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Period 5
Writing
Food and culture
Unit 3
内容索引
写作一　应用文写作——关于健康饮食的文章
写作二　读后续写微技能
写作一　应用文写作——关于健康
饮食的文章
饮食话题因其与健康的生活方式密切相关而显得尤为重要，食物的营养、食物的均衡、食物的有机生产与污染、食物的制作方法与食用习惯、食物与传统文化的关系、饮食与健康等，都是有关饮食的常见话题。根据写作要求和目的的不同，一般情况下，一篇文章仅需从一个角度进行写作，突出重点，不需面面俱到。
1.首段常用句式
Nowadays people are beginning to pay more attention to...than ever before.
现在人们开始比以往任何时候都更注重……
...is a heated topic among people recently，for ...plays an important role in our daily life.
最近……是人们之间的一个热门话题，因为……在我们的日常生活中发挥着重要作用。
常用表达
People come to realize that...is the most valuable thing a person can have.
人们逐渐意识到……是一个人能够拥有的最有价值的东西。
In recent days/Recently/Lately，we have to face the problem that...，which is becoming increasingly serious.
最近，我们不得不面临……问题，这个问题变得越来越严重。
Word has come that...，which makes...depressed.
有消息说……，这让……很沮丧。
It is said that...，which is terribly bad for health.
据说……，这对健康十分不利。
2.中段常用句式
When it comes to how to solve this problem，different people have different ideas.As far as I know，we should...
当谈到如何解决这个问题时，不同的人有不同的观点。在我看来，我们应该……
Many reasons/factors will contribute to the phenomenon.First/Firstly，
...Second/Secondly，...
许多原因/因素会导致这个现象。首先……其次……
Doctors advise/recommend...
医生建议……
Early to bed and early to rise makes a person healthier and wiser.
早睡早起使一个人更健康、更睿智。
Taking exercise regularly is closely associated with health.
经常锻炼身体与健康息息相关。
We should keep a balanced diet，which ensures us the necessary nutrition.
我们应该保持均衡的饮食，以保证我们必要的营养。
An apple a day keeps the doctor away.
一天一苹果，医生远离我。
3.尾段常用句式
As far as I am concerned，nothing is more important than...
在我看来，没有什么比……更重要。
Healthy eating habits are very important for our health.
健康的饮食习惯对我们的健康非常重要。
In my opinion，we should develop better healthy eating habits.
在我看来，我们应该养成更好的健康的饮食习惯。
From my point of view，in order to build healthy eating habits，we should eat more vegetables and less sugar.
在我看来，为了建立健康的饮食习惯，我们应该多吃蔬菜，少吃糖。
In a word/As is said/As is stated above，I firmly believe...
总之/正如上面所说的/正如上面所陈述的，我坚信……
As the saying goes，“You are what you eat.” In order to keep fit，please have a healthy diet.
正如俗话所说：“人如其食。”为了保持健康，请保持健康的饮食。
假如你是李华，你的朋友王力目前正因体重暴增而苦恼不已，来信向你咨询关于健康饮食的问题。请你给他写一封回信，介绍一下你的饮食习惯。内容包括：
1.很少吃甜食和垃圾食品；
2.饮食中蔬菜、水果居多，有适量的乳制品；
3.一日三餐有规律。
注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
典例演练
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1.有消息传来说
2.在我看来
3.与……有关
4.在于
5.消费；吃；喝
6.由……组成
7.大量的
8.促成；导致……
_________________________
_____________________
__________________
__________
_________
_________
_____________________________
_____________
word came/has come that...
from my point of view
be associated with...
consist in
consume
consist of
quantities of/a large quantity of
contribute to
9.不管；不顾
10.换言之；也就是说
11.一贯的饮食习惯
12.奶制品
_____________
_______________
_____________________
______________
regardless of
in other words
consistent eating habits
dairy products
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1.有消息传来说你最近体重一直在增长。
you have been gaining weight recently.
2.这使你沮丧。
_______________________________________________________________
3.在我看来，你的问题与你的不健康饮食密切相连。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This makes you depressed.
From my point of view，your problem is closely associated with your
unhealthy diet.
Word has come that
4.对于我来说，我的健康在于均衡饮食。
As for me， .
5.我的饮食由大量的水果和绿色蔬菜组成。
My diet .
6.最根本的是，我的确有一贯的饮食习惯，不管是假期还是周末。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
my health consists in a balanced diet
consists of quantities of fruit and green vegetables
Most fundamentally，I do have consistent eating habits，regardless of holidays or weekends.
7.以上是我健康饮食的诀窍。
_______________________________________________________________
8.换句话说，你可以通过均衡的饮食来解决你的体重问题。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The above are the tricks of my healthy diet.
In other words，you can solve your weight problem by having a balanced diet.
第三步　句式升级
1.将句1和句2合并为非限制性定语从句。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.将句8改成强调句型。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Word has come that you have been gaining weight recently，which makes you depressed.
In other words，it is by having a balanced diet that you can solve your weight problem.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
Dear Wang Li，
Word has come that you have been gaining weight recently，which makes you depressed.From my point of view，your problem is closely associated with your unhealthy diet.
As for me，my health consists in a balanced diet.Firstly，I rarely consume desserts and junk food.Furthermore，my diet consists of quantities of fruit and green vegetables.A modest quantity of dairy products also contribute to my health.Most fundamentally，I do have consistent eating habits，regardless of holidays or weekends.
The above are the tricks of my healthy diet.In other words，it is by having a balanced diet that you can solve your weight problem.As the saying goes，“You are what you eat.”In order to keep fit，please have a healthy diet.
Yours，
Li Hua
人们的健康很大程度上受制于饮食习惯。请你写一篇英语作文，就如何养成良好的饮食习惯发表你的看法。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
达标检测
参考范文
Healthy eating habits are of great importance to our health，but many people have no idea how to form a healthy eating habit.
As far as I am concerned，we should consume fresh vegetables and fruit every day，which can supply vitamins and fibre to us.Besides，why not drink a glass of milk in the morning or at night？Most fundamentally，it is crucial to focus on a balanced diet，ensuring us the necessary nutrients.
Junk food is a killer of our health，and as a consequence，we should stay away from it instantly.What’s more，skipping breakfast is a very bad habit，which does great harm to our physical health.
All in all，nothing is more important than healthy eating.
返 回
写作二　读后续写微技能
情感细节描写之害怕与恐惧
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
常 用 词 汇 单 词 fear vt.& n.害怕；畏惧→fearful adj.担忧的；可怕的
scare vt.使恐惧，使害怕→scared adj.害怕的→scary adj.令人害怕的
terrify vt.使恐惧，使惊恐→terrified adj.非常害怕的→terrifying adj.可怕的→terror n.恐惧
horrible adj.恐怖的　panic-stricken adj.惊慌失措的　
afraid adj.害怕的
常 用 词 汇 单 词 tremble/shake vi.发抖　quiver vi.轻微颤动　shiver n.& vi.颤抖；哆嗦　choke vi.& vt.(使)窒息
frighten vt.& vi.(使)惊恐→frightening adj.令人害怕的→frightened adj.害怕的→fright n.害怕，恐惧
panic n.恐慌vt.& vi.(panicked，panicked，panicking) (使)恐慌
常用词汇 词块 be numb with fear 吓呆
go/turn white/pale (脸色)变得苍白
heart races/beats/pounds wildly/violently with fear因恐惧而心脏狂跳
knees knock with fright因恐惧而双膝颤抖
sweat with fear吓得直冒汗
be scared out of one’s wits吓得魂不附体
be overwhelmed/overcome by horror 非常恐惧
常用词汇 词块 freeze with fear/terror/fright/horror 吓呆
make one’s hair stand on end使某人毛骨悚然
let out a scream of terror发出恐怖的尖叫
have one’s heart in one’s mouth提心吊胆，吓得要命
send a chill down/up sb’s spine 令某人脊背发凉；令某人毛骨悚然
精 美 句 式 Frightened and worried，I felt my legs trembling and my palms sweating.(形容词短语作状语)
既害怕又担心，我觉得我的腿在颤抖，我的手掌在出汗。
A wave of fear welled up inside/swept over her；her throat tightened and her knees knocked with fear.(无灵主语)一阵恐惧涌上心头；她的喉咙发紧，害怕得双膝直打颤。
Overwhelmed with fear，I was rooted to the ground，unable to move an inch.(过去分词短语作状语)
我被恐惧淹没，站在原地，一动也不能动。
精美 句式 I looked at the snake in horror，my face turning pale and my heart pounding wildly with fear.(独立主格)
我惊恐地看着那条蛇，我的脸变得苍白，我的心因恐惧而狂跳。
即时演练
①又震惊又害怕，她使劲地敲门。(形容词短语作状语)
，she pounded the door fiercely.
②我感到一只狼在追我，我的心提到了嗓子眼。(独立主格)
I felt a wolf running after me， .
③看见黑暗中有个模糊的人影朝我飘过来，我吓得魂不附体。
Seeing a dim figure floating towards me in the dark，I________________
____________.
Shocked and terrified
my heart in my mouth
was scared out of
my wits
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 bold adj.大胆自信的；敢于冒险的　modest adj.些许的；谦虚的；朴素的　temper n.脾气；火气
动作描写 chew vi.& vt.咀嚼；嚼碎；咬住　stuff vt.填满；把……塞进　consume vt.吃；喝；饮；消耗　trick vt.欺骗
句型 1.Tired，hungry，and not knowing a word of Chinese，we had no idea how to order，so the chef just began filling our table with the best food we had ever eaten.
2.At a minimum，the kinds of food local people consume tell us what they grow in their region，what kinds of lives they lead，and what they like and do not like.(排比)
3.What we can say，however，is that culture and cuisine go hand in hand...(拟人)
句型 4.And in America，people who receive 25% of their daily calories or more through sugar are twice as likely to die from heart disease than people who receive less than 10% a day...(比较)
一个大胆的男孩满脑子充满了各种各样的鬼把戏。他经常骗他的同学做各种各样的事情。另外，他脾气暴躁。他的所有同学都被他气炸了。后来，当他被班主任严厉批评的时候，这个男孩咬着嘴唇，低着头，流下了羞愧的泪水。
1._______________________________________ in his mind.He often 2.____________________________________________.Besides，he 3.____
_____________.He had burned all his classmates up.Later，when criticized by his head teacher severely，the boy 4._________________ ，lowered his head and shed tears of shame.
A bold boy was stuffed with various tricks
tricked his classmates into doing various things
a hot temper
had
chewed on his lip
续写语料运用
从那时起，男孩变得谦逊了。我们都满意地点了点头，嘴角露出了微笑。
返 回
From then on，the boy 5._________________.All of us nodded our heads with satisfaction，a smile appearing on our lips.
became modest
本课结束Period 5　Writing
写作一　应用文写作——关于健康饮食的文章
饮食话题因其与健康的生活方式密切相关而显得尤为重要，食物的营养、食物的均衡、食物的有机生产与污染、食物的制作方法与食用习惯、食物与传统文化的关系、饮食与健康等，都是有关饮食的常见话题。根据写作要求和目的的不同，一般情况下，一篇文章仅需从一个角度进行写作，突出重点，不需面面俱到。
1．首段常用句式
Nowadays people are beginning to pay more attention to...than ever before.
现在人们开始比以往任何时候都更注重……
...is a heated topic among people recently，for ...plays an important role in our daily life.
最近……是人们之间的一个热门话题，因为……在我们的日常生活中发挥着重要作用。
People come to realize that...is the most valuable thing a person can have.
人们逐渐意识到……是一个人能够拥有的最有价值的东西。
In recent days/Recently/Lately，we have to face the problem that...，which is becoming increasingly serious.
最近，我们不得不面临……问题，这个问题变得越来越严重。
Word has come that...，which makes...depressed.
有消息说……，这让……很沮丧。
It is said that...，which is terribly bad for health.
据说……，这对健康十分不利。
2．中段常用句式
When it comes to how to solve this problem，different people have different ideas.As far as I know，we should...
当谈到如何解决这个问题时，不同的人有不同的观点。在我看来，我们应该……
Many reasons/factors will contribute to the phenomenon.First/Firstly，...Second/Secondly，...
许多原因/因素会导致这个现象。首先……其次……
Doctors advise/recommend...医生建议……
Early to bed and early to rise makes a person healthier and wiser.早睡早起使一个人更健康、更睿智。
Taking exercise regularly is closely associated with health.经常锻炼身体与健康息息相关。
We should keep a balanced diet，which ensures us the necessary nutrition.
我们应该保持均衡的饮食，以保证我们必要的营养。
An apple a day keeps the doctor away.
一天一苹果，医生远离我。
3．尾段常用句式
As far as I am concerned，nothing is more important than...
在我看来，没有什么比……更重要。
Healthy eating habits are very important for our health.
健康的饮食习惯对我们的健康非常重要。
In my opinion，we should develop better healthy eating habits.
在我看来，我们应该养成更好的健康的饮食习惯。
From my point of view，in order to build healthy eating habits，we should eat more vegetables and less sugar.
在我看来，为了建立健康的饮食习惯，我们应该多吃蔬菜，少吃糖。
In a word/As is said/As is stated above，I firmly believe...
总之/正如上面所说的/正如上面所陈述的，我坚信……
As the saying goes，“You are what you eat.” In order to keep fit，please have a healthy diet.
正如俗话所说：“人如其食。”为了保持健康，请保持健康的饮食。
假如你是李华，你的朋友王力目前正因体重暴增而苦恼不已，来信向你咨询关于健康饮食的问题。请你给他写一封回信，介绍一下你的饮食习惯。内容包括：
1．很少吃甜食和垃圾食品；
2．饮食中蔬菜、水果居多，有适量的乳制品；
3．一日三餐有规律。
注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1．有消息传来说word came/has come that...
2．在我看来from my point of view
3．与……有关be associated with...
4．在于consist in
5．消费；吃；喝consume
6．由……组成consist of
7．大量的 quantities of/a large quantity of
8．促成；导致…… contribute to
9．不管；不顾regardless of
10．换言之；也就是说in other words
11．一贯的饮食习惯 consistent eating habits
12．奶制品 dairy products
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1．有消息传来说你最近体重一直在增长。
Word has come that you have been gaining weight recently.
2．这使你沮丧。
This makes you depressed.
3．在我看来，你的问题与你的不健康饮食密切相连。
From my point of view，your problem is closely associated with your unhealthy diet.
4．对于我来说，我的健康在于均衡饮食。
As for me，my health consists in a balanced diet.
5．我的饮食由大量的水果和绿色蔬菜组成。
My diet consists of quantities of fruit and green vegetables.
6．最根本的是，我的确有一贯的饮食习惯，不管是假期还是周末。
Most fundamentally，I do have consistent eating habits，regardless of holidays or weekends.
7．以上是我健康饮食的诀窍。
The above are the tricks of my healthy diet.
8．换句话说，你可以通过均衡的饮食来解决你的体重问题。
In other words，you can solve your weight problem by having a balanced diet.
第三步　句式升级
1．将句1和句2合并为非限制性定语从句。
Word has come that you have been gaining weight recently，which makes you depressed.
2．将句8改成强调句型。
In other words，it is by having a balanced diet that you can solve your weight problem.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
Dear Wang Li，
Word has come that you have been gaining weight recently，which makes you depressed.From my point of view，your problem is closely associated with your unhealthy diet.
As for me，my health consists in a balanced diet.Firstly，I rarely consume desserts and junk food.Furthermore，my diet consists of quantities of fruit and green vegetables.A modest quantity of dairy products also contribute to my health.Most fundamentally，I do have consistent eating habits，regardless of holidays or weekends.
The above are the tricks of my healthy diet.In other words，it is by having a balanced diet that you can solve your weight problem.As the saying goes，“You are what you eat.”In order to keep fit，please have a healthy diet.
Yours，
Li Hua
人们的健康很大程度上受制于饮食习惯。请你写一篇英语作文，就如何养成良好的饮食习惯发表你的看法。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
参考范文
Healthy eating habits are of great importance to our health，but many people have no idea how to form a healthy eating habit.
As far as I am concerned，we should consume fresh vegetables and fruit every day，which can supply vitamins and fibre to us.Besides，why not drink a glass of milk in the morning or at night？Most fundamentally，it is crucial to focus on a balanced diet，ensuring us the necessary nutrients.
Junk food is a killer of our health，and as a consequence，we should stay away from it instantly.What’s more，skipping breakfast is a very bad habit，which does great harm to our physical health.
All in all，nothing is more important than healthy eating.
写作二　读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
情感细节描写之害怕与恐惧
常用词汇 单词 fear vt.& n．害怕；畏惧→fearful adj.担忧的；可怕的 scare vt.使恐惧，使害怕→scared adj.害怕的→scary adj.令人害怕的 terrify vt.使恐惧，使惊恐→terrified adj.非常害怕的→terrifying adj.可怕的→terror n．恐惧 horrible adj.恐怖的　panic-stricken adj.惊慌失措的　afraid adj.害怕的 tremble/shake vi.发抖　quiver vi.轻微颤动　shiver n．& vi.颤抖；哆嗦　choke vi.& vt.(使)窒息 frighten vt.& vi.(使)惊恐→frightening adj.令人害怕的→frightened adj.害怕的→fright n．害怕，恐惧 panic n．恐慌vt.& vi.(panicked，panicked，panicking) (使)恐慌
词块 be numb with fear 吓呆 go/turn white/pale (脸色)变得苍白 heart races/beats/pounds wildly/violently with fear因恐惧而心脏狂跳 knees knock with fright因恐惧而双膝颤抖 sweat with fear吓得直冒汗 be scared out of one’s wits吓得魂不附体 be overwhelmed/overcome by horror 非常恐惧 freeze with fear/terror/fright/horror 吓呆 make one’s hair stand on end使某人毛骨悚然 let out a scream of terror发出恐怖的尖叫 have one’s heart in one’s mouth提心吊胆，吓得要命 send a chill down/up sb’s spine 令某人脊背发凉；令某人毛骨悚然
精美句式 Frightened and worried，I felt my legs trembling and my palms sweating.(形容词短语作状语) 既害怕又担心，我觉得我的腿在颤抖，我的手掌在出汗。 A wave of fear welled up inside/swept over her；her throat tightened and her knees knocked with fear.(无灵主语)一阵恐惧涌上心头；她的喉咙发紧，害怕得双膝直打颤。 Overwhelmed with fear，I was rooted to the ground，unable to move an inch.(过去分词短语作状语) 我被恐惧淹没，站在原地，一动也不能动。 I looked at the snake in horror，my face turning pale and my heart pounding wildly with fear.(独立主格) 我惊恐地看着那条蛇，我的脸变得苍白，我的心因恐惧而狂跳。
即时演练
①又震惊又害怕，她使劲地敲门。(形容词短语作状语)
Shocked and terrified，she pounded the door fiercely.
②我感到一只狼在追我，我的心提到了嗓子眼。(独立主格)
I felt a wolf running after me，my heart in my mouth.
③看见黑暗中有个模糊的人影朝我飘过来，我吓得魂不附体。
Seeing a dim figure floating towards me in the dark，I was scared out of my wits.
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 bold adj.大胆自信的；敢于冒险的　modest adj.些许的；谦虚的；朴素的　temper n．脾气；火气
动作描写 chew vi.& vt.咀嚼；嚼碎；咬住　stuff vt.填满；把……塞进　consume vt.吃；喝；饮；消耗　trick vt.欺骗
句型 1.Tired，hungry，and not knowing a word of Chinese，we had no idea how to order，so the chef just began filling our table with the best food we had ever eaten. 2.At a minimum，the kinds of food local people consume tell us what they grow in their region，what kinds of lives they lead，and what they like and do not like.(排比) 3.What we can say，however，is that culture and cuisine go hand in hand...(拟人) 4.And in America，people who receive 25% of their daily calories or more through sugar are twice as likely to die from heart disease than people who receive less than 10% a day...(比较)
续写语料运用
一个大胆的男孩满脑子充满了各种各样的鬼把戏。他经常骗他的同学做各种各样的事情。另外，他脾气暴躁。他的所有同学都被他气炸了。后来，当他被班主任严厉批评的时候，这个男孩咬着嘴唇，低着头，流下了羞愧的泪水。从那时起，男孩变得谦逊了。我们都满意地点了点头，嘴角露出了微笑。
1．A bold boy was stuffed with various tricks in his mind.He often 2.tricked his classmates into doing various things.Besides，he 3.had a hot temper.He had burned all his classmates up.Later，when criticized by his head teacher severely，the boy 4.chewed on his lip，lowered his head and shed tears of shame.From then on，the boy 5.became modest.All of us nodded our heads with satisfaction，a smile appearing on our lips.

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