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Period 5
Writing
Healthy lifestyle
Unit 2
内容索引
写作一　应用文写作——关于健康生活方式的信件
写作二　读后续写微技能
写作一　应用文写作——关于健康生活方式的信件
关于健康生活方式的文章贴近学生的生活，该话题的应用文是考查重点。此类文章兼顾书信和记叙文的体裁特点，它具备书信的基本构成要素，包括称呼、正文、信尾敬语和署名，正文部分为记叙文的写法。
一、叙述曾经不良的生活方式
1.I often skipped breakfast and ate junk food.
我经常不吃早餐，吃垃圾食品。
2....will do harm to your health.
……会对你的健康有害。
3.Not only did...stay up late but also...took little exercise，which brought...a negative effect physically and mentally.
……不仅熬夜，而且……几乎不做运动，这对……的身体和精神产生了负面影响。
常用表达
二、作出改变的决定和采取的措施
1....has made up his/her mind to change himself/herself straight away.
……(他/她)决定马上改变自己。
2....is another way to keep healthy/fit.
……是另一种保持健康的方法。
3.Going to bed early and getting up early is of equal importance.
早睡早起同样重要。
4.It would be a good idea if we could take meals regularly.
如果我们能有规律地饮食，这会是一个好主意。
5.Eating lots of fresh vegetables and fruit means a lot to our body.
多吃新鲜蔬菜和水果对我们的身体很有好处。
6.To keep healthy，...should try to be in a good mood each day.
为了保持健康，……应该尽量每天保持好心情。
7.Only by living a healthy lifestyle can you...
只有通过健康的生活方式你才能……
三、积极的结果
1.I sincerely hope that...can have a healthy body.
我真诚地希望……拥有健康的身体。
2.If making great efforts，...strongly believe that...will be rewarded with physical health.
如果非常努力，……坚信……会拥有健康的身体。
假定你是李华，参加完Healthy Life杂志社组织的第二期夏令营活动后，你努力改变不健康的生活习惯。请给杂志社的编辑写一封信，内容如下：
1.你想改变什么样的生活习惯；
2.为什么你想要改变；
3.你计划如何改变；
4.你希望看到什么结果。
注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
典例演练
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1.熬夜
2.筋疲力尽的；疲惫的
3.焦虑不安；心力交瘁
4.下定决心做某事
5.立即；马上
6.保持均衡饮食
7.锻炼
8.养成……的习惯
_______
________
___________
__________________________
____________
__________________
________
__________________
stay up
worn out
stressed out
make up one’s mind to do sth
straight away
keep a balanced diet
work out
develop the habit of
9.恢复精力
10.全神贯注于……
11.奖励；奖赏；给以报酬
____________
_______________________________
_______
get refreshed
be absorbed in.../absorb oneself in...
reward
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1.参加了你们的夏令营后，我意识到我有一些不健康的生活习惯。
After __________________________，I realized I had some unhealthy living habits.
2.我经常不吃早餐，吃垃圾食品，熬夜，很少进行体育锻炼，这些都给我的身心带来了负面影响。(定语从句)
I often skipped breakfast，ate junk food，stayed up late and took little physical exercise，______________________________________________
_________.
attending your summer camp
which brought me a negative effect physically and
mentally
3.我是如此焦虑不安、疲惫不堪以至于不能专心学习。
I am ________________________________________________________.
4.为了保持健康，我决定马上改变自己。
To keep fit，I ________________________________________________.
5.保持均衡饮食是非常重要的。
______________________ is of great importance.
6.同样重要的是，无论我遇到什么困难，我都应该每天锻炼半小时。
_____________________________________________________，I should work out for half an hour every day.
so stressed out and worn out that I can’t be absorbed in studying
have made up my mind to change myself straight away
Keeping a balanced diet
Equally important is that whatever difficulties I come across
7.养成早睡早起的习惯是个好主意。
__________________________________ going to bed early and getting up early.
8.如果我非常努力，我坚信我会拥有健康的身体。
If I _________________，I strongly believe that I will ________________
______________.
9.我会变得更加神清气爽、充满活力和精力充沛。
I will _______________________________________.
It’s a good idea to develop the habit of
make great efforts
be rewarded with
physical health
get more refreshed，dynamic and energetic
第三步　句式升级
1.用倒装句改写句3
_______________________________________________________________
2.用状语从句的省略改写句8
____________________，I strongly believe that I will be rewarded with physical health.
So stressed out and worn out am I that I can’t be absorbed in studying.
If making great efforts
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80个词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
Dear Editor，
After attending your summer camp，I realized I had some unhealthy living habits.For instance，I often skipped breakfast，ate junk food，stayed up late and took little physical exercise，which brought me a negative effect physically and mentally.So stressed out and worn out am I that I can’t be absorbed in studying.
To keep fit，I have made up my mind to change myself straight away.First of all，keeping a balanced diet is of great importance.Equally important is that whatever difficulties I come across，I should work out for half an hour every day.Last but not least，it’s a good idea to develop the habit of going to bed early and getting up early.
If making great efforts，I strongly believe that I will be rewarded with physical health.I will get more refreshed，dynamic and energetic.Better yet，I feel that I can change myself for the better.
Yours，
Li Hua
你校英文报的Life专栏正在征稿。请你以“Ways to Live a Healthy Life”为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.健康生活的途径；2.健康生活的意义。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Ways to Live a Healthy Life
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
达标检测
参考范文
Ways to Live a Healthy Life
Life is beautiful，but under no circumstances can we take our health for granted since happiness lies in health.The following are some suggestions on how to lead a healthy life.
返 回
Above all，it would be a good idea if we could drink enough water on a daily basis，which is essential for our bodies to function smoothly.Furthermore，take exercise whenever it is possible.Daily exercise is beneficial to our health，such as lowering the risk of disease.Last but not least，getting rid of junk food，developing a balanced diet and keeping a positive attitude all contribute to a healthy life.
All in all，take a small step and you’ll never regret it.
写作二　读后续写微技能
情感细节描写之幸福与感动
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
常用词汇 单词 happy adj.幸福的→happily adv.幸福地→happiness n.幸福
thankful/grateful/appreciative adj.感激的→thankfully/gratefully adv.感激地→thank/gratitude/appreciation n.感激，感谢
touch/move vt.感动→touching/moving adj.令人感动的→touched/moved adj.感动的
pleased adj.高兴的→pleasure n.快乐；乐事　
hug vt.& n.拥抱　kiss vt.& n.亲吻
常用词汇 词块 a wave of happiness一阵幸福　　　　　　　　　　　
touch one’s heart触动某人的心
be touched/affected/moved/struck by 被……打动/感动
shed tears of gratitude/appreciation 流下感激的泪水
be touched beyond words 感动得说不出话来
thank sb from the bottom of one’s heart 从内心深处感激某人
精美句式 She was overflowing with happiness.她觉得幸福满满。
A delicious sweetness welled up in her heart.一种美妙的甜蜜涌上她的心头。
He managed to transport me to the destination，tears of gratitude running/rolling/streaming down my cheeks.(独立主格)
＝He managed to transport me to the destination，with tears of gratitude running/rolling/streaming down my cheeks.(with的复合结构)
精美句式 他设法把我送到目的地，感激的泪水顺着我的脸颊流了下来。
When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek，his eyes danced with happiness and sweetness.(无灵主语句)
当母亲亲吻婴儿的脸颊时，他的眼睛闪烁着幸福和甜蜜。
Touched by his good brave deed，we felt a lump in our throats，unable to utter a word.(过去分词短语作状语)
我们被他的英勇行为所感动，感到哽咽，说不出话来。
即时演练　读后续写情景运用
我差点被一辆路过的汽车撞倒，这时一个年轻人把我推到了安全的地方。感激的泪水涌上了我的眼眶，我很感激他的及时帮助。
I was nearly knocked over by a passing car when a young man pushed me to safety.1._______________________________________(with的复合结构)，I was appreciative of his timely help.
With tears of gratitude welling up in my eyes
我喃喃地说：“任何言语都不足以表达我衷心的感激之情！”一种温暖的感觉涌上心头，我开始相信每个角落都有善良。看到陌生人能如此关心彼此，真是令人感动。
I murmured，“No words are strong enough to 2._____________________
_________！” 3._______________________________________(独立主格)，I began to believe there was kindness in every corner.It was 4.__________ ________________ to see how much strangers could care for each other.
convey my heartfelt
gratitude
A feeling of warmth welling up in my heart
very
moving/touching
被他的行为深深感动，街上的行人大声鼓掌向他投以赞赏的目光。得知发生的事情后，母亲如此感动以至于流下了宽慰和感激的眼泪。
5.__________________________________，passers-by in the street clapped their hands loudly，casting a look of admiration to him.Leaning about what had happened，my mother was 6._______________________
___________________________.
Touched/Moved deeply by what he did
so touched that she shed
tears of relief and appreciation
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 人物 描写 dizzy adj.头晕目眩的
pessimistic adj.悲观的；悲观主义的
dynamic adj.充满活力的；精力充沛的
stressed out 焦虑不安；心力交瘁
worn out 筋疲力尽的；疲惫的
词汇 动作 描写 dominate vt.& vi.支配；控制；占有优势
rely on/upon依赖；依靠；信赖
stimulate vt.激发；促进；刺激
enhance vt.提高；增强；增进
reward vt.奖励；奖赏；给以报酬
refresh vt.使恢复精力；使凉爽；刷新
skip vt.跳过；不参加；悄悄溜走 vi.蹦蹦跳跳地走；跳绳
disturb vt.打扰；搅乱；使烦恼→disturbing adj.引起烦恼的；令人不安的
absorb vt.吸引全部注意力；吸收→absorbed adj.专心致志的；全神贯注的
句型 1....if we are not successful straight away，we often become pessimistic and give up.(人物描写)
2.As the Chinese philosopher Laozi wrote，“A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.”(主旨升华)
3.I often felt sleepy and dizzy，and lacked passion.(人物描写)
4.Other times I jumped on my skateboard and rode around my neighbourhood，or just took a long walk.(动作描写)
5.After starting high school，I felt stressed out and always relaxed by playing computer games.(人物描写)
6.As Gandhi said，“Be the change you want to see in the world.”(主旨升华)
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
在令人不安的高考前，我是如此悲观和焦虑不安，以至于我经常感到头晕。既疲惫又沮丧，我不能全神贯注于学习。
Before the 1.____________ College Entrance Examination,2._______
______________________________ that I often 3._________.4.__________
______________，I couldn’t 5.______________________.
disturbing
so
pessimistic and stressed out was I
felt dizzy
Worn out
and frustrated
be absorbed in my study
续写语料运用
什么也不能振奋我的精神。无穷无尽的痛苦和不安控制了我的生活，我感觉我的心像被针扎一样。意识到我糟糕的状况，我的老师们竭尽全力激发我的学习热情，增强我的自信心。最终，我获得了巨大的进步，我的心里满是喜悦和感激。
Nothing could 6.__________________.Limitless pain and uneasiness 7._________________ and I felt as if my heart had been stabbed by a needle.Sensing my terrible state，my teachers did whatever they could to 8._______________________________ and 9.________________________.
Finally，I 10.________________________________ ，and my heart was filled with joy and appreciation.
refresh my spirits
返 回
dominated my life
stimulate my learning enthusiasm
enhance my self-confidence
was rewarded with great progress
本课结束Period 5　Writing
写作一　应用文写作——关于健康生活方式的信件
关于健康生活方式的文章贴近学生的生活，该话题的应用文是考查重点。此类文章兼顾书信和记叙文的体裁特点，它具备书信的基本构成要素，包括称呼、正文、信尾敬语和署名，正文部分为记叙文的写法。
一、叙述曾经不良的生活方式
1．I often skipped breakfast and ate junk food.
我经常不吃早餐，吃垃圾食品。
2．...will do harm to your health.
……会对你的健康有害。
3．Not only did...stay up late but also...took little exercise，which brought...a negative effect physically and mentally.
……不仅熬夜，而且……几乎不做运动，这对……的身体和精神产生了负面影响。
二、作出改变的决定和采取的措施
1．...has made up his/her mind to change himself/herself straight away.
……(他/她)决定马上改变自己。
2．...is another way to keep healthy/fit.
……是另一种保持健康的方法。
3．Going to bed early and getting up early is of equal importance.
早睡早起同样重要。
4．It would be a good idea if we could take meals regularly.
如果我们能有规律地饮食，这会是一个好主意。
5．Eating lots of fresh vegetables and fruit means a lot to our body.
多吃新鲜蔬菜和水果对我们的身体很有好处。
6．To keep healthy，...should try to be in a good mood each day.
为了保持健康，……应该尽量每天保持好心情。
7．Only by living a healthy lifestyle can you...
只有通过健康的生活方式你才能……
三、积极的结果
1．I sincerely hope that...can have a healthy body.
我真诚地希望……拥有健康的身体。
2．If making great efforts，...strongly believe that...will be rewarded with physical health.
如果非常努力，……坚信……会拥有健康的身体。
假定你是李华，参加完Healthy Life杂志社组织的第二期夏令营活动后，你努力改变不健康的生活习惯。请给杂志社的编辑写一封信，内容如下：
1．你想改变什么样的生活习惯；
2．为什么你想要改变；
3．你计划如何改变；
4．你希望看到什么结果。
注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1．熬夜stay up
2．筋疲力尽的；疲惫的worn out
3．焦虑不安；心力交瘁stressed out
4．下定决心做某事make up one’s mind to do sth
5．立即；马上straight away
6．保持均衡饮食keep a balanced diet
7．锻炼work out
8．养成……的习惯develop the habit of
9．恢复精力get refreshed
10．全神贯注于…… be absorbed in.../absorb oneself in...
11．奖励；奖赏；给以报酬reward
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1．参加了你们的夏令营后，我意识到我有一些不健康的生活习惯。
After attending your summer camp，I realized I had some unhealthy living habits.
2．我经常不吃早餐，吃垃圾食品，熬夜，很少进行体育锻炼，这些都给我的身心带来了负面影响。(定语从句)
I often skipped breakfast，ate junk food，stayed up late and took little physical exercise，which brought me a negative effect physically and mentally.
3．我是如此焦虑不安、疲惫不堪以至于不能专心学习。
I am so stressed out and worn out that I can’t be absorbed in studying.
4．为了保持健康，我决定马上改变自己。
To keep fit，I have made up my mind to change myself straight away.
5．保持均衡饮食是非常重要的。
Keeping a balanced diet is of great importance.
6．同样重要的是，无论我遇到什么困难，我都应该每天锻炼半小时。
Equally important is that whatever difficulties I come across，I should work out for half an hour every day.
7．养成早睡早起的习惯是个好主意。
It’s a good idea to develop the habit of going to bed early and getting up early.
8．如果我非常努力，我坚信我会拥有健康的身体。
If I make great efforts，I strongly believe that I will be rewarded with physical health.
9．我会变得更加神清气爽、充满活力和精力充沛。
I will get more refreshed，dynamic and energetic.
第三步　句式升级
1．用倒装句改写句3
So stressed out and worn out am I that I can’t be absorbed in studying.
2．用状语从句的省略改写句8
If making great efforts，I strongly believe that I will be rewarded with physical health.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80个词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
Dear Editor，
After attending your summer camp，I realized I had some unhealthy living habits.For instance，I often skipped breakfast，ate junk food，stayed up late and took little physical exercise，which brought me a negative effect physically and mentally.So stressed out and worn out am I that I can’t be absorbed in studying.
To keep fit，I have made up my mind to change myself straight away.First of all，keeping a balanced diet is of great importance.Equally important is that whatever difficulties I come across，I should work out for half an hour every day.Last but not least，it’s a good idea to develop the habit of going to bed early and getting up early.
If making great efforts，I strongly believe that I will be rewarded with physical health.I will get more refreshed，dynamic and energetic.Better yet，I feel that I can change myself for the better.
Yours，
Li Hua
你校英文报的Life专栏正在征稿。请你以“Ways to Live a Healthy Life”为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．健康生活的途径；2.健康生活的意义。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Ways to Live a Healthy Life
参考范文
Ways to Live a Healthy Life
Life is beautiful，but under no circumstances can we take our health for granted since happiness lies in health.The following are some suggestions on how to lead a healthy life.
Above all，it would be a good idea if we could drink enough water on a daily basis，which is essential for our bodies to function smoothly.Furthermore，take exercise whenever it is possible.Daily exercise is beneficial to our health，such as lowering the risk of disease.Last but not least，getting rid of junk food，developing a balanced diet and keeping a positive attitude all contribute to a healthy life.
All in all，take a small step and you’ll never regret it.
写作二　读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
情感细节描写之幸福与感动
常用词汇 单词 happy adj.幸福的→happily adv.幸福地→happiness n．幸福 thankful/grateful/appreciative adj.感激的→thankfully/gratefully adv.感激地→thank/gratitude/appreciation n．感激，感谢 touch/move vt.感动→touching/moving adj.令人感动的→touched/moved adj.感动的 pleased adj.高兴的→pleasure n．快乐；乐事　hug vt.& n．拥抱　kiss vt.& n．亲吻
词块 a wave of happiness一阵幸福　　　　　　　　　　　touch one’s heart触动某人的心 be touched/affected/moved/struck by 被……打动/感动 shed tears of gratitude/appreciation 流下感激的泪水 be touched beyond words 感动得说不出话来 thank sb from the bottom of one’s heart 从内心深处感激某人
精美句式 She was overflowing with happiness.她觉得幸福满满。 A delicious sweetness welled up in her heart.一种美妙的甜蜜涌上她的心头。 He managed to transport me to the destination，tears of gratitude running/rolling/streaming down my cheeks.(独立主格) ＝He managed to transport me to the destination，with tears of gratitude running/rolling/streaming down my cheeks.(with的复合结构) 他设法把我送到目的地，感激的泪水顺着我的脸颊流了下来。 When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek，his eyes danced with happiness and sweetness.(无灵主语句) 当母亲亲吻婴儿的脸颊时，他的眼睛闪烁着幸福和甜蜜。 Touched by his good brave deed，we felt a lump in our throats，unable to utter a word.(过去分词短语作状语) 我们被他的英勇行为所感动，感到哽咽，说不出话来。
即时演练　读后续写情景运用
我差点被一辆路过的汽车撞倒，这时一个年轻人把我推到了安全的地方。感激的泪水涌上了我的眼眶，我很感激他的及时帮助。我喃喃地说：“任何言语都不足以表达我衷心的感激之情！”一种温暖的感觉涌上心头，我开始相信每个角落都有善良。看到陌生人能如此关心彼此，真是令人感动。被他的行为深深感动，街上的行人大声鼓掌向他投以赞赏的目光。得知发生的事情后，母亲如此感动以至于流下了宽慰和感激的眼泪。
I was nearly knocked over by a passing car when a young man pushed me to safety.1.With tears of gratitude welling up in my eyes(with的复合结构)，I was appreciative of his timely help.I murmured，“No words are strong enough to 2.convey my heartfelt gratitude！” 3.A feeling of warmth welling up in my heart(独立主格)，I began to believe there was kindness in every corner.It was 4.very moving/touching to see how much strangers could care for each other.5.Touched/Moved deeply by what he did，passers-by in the street clapped their hands loudly，casting a look of admiration to him.Leaning about what had happened，my mother was 6.so touched that she shed tears of relief and appreciation.
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 人物 描写 dizzy adj.头晕目眩的 pessimistic adj.悲观的；悲观主义的 dynamic adj.充满活力的；精力充沛的 stressed out 焦虑不安；心力交瘁 worn out 筋疲力尽的；疲惫的
动作 描写 dominate vt.& vi.支配；控制；占有优势 rely on/upon依赖；依靠；信赖 stimulate vt.激发；促进；刺激 enhance vt.提高；增强；增进 reward vt.奖励；奖赏；给以报酬 refresh vt.使恢复精力；使凉爽；刷新 skip vt.跳过；不参加；悄悄溜走 vi.蹦蹦跳跳地走；跳绳 disturb vt.打扰；搅乱；使烦恼→disturbing adj.引起烦恼的；令人不安的 absorb vt.吸引全部注意力；吸收→absorbed adj.专心致志的；全神贯注的
句型 1....if we are not successful straight away，we often become pessimistic and give up.(人物描写) 2．As the Chinese philosopher Laozi wrote，“A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.”(主旨升华) 3．I often felt sleepy and dizzy，and lacked passion.(人物描写) 4．Other times I jumped on my skateboard and rode around my neighbourhood，or just took a long walk.(动作描写) 5．After starting high school，I felt stressed out and always relaxed by playing computer games.(人物描写) 6．As Gandhi said，“Be the change you want to see in the world.”(主旨升华)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
在令人不安的高考前，我是如此悲观和焦虑不安，以至于我经常感到头晕。既疲惫又沮丧，我不能全神贯注于学习。什么也不能振奋我的精神。无穷无尽的痛苦和不安控制了我的生活，我感觉我的心像被针扎一样。意识到我糟糕的状况，我的老师们竭尽全力激发我的学习热情，增强我的自信心。最终，我获得了巨大的进步，我的心里满是喜悦和感激。
Before the 1.disturbing College Entrance Examination,2.so pessimistic and stressed out was I that I often 3.felt dizzy.4.Worn out and frustrated，I couldn’t 5.be absorbed in my study.Nothing could 6.refresh my spirits.Limitless pain and uneasiness 7.dominated my life and I felt as if my heart had been stabbed by a needle.Sensing my terrible state，my teachers did whatever they could to 8.stimulate my learning enthusiasm and 9.enhance my self-confidence.Finally，I 10.was rewarded with great progress，and my heart was filled with joy and appreciation.

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