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B1U1
A new start
Writing a jounal entry
By the end of the class, students are able to...
learn to get the main idea and specific information of the sample journal entry;
learn to find out the elements and layout of a journal entry;
learn to write a journal entry about your first-week experiences at senior high;
learn to revise your own and others’ writing.
Enjoy a video: My school day
Warming up.
How was your first week at senior high
What happened during your first week at senior high
How did you feel
What do you think of the classes, the teachers and the classmates
How were the after-school activities
Obsevation.
What is a journal entry
entry: a piece of writing in a diary
journal: a written record of the things you do and see every day.
Activity 1. Read a journal entry and answer the questions.
What is the passage about
What happened in her physics class
What did she do after class
What’s the passage about
What happened in her physics class
What did she do after class
Activity 1. Answer the questions.
It’s about the author’s experiences during the first week at senior high.
She couldn’t take notes of everything the physics teacher said, but the teacher told her to stop taking notes and just listen. He said that thinking was more important than note-taking and memorising.
She hurried to the school skateboarding club, and bumped into a girl on the way. Then she tried skateboarding at the club and made friends with the girl she bumped into earlier.
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Para. Key points layout
P1
p2
P3
P4
Impression of the first week
An enjoyable class
After-school activities
and new friends
My feeling
Introduction
Main body
Main body
Ending
Activity 2. Fill in the blank.
Think of your own experiences of the first week at senior high and complete the notes.
Activity 3. Write & Share
Activity4. How to improve the structure of a journal.
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Activity 5. Important phrases
Find the following phrases in the journal and work out their meanings.
come to an end
go well
around the corner
feel at ease
pick up the courage
bump into
have one’s first try at sth.
look forward to
结束，终止
进展顺利
即将发生
感觉自在
鼓起勇气做某事
偶然遇见
初次尝试某事
期待，盼望
Activity 6. Important sentences
我正暗自希望没有人会注意到我，这时我突然听到有人叫我的名字。I ___________ secretly that nobody would notice me, ________ suddenly I heard my name called.
我站起来，满脸羞红，什么也说不出来。
I stood up, blushing, with nothing _____________my mouth.
并排坐着，他和我分享了一些提高英语水平的建议。
__________________ , he shared with me some tips on how to
improve my English.
was hoping
when
come out of
Sitting side-by-side
How time flies! I can’t believe the first week is _________________ (就要结束了). ____________________________(事情进展得很顺利), and there are one or two things in particular that have _____________
____________________________(给我留下了深刻的印象).
The English class on Thursday was _____________(令人难忘的).
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Activity 7. Reference paragragh
coming to an end
Things are going quite well
left a deep impression on me
unforgettable
How time flies! I can’t believe the first week is coming to an end (就要结束了). Things are going quite well (事情进展得很顺利), and there are one or two things in particular that have left a deep impression on me (给我留下了深刻的印象).
The English class on Thursday was unforgettable (令人难忘的). During the class, we were asked to give a short speech (做一个简短的演讲) about the first day at senior high. All my classmate were excited but I buried my head in my book. I was hoping secretly (暗自地) that nobody would notice me, when suddenly I heard my name called. I stood up, blushing, with nothing coming out of my mouth. I finally began to say something. Despite my trembling voice, I gave my first ever public speech in English.
After school that day, I decided to go to the English club to further practise my English. I believe that by practising more I can improve a lot. As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect (熟能生巧).”
While I was trying to pick up the courage to (鼓起勇气去) talk to someone, I saw a kind boy behind me. Sitting side-by-side, he shared with me some tips on how to improve my English. We had a lovely chat and soon became friends. The first week of senior high has been quite exciting, and I am looking forward to making the most of (期待着充分利用) senior high!
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Reference text
Assessment table
Content
Experiences Impression of the first week
An enjoyable class
After-school activities
How you made a new friend
Activity 8.
Correct format/layout
Correct tense
Rich expressions (various, proper)
Beautiful handwriting
Finish your journal entry according to the notes of Activity 6.
Thank you!

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