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专题 08 书面表达（期末题型精练）七年级英语下学期 新教材沪教版
1．树立远大理想，营造榜样氛围。近来学校开展征文活动。请以“When Dreams Meet Heroes”为题撰写一篇英文文章投稿。内容要求包含以下表格中的所有要点，参考词汇可按需选用：
What ● Your dream job
Why ● Important people around you/role models inspiring you ● Reasons you admire him/her
How ● Ways to realize your dream
注意：
1. 词数：70词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分；
参考词汇：scientist, doctor, engineer, teacher, smart, brave, hard-working, study hard, keep practicing, never give up
When Dreams Meet Heroes
Dreams are often lit up by the light of heroes.
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2．学校校报的英语板块征集个人难忘的游记。请根据以下内容和要求撰写你的英文游记。
内容包括：
1. 简要介绍游玩的地点及特色；
2. 你游玩的经历和感受；
3. 向同学推荐到此地游玩。
要求：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；
3. 语句连贯，词数70左右，标题不计入总词数。
My Unforgettable Trip
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3．假设你是李华，学校英语俱乐部将以“My Hobby with Family”为主题，举办“家庭爱好时光”英语征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，包含以下内容：
要点：
1.家庭共同爱好简介；
2.家庭共同爱好如何形成的(如一次特别经历)；
3.这个爱好对家庭关系的意义或带给你的变化。
要求：
1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名；
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
My family’s favorite hobby is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
These moments tell us one thing: being together is the greatest joy.
4．假设你是李华，你帮助外教Mr. Smith完成了“班级暑假研学目的地”问卷调查。请你根据提示，写一封邮件向Mr. Smith汇报，内容包括：
1. 班级（共39人）的投票情况；
2. 你的选择及原因；
3. 你的期待。
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；可适当拓展；
2. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总字数；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing to report the result of the survey.
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．运动俱乐部准备举办“运动达人”分享会。为了激发同学们的运动热情，让更多同学加入运动俱乐部，你打算参加此次分享会，你为此撰写了提纲，请根据以下提纲写一篇英文演讲稿。
（1）你最喜欢的运动是什么。（参考词汇：mountain climbing爬山，volleyball排球，badminton羽毛球，tennis网球，hike远足）
（2）你的运动经历（比如通常在何时、何地、和谁一起运动）。（参考词汇：experience经历）
（3）你喜欢该项运动的理由。（参考词汇：reason理由）
注意：
（1）词数不少于60，所给部分不计入总词数；
（2）请将文章写在答题卡上；
（3）除地名外，不得出现真实的人名、校名。
I would like to share (分享) my experience of doing sports.
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6．近年来，教育部大力推进“五育并举”育人体系，强调“德育为先”，倡导培养有理想、 敢担当、能吃苦、肯奋斗的新时代好少年。假如你是李华，你校正在进行主题为“校园模范(The Role Model of School)” 的英文演讲比赛，你心目中的校园模范人物是谁？请用 英文写一篇演讲稿。
内容要点需包含：
1. Who is he/ she in your school
2. What did he/ she do
3. What do you think of him/ her
写作要求：
1.70 词左右；
2. 文中不能出现真实的姓名与学校名；
3. 文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
Dear teachers and students,
It is a great honor to stand here today.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
7．假如你是学生李华，你的英国好友 Benny正在开展关于“国际中学生兴趣爱好”的项目调查，想了解你班同学的兴趣爱好。请你结合以下要点和图示给他写一封邮件，介绍你的调查结果。
1. 要点：
（1）全班人数；
（2）班级同学的爱好；
（3）你的爱好及其益处。
2. 提示：
（1）内容与图片提示相关，可适当发挥；
（2）可适当增加细节，使条理清楚、行文连贯；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（4）70词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：做调查 do a survey
Dear Benny,
I’m glad to hear from you. To help with your project,
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What do you like to do in your free time Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
8．学校英文校刊举办 “The person I admire most” 专栏征稿活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍一位你最尊敬的人，分享他/她的故事和对你的影响。
谁？ Who is the person
做了什么？ What did he/she do
有何成就？ What has he/she achieved
对你的影响？ How does he/she influence you
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9．树立远大理想，营造榜样氛围。近来学校开展征文活动。请以“When Dreams Meet Heroes”为题撰写一篇英文文章投稿。内容要求包含以下表格中的所有要点，参考词汇可按需选用：
What Your dream job
Why Important people around you / role models inspiring you Reasons you admire him / her
How Ways to realize your dream
注意：
1. 词数：70 词左右 (短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分；
参考词汇：scientist, doctor, engineer, teacher, smart, brave, hard - working, study hard, keep practicing, never give up
When Dreams Meet Heroes
Dreams are often lit up by the light of heroes.
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10．初一的学习与生活即将结束。假如你是李华，由于你的突出表现，被学校评为 “年度环保少年”。在期末表彰大会上你将作为优秀学生代表发言，请按以下要点写一篇发言稿。
要点提示：
1. 介绍你在保护动植物和节能节水方面的具体表现及这些行动产生的意义；
2. 号召大家一起努力共创一个美好的家园；
写作要求：
1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥，请补充信息；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范；
3. 字数80左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
On behalf of an excellent student of this school year, it is my great honor to give a speech here.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
11．生活中家人、朋友、老师、科学家等都可以成为我们的榜样。假设你是李华，和美国笔友Kevin在讨论身边的榜样，请你给Kevin写一封信介绍你心目中的榜样。
内容要点包含：
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称：
4. 信的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Kevin,
How are you I’m excited to tell you something about my role model.
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What about you I’d love to hear about your role model too. Write to me soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
12．假如你是深圳某中学的学生Li Hua，本学期你和同学们参加了不同的社团，现就每个人所学内容，进行演讲。请你根据下列表格提示，用英语介绍同学们分享的内容。
分享人 社团名称 学习内容 未来畅想
Linda Cute Animals Club 学会如何照顾小动物。 做一名兽医
David Green Club 学会了节约水电的方法。 做一名工程师
Sam Beauty Poem Club 阅读大量中英文诗歌，丰富了情感。 做一名电台主持人
You Travelling Club ……(至少一点) (做一名……请补充)
提示词： emotion (n.) 情感； vet (n.) 兽医
写作要求：
1. 表达清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 应用表格中的所有信息，并适当发挥；
3. 80词左右。
Dear classmates,
I am glad to talk about our clubs this term. Everyone shared their ideas with us.
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Thanks for your listening.
13．假如你是未来机器人设计师，请根据图片和提示给美国OpenAI公司写一篇英语短文介绍你设计的未来机器人。
注意：
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
2. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。
3. 语句连贯。词数70左右，作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。
This is my new robot in the future.
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14．假设你是学校英语推广大使，请根据以下海报内容及提示，写一篇英文演讲稿，向七年级的同学介绍英语俱乐部。
提示：
(1) Where and when can students go to the club
(2) Why did we start the club
(3) What can students do in the club
要求：
1.内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；
3.语句连贯，词数 70左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! Now I will let you know a new club called English Corner.
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Come and join us!
《专题 08 书面表达（期末题型精练）七年级英语下学期 新教材沪教版》参考答案
1．例文
When Dreams Meet Heroes
Dreams are often lit up by the light of heroes. My dream is to become a scientist like Qian Xuesen.
Qian Xuesen is my role model. He gave up a good life abroad and returned to China. He worked tirelessly to make great contributions to our country’s aerospace science and technology. His love for his country and hard work inspired me.
To realize my dream, I will not only study hard to enrich myself, but also never give up when facing difficulties.
I hope I can make my dream come true one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：根据实际情况灵活运用时态；
③提示：写作要点已给出，围绕梦想与英雄展开，需突出对英雄的敬佩及为实现梦想的行动，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先点明梦想与英雄的联系，引出自己想成为像钱学森那样的科学家这一梦想。
第二步，再介绍钱学森的事迹及对自己的激励‘
第三步，阐述为实现梦想将采取的行动’
第四步，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①be lit up by 被……照亮
②give up 放弃
③make great contributions to 为……做出巨大贡献
④tirelessly 不知疲倦地
⑤never give up 永不放弃
[高分句型]
①To realize my dream, I will not only study hard to enrich myself, but also never give up when facing difficulties. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②I hope I can make my dream come true one day. (省略that的宾语从句)
2．参考范文一：
My Unforgettable Trip
Last summer, I went to Qinhuangdao with my family. It’s a beautiful city with clean beaches and fresh air.
We played on the beach during the day. I swam in the sea. The water was warm and the sun was shining. At night, we ate delicious seafood like shrimp and crabs.
Qinhuangdao is a great place to relax and have fun by the sea. Go and have a look. I’m sure that you’ll love the beautiful scenery and tasty food!
参考范文二：
My Unforgettable Trip
Last summer, I visited the Great Wall with my family. It’s an ancient wall, like a dragon on the mountains.
We climbed early. The steps were high, but I didn’t give up. When I reached the top, I saw green hills and the wall far away. My mom took a photo of me there, and I felt very proud.
The Great Wall is a famous place with cool history. Climbing is tiring but fun. Why not go there for a visit and get the feeling of being a “hero”
参考范文三：
My Unforgettable Trip
Last weekend, I went to Foshan Zumiao with my friends. It’s an old temple in Foshan, full of traditional buildings and beautiful carvings.
We saw colorful sculptures on the roofs and walls. There was also a kung fu show! The masters moved fast and strong. I tried some simple moves too, and it was fun.
If you like history and culture, I’m sure that you’ll love the old buildings and cool shows. Why not come and feel the magic of Foshan!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息提示，适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己去过的游玩地点及其特色；
第二步，分享游玩的经历和感受；
第三步，推荐同学到此地游玩。
[亮点词汇]
① at night 在晚上
② have fun 玩得开心
③ have a look 看一看
[高分句型]
① Go and have a look. (祈使句)
② I’m sure that you’ll love the beautiful scenery and tasty food! (be sure that+从句)
3．One possible version:
My family’s favorite hobby is gardening. Every Sunday, we plant vegetables in our balcony garden.
Last spring, Mom brought home tomato seeds. Excited, we all helped to plant them in pots and water the seeds. Soon, small green plants grew!
Now, we work together: Dad sets up sticks for the plants, I draw pictures of their growth, and Mom picks the tomatoes. We laugh and get dirty together. Most importantly, we learned patience—waiting months to taste tomatoes feels like winning a prize!
These moments tell us one thing: being together is the greatest joy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，介绍家庭共同爱好；
第二步，介绍关于家庭爱好的一次特别经历；
第三步，描述家庭爱好的教育意义。
[亮点词汇]
①balcony garden阳台花园
②win a prize获奖
[高分句型]
①We laugh and get dirty together.（and连接的并列结构）
4．Possible version 1. 西安：历史古都之旅
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to report the result of the survey. In our class, 39 students take part in the survey. 15 students choose Beijing, 12 choose Changsha, 8 choose Xi’an, and 4 choose other places.
I choose Xi’an. It is a very famous city. There are many old buildings and old city walls. I want to see these great things. I think I can learn a lot about Chinese history there.
I’m looking forward to the study trip. I believe it will be interesting. (74 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 2. 长沙：文化与美食之旅
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to report the result of the survey. Among 39 classmates, 15 vote for Beijing, 12 for Changsha, 8 for Xi’an, and 4 for other places.
I prefer Changsha. Firstly, it is a city full of culture. Yuelu Mountain there is very famous. Many great Chinese writers studied there in the history. Besides, Changsha is close to Shaoshan, Chairman Mao’s hometown. We can visit it, too. Finally, Changsha is famous for its delicious spicy snacks. Many of my classmates like spicy food!
What do you think about our choices I’m so excited about this study trip. (88 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 3. 北京：历史与人文之旅
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to report the result of the survey. There are 39 students in our class. 15 students choose Beijing, 12 Changsha, 8 Xi’an, and 4 other places.
I want to visit Beijing, our capital city. It’s where old meets new. There are many famous places. The Forbidden City is a must-visit one. We can enjoy the ancient buildings and learn a lot about Chinese history there. Next, we can visit the Great Wall. It’s one of the seven wonders in the world. Walking on the Great Wall, we will feel how great our country is. What’s more, Beijing has many delicious food, such as roast duck. We can give it a try.
Which place do you like I’m sure the study trip will be fun and unforgettable. (118 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 4. 深圳：科技与文化之旅
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to report the result of the survey. Among 39 classmates, 15 picked Beijing, 12 chose Changsha, 8 voted for Xi’an, and 4 for other places.
I am one of the 4 and I like Shenzhen best. Although we live in Shenzhen, there are still many interesting things to see and do here. For example, we can visit well-known tech companies like Huawei and Tencent. I really want to know how they make these great new products. Besides, Shenzhen has a lot of its own history and culture. We can visit the Dapeng Fortress to learn about the past of Shenzhen and experience how people lived a long time ago.
Will you come and travel together with us I am really looking forward to the study trip. (119 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包含调查结果、个人选择及理由、对研学旅行的期待，注意围绕这些要点展开，可适当补充细节，突出核心内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍调查的参与情况及各地点的选择人数；
第二步，再说明自己选择的地点、该地点的特色以及选择的原因；
第三步，最后表达对研学旅行的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in 参加
②look forward to 期待
③learn a lot about 学到很多关于……的知识
[高分句型]
①15 students choose Beijing, 12 choose Changsha, 8 choose Xi’an, and 4 choose other places.（and 并列了四个分句，清晰呈现调查结果）
②I think I can learn a lot about Chinese history there.（宾语从句）
5．例文：
I would like to share (分享) my experience of doing sports. My favorite sport is badminton because it is fun and energetic. I usually play badminton on weekends at the school sports hall with my classmates. Last year, I joined the school badminton team, and it has been a wonderful experience. Through practice, I’ve improved my skills and made many friends.
There are two main reasons why I love badminton. First, it keeps me healthy and active. Second, it teaches me teamwork and perseverance. Every match is exciting, and I always feel happy after playing.
I hope more students will join the Sports Club. Let’s enjoy sports together!
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：主要为 “一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：内容要包含题干要求，主语时态，语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最喜欢的运动，比如具体介绍运动经历；
第二步，说明喜欢该项运动的理由；
第三步，书写结语，呼吁大家积极加入。
[亮点词汇]
①on weekends 在周末
②a wonderful experience一次奇妙的经历
[高分句型]
①My favorite sport is badminton because it is fun and energetic.（because引导原因状语从句）
②I hope more students will join the Sports Club.（宾语从句）
6．例文
Dear teachers and students,
It is a great honor to stand here today. My role model at school is my classmate, Lucy. She is kind-hearted and helpful.
She always puts others first. Last month, she helped our sick classmate catch up with math lessons. She also helps clean the classroom’s book corner every morning.
Her care for others and sense of responsibility make her shine. She shows us that a role model is about being willing to help!
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的榜样是Lucy；
第二步，具体阐述她都做了什么事情；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
②catch up with赶上
③be willing to do sth愿意做某事
[高分句型]
①She shows us that a role model is about being willing to help! (that引导的宾语从句)
7．例文
Dear Benny,
I’m glad to hear from you. To help with your project, I did a survey about the students’ hobbies in my class. Let me share the results with you.
There are 40 students in our class. 12.5% of my classmates enjoy model building because it is really cool. 20% of them like taking photos to record sweet moments in their lives. 12% are interested in doing sports as it is good for their health. Interestingly, 37.5% are crazy about reading books. They think it’s a good way to learn about the world.
As for me, I am a fan of watching English movies because it can help me relax and improve my English.
What do you like to do in your free time Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，结合提示内容进行写作，可适当添加细节，注意包含所有要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，具体分析调查结果中班级同学的不同爱好情况；
第三步，介绍自己的爱好及好处。
[亮点词汇]
①share the results with you与你分享结果
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③be good for their health对他们的健康有好处
[高分句型]
①As for me, I am a fan of watching English movies because it can help me relax and improve my English. (because引导的原因状语从句)
8．例文：
The person I admire most is my grandmother. She is a kind and hardworking woman. When I was young, she took care of me every day, cooking delicious food and telling me stories. She also volunteers in our community to help the elderly. She has achieved everyone’s respect in the neighborhood. Her patience and kindness teach me to be helpful to others.
Now I often join her in volunteer work, and I believe helping others makes life meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本篇为人物介绍类记叙文，主题是“我最敬佩的人”，内容贴近学生生活，具有较强的写作现实性与教育意义。
②时态：主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合，介绍人物特点、经历和影响。
③提示：写作要紧扣四个方面：人物是谁、做了什么、取得了哪些成就、对“我”的影响，语言表达应具体、生动，结构清晰自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点明敬佩的人是谁，并简要介绍人物的基本特点；
第二步：具体说明该人物做过的事情，如照顾作者、参与社区服务等；
第三步：列出该人物所取得的成就，如赢得邻里的尊重；
第四步：分析该人物对“我”的影响，并结合实际举例说明，如一起做志愿活动，提升了作者的价值观。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of 照顾
②tell stories 讲故事
[高分句型]
①The person I admire most is my grandmother. (定语从句)
②When I was young, she took care of me every day, cooking delicious food and telling me stories. (时间状语从句)
③I believe helping others makes life meaningful. (宾语从句)
9．例文
When Dreams Meet Heroes
Dreams are often lit up by the light of heroes. I want to be a teacher in the future.
My dream is inspired by my English teacher. She is very smart, kind and hard-working. I admire her because she always helps us patiently and makes learning fun. To realize my dream, I will study hard, especially in all subjects. I will also read more books to learn more knowledge. Most importantly, I will never give up and keep practicing my teaching skills.
I believe my dream will come true.
【总体介绍】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，开篇点题，介绍你的梦想职业；
第二步，介绍你的榜样及原因；
第三步，实现梦想的具体做法。
【亮点词汇】①be inspired by被……激励
②patiently耐心地
③give up放弃
【高分句型】I admire her because she always helps us patiently and makes learning fun. （because引导的原因状语从句）
10．例文：
On behalf of an excellent student of this school year, it is my great honor to give a speech here. To protect animals, I built bird feeders in winter and rescued injured stray cats. Plants are equally important, so I joined tree-planting activities and never pick flowers in parks.
For energy saving, I always turn off lights when leaving rooms. I use reusable water bottles instead of plastic ones.
Why do I do these Because all living things are connected. Even small steps matter! Let’s ride bikes more, reduce waste, and protect our home together.
That’s all. Thanks for listening!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你在保护动植物和节能节水方面的具体表现及这些行动产生的意义；
第二步，号召大家一起努力共创一个美好的家园；
[亮点词汇]
①give a speech 发表讲话
②bird feeders 喂鸟器
③stray cats 流浪猫
④turn off 关掉
[高分句型]
①To protect animals, I built bird feeders in winter and rescued injured stray cats.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②Let’s ride bikes more, reduce waste, and protect our home together.（祈使句）
11．参考范文：
Dear Kevin,
How are you I’m excited to tell you something about my role model. That person is my father, a doctor who works hard to help patients. He is not only responsible but also deeply caring.
What I admire most about him is that he always puts others before himself. During the pandemic, he stayed at the hospital for weeks to save lives. Although he is busy, he still finds time to spend with me and help my mother with the housework. I’m truly grateful for his devotion to our family.
From him, I’ve learned the importance of hard work, kindness, and responsibility—not just as a father and husband, but as a person.
What about you I’d love to hear about your role model too. Write to me soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括思维导图所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以问候开篇，自然引出核心话题——我的榜样，介绍榜样的身份以及核心品质，为下文展开描述做铺垫；
第二步，通过具体事例展现父亲的品质；
第三步，升华主题，表达榜样的影响；
第四步，以问句过渡，将话题转向对方，表达想了解对方榜样的意愿。
[亮点词汇]
①not only … but also … 不但……而且……
②be grateful for 对……心存感激
[高分句型]
①That person is my father, a doctor who works hard to help patients. (who引导的限制性定语从句)
②Although he is busy, he still finds time to spend with me and help my mother with the housework. (although引导的让步状语从句)
12．例文
Dear classmates,
I am glad to talk about our clubs this term. Everyone shared their ideas with us. Linda is a girl with a lot of patience. She joined Cute Animals Club and she learned how to take good care of baby animals there. Her dream is to be a vet in the future. David is one of my best friends, and he took part in Green Club. David learned many ways of how to save water and electricity in his club. He wants to be an engineer. Sam studied hard in Beauty Poem Club this term. He read a lot of Chinese and English poems. This enriched his emotions. His favorite future career is a TV programme host. How meaningful it is!
For me, I joined Travelling Club because I enjoyed learning about different places around the world. I would like to be a travel guide in the future. Using my knowledge to tell people about travelling in a lively way is really cool. It will be so lucky to turn my hobby into my career.
Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应用表格中所有信息并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要介绍同学们参加的社团及学习内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍Linda、David、Sam的社团活动及未来畅想，并补充自己的情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达对演讲的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①take good care of 好好照顾
②save water and electricity 节约水电
③enriched his emotions 丰富了他的情感
④turn my hobby into my career 将爱好变成职业
[高分句型]
① Her dream is to be a vet in the future. (不定式作表语)
② Using my knowledge to tell people about travelling in a lively way is really cool. (动名词短语作主语)
13．例文
This is my new robot in the future. It’s about the same size as us humans, but it has an antenna on its head to receive all kinds of commands. There is a monitor on its body, which can show some important information or TV that we want to watch. It uses solar energy to charge, so it’s very environmentally friendly. It can help us cook, clean and even fly a plane. I think with its help, our life will be better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，引入描述对象；
第二步：详细描述特征与功能；
第三步：表达预期影响。
[亮点词汇]
①the same size as和……一样大
②all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
There is a monitor on its body, which can show some important information or TV that we want to watch.(定语从句)
14．例文
Hello, everyone! Now I will let you know a new club called English Corner.
If you’re eager to improve your English, this is the perfect place for you. Every Monday afternoon, from 4:30 to 5:30, you can come to the Meeting Room. We started this club because we understand the importance of English and want to offer you a fun-filled environment to learn.
In the club, you can sing English songs to practice pronunciation. Watching English movies is a great way to improve listening skills. You can also read interesting English books and share ideas with others.
Come and join us!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：以“一般现在时为主”；
③提示：根据海报内容及给定提示，涵盖俱乐部时间、地点、创办原因和活动内容来写作，不能照抄原文。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头点明介绍对象；
第二步，分别阐述俱乐部的时间、地点、创办原因以及能开展的活动；
第三步，发出邀请结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①be eager to do sth.渴望做某事
②fun-filled充满乐趣的
③share with分享
[高分句型]
①If you’re eager to improve your English, this is the perfect place for you. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②We started this club because we understand the importance of English and want to offer you a fun-filled environment to learn. (because引导原因状语从句)
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