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Period 5
Writing
Journey across a vast land
Unit 4
内容索引
写作一　应用文写作——关于旅行的邮件
写作二　读后续写微技能
写作一　应用文写作——关于旅行
的邮件
电子邮件是用电子手段提供信息交换的通信方式，是互联网应用最广的服务之一。电子邮件可以是文字、图像、声音等多种形式。电子邮件主要分为称呼、写信的目的、信件的正文、信尾的客套话、落款等部分内容。
1.邮件开头常用语
I’d like to share one of the most fascinating experiences with you.
我想和你分享最精彩的一次经历。
I’m glad to share an unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.我很高兴和你分享去年暑假我的一次难忘的旅行经历。
Knowing that you want to know...，I’m writing to tell you that...
知道你想了解……，所以我写邮件告诉你……
常用表达
I’m extremely delighted to receive your email.And I would like to write an email to tell you that...非常高兴收到你的电子邮件，我想写封邮件告诉你……
I went on a seven-day trip to...last winter vacation，which is really an unforgettable memory.去年寒假我去……旅行了七天，这真是一段难忘的记忆。
2.邮件主体常用语：
On...，we flew to...，from where we went to...by bus.在……，我们飞往……，从那里我们乘坐公交车去……
What impressed me most during the trip/journey is that...
旅行中最让我印象深刻的是……
We paid a visit to...我们参观了……
The place lies in/is located in...
这个地方坐落于……
The place is well-known for...
这个地方以……而闻名。
I enjoyed a pleasant trip to...with my parents this National Day holiday.
今年国庆节假期我和父母享受了一次愉快的……之旅。
...is a beautiful garden city，with clean streets and various buildings.
……是一座漂亮的花园城市，有着干净的街道和各种各样的建筑。
We visited the covered stadium，which is home of several famous basketball teams.
我们参观了室内体育场，那里是几支著名篮球队的驻地。
The scenery is so beautiful that it takes the tourists’ breath away.
风景如此美丽，真让游客们惊叹。
...has become one of the most popular tourist attractions in the world.
……已经成为世界上最受欢迎的景点之一。
3.邮件结尾常用语
We were all exhausted，but our trip to...was really unforgettable.
我们都很累，但是我们去……的旅行真的让人难忘。
I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
我期待着你方便时给我回复。
I do hope you will have fun in...我真的希望你能在……玩得开心。
Not only did the trip entertain me，but it also broadened my horizons.
这次旅行不仅使我快乐而且开阔了我的视野。
Exhausted as we were，it was worth it.
尽管我们很累，但这是值得的。
In a word，it’s quite relaxing and romantic to travel there and I love this experience very much.
总之，去那里旅行既让人放松又浪漫，我非常喜欢这次经历。
I sincerely invite you to travel to...with me next time.
我真诚地邀请你下次和我一起去……旅行。
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom写信询问你去四川参观乐山大佛的旅游经历。请你用英语给他回一封邮件，要点包括：
1.旅游过程；
2.你的感受。
参考词汇：大佛the Giant Stone Buddha
典例演练
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1.使十分惊讶
2.字面上；真正地
3.巨大的；非常严重的
4.顶峰；山峰
5.令人惊叹的；可怕的；很好的
6.壮观的；壮丽的；惊人的
7.景色
8.在黄昏
________
________
_______
_____
_________
___________
_______
_______
astonish
literally
massive
peak
awesome
spectacular
scenery
at dusk
9.令人愉快的；友好的
10.一定会
_________
____________
pleasant
be bound to
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1.七月七日，我和父母乘车去了四川乐山。乐山是因大佛而闻名的。
On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan，Sichuan Province.Leshan .
2.我们吃惊地发现大佛真的很大。
______________________________________________________________
3.当我抬头看到巨大的佛头，低头看到巨大的佛脚时，我感到自己是如此渺小。
and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small.
We were astonished to find that the Buddha is literally massive.
When I looked up at the large head
is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha
4.第二天，直到登上了峨眉山山顶，我们才领略到了山上壮丽的风景。
The next day，we didn’t appreciate ________________________________
_____________________________________________Mount Emei.
5.在黄昏时分，我们返程。
_______________________________________________________________
6.毫无疑问，我们都非常累，但是我们去乐山的旅程真的既难忘又使人愉快。
There was no doubt that__________________________________________
__________________________________.
the awesome and spectacular scenery
on the mountain until we climbed to the peak of
At dusk，we made our way back.
we were all exhausted，but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable and pleasant
7.如果再给我一次机会，我一定会再来游览乐山。
If I am given another chance， .
I am bound to pay a visit to Leshan again
第三步　句式升级
1.用非限制性定语从句改写句1。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.用现在分词短语作状语改写句3。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan，Sichuan Province，which is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha.
Looking up at the large head and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small.
3.把句4改成强调句型。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.用过去分词作状语改写句7。
_______________________________________________________________
The next day，it was not until we climbed to the peak of Mount Emei that we appreciated the awesome and spectacular scenery on the mountain.
Given another chance，I am bound to pay a visit to Leshan again.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
Dear Tom，
I’m more than delighted to share a truly fascinating travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.
On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan，Sichuan Province，which is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha.We were astonished to find that the Buddha is literally massive.Looking up at the large head and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small.The next day，it was not until we climbed to the peak of Mount Emei that we appreciated the awesome and spectacular scenery on the mountain.
At dusk，we made our way back.There was no doubt that we were all exhausted，but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable and pleasant.Given another chance，I am bound to pay a visit to Leshan again.
I’m looking forward to going to Leshan with you next time.
Yours，
Li Hua
假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友特蕾西(Tracy)发来邮件询问你一次最难忘的旅行经历。请给她回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.旅行时间、地点；
2.旅行经过；
3.旅行感触。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
达标检测
参考范文
Dear Tracy，
I’m more than glad to share one of my most unforgettable travel experiences with you.
It was during the national holiday last year that I visited Gulangyu Island in Xiamen.I arrived at the destination in the morning alongside my parents.It’s a beautiful island，which attracted our attention.We stood on the second floor of the boat，enjoying the awesome sights of the sea.Then we took quantities of photos and tasted delicious local snacks.At dusk，we had such a good time that we didn’t want to leave.Through the trip，
not only have I broadened my horizons but also I have enriched my life experience.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
返 回
写作二　读后续写微技能
情感细节描写之紧张与焦虑
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
常 用 词 汇 单 词 nervous adj.紧张的　anxious adj.焦虑的→anxiously adv.焦虑地→anxiety n.焦虑
tense adj.紧张的→tension n.紧张，焦虑　uneasy adj.不安的→uneasiness n.不安
stress vt.& vi.(使)焦虑不安　sigh vi.& n.叹息　gulp vi.(因害怕或惊讶而)倒吸气
restless adj.焦躁不安的
常用词汇 词块 one’s heart sinks心头一沉
hold one’s breath屏住呼吸
pace back and forth 来回踱步
on pins and needles如坐针毡
a flood/wave of tension一阵紧张
with butterflies in one’s stomach心里发慌
hide/conceal/hold back one’s anxiety 掩饰焦虑
murmur in a trembling voice用颤抖的声音嘟哝
stammer/stutter under one’s breath结结巴巴地小声说
常用词汇 词块 be burdened/consumed/seized with anxiety 焦虑不安
pound/beat/race/thump/hammer wildly/violently (心)怦怦直跳得厉害
shiver/quiver/tremble/shake with nervousness紧张得发抖
精 美 句 式 So nervous was I that I stood there，with the blood rushing to my face.
(倒装句；with的复合结构)
我非常紧张，站在那里，感觉血液涌向我的脸。
He spoke through clenched teeth，struggling to keep his voice steady.
(现在分词短语作状语)
他咬紧牙关说话，努力保持声音稳定。
My lips quivered，big tears of anxiety rolling down cheeks.(独立主格)
我的嘴唇颤抖着，焦虑的眼泪顺着脸颊滚落。
Full of anxiety，I felt on pins and needles.(形容词短语作状语)我焦虑不
安，如坐针毡。
即时演练
①第一次站在舞台上的时候，我感到如此紧张以至于我一动也不能动。(倒装句)
The first time I stood on the stage，________________________________
_____________.
②我非常焦虑，感觉如坐针毡。(现在分词短语作状语)
I was consumed with anxiety， .
so nervous did I feel that I couldn’t
move an inch
feeling on pins and needles
③我拖着沉重的脚步走进了面试室，我的心因不安而剧烈地跳动着。(with的复合结构)
I shuffled my heavy feet into the interview room，______________________
________________________.
④眼里噙满了不安的泪水，我结结巴巴地小声说：“我不知道下一步该怎么办。”(独立主格)
，I ，“I don’t know what to do next.”
with my heart pounding
violently with uneasiness
Tears of uneasiness in my eyes
Tears of uneasiness in my eyes
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 pleasant adj.令人愉快的；友好的→please vt. & vi.(使)高兴；(使)满意→pleased adj.高兴的；满意的→pleasing adj.令人愉快的→pleasure n.快乐；乐趣
astonish vt.使十分惊讶；使吃惊→astonishing adj.惊人的；令人惊讶的→astonished adj.感到惊讶的→astonishment n.惊讶
词汇 动作描写 thunder vi.打雷；轰隆隆地响；轰隆隆地快速移动　owe vt.欠(账、债、情等)；归因于，归功于　breath n.呼吸的空气→breathe v.呼吸　bound adj.准备前往(某地)；一定会 vi.跳跃着跑　take sb’s breath away令人惊叹
词汇 环境描写 scenery n.风景；景色　spectacular adj.壮观的；壮丽的；惊人的　peak n.顶峰；山峰；尖形　frost n.霜；严寒天气；霜冻 vt.使蒙上霜 vi.结霜　cobblestone adj.铺有鹅卵石的　awesome adj.令人惊叹的；可怕的；很好的　shore n.岸；滨　dusk n.黄昏；傍晚　freeze vi. & vt.(froze，frozen)(使)结冰；(使)冻住→freezing adj.极冷的；冰冻的→frozen adj.结冰的；冻僵的；冷冻的；一动不动的　freezing cold极冷的　mist n.薄雾；水汽→misty adj.多雾的；模糊的
句型 1.The next morning，the two girls arose early to take the train to Lake Louise，passing through the Canadian Rockies.(动作描写)
2.Seen from the train window，the mountains and forests of Canada looked massive.(环境描写)
3.Edmonton is freezing cold in winter，with daily temperatures averaging －10°C.(环境描写)
4.However，they did not anticipate seeing such an open country，and were truly amazed.(情感描写)
句型 5.The train thundered on，through the rolling hills.The bushes and maple trees outside their windows were red，gold and orange，and there was frost on the ground，confirming that autumn had arrived in Canada.(环境描写)
6.Standing in the distance，they were astonished to see misty clouds rising from the great Niagara Falls.(情感描写)
7.Water from the lakes flows into the Niagara River and over the falls on its way to the sea.(环境描写)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
在一个雾气蒙蒙的夏天的早晨，我们登上了开往壮丽的黄山的火车。火车轰隆隆地向前行驶，我的心激动得怦怦直跳。在黄昏时分，我们开始爬山，欣赏着沿途令人惊叹的风景，呼吸着新鲜的空气。
1._____________________________ ，we boarded a train 2._______
____________________________________.The train 3._____________ and my heart 4._________________________. 5._________ ，we set out to climb the mountain，enjoying 6.____________________ along the way and 7.__________________.
On a misty summer morning
bound
for the spectacular Huangshan Mountain
thundered on
bounded with excitement
At dusk
the awesome scenery
breathing fresh air
第二天早晨冉冉升起的太阳简直让我们叹为观止。使我们最高兴的是我们在山顶欣赏到了云海。看着这人间仙境，我们惊呆了。
返 回
The next morning the rising sun literally 8._________________________.
9._____________________ was that we appreciated seas of clouds 10.________________________.Seeing the fairyland on earth，we 11.___________________________.
took our breath away
What pleased us most
at the peak of the mountain
were frozen in astonishment
本课结束Period 5　Writing
写作一　应用文写作——关于旅行的邮件
电子邮件是用电子手段提供信息交换的通信方式，是互联网应用最广的服务之一。电子邮件可以是文字、图像、声音等多种形式。电子邮件主要分为称呼、写信的目的、信件的正文、信尾的客套话、落款等部分内容。
1．邮件开头常用语
I’d like to share one of the most fascinating experiences with you.
我想和你分享最精彩的一次经历。
I’m glad to share an unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.我很高兴和你分享去年暑假我的一次难忘的旅行经历。
Knowing that you want to know...，I’m writing to tell you that...
知道你想了解……，所以我写邮件告诉你……
I’m extremely delighted to receive your email.And I would like to write an email to tell you that...非常高兴收到你的电子邮件，我想写封邮件告诉你……
I went on a seven-day trip to...last winter vacation，which is really an unforgettable memory.去年寒假我去……旅行了七天，这真是一段难忘的记忆。
2．邮件主体常用语：
On...，we flew to...，from where we went to...by bus.在……，我们飞往……，从那里我们乘坐公交车去……
What impressed me most during the trip/journey is that...
旅行中最让我印象深刻的是……
We paid a visit to...我们参观了……
The place lies in/is located in...
这个地方坐落于……
The place is well-known for...
这个地方以……而闻名。
I enjoyed a pleasant trip to...with my parents this National Day holiday.
今年国庆节假期我和父母享受了一次愉快的……之旅。
...is a beautiful garden city，with clean streets and various buildings.
……是一座漂亮的花园城市，有着干净的街道和各种各样的建筑。
We visited the covered stadium，which is home of several famous basketball teams.
我们参观了室内体育场，那里是几支著名篮球队的驻地。
The scenery is so beautiful that it takes the tourists’ breath away.
风景如此美丽，真让游客们惊叹。
...has become one of the most popular tourist attractions in the world.
……已经成为世界上最受欢迎的景点之一。
3．邮件结尾常用语
We were all exhausted，but our trip to...was really unforgettable.
我们都很累，但是我们去……的旅行真的让人难忘。
I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
我期待着你方便时给我回复。
I do hope you will have fun in...我真的希望你能在……玩得开心。
Not only did the trip entertain me，but it also broadened my horizons.
这次旅行不仅使我快乐而且开阔了我的视野。
Exhausted as we were，it was worth it.尽管我们很累，但这是值得的。
In a word，it’s quite relaxing and romantic to travel there and I love this experience very much.
总之，去那里旅行既让人放松又浪漫，我非常喜欢这次经历。
I sincerely invite you to travel to...with me next time.
我真诚地邀请你下次和我一起去……旅行。
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom写信询问你去四川参观乐山大佛的旅游经历。请你用英语给他回一封邮件，要点包括：
1．旅游过程；
2．你的感受。
参考词汇：大佛the Giant Stone Buddha
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1．使十分惊讶 astonish
2．字面上；真正地 literally
3．巨大的；非常严重的 massive
4．顶峰；山峰 peak
5．令人惊叹的；可怕的；很好的 awesome
6．壮观的；壮丽的；惊人的 spectacular
7．景色 scenery
8．在黄昏 at dusk
9．令人愉快的；友好的 pleasant
10．一定会 be bound to
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1．七月七日，我和父母乘车去了四川乐山。乐山是因大佛而闻名的。
On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan，Sichuan Province.Leshan is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha.
2．我们吃惊地发现大佛真的很大。
We were astonished to find that the Buddha is literally massive.
3．当我抬头看到巨大的佛头，低头看到巨大的佛脚时，我感到自己是如此渺小。
When I looked up at the large head and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small.
4．第二天，直到登上了峨眉山山顶，我们才领略到了山上壮丽的风景。
The next day，we didn’t appreciate the awesome and spectacular scenery on the mountain until we climbed to the peak of Mount Emei.
5．在黄昏时分，我们返程。
At dusk，we made our way back.
6．毫无疑问，我们都非常累，但是我们去乐山的旅程真的既难忘又使人愉快。
There was no doubt that we were all exhausted，but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable and pleasant.
7．如果再给我一次机会，我一定会再来游览乐山。
If I am given another chance，I am bound to pay a visit to Leshan again.
第三步　句式升级
1．用非限制性定语从句改写句1。
On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan，Sichuan Province，which is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha.
2．用现在分词短语作状语改写句3。
Looking up at the large head and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small.
3．把句4改成强调句型。
The next day，it was not until we climbed to the peak of Mount Emei that we appreciated the awesome and spectacular scenery on the mountain.
4．用过去分词作状语改写句7。
Given another chance，I am bound to pay a visit to Leshan again.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
Dear Tom，
I’m more than delighted to share a truly fascinating travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.
On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan，Sichuan Province，which is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha.We were astonished to find that the Buddha is literally massive.Looking up at the large head and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small.The next day，it was not until we climbed to the peak of Mount Emei that we appreciated the awesome and spectacular scenery on the mountain.At dusk，we made our way back.There was no doubt that we were all exhausted，but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable and pleasant.Given another chance，I am bound to pay a visit to Leshan again.
I’m looking forward to going to Leshan with you next time.
Yours，
Li Hua
假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友特蕾西(Tracy)发来邮件询问你一次最难忘的旅行经历。请给她回一封邮件，内容包括：
1．旅行时间、地点；
2．旅行经过；
3．旅行感触。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
参考范文
Dear Tracy，
I’m more than glad to share one of my most unforgettable travel experiences with you.
It was during the national holiday last year that I visited Gulangyu Island in Xiamen.I arrived at the destination in the morning alongside my parents.It’s a beautiful island，which attracted our attention.We stood on the second floor of the boat，enjoying the awesome sights of the sea.Then we took quantities of photos and tasted delicious local snacks.At dusk，we had such a good time that we didn’t want to leave.Through the trip，not only have I broadened my horizons but also I have enriched my life experience.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
写作二　读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
情感细节描写之紧张与焦虑
常用 词汇 单词 nervous adj.紧张的　anxious adj.焦虑的→anxiously adv.焦虑地→anxiety n．焦虑 tense adj.紧张的→tension n．紧张，焦虑　uneasy adj.不安的→uneasiness n．不安 stress vt.& vi.(使)焦虑不安　sigh vi.& n．叹息　gulp vi.(因害怕或惊讶而)倒吸气 restless adj.焦躁不安的
词块 one’s heart sinks心头一沉 hold one’s breath屏住呼吸 pace back and forth 来回踱步 on pins and needles如坐针毡 a flood/wave of tension一阵紧张 with butterflies in one’s stomach心里发慌 hide/conceal/hold back one’s anxiety 掩饰焦虑 murmur in a trembling voice用颤抖的声音嘟哝 stammer/stutter under one’s breath结结巴巴地小声说 be burdened/consumed/seized with anxiety 焦虑不安 pound/beat/race/thump/hammer wildly/violently (心)怦怦直跳得厉害 shiver/quiver/tremble/shake with nervousness紧张得发抖
精美句式 So nervous was I that I stood there，with the blood rushing to my face.(倒装句；with的复合结构) 我非常紧张，站在那里，感觉血液涌向我的脸。 He spoke through clenched teeth，struggling to keep his voice steady.(现在分词短语作状语) 他咬紧牙关说话，努力保持声音稳定。 My lips quivered，big tears of anxiety rolling down cheeks.(独立主格) 我的嘴唇颤抖着，焦虑的眼泪顺着脸颊滚落。 Full of anxiety，I felt on pins and needles.(形容词短语作状语)我焦虑不安，如坐针毡。
即时演练
①第一次站在舞台上的时候，我感到如此紧张以至于我一动也不能动。(倒装句)
The first time I stood on the stage，so nervous did I feel that I couldn’t move an inch.
②我非常焦虑，感觉如坐针毡。(现在分词短语作状语)
I was consumed with anxiety，feeling on pins and needles.
③我拖着沉重的脚步走进了面试室，我的心因不安而剧烈地跳动着。(with的复合结构)
I shuffled my heavy feet into the interview room，with my heart pounding violently with uneasiness.
④眼里噙满了不安的泪水，我结结巴巴地小声说：“我不知道下一步该怎么办。”(独立主格)
Tears of uneasiness in my eyes，I stammered under my breath，“I don’t know what to do next.”
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 pleasant adj.令人愉快的；友好的→please vt. & vi.(使)高兴；(使)满意→pleased adj.高兴的；满意的→pleasing adj.令人愉快的→pleasure n．快乐；乐趣 astonish vt.使十分惊讶；使吃惊→astonishing adj.惊人的；令人惊讶的→astonished adj.感到惊讶的→astonishment n．惊讶
动作描写 thunder vi.打雷；轰隆隆地响；轰隆隆地快速移动　owe vt.欠(账、债、情等)；归因于，归功于　breath n．呼吸的空气→breathe v．呼吸　bound adj.准备前往(某地)；一定会 vi.跳跃着跑　take sb’s breath away令人惊叹
环境描写 scenery n．风景；景色　spectacular adj.壮观的；壮丽的；惊人的　peak n．顶峰；山峰；尖形　frost n．霜；严寒天气；霜冻 vt.使蒙上霜 vi.结霜　cobblestone adj.铺有鹅卵石的　awesome adj.令人惊叹的；可怕的；很好的　shore n．岸；滨　dusk n．黄昏；傍晚　freeze vi. & vt.(froze，frozen)(使)结冰；(使)冻住→freezing adj.极冷的；冰冻的→frozen adj.结冰的；冻僵的；冷冻的；一动不动的　freezing cold极冷的　mist n．薄雾；水汽→misty adj.多雾的；模糊的
句型 1.The next morning，the two girls arose early to take the train to Lake Louise，passing through the Canadian Rockies.(动作描写) 2.Seen from the train window，the mountains and forests of Canada looked massive.(环境描写) 3.Edmonton is freezing cold in winter，with daily temperatures averaging －10°C.(环境描写) 4.However，they did not anticipate seeing such an open country，and were truly amazed.(情感描写) 5.The train thundered on，through the rolling hills.The bushes and maple trees outside their windows were red，gold and orange，and there was frost on the ground，confirming that autumn had arrived in Canada.(环境描写) 6.Standing in the distance，they were astonished to see misty clouds rising from the great Niagara Falls.(情感描写) 7.Water from the lakes flows into the Niagara River and over the falls on its way to the sea.(环境描写)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
在一个雾气蒙蒙的夏天的早晨，我们登上了开往壮丽的黄山的火车。火车轰隆隆地向前行驶，我的心激动得怦怦直跳。在黄昏时分，我们开始爬山，欣赏着沿途令人惊叹的风景，呼吸着新鲜的空气。第二天早晨冉冉升起的太阳简直让我们叹为观止。使我们最高兴的是我们在山顶欣赏到了云海。看着这人间仙境，我们惊呆了。
1．On a misty summer morning，we boarded a train 2.bound for the spectacular Huangshan Mountain.The train 3.thundered on and my heart 4.bounded with excitement. 5.At dusk，we set out to climb the mountain，enjoying 6.the awesome scenery along the way and 7.breathing fresh air.The next morning the rising sun literally 8.took our breath away.9.What pleased us most was that we appreciated seas of clouds 10.at the peak of the mountain.Seeing the fairyland on earth，we 11.were frozen in astonishment.

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