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专题 08 书面表达（期末题型精练）六年级英语下学期 新教材鲁教版五四学制
1．假定Eric是你的好朋友，请根据表格中的信息写一篇英语短文介绍一下Eric。
姓名 Eric
年龄 13岁
生日 12月3日
最喜爱的动物 熊猫
爱好 听音乐、打篮球、弹吉他
日常生活 上午7:30上学、下午5:30回家。每天7节课，每节课45分钟。
家规 1.放学回家先写作业。 2.上学日不能使用手机。 3.睡前整理好书包。
要求：
1.短文必须包括上述要点；
2.词数80词左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.语言通顺，行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
4.文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。
My best friend
Eric is my best friend.
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2．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom想了解中国的校规。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封80词左右的邮件，介绍你们学校的主要规则以及你对规则的看法。
提示：1. 上学不能迟到；2. 课堂上要认真听讲；3. 必须穿校服；4. 不能在走廊跑；5. 规则帮助我们学习更好。
要求：1. 邮件格式正确；2. 包含所有提示内容；3. 语句通顺，可适当发挥；4. 80词左右。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris想了解你和你的好朋友。请你根据提示，给他写一封80词左右的邮件，介绍你和你朋友在外貌、性格或爱好方面的相同与不同之处。
提示词：appearance, personality, hobby, similar, different, special, understand
要求：1. 书信格式正确；2. 条理清晰，语句通顺；3. 包含提示词，可适当发挥；4. 语法正确，无拼写错误。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom在邮件中询问你的健康生活方式。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件，分享你的日常习惯。
提示：1. 你的饮食习惯（如吃早餐、蔬果）；2. 你的运动习惯（如运动项目、频率）；3. 你的作息与心态（如早睡早起、保持乐观）。
要求：80词左右，语句通顺，包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．假如你是张鹏，你的英国朋友 Peter来信询问你和家人这个周末的计划。请根据以下提示给他写一封回信，表达对他的思念并至少说出两件你和家人一起经常做的事情。
写作要点：
爸爸 看书
妈妈 洗衣服
张鹏 去公园画画
和家人一起 经常做……
参考词汇： (miss v. 想念)
写作要求：
(1) 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
(3) 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
(4) 至少50词。
Dear Peter,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Peng
6．我校即将举办中学生国际文化交流活动，你将代表学校介绍中国春节，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍该节日。
Time◆in January or February Activities◆watch the Spring Festival Gala ◆visit relatives and friends ◆get lucky money ……
Food◆dumplings, fish …… Meaning◆a new start ◆love and happiness
考词汇：春晚 the Spring Festival Gala 亲戚 relative
要求：（1）发言稿中必须包含思维导图中所有的信息，并适当发挥；
（2）词数：70左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Boys and girls,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now let me introduce the Spring Festival.
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
7．假如你是一名小导游，正带领同学们参观动物园。进入动物园后，你首先向大家介绍并强调几条重要的动物园规则，之后带着大家游览，向同学们介绍一两种动物园的明星动物。
1. 内容包含：
1）介绍动物园规则：不要投喂动物、不要乱扔垃圾、保持安静…
2）介绍动物：外表、来自哪里、习性…
2. 语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整。
3. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello everyone! I am your guide today. I will take you to visit the zoo.
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8．最近，某英文报刊正在举办征文活动，主题是“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”请你以“My Favourite Chinese Festival”为题，写一篇英语文章，为本次活动投稿。
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于60词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
提示内容：
1. What’s your favourite Chinese festival
2. What do you usually do at the festival
3. What special food do you eat
4. Why do you like it best
My Favourite Chinese Festival
As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China.
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9．Complete the table and write at least 60 words about your festival experience. (根据以下情境完成以下表格，并写一篇不少于60个词的短文。)
Festival name
Festival food
Festival activities
......
节日使我们的生活色彩斑斓，请介绍一个你最喜欢的节日，在表格里介绍关于这个节日的名词、时间、食物、活动等，并写一篇不少于60个词的短文，分享你的一次难忘的节日经历和喜欢的理由。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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10．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite festival”.
Suggested questions
- What’s your favourite festival Why
- When is it
- Why do people celebrate it
- What do people usually do during it
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11．每个生日都是生命的礼物。每年的这一天，你是怎样庆祝生日的呢？请以“Celebrating My Birthday”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：when, who, what to do, how I feel.
要求：
1. 词数不少于60 (开头已给出，但不计入总词数)；
2. 可以增加细节，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
Celebrating My Birthday
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12．作文题目：My Green Neighbourhood
2. 内容要求：
（1）开篇介绍你的社区整体环境，说明它是绿色整洁的；
（2）详细写出社区里人们为建设绿色社区做的3件环保小事（结合单元知识点，如植树、垃圾分类、节约水电等）；
（3）结尾表达你对绿色社区的喜爱，以及自己愿意为绿色社区做的小事；
3. 字数要求：50-60词，语句通顺，语法正确，单词拼写无误，书写工整；
4. 注意：文中不得出现真实姓名、班级、学校等个人信息。
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《专题 08 书面表达（期末题型精练）六年级英语下学期 新教材鲁教版五四学制》参考答案
1．例文
My best friend Eric is my best friend. He is 13 years old, and his birthday is on December 3rd. His favorite animal is pandas. He has many hobbies, such as listening to music, playing basketball and playing the guitar.
He goes to school at 7:30 a.m. and gets home at 5:30 p.m. He has 7 classes every day, and each class is 45 minutes long.
At home, he has some rules: he must do his homework first after school, he can't use his phone on school days, and has to pack his schoolbag before bed.
【详解】 写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：记叙文（人物介绍类短文）
明确要点：介绍Eric的基本信息（年龄、生日、喜好）、日常校园生活、家规要求
确定人称：第三人称（he）为主，第一人称（I）引出话题
注意事项：需包含表格中所有信息；词数80词左右；开头已给出；不得出现真实校名和姓名
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：承接已给开头，介绍Eric的基本信息与个人喜好
主体段：描述Eric的日常校园生活（作息与课程）
结尾段：介绍Eric的家规，补充人物细节
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：基本信息与个人喜好
基本信息：13 years old/birthday is on December 3rd
个人喜好：favorite animal is pandas/hobbies: listening to music, playing basketball, playing the guitar
要点二：日常校园生活
作息安排：goes to school at 7:30 a.m./gets home at 5:30 p.m.
课程情况：has 7 classes every day/each class is 45 minutes long
要点三：家规要求
家规 1：must do his homework first after school
家规 2：can’t use his phone on school days
家规 3：has to pack his schoolbag before bed
2．参考范文：
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to tell you about the rules in my school.
First, we can’t be late for school. Second, we must listen to the teacher carefully in class. Third, we have to wear school uniforms every day. Fourth, we can’t run in the hallways because it’s dangerous.
I think these rules are very important. They help us study better and make our school a good place. Following rules is good for everyone.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍性邮件，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：校规内容，包括上学不能迟到、课堂上要认真听讲、必须穿校服、不能在走廊跑；校规的作用
确定人称：第一人称 (I/we)
注意事项：词数80左右
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：总起句，表明写邮件目的
主体段：分别介绍学校的规则
结尾段：总结校规的作用
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：介绍校规
规则内容：can’t be late for school/can’t be late for class/listen to the teacher carefully/keep quiet/have to wear school uniforms every day/can’t run in the hallways等
要点二：
介绍校规的作用：help us study better/make our school a good place/help us stay safe等
3．例文
Dear Chris,
I’m happy to tell you about my best friend, Li Ming, and me. In appearance, we are a little similar. We are both of medium height. But his hair is straight, while mine is a bit curly.
Our personalities are quite different. I am more outgoing and love talking, but he is quieter and more careful. However, we share the same hobby—playing basketball. We play together every weekend.
Understanding each other’s differences makes our friendship special. We learn from each other and have a great time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：应用文，用一般现在时
明确要点：介绍你和你朋友在外貌、性格或爱好方面的相同与不同之处
确定人称：第一人称和第三人称（I/he）
注意事项：不得出现真实的人名，要求语法正确，无拼写错误
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：介绍和朋友之间的外貌特征
第二段：介绍性格及爱好的对比
第三段：总结全文，点明友谊的核心
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：对比外貌
外貌描述：of medium height/his hair is straight, while mine is a bit curly/have short black hair等
要点二：性格及爱好的对比
性格描述：more outgoing/love talking/quieter/more careful/like staying at home等
爱好描述：share the same hobby/playing basketball/play together every weekend/playing sports等
4．
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to hear from you. Let me share my healthy lifestyle.
I always have a good breakfast with milk, eggs, and bread. For lunch and dinner, I eat a lot of vegetables and some meat. I exercise five times a week. I usually play basketball after school. It makes me strong. I try to go to bed early and get up early. I also keep a positive mood by listening to music and chatting with friends.
I believe these habits help me stay fit and study better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：应用文（邮件/书信体），主要时态为一般现在时（描述日常习惯和生活方式）。
明确要点：饮食习惯（吃早餐/牛奶/鸡蛋/面包/多吃蔬菜和适量肉类等）、运动习惯（每周锻炼五次/放学后打篮球/让人强壮等）、作息与心态（早睡早起/听音乐/和朋友聊天保持乐观等）。
确定人称：第一人称（I/my），体现对个人健康生活方式的分享。
注意事项：不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名；词数80左右；语句通顺，包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥。
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：表达收到邮件的开心心情，开门见山表明要分享自己的健康生活方式。
主体段：分三个层次展开。饮食习惯（吃早餐/牛奶鸡蛋面包/午餐晚餐多吃蔬菜和适量肉）→ 运动习惯（每周锻炼五次/放学后打篮球/好处）→ 作息与心态（早睡早起/听音乐聊天保持乐观），层次清晰，信息全面。
结尾段：总结这些习惯对保持健康和更好学习的作用。
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：饮食习惯
核心词汇：have a good breakfast/milk, eggs, bread/vegetables/meat等
句式表达：I always have a good breakfast with milk, eggs, and bread/For lunch and dinner, I eat a lot of vegetables and some meat等
要点二：运动习惯
核心词汇：exercise five times a week/play basketball after school等
句式表达：I exercise five times a week/I usually play basketball after school/It makes me strong等
要点三：作息与心态
核心词汇：go to bed early/get up early/keep a positive mood/listening to music/chatting with friends等
句式表达：I try to go to bed early and get up early/I also keep a positive mood by listening to music and chatting with friends等
要点四：总结与感受
核心观点：help me stay fit/study better/live a better life等
5．
例文：
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. I miss you too. This weekend, my family will be busy. My father will read books. My mother will wash clothes. I will go to the park to draw.
My family often do things together. We often watch TV and talk about our day. We also go for walks in the evening. I feel happy with them. I hope you can come to China and join us one day.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Peng
【详解】写作步骤
【第一步：审题立意】
确定文体：书信应用文
明确要点：以张鹏的身份，给英国朋友Peter写回信，表达思念，介绍家人周末计划，说明和家人经常一起做的两件事，不少于50词，不使用真实姓名和校名
确定人称：第一人称（I），面向朋友Peter
注意事项：语句通顺，覆盖所有要点，语气友好，符合书信格式
【第二步：构思布局】
三段式结构：
开头段：感谢来信，表达思念
主体段：介绍家人周末计划，说明和家人经常一起做的事
结尾段：表达期待，礼貌收尾
【第三步：要点展开】
开头部分：Thanks for your letter; I miss you too; it's nice to hear from you; I'm glad to tell you about my weekend
周末计划：This weekend; my family will be busy; father read books; mother wash clothes; go to the park to draw; draw pictures of flowers and trees; my father will read history books; my mother will wash clothes for the whole family
家庭日常：family often do things together; watch TV and talk about our day; go for walks in the evening; feel happy with them; hope you can come to China and join us one day; cook simple meals together at home; play board games on weekends; share interesting stories after dinner; plan short trips together on holidays
6．例文
Boys and girls,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now let me introduce the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival is the most important Chinese festival. It usually comes in January or February. On New Year’s Eve, families get together and watch the Spring Festival Gala happily. During the festival, we visit relatives and friends. Kids are happy to get lucky money from elders. We also eat delicious food like dumplings and fish. It stands for a new start and brings us love and family happiness.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意］
确定文体：发言稿，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：春节的时间、活动、食物、意义
确定人称：第一人称为主，部分内容可用第三人称
注意事项：发言稿开头和结尾已给出，字数70左右
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：问候与引入主题（已给出）
主体段：依次介绍春节的时间、活动、食物、意义
结尾段：结束语（已给出）
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：时间
时间表达：in January or February/usually comes in/lunar calendar等
节日地位：the most important festival/traditional Chinese festival等
要点二：活动
活动内容：watch the Spring Festival Gala/visit relatives and friends/get lucky money/have a big dinner/put up couplets/clean houses/set off fireworks等
活动细节：families get together/children receive red packets/elders give blessings等
要点三：食物
食物种类：dumplings/fish/rice cakes/spring rolls等
象征意义：stand for good luck/mean reunion/symbolize plenty等
要点四：意义
意义表达：a new start/love and happiness/family reunion/good wishes for the coming year等
7．例文
Hello everyone! I am your guide today. I will take you to visit the zoo.
First, let’s learn some zoo rules. Please don’t feed the animals, it’s bad for their health. Do not throw rubbish everywhere and keep quiet.
Now let’s enjoy our trip. Our star animal is the giant panda. It comes from Sichuan. It has black and white fur and likes eating bamboo. It is shy and quiet. We also have lovely red pandas. They are small and clever, and they like sleeping in trees. Let’s have a good time!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍性记叙文，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：动物园规则（不要投喂动物、不要乱扔垃圾、保持安静等）、明星动物（外表、来自哪里、习性等）
确定人称：第一人称（I/we）和第二人称（you）
注意事项：语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整，80词左右
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：表明身份，引出参观动物园话题
主体段：先介绍动物园规则，再介绍明星动物
结尾段：表达希望大家玩得开心的愿望
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：动物园规则
规则内容：
不要投喂动物：Please don’t feed the animals/It’s not allowed to feed the animals because it may cause health problems for them.
不要乱扔垃圾：Do not throw rubbish everywhere/Keep the zoo clean by not littering.
保持安静：keep quiet/Please be quiet so as not to disturb the animals.
作用效果：These rules are made to protect the animals and keep the zoo clean.
要点二：明星动物
动物选择：giant panda/red panda/lion/tiger/elephant等
外表描述：
giant panda：It has black and white fur/The giant panda has a round face with big black eyes and a white body, which looks very cute.
red panda：They are small and clever/The red pandas have reddish - brown fur and long bushy tails, making them look very unique.
来自哪里：
giant panda：It comes from Sichuan/The giant panda is native to the mountainous regions of Sichuan, China.
red panda：They are mainly found in the Himalayas and some parts of China.
习性：
giant panda：It likes eating bamboo/The giant panda spends most of its day eating bamboo, as it is its main food source.
red panda：They like sleeping in trees/Red pandas are arboreal animals, so they often climb trees to sleep and rest.
8．
例文
My Favourite Chinese Festival
As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. My favourite one is the Mid-Autumn Festival.
On this special day, I usually get together with my family and enjoy a big dinner. After that, we go outside to admire the bright full moon in the night sky. We also eat mooncakes, which are round and sweet. Some mooncakes have red bean or lotus seed fillings. They taste really wonderful.
I like the Mid-Autumn Festival best because it stands for family reunion and deep love. The full moon makes me feel warm and thankful. No matter where we are, the moon connects us with our loved ones. It is truly a festival full of joy and peace.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：说明文（节日介绍），用一般现在时
明确要点：最喜欢的中国节日、节日活动、节日食物、喜欢的原因
确定人称：第一人称（I）和第一人称复数（we）
注意事项：需包含所有提示内容，开头已给出，词数不少于60，不得出现真实信息
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：已给出，引出中国传统节日，点明最喜欢的是中秋节
主体段：描述节日活动（家人团聚、赏月、吃月饼）和节日食物（月饼、红豆或莲子馅）
结尾段：说明喜欢的原因（象征团圆和爱、满月让人感到温暖和感恩、月亮连接亲人）
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：节日名称
节日表达：the Mid-Autumn Festival/my favourite one is etc.
要点二：节日活动
活动表达：get together with my family/enjoy a big dinner/go outside to admire the bright full moon/sit in the yard/share happy stories等
要点三：节日食物
食物表达：eat mooncakes/round and sweet/have red bean or lotus seed fillings/taste really wonderful/delicious等
要点四：喜欢的原因
原因表达：stands for family reunion and deep love/brings warmth and thankfulness/the moon connects us with our loved ones/full of joy and peace等
9．
表格：
Festival name The Spring Festival
Festival food dumplings
Festival activities have a big dinner, watch the Spring Gala
Time in January or February
例文：
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. It comes in January or February.
We always have a big family dinner and eat delicious dumplings. We watch the Spring Gala together at night and set off small fireworks.
Last year, I had a great time. I felt warm and happy. I love this festival because it lets us stay with our family and feel the true joy of togetherness.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍性记叙文，时态以一般现在时为主，结尾回忆经历可用一般过去时
明确要点：节日名称、节日时间、传统食物、节日活动、个人难忘经历、喜爱节日的理由
确定人称：第一人称
注意事项：作文中不得出现真实人名、校名以及其他个人隐私信息
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：点明自己最喜欢的节日，交代节日基本时间
主体段：描写节日传统食物、节日当天的经典庆祝活动
结尾段：分享自己去年的难忘过节经历，抒发个人感受、点明喜爱节日的原因
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：节日基础信息
节日选择：the Spring Festival /the Mid-Autumn Festival /the Dragon Boat Festival 等
时间描述：comes in January or February /comes on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month 等
传统食物：eat dumplings /enjoy mooncakes /eat zongzi 等
节日活动：have a big family dinner /watch gala shows /set off fireworks /get lucky money 等
作用效果：bring people together /make us feel happy and relaxed /keep our traditional culture alive
要点二：个人经历与喜好
经历描写：had a great time last year /spent warm days with the whole family 等
喜欢理由：warm and full of love /full of fun /a time for family get-together 等
升华主旨：I truly love this festival /it gives me the true meaning of happiness and togetherness
10．例文
My favourite festival
My favourite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month. People celebrate it to express love for family and hope for a good harvest. During the festival, families get together to enjoy a big dinner. At night, we admire the full moon and eat mooncakes. Children often carry colourful lanterns. I love this festival because it makes me feel warm and connected to my family.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：说明性记叙文，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：介绍最喜欢的节日并说明原因
确定人称：第一人称为主
注意事项：至少60字
[第二步：构思布局]
开头介绍自己最喜欢的节日是什么
中间写节日的时间以及人们的庆祝方式
最后总结我爱这个节日的原因
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：
喜欢的节日：my favourite festival/Mid-Autumn Festival
节日的时间：fall/on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month
要点二：
人们庆祝节日的方式：celebrate/express love/family/hope for a good harvest/during/get together/enjoy a big dinner/admire/the full moon/mooncakes/carry colourful lanterns
喜欢节日的原因：love/because/feel warm/connected to my family
11．范文：
Celebrating My Birthday
My birthday is on May 10th. I think it’s always a good idea to celebrate my birthday with my family.
A few days before the birthday, I can pick a nice cake. On my birthday, my father cooks my favorite dishes and my mother prepares a bowl of long noodles for me because it’s a symbol of long life and good luck. Then we take a family photo together because that helps me remember the fun times with my family. After that, I make a wish and blow out the candles. Then it’s time to enjoy the delicious food and birthday cake.
I feel so loved and happy with my family on this special day.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：生活类记叙文，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：生日时间、庆祝生日的人物、生日会做什么以及感受
确定人称：第一人称(I/my)
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：总起点题，引出生日日期
主体段：详细记叙生日全过程
结尾段：总结心情，抒发感受
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：生日时间
时间选择：May 10th/December 7th/January 1st…
要点二：庆祝生日的人物
人物选择：my family/my parents/my friends…
要点三：生日会做什么
所做的事情：make a wish//talk and laugh together/get warm wishes from parents…
要点四：感受
感受说明：feel so loved and happy/feel warm and satisfied/treasure the time with my family…
12．例文：
My Green Neighbourhood
I live in a clean and green neighbourhood. There are many trees and flowers here. People in my neighbourhood do many green things. We plant trees, sort rubbish and turn off taps to save water. I always help pick up litter. I love my green neighbourhood very much. I will do more to make it greener.
【详解】[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍类记叙文
明确要点：社区整体环境、3件环保小事、个人态度与行动
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）
注意事项：词数50-60，语法正确，无个人真实信息
[第二步：构思布局]
总分总结构
开头：总起介绍社区绿色整洁的整体环境
主体：列举社区人们做的3件环保小事
结尾：表达对社区的喜爱，说明自己的行动意愿
[第三步：要点展开]
环境介绍：live in a clean and green neighbourhood / many trees and flowers /quiet and beautiful neighbourhood / fresh airgreen surroundings等
环保小事：plant trees / sort rubbish / turn off taps to save water / pick up litter / recycle waste/ save water in daily life等
个人态度：love my green neighbourhood / do more to make it greener/ be proud of my neighbourhoodfeel happy to live hereenjoy living here / try my best to keep it clean make it a better placetake part in more green activities等
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