talked with me a lot to make me feel less stressed and more confident. You said if I worked hard, I could solve my problems. Because of you, my maths got better and better.Thank you so much for being not only my mother but also my friend. I love you.
Yours,
Liu Zhiwei

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