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Period 5
Writing
Environmental protection
Unit 3
内容索引
写作一　应用文写作——关于环境问题的报道
写作二　读后续写微技能
写作一　应用文写作——关于环境
　　　　问题的报道
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于环境问题的报道。报道正文通常包括问题描述、问题产生的原因分析、解决问题的具体措施以及成效等。
一、引出问题常用句式
1.With...becoming more and more serious，some wild species will probably die out.
随着……变得越来越严重，一些野生物种可能会灭绝。
2.With the development of society，nowadays the issue of...is becoming increasingly severe.
随着社会的发展，现在……的问题变得越来越严重。
3.In fact，...is an incredibly severe problem the whole world is facing.
事实上，……是全世界都面临的一个非常严重的问题。
常用表达
4....are being polluted so that the environment in which animals live is destroyed.
……正在被污染，以至于动物生存的环境被破坏。
二、分析原因及结果的常用句式
1.The reason why the river is polluted is that factories send out waste water into it.
这条河被污染的原因是工厂把废水排放到河里。
2....are sent into the air，polluting the air we breathe.
……被排放到空气中，污染了我们呼吸的空气。
3.Besides，...causes/brings about/contributes to...此外，……导致/带来/促成……
三、措施及效果的常用句式
1.More trees and flowers have been planted to make the environment more beautiful.
为了使环境更美丽，人们种了更多的树和花。
2.It’s time to raise people’s awareness of...and appeal to more people to...
是时候提高人们对……的认识并呼吁更多的人……
3.Some measures should be taken to deal with...
应该采取一些措施来处理……
4.What...has done has improved the situation a lot.
……所做的已经大大改善了情况。
5....are forbidden to throw some rubbish into the river.
……被禁止往河里扔垃圾。
东湖曾经是一处旅游胜地，但近年来受到严重的污染。当地政府采取了一些有效措施，使得污染情况有所减轻。假设你是李华，请根据以下要点写一篇报道并呼吁社会关注此事：
1.曾经的情景(景美、水清、鱼儿嬉戏、游客多)；
2.后来的状况(工厂废水污染、游客乱扔垃圾)；
3.当地政府已经采取措施来拯救东湖，情况有所好转。
注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
典例演练
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1.渴望……
2.垃圾
3.许多；很多
4.发起运动
5.被罚款
6.要不是；如果没有
7.温和的政策
______________________
____________________
_________
________________
________
_______
_______________
be starving for/starve for
garbage/waste/rubbish
dozens of
launch campaigns
get fined
but for
moderate policy
8.毫无疑问
9.容忍，忍受
_________________________
_______
there is little/no doubt that...
tolerate
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1.东湖过去是个美丽的地方，水很清澈，鱼儿在里面欢快地游来游去。
East Lake ___________________________ and the water was clean，in which fish swam happily.
2.来自全国的游客都渴望来参观这个湖，欣赏它的美。
Tourists from all over the nation ___________________________________，appreciating its beauty.
used to be a beautiful place
are starving for a visit to the lake
3.随着数百万吨来自周围工厂的废水夜以继日地排入湖中，这个湖已经受到严重污染。(with复合结构)
________________________________________________________________________________________，the lake has been extremely polluted.
4.垃圾经常被游客扔进湖里，因此，它严重污染了湖泊。
Rubbish is often thrown into it by the visitors and thus，it ____________
__________.
pollutes the
With millions of tons of waste water from surrounding factories being poured into it day and night
lake badly
5.当地政府再也不能容忍这种糟糕的情况了，因此已经发起了各种各样的运动宣传环保的重要性。
The local government ________________________________________，so it has launched various campaigns to publicize the importance of environmental protection.
6.毫无疑问，向湖里倾倒废水的工厂以及把垃圾扔进湖里的游客将被罚款。
____________________ the factories which pour waste water and the visitors who throw garbage into the lake will get fined.
can’t tolerate the terrible situation any longer
There is no doubt that
7.如果没有许多温和但有效的政策，这个湖不会变得越来越美丽。
If ____________________________________________________，the lake wouldn’t have become more and more beautiful.
there hadn’t been dozens of moderate but effective policies
第三步　句式升级
1.用现在分词短语作结果状语改写句4。
Rubbish is often thrown into it by the visitors，______________________.
2.用but for引导的虚拟语气改写句7。
___________________________________________，the lake wouldn’t have become more and more beautiful.
polluting the lake badly
But for dozens of moderate but effective policies
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80个词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
East Lake used to be a beautiful place and the water was clean，in which fish swam happily.Tourists from all over the nation are starving for a visit to the lake，appreciating its beauty.
Unfortunately，with millions of tons of waste water from surrounding factories being poured into it day and night，the lake has been extremely polluted.Moreover，rubbish is often thrown into it by the visitors，polluting the lake badly.
The local government can’t tolerate the terrible situation any longer，so it has launched various campaigns to publicize the importance of environmental protection.There is no doubt that the factories which pour waste water and the visitors who throw garbage into the lake will get fined.But for dozens of moderate but effective policies，the lake wouldn’t have become more and more beautiful.
你校校报的英文专栏为宣传世界地球日(4月22日)，邀请你写一篇关于环境问题的报道。内容包括：
1.地球面临的问题；2.呼吁采取行动。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
达标检测
参考范文
Here comes another Earth Day，which was set up to draw attention to protecting our shared home.
What is known to us all is that the earth keeps suffering from serious pollution，abuse of resources and illegal hunting，which has destroyed our planet.Consequently，urgent steps must be taken to protect the earth.First of all，we must live a low-carbon life with less consumption of resources.After all，the earth can satisfy our need but not our greed! Furthermore，it would be a good idea if we could share and reuse things like clothing，furniture，books，etc.Last but not least，awareness and technology should be strengthened to boost recycling.
All in all，every resident as well as the government should contribute to making the earth a healthy and sustainable planet.
返 回
写作二　读后续写微技能
动作细节描写之头部动作
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
词块 shake/nod one’s head摇/点头　raise/lift one’s head抬起头　drop/lower/hang/bow one’s head低头
turn one’s head 转过头 scratch one’s head 挠头 throw one’s head back后仰
tilt one’s head to the side 把头侧向一边
rest one’s head on one’s shoulder 把头靠在某人肩上
精美句式 He held his head in his hands，greatly annoyed.他双手抱头，苦恼不已。
She buried her head under the quilt，pretending to be asleep.她把头埋在被子下面，假装睡着了。
I stopped my work and raised my head with surprise in my eyes.我停下手中的工作，满眼诧异地抬起了头。
Greatly encouraged，she nodded her head determinedly and promised to practice hard for the performance.
她深受鼓舞，坚定地点了点头，并保证会为演出努力练习。
即时演练　根据汉语提示补全句子
1.他羞愧地低下了头。
He __________________________________ in shame.
2.他挠了挠头，一个字也听不懂。
He _________________，not understanding a word.
3.脸上带着满意的微笑，她将头靠在他的肩膀上。
With a satisfied smile on her face，she ______________ on his shoulder.
4.听了他的解释后，她不以为然地摇了摇头。
After listening to his explanation，she _________________ in disapproval.
dropped/lowered/hung/bowed his head
scratched his head
rested her head
shook her head
5.他把头转开，避开她锐利的目光。
He ____________________ from her piercing stare.
turned his head away
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 sensitive adj.敏感的；善解人意的；灵敏的　　　
tolerate vt.忍受；包容；容许
动作描写 release vt.& n.排放；释放；发布
fuel n.燃料；刺激性言行 vt.加强；刺激
seize vt.抓住；夺取；控制；(情绪)突然侵袭
undergo vt.经历；经受(变化、不快等)
restore vt.恢复；使复原；修复
starve vi.& vt.(使)挨饿；饿死；渴望
sustain vt.维持；遭受；承受住
submit vt.& vi.提交；呈递；屈服　　　　
句型 1.There is little doubt that Earth is getting warmer and warmer.(反复)
2.A warming ocean and atmosphere along with melting ice and rising sea levels provide evidence of a dramatic change in the global climate.(环境描写)
3.In 2013，a lot of people were shocked by a news photo of a dead polar bear that was found on Norway’s Arctic island of Svalbard.(情感描写)
4.It is our responsibility to seize every opportunity to educate everyone about global warming，along with its causes and impacts，because this is the most serious issue affecting all of us on this planet.(主旨升华)
5.Local officials were concerned that the pollution was damaging the natural environment and felt that urgent steps should be taken to restore the river’s original beauty.(情感描写)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
作为一个敏感的女孩，海伦不能忍受在陌生环境中的孤独。沉重的学习压力进一步加剧了她的困境。由于不知道如何释放自己的情绪，她正经历着一段痛苦的时光，她被极度的悲伤攫住了。
Being 1._____________，Helen couldn’t 2.______________________
_________________________.Heavy study pressures further 3._________
________.Not knowing how to 4.___________________，she 5._________
_______________________ and she 6.___________________________.
a sensitive girl
tolerate being lonely in
the unfamiliar surroundings
fueled her
dilemma
release her emotions
was
undergoing a painful time
was seized by extreme sorrow
她渴望着他人的帮助来摆脱这种令人窒息的境况。幸运的是，班长的关爱和支持使她度过了那段困难时期。逐渐地，海伦恢复了信心，决心不向任何困难屈服。她内心的孤独最终消融了，她的脸上露出了快乐的笑容。
She 7._______________________________________ the choking situation.
Luckily，the monitor’s care and support 8.__________________________
________________.Gradually，Helen 9.____________________________，determined 10._______________________________________.Her inner loneliness finally melted away，a happy smile brightening her face.
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was starving for others’ help to get rid of
sustained her through the
difficult period
restored her confidence
not to submit herself to any difficulties
本课结束Period 5　Writing
写作一　应用文写作——关于环境问题的报道
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于环境问题的报道。报道正文通常包括问题描述、问题产生的原因分析、解决问题的具体措施以及成效等。
一、引出问题常用句式
1．With...becoming more and more serious，some wild species will probably die out.
随着……变得越来越严重，一些野生物种可能会灭绝。
2．With the development of society，nowadays the issue of...is becoming increasingly severe.
随着社会的发展，现在……的问题变得越来越严重。
3．In fact，...is an incredibly severe problem the whole world is facing.
事实上，……是全世界都面临的一个非常严重的问题。
4．...are being polluted so that the environment in which animals live is destroyed.
……正在被污染，以至于动物生存的环境被破坏。
二、分析原因及结果的常用句式
1．The reason why the river is polluted is that factories send out waste water into it.
这条河被污染的原因是工厂把废水排放到河里。
2．...are sent into the air，polluting the air we breathe.
……被排放到空气中，污染了我们呼吸的空气。
3．Besides，...causes/brings about/contributes to...此外，……导致/带来/促成……
三、措施及效果的常用句式
1．More trees and flowers have been planted to make the environment more beautiful.
为了使环境更美丽，人们种了更多的树和花。
2．It’s time to raise people’s awareness of...and appeal to more people to...
是时候提高人们对……的认识并呼吁更多的人……
3．Some measures should be taken to deal with...
应该采取一些措施来处理……
4．What...has done has improved the situation a lot.
……所做的已经大大改善了情况。
5．...are forbidden to throw some rubbish into the river.
……被禁止往河里扔垃圾。
东湖曾经是一处旅游胜地，但近年来受到严重的污染。当地政府采取了一些有效措施，使得污染情况有所减轻。假设你是李华，请根据以下要点写一篇报道并呼吁社会关注此事：
1．曾经的情景(景美、水清、鱼儿嬉戏、游客多)；
2．后来的状况(工厂废水污染、游客乱扔垃圾)；
3．当地政府已经采取措施来拯救东湖，情况有所好转。
注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1．渴望……be starving for/starve for
2．垃圾garbage/waste/rubbish
3．许多；很多dozens of
4．发起运动launch campaigns
5．被罚款get fined
6．要不是；如果没有but for
7．温和的政策moderate policy
8．毫无疑问there is little/no doubt that...
9．容忍，忍受tolerate
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1．东湖过去是个美丽的地方，水很清澈，鱼儿在里面欢快地游来游去。
East Lake used to be a beautiful place and the water was clean，in which fish swam happily.
2．来自全国的游客都渴望来参观这个湖，欣赏它的美。
Tourists from all over the nation are starving for a visit to the lake，appreciating its beauty.
3．随着数百万吨来自周围工厂的废水夜以继日地排入湖中，这个湖已经受到严重污染。(with复合结构)
With millions of tons of waste water from surrounding factories being poured into it day and night，the lake has been extremely polluted.
4．垃圾经常被游客扔进湖里，因此，它严重污染了湖泊。
Rubbish is often thrown into it by the visitors and thus，it pollutes the lake badly.
5．当地政府再也不能容忍这种糟糕的情况了，因此已经发起了各种各样的运动宣传环保的重要性。
The local government can’t tolerate the terrible situation any longer，so it has launched various campaigns to publicize the importance of environmental protection.
6．毫无疑问，向湖里倾倒废水的工厂以及把垃圾扔进湖里的游客将被罚款。
There is no doubt that the factories which pour waste water and the visitors who throw garbage into the lake will get fined.
7．如果没有许多温和但有效的政策，这个湖不会变得越来越美丽。
If there hadn’t been dozens of moderate but effective policies，the lake wouldn’t have become more and more beautiful.
第三步　句式升级
1．用现在分词短语作结果状语改写句4。
Rubbish is often thrown into it by the visitors，polluting the lake badly.
2．用but for引导的虚拟语气改写句7。
But for dozens of moderate but effective policies，the lake wouldn’t have become more and more beautiful.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80个词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
East Lake used to be a beautiful place and the water was clean，in which fish swam happily.Tourists from all over the nation are starving for a visit to the lake，appreciating its beauty.
Unfortunately，with millions of tons of waste water from surrounding factories being poured into it day and night，the lake has been extremely polluted.Moreover，rubbish is often thrown into it by the visitors，polluting the lake badly.
The local government can’t tolerate the terrible situation any longer，so it has launched various campaigns to publicize the importance of environmental protection.There is no doubt that the factories which pour waste water and the visitors who throw garbage into the lake will get fined.But for dozens of moderate but effective policies，the lake wouldn’t have become more and more beautiful.
你校校报的英文专栏为宣传世界地球日(4月22日)，邀请你写一篇关于环境问题的报道。内容包括：
1．地球面临的问题；2.呼吁采取行动。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
参考范文
Here comes another Earth Day，which was set up to draw attention to protecting our shared home.
What is known to us all is that the earth keeps suffering from serious pollution，abuse of resources and illegal hunting，which has destroyed our planet.Consequently，urgent steps must be taken to protect the earth.First of all，we must live a low-carbon life with less consumption of resources.After all，the earth can satisfy our need but not our greed! Furthermore，it would be a good idea if we could share and reuse things like clothing，furniture，books，etc.Last but not least，awareness and technology should be strengthened to boost recycling.
All in all，every resident as well as the government should contribute to making the earth a healthy and sustainable planet.
写作二　读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
动作细节描写之头部动作
词块 shake/nod one’s head摇/点头　raise/lift one’s head抬起头　drop/lower/hang/bow one’s head低头 turn one’s head 转过头 scratch one’s head 挠头 throw one’s head back后仰 tilt one’s head to the side 把头侧向一边 rest one’s head on one’s shoulder 把头靠在某人肩上
精美句式 He held his head in his hands，greatly annoyed.他双手抱头，苦恼不已。 She buried her head under the quilt，pretending to be asleep.她把头埋在被子下面，假装睡着了。 I stopped my work and raised my head with surprise in my eyes.我停下手中的工作，满眼诧异地抬起了头。 Greatly encouraged，she nodded her head determinedly and promised to practice hard for the performance. 她深受鼓舞，坚定地点了点头，并保证会为演出努力练习。
即时演练　根据汉语提示补全句子
1．他羞愧地低下了头。
He dropped/lowered/hung/bowed his head in shame.
2．他挠了挠头，一个字也听不懂。
He scratched his head，not understanding a word.
3．脸上带着满意的微笑，她将头靠在他的肩膀上。
With a satisfied smile on her face，she rested her head on his shoulder.
4．听了他的解释后，她不以为然地摇了摇头。
After listening to his explanation，she shook her head in disapproval.
5．他把头转开，避开她锐利的目光。
He turned his head away from her piercing stare.
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 sensitive adj.敏感的；善解人意的；灵敏的　　　tolerate vt.忍受；包容；容许
动作描写 submit vt.& vi.提交；呈递；屈服　　　　　release vt.& n．排放；释放；发布 fuel n．燃料；刺激性言行 vt.加强；刺激 seize vt.抓住；夺取；控制；(情绪)突然侵袭 undergo vt.经历；经受(变化、不快等) restore vt.恢复；使复原；修复 starve vi.& vt.(使)挨饿；饿死；渴望 sustain vt.维持；遭受；承受住
句型 1.There is little doubt that Earth is getting warmer and warmer.(反复) 2．A warming ocean and atmosphere along with melting ice and rising sea levels provide evidence of a dramatic change in the global climate.(环境描写) 3．In 2013，a lot of people were shocked by a news photo of a dead polar bear that was found on Norway’s Arctic island of Svalbard.(情感描写) 4．It is our responsibility to seize every opportunity to educate everyone about global warming，along with its causes and impacts，because this is the most serious issue affecting all of us on this planet.(主旨升华) 5．Local officials were concerned that the pollution was damaging the natural environment and felt that urgent steps should be taken to restore the river’s original beauty.(情感描写)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
作为一个敏感的女孩，海伦不能忍受在陌生环境中的孤独。沉重的学习压力进一步加剧了她的困境。由于不知道如何释放自己的情绪，她正经历着一段痛苦的时光，她被极度的悲伤攫住了。她渴望着他人的帮助来摆脱这种令人窒息的境况。幸运的是，班长的关爱和支持使她度过了那段困难时期。逐渐地，海伦恢复了信心，决心不向任何困难屈服。她内心的孤独最终消融了，她的脸上露出了快乐的笑容。
Being 1.a sensitive girl，Helen couldn’t 2.tolerate being lonely in the unfamiliar surroundings.Heavy study pressures further 3.fueled her dilemma.Not knowing how to 4.release her emotions，she 5.was undergoing a painful time and she 6.was seized by extreme sorrow.She 7.was starving for others’ help to get rid of the choking situation.Luckily，the monitor’s care and support 8.sustained her through the difficult period.Gradually，Helen 9.restored her confidence，determined 10.not to submit herself to any difficulties.Her inner loneliness finally melted away，a happy smile brightening her face.

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