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Period 5
Writing
Adversity and courage
Unit 4
内容索引
写作一　应用文写作——书评
写作二　读后续写微技能
写作一　应用文写作——书评
我们读完一本书，想要就这本书发表一些看法，并把这些看法写成文章，这就是书评。书评属于夹叙夹议类写作范畴，要简单介绍图书的基本内容，同时，对其特点、风格、主要成就以及缺陷等给予简明扼要的评论。语言要言简意赅；点评要画龙点睛。
一、引出书目
1....by the English writer，...is one of the greatest fantasy novels.
英国作家……的……是最伟大的奇幻小说之一。
2.Published in...，it has sold...copies and has been translated into...languages.
该书于……年出版，已售出……册，并被翻译成……种语言。
3.I have read...and I’d like to share it with...
我读过……我想和……分享一下。
常用表达
4.The story/novel/work is written by...
这个故事/小说/作品的作者是……
5.Let me introduce... 让我介绍……
6.After it was published，it became famous all over the world. 这本书出版后就闻名于世。
二、作品内容
1.The novel is set in...这部小说以……为背景。
2.The story/novel is mainly about...
这个故事/小说主要是关于……
3.The plots of the story are so...that I can’t take my eyes off it.这个故事的情节是如此……，我目不转睛地盯着它。
4.The characters in this story are so...that most readers like them.这个故事中的人物是如此……，大多数读者都喜欢他们。
5.It was a very tough trip，and no one could imagine the danger ahead of them.
这是一次非常艰苦的旅行，没有人能想象他们将要面对的危险。
6.Although...got into a panic and there were many difficulties，
...managed to survive. 尽管……陷入恐慌，也有许多困难，但……设法活了下来。
三、阐述观点
1.This is a very...story and I have learned a lot from it. 这是一个非常……的故事，我从这本书中学到了很多。
2.I am deeply moved by...and I’m also inspired by... 我被……深深感动，也被……所激励。
3.Maybe the book review should be objective but...have/has to say this book touches...deeply.
也许书评应该是客观的，但……不得不说，这本书深深地触动了……
4.From the story，we have learned that...
从这个故事中，我们了解到……
请根据下面的提示写一篇书评。
1.欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们一起登上名为“坚忍号”的大船。途中“坚忍号”被冰山困住，大家弃船后逃到象岛。沙克尔顿驾船去寻求帮助。最后，尽管困难重重，船员们还是活了下来。
2.在这个故事里船员之间真诚的关心和爱以及他们在困难面前的忍耐力和毅力使我深受鼓舞。
3.从这个故事中我领悟到一个道理：无论遇到任何困难，都不要放弃！
典例演练
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1.做出承诺
2.上船
3.不幸的是
4.沉没；下沉
5.放弃
6.决定做某事
7.向某人寻求帮助
__________________
_________________
_____________
____
________
_______________
________________
make a commitment
go aboard the ship
unfortunately
sink
abandon
resolve to do sth
turn to sb for help
8.陷入恐慌
9.忍耐力；耐久力
10.毅力
11.灰心
______________
__________
____________
_________
get into a panic
endurance
perseverance
lose heart
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1.这个故事是关于1914－1916年欧内斯特·沙克尔顿第一次穿越南极洲的探险。
This story is about the 1914－1916 expedition by Ernest Shackleton ______________________________ Antarctica.
2.欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们登上名为“坚忍号”的大船。
Ernest Shackleton and __________________________ named Endurance.
to make the first land crossing of
his crew went aboard the ship
3.不幸的是，途中“坚忍号”被冰块困住，沉入大洋中。
_____________，on the way Endurance became stuck in the ice，_______
_____________.
4.在放弃那艘船后，他们逃到象岛上。
_________________________，they escaped to Elephant Island.
5.沙克尔顿承诺会救他们，因此他决定去寻求他人的帮助。
Shackleton ___________________ to save them，_____________________
________________.
Unfortunately
sinking
into the ocean
Having abandoned the ship
made a commitment
so he resolved to turn
to others for help
6.船员们虽然很害怕，但还是克服重重困难活了下来。
Although ____________________，the crew managed to survive despite numerous difficulties.
7.我被他们之间的关心和爱深深打动，也被他们面对困难的耐力和毅力所鼓舞。
I am deeply moved by the concern and love between them and _________
_____________________________________________________________.
they were frightened
I’m also
inspired by their endurance and perseverance in the face of difficulties
8.我从这个鼓舞人心的故事中学到了重要的一课。
I ______________________________ from the inspiring story.
9.如果将来我们遇到困难，我们决不灰心。
If _____________________________________________，we would never lose heart.
have learned an important lesson
we were to/should meet with difficulties in the future
第三步　句式升级
1.用as引导的倒装句改写句6。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.用虚拟语气的倒装句改写句9。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Frightened as they were，the crew managed to survive despite numerous difficulties.
Were we to meet with difficulties in the future/Should we meet with difficulties in the future，we would never give up.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80个词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
This story is about the 1914－1916 expedition by Ernest Shackleton to make the first land crossing of Antarctica.Let me introduce it to you.
Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship named Endurance.Unfortunately，on the way Endurance became stuck in the ice，sinking into the ocean.Having abandoned the ship，they escaped to Elephant Island.Shackleton made a commitment to save them，so he resolved to turn to others for help.Frightened as they were，the crew managed to survive despite numerous difficulties.
I am deeply moved by the concern and love between them and I’m also inspired by their endurance and perseverance in the face of difficulties.In a word，I have learned an important lesson from the inspiring story.That is，were we to meet with difficulties in the future，we would never lose heart.
假设你是李华，本学期你阅读了小说《了不起的盖茨比》(The Great Gatsby)。请根据提示用英语写一篇书评。
达标检测
基本信息 作者：美国作家 F.Scott Fitzgerald
背景：20世纪20年代，美国
故事情节 主人公Gatsby靠非法经营实现了他的美国梦，并爱上了Daisy。在Gatsby看来，Daisy是美好生活的象征，而实际上，Daisy自私、肤浅，并最终导致Gatsby走向了悲剧的结局。
评价 ……
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
参考范文
The novel The Great Gatsby is the representative work of American writer F.Scott Fitzgerald，which is a true reflection of the US in the 1920s and universally recognized as a literary classic.
The Great Gatsby displays the tragic story of Gatsby’s chasing after his dream.He makes his dream come true by illegal business.He falls in love with Daisy，who represents a beautiful life.However，in real life，she is far from what Gatsby imagines.She is such a selfish and shallow girl that she finally leads Gatsby to a sad ending.
As far as I am concerned，despite the fact that Gatsby’s efforts don’t pay off，I am deeply moved by his spirit of struggling to accomplish his goal and change his fate.
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写作二　读后续写微技能
读后续写中动作描写：眼部动作
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
常用词汇 重点动词 look 看，瞧(强调看的动作)　see 看见，看到(强调看的结果)　watch 观看，注视
stare 盯着看，凝视 glare 怒目而视 blink 眨眼
narrow 眯(眼) roll (眼睛)转动 shift 转移(目光)
shut 闭上(眼睛) observe 观察，注视
常用词汇 高级语块 tears well up泪水涌出来　　　
one’s eyes fall on...目光落在……上
look sb straight in the eye(s)直视某人
with one’s eyes fixed on...两眼盯着……
tears blur one’s eyes/vision泪水模糊了双眼/视线
eyes grow wide with horror惊恐地睁大了眼睛
squeeze one’s eyes shut闭上双眼 narrow one’s eyes眯起双眼
精美句式 She tried to sit up，her eyes fixed on Jean’s face.(独立主格)她试图坐起来，目光紧盯着Jean的脸。
His eyes grew wide with horror at what she had done.看到她所做的事，他惊恐地睁大了眼睛。
The dog’s hungry eyes fell on my sandwich.那条狗饥饿的目光落在了我的三明治上。
He turned his eyes to the door when he heard the handle turning.听到门把手转动的声音，他向门那边看去。
即时演练　读后续写情景运用
当约翰听着朋友讲述事情经过时，他怀疑地眯起了眼睛。他朋友的言语和肢体语言并不相符。随着讲述的继续，约翰惊讶地瞪大了眼睛。突然，他移开了目光，为自己的怀疑感到愧疚。在交谈过程中，他注意到朋友快速眨眼，或许这是紧张的表现。当他们道别时，约翰直视着朋友的眼睛，以此表达自己的信任。
As John listened to his friend’s story，he 1._________________ suspiciously.
His friend’s words and body language didn’t match.As the story went on,2.______
_______________________.Suddenly，he 3.______________，guilty for doubting.
During the conversation，he noticed his friend 4._______________，maybe due to nervousness.When they said goodbye，John 5.____________________________
_____ to show trust.
narrowed his eyes
John’s
eyes widened in surprise
shifted his eyes
blinking rapidly
looked his friend straight in the
eyes
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感 描写 cosy adj.温馨的；舒适的　　good/bad-tempered adj.脾气好的/坏的
genuine adj.真正的；真诚的；可信赖的
enthusiastic adj.热情的；热心的
selfish adj.自私的　　cruel adj.残酷的；残忍的；冷酷的
loyal adj.忠诚的；忠实的
miserable adj.痛苦的；令人难受的→miserably adv.痛苦地
bitter adj.严寒的；激烈而不愉快的；味苦的→bitterly adv.伤心地；愤怒地；极其
envy n.& vt.羡慕；妒忌→envious adj.妒忌的；羡慕的
commitment n.承诺；保证；奉献→committed adj.尽心尽力的；坚定的
词汇 动作 描写 sink vi.沉没；下沉；下降 vt.使下沉；使沉没　
abandon vt.舍弃；抛弃；放弃；遗弃
bark vi.& n.(狗)吠叫；吠叫声；厉声质问
resolve vi.& vt.决定；决心；解决(问题或困难)
句型 1.At the age of 19，I am fit and full of vigour.(人物描写)
2.And when the ship sank，our hearts sank with it.(情感描写)
3.Their genuine concern for others，their perseverance，and their resolve fill me with hope.(排比)
4.We felt so alone and desperate.(情感描写)
5.If it weren’t for sea animals，we would all starve.(虚拟语气)
6.When we were finally rescued，we felt such relief and joy that many of us could not hide our tears.(情感描写)
7.Our optimism and faith in Shackleton had helped us persevere in staying alive.(主旨升华)
Ⅲ.续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
当汤姆的妈妈得知儿子沉溺于电脑游戏，她的心一沉，伤心地哭了起来。接着，她勃然大怒，厉声质问汤姆：“你一直都是一个如此好脾气、真诚、热情、忠诚的孩子，其他人都羡慕你。是什么让你自暴自弃？”
When Tom’s mother learned that her son，Tom,1.________________
_______________,2.______________ and she 3._____________.Then，she exploded with anger and 4.________________________，“You are always such 5._________________________________________________________
_________.What is it that makes you give up on yourself？”
was abandoned to
computer games
her heart sank
wept bitterly
barked questions at Tom
a good-tempered，genuine，enthusiastic and loyal boy that others
envy you
汤姆痛苦地抽泣道：“我不知道如何应对沉重的学习压力。”听到这里，妈妈把汤姆揽入怀中，轻轻地拍着他的后背，喃喃细语道：“不要灰心，不管你遇到什么麻烦，我都会给你指点。你只有致力于学习，你才能取得进步。”
Tom 6.________________，“I don’t know how to 7.___________________
______________.” Hearing this，the mother gathered Tom into her arms and patted him on the back，murmuring，“Don’t lose heart.No matter what trouble you have，I’ll offer guidance to you. Only if 8.____________
_______________________ can you make progress.”
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sobbed miserably
deal with the heavy
study pressure
you are
committed to your study
本课结束Period 5　Writing
写作一　应用文写作——书评
我们读完一本书，想要就这本书发表一些看法，并把这些看法写成文章，这就是书评。书评属于夹叙夹议类写作范畴，要简单介绍图书的基本内容，同时，对其特点、风格、主要成就以及缺陷等给予简明扼要的评论。语言要言简意赅；点评要画龙点睛。
一、引出书目
1．...by the English writer，...is one of the greatest fantasy novels.
英国作家……的……是最伟大的奇幻小说之一。
2．Published in...，it has sold...copies and has been translated into...languages.
该书于……年出版，已售出……册，并被翻译成……种语言。
3．I have read...and I’d like to share it with...
我读过……我想和……分享一下。
4．The story/novel/work is written by...
这个故事/小说/作品的作者是……
5．Let me introduce... 让我介绍……
6．After it was published，it became famous all over the world. 这本书出版后就闻名于世。
二、作品内容
1．The novel is set in...这部小说以……为背景。
2．The story/novel is mainly about...
这个故事/小说主要是关于……
3．The plots of the story are so...that I can’t take my eyes off it.这个故事的情节是如此……，我目不转睛地盯着它。
4．The characters in this story are so...that most readers like them.这个故事中的人物是如此……，大多数读者都喜欢他们。
5．It was a very tough trip，and no one could imagine the danger ahead of them.
这是一次非常艰苦的旅行，没有人能想象他们将要面对的危险。
6．Although...got into a panic and there were many difficulties，...managed to survive. 尽管……陷入恐慌，也有许多困难，但……设法活了下来。
三、阐述观点
1．This is a very...story and I have learned a lot from it. 这是一个非常……的故事，我从这本书中学到了很多。
2．I am deeply moved by...and I’m also inspired by... 我被……深深感动，也被……所激励。
3．Maybe the book review should be objective but...have/has to say this book touches...deeply.
也许书评应该是客观的，但……不得不说，这本书深深地触动了……
4．From the story，we have learned that...
从这个故事中，我们了解到……
请根据下面的提示写一篇书评。
1．欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们一起登上名为“坚忍号”的大船。途中“坚忍号”被冰山困住，大家弃船后逃到象岛。沙克尔顿驾船去寻求帮助。最后，尽管困难重重，船员们还是活了下来。
2．在这个故事里船员之间真诚的关心和爱以及他们在困难面前的忍耐力和毅力使我深受鼓舞。
3．从这个故事中我领悟到一个道理：无论遇到任何困难，都不要放弃！
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1．做出承诺 make a commitment
2．上船 go aboard the ship
3．不幸的是 unfortunately
4．沉没；下沉 sink
5．放弃 abandon
6．决定做某事 resolve to do sth
7．向某人寻求帮助 turn to sb for help
8．陷入恐慌 get into a panic
9．忍耐力；耐久力 endurance
10．毅力 perseverance
11．灰心 lose heart
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1．这个故事是关于1914－1916年欧内斯特·沙克尔顿第一次穿越南极洲的探险。
This story is about the 1914－1916 expedition by Ernest Shackleton to make the first land crossing of Antarctica.
2．欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们登上名为“坚忍号”的大船。
Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship named Endurance.
3．不幸的是，途中“坚忍号”被冰块困住，沉入大洋中。
Unfortunately，on the way Endurance became stuck in the ice，sinking into the ocean.
4．在放弃那艘船后，他们逃到象岛上。
Having abandoned the ship，they escaped to Elephant Island.
5．沙克尔顿承诺会救他们，因此他决定去寻求他人的帮助。
Shackleton made a commitment to save them，so he resolved to turn to others for help.
6．船员们虽然很害怕，但还是克服重重困难活了下来。
Although they were frightened，the crew managed to survive despite numerous difficulties.
7．我被他们之间的关心和爱深深打动，也被他们面对困难的耐力和毅力所鼓舞。
I am deeply moved by the concern and love between them and I’m also inspired by their endurance and perseverance in the face of difficulties.
8．我从这个鼓舞人心的故事中学到了重要的一课。
I have learned an important lesson from the inspiring story.
9．如果将来我们遇到困难，我们决不灰心。
If we were to/should meet with difficulties in the future，we would never lose heart.
第三步　句式升级
1．用as引导的倒装句改写句6。
Frightened as they were，the crew managed to survive despite numerous difficulties.
2．用虚拟语气的倒装句改写句9。
Were we to meet with difficulties in the future/Should we meet with difficulties in the future，we would never give up.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80个词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
This story is about the 1914－1916 expedition by Ernest Shackleton to make the first land crossing of Antarctica.Let me introduce it to you.
Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship named Endurance.Unfortunately，on the way Endurance became stuck in the ice，sinking into the ocean.Having abandoned the ship，they escaped to Elephant Island.Shackleton made a commitment to save them，so he resolved to turn to others for help.Frightened as they were，the crew managed to survive despite numerous difficulties.
I am deeply moved by the concern and love between them and I’m also inspired by their endurance and perseverance in the face of difficulties.In a word，I have learned an important lesson from the inspiring story.That is，were we to meet with difficulties in the future，we would never lose heart.
假设你是李华，本学期你阅读了小说《了不起的盖茨比》(The Great Gatsby)。请根据提示用英语写一篇书评。
基本信息 作者：美国作家 F．Scott Fitzgerald 背景：20世纪20年代，美国
故事情节 主人公Gatsby靠非法经营实现了他的美国梦，并爱上了Daisy。在Gatsby看来，Daisy是美好生活的象征，而实际上，Daisy自私、肤浅，并最终导致Gatsby走向了悲剧的结局。
评价 ……
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
参考范文
The novel The Great Gatsby is the representative work of American writer F．Scott Fitzgerald，which is a true reflection of the US in the 1920s and universally recognized as a literary classic.
The Great Gatsby displays the tragic story of Gatsby’s chasing after his dream.He makes his dream come true by illegal business.He falls in love with Daisy，who represents a beautiful life.However，in real life，she is far from what Gatsby imagines.She is such a selfish and shallow girl that she finally leads Gatsby to a sad ending.
As far as I am concerned，despite the fact that Gatsby’s efforts don’t pay off，I am deeply moved by his spirit of struggling to accomplish his goal and change his fate.
写作二　读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
读后续写中动作描写：眼部动作
常用词汇 重点动词 look 看，瞧(强调看的动作)　　　see 看见，看到(强调看的结果)　　　watch 观看，注视 stare 盯着看，凝视 glare 怒目而视 blink 眨眼 narrow 眯(眼) roll (眼睛)转动 shift 转移(目光) shut 闭上(眼睛) observe 观察，注视
高级语块 tears well up泪水涌出来　　　　　　　　　　　 one’s eyes fall on...目光落在……上 look sb straight in the eye(s)直视某人 with one’s eyes fixed on...两眼盯着…… tears blur one’s eyes/vision泪水模糊了双眼/视线 eyes grow wide with horror惊恐地睁大了眼睛 squeeze one’s eyes shut闭上双眼 narrow one’s eyes眯起双眼
精美句式 She tried to sit up，her eyes fixed on Jean’s face.(独立主格)她试图坐起来，目光紧盯着Jean的脸。 His eyes grew wide with horror at what she had done.看到她所做的事，他惊恐地睁大了眼睛。 The dog’s hungry eyes fell on my sandwich.那条狗饥饿的目光落在了我的三明治上。 He turned his eyes to the door when he heard the handle turning.听到门把手转动的声音，他向门那边看去。
即时演练　读后续写情景运用
当约翰听着朋友讲述事情经过时，他怀疑地眯起了眼睛。他朋友的言语和肢体语言并不相符。随着讲述的继续，约翰惊讶地瞪大了眼睛。突然，他移开了目光，为自己的怀疑感到愧疚。在交谈过程中，他注意到朋友快速眨眼，或许这是紧张的表现。当他们道别时，约翰直视着朋友的眼睛，以此表达自己的信任。
As John listened to his friend’s story，he 1.narrowed his eyes suspiciously.His friend’s words and body language didn’t match.As the story went on,2.John’s eyes widened in surprise.Suddenly，he 3.shifted his eyes，guilty for doubting.During the conversation，he noticed his friend 4.blinking rapidly，maybe due to nervousness.When they said goodbye，John 5.looked his friend straight in the eyes to show trust.
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感 描写 cosy adj.温馨的；舒适的　　　　good/bad-tempered adj.脾气好的/坏的 genuine adj.真正的；真诚的；可信赖的 enthusiastic adj.热情的；热心的 selfish adj.自私的 cruel adj.残酷的；残忍的；冷酷的 loyal adj.忠诚的；忠实的 miserable adj.痛苦的；令人难受的→miserably adv.痛苦地 bitter adj.严寒的；激烈而不愉快的；味苦的→bitterly adv.伤心地；愤怒地；极其 envy n．& vt.羡慕；妒忌→envious adj.妒忌的；羡慕的 commitment n．承诺；保证；奉献→committed adj.尽心尽力的；坚定的
动作 描写 sink vi.沉没；下沉；下降 vt.使下沉；使沉没　　abandon vt.舍弃；抛弃；放弃；遗弃 bark vi.& n．(狗)吠叫；吠叫声；厉声质问 resolve vi.& vt.决定；决心；解决(问题或困难)
句型 1.At the age of 19，I am fit and full of vigour.(人物描写) 2．And when the ship sank，our hearts sank with it.(情感描写) 3．Their genuine concern for others，their perseverance，and their resolve fill me with hope.(排比) 4．We felt so alone and desperate.(情感描写) 5．If it weren’t for sea animals，we would all starve.(虚拟语气) 6．When we were finally rescued，we felt such relief and joy that many of us could not hide our tears.(情感描写) 7．Our optimism and faith in Shackleton had helped us persevere in staying alive.(主旨升华)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
当汤姆的妈妈得知儿子沉溺于电脑游戏，她的心一沉，伤心地哭了起来。接着，她勃然大怒，厉声质问汤姆：“你一直都是一个如此好脾气、真诚、热情、忠诚的孩子，其他人都羡慕你。是什么让你自暴自弃？”汤姆痛苦地抽泣道：“我不知道如何应对沉重的学习压力。”听到这里，妈妈把汤姆揽入怀中，轻轻地拍着他的后背，喃喃细语道：“不要灰心，不管你遇到什么麻烦，我都会给你指点。你只有致力于学习，你才能取得进步。”
When Tom’s mother learned that her son，Tom,1.was abandoned to computer games,2.her heart sank and she 3.wept bitterly.Then，she exploded with anger and 4.barked questions at Tom，“You are always such 5.a good-tempered，genuine，enthusiastic and loyal boy that others envy you.What is it that makes you give up on yourself？” Tom 6.sobbed miserably，“I don’t know how to 7.deal with the heavy study pressure.” Hearing this，the mother gathered Tom into her arms and patted him on the back，murmuring，“Don’t lose heart.No matter what trouble you have，I’ll offer guidance to you. Only if 8.you are committed to your study can you make progress.”

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