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Section Ⅴ
Writing Workshop
CONNECTIONS
UNIT 10
内容索引
Part 1　品读文本学写法
Part 2　熟悉技法练写作
品读文本学写法
Read the news report on P18 and choose the best answer.
1.Who attended the first Community Street Festival
A.People who were all families.
B.People who were mainly children.
C.People who came from 20 countries.
D.People who were from the nearby communities.
Activity 1　Read for details [细节把握]
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2.What can people enjoy in the event
A.Watch wonderful performances.
B.Enjoy delicious food and drink.
C.Communicate with people from different communities.
D.All of the above.
√
3.What was the most exciting part of the festival
A.Singing and dancing by the adults.
B.Food and drink served by outlets.
C.Performances by the famous singers.
D.Music and dance by a group of children.
√
4.What is people’s attitude towards the festival
A.Indifferent. B.Favorable.
C.Disapproval. D.Not mentioned.
√
Activity 2　Read for structures [文章架构]
The news report has three parts.Match each part with a function.
Part 1(Para.1)　　　　　　 A.Body
Part 2(Paras.2－3)　　　　 B.Round-up
Part 3(Para.4) 　　　　　 C.Lead
Find out sentences with Adverbs of Degree in the news report on P18.
Activity 3　Read for language features [增分靓句]
答案　(1)The festival was highly successful...
(2)The performers were rather good and well received by the public.
(3)People attending the event were mainly families.
(4)The acts appealing to children were particularly popular.
返 回
熟悉技法练写作
本单元的写作任务是写一篇新闻报道。新闻报道是关于最近发生的重要而新鲜的事情的报道或评述。它一般分为四个部分：标题(headline)、导语(introduction)、主体(body)和结语(end)。每部分特点如下：
1.标题是新闻报道的题目，是对有新闻价值内容的浓缩、概括、提炼和再创造。
2.导语是消息开头的第一段或第一句话，它简明扼要地揭示出报道的核心内容(包括时间、地点、人物、事件)。
3.主体是在导语之后对新闻的进一步扩展，补充更加详实的细节，使新闻报道内容更加充实。
4.结语一般是最后一句话或者一段话，通常对全文内容进行概括性的总结或对新闻事件的发展趋势作出预测。
新闻报道的语言要正式简洁；时态一般是一般过去时和一般现在时结合。为了让读者对整个事件有一个清楚的了解，新闻报道必须包含五个要素，即时间(when)、地点(where)、原因(why)、人物(who)、事件(what)。
常用表达
1.常用开头语
(1)It is reported that.../As is reported，...据报道……
(2)On the morning of...，China successfully sent up...
在……早上，中国成功地发射……
(3)With the rapid increase of China’s population，...problem is becoming more and more serious.
随着中国人口的快速增加，……问题越来越严重。
2.主体部分常用表达
(1)Witnesses said...lasted for...hours.目击者说……持续了……个小时。
(2)Further details of what happened are still unclear.
事件的进一步细节尚不清楚。
(3)The whole nation was shocked at the news.
听到这个消息全国人民很震惊。
(4)The conference urges the governments of all countries to take necessary measures to get rid of pollution.
大会敦促各国政府采取必要措施消除污染。
3.常用结束语
(1)In my opinion，measures should be taken by the government...
我认为，政府应该采取措施……
(2)It is high time that the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve...
有关当局是时候该采取恰当措施来解决……
(3)I believe we can certainly overcome the disaster with the public and the government working together.
我相信在公众和政府的共同努力下我们一定能解决这场灾难。
分步演练
假设你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，最近你校组织留学生到敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。假设你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则新闻报道。
1.时间、地点；
2.活动内容：打扫卫生、表演节目；
3.留学生的体会。
注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一步　审题谋篇
审题
写作要求是写一篇新闻报道，报道在敬老院过重阳节的活动。写作时应注意下面几点：
1.确定文体：这是一篇新闻报道。
2.主体时态：以一般过去时为主。
3.主体人称：以第三人称为主。
谋篇
第一段：导语：简要叙述报道的核心内容；
第二段：主体：具体说明活动的细节；
第三段：结语：对该事件作出评价和总结。
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(含本单元词汇)
1.出发
2.继续做某事
3.花费时间做……
4.难忘的
5.吸引某人
6.突然大笑
__________
_________________
_____________________
_____________
____________
___________________________________
set out/off
proceed to do sth
spend time (in) doing...
unforgettable
appeal to sb
burst into laughter/burst out laughing
连词成句
1.On the Double Ninth Festival，__________________________________
________.
在重阳节这一天，六个留学生去拜访了敬老院。
2.The six foreign students _________________________.
这六个留学生在我们学校学习。
3.They ____________________________________________ and arrived an hour later.
他们上午8：30乘公交车出发去敬老院，一小时后到达。
six foreign students visited the nursing
home
are studying in our school
set out for the nursing home by bus at 8：30 am
4._________________，they presented the elderly with flowers and fruit.
一到达，他们就向老人献上鲜花和水果。
5.After everything was done，they _________________________________
_________________________.
做完这些后，他们一起唱歌、跳舞以及表演节目。
6.They all found the visit __________________________.
他们都觉得这次拜访是一次难忘的经历。
On/Upon arrival
spent some time together singing，
dancing and performing
an unforgettable experience
7.Through the experience，_______________________________ and realized the elderly need to be treated with respect.
通过这次经历，他们对这个节日有了更多的了解，同时也意识到老人需要得到尊重。
they knew more about the festival
第三步　句式升级
1.将句1和句2用定语从句合并。
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________2.将句5用with复合结构改写。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
On the Double Ninth Festival，six foreign students who are studying in our school visited the nursing home.
With everything done，they spent some time together singing，dancing and performing.
3.将句6和句7用非限制性定语从句和not only...but also...句式合并。
_______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
They all found the visit an unforgettable experience，through which they not only knew more about the festival but also realized the elderly need to be treated with respect.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语新闻报道。
参考范文
Foreign Students Spent the Double Ninth Festival with the Elderly
On the Double Ninth Festival，six foreign students who are studying in our school visited the nursing home.
They set out for the nursing home by bus at 8：30 am and arrived an hour later.Upon their arrival，they presented the elderly with flowers and fruit.And then they proceeded to help the elderly clean their rooms and sweep the floors.With everything done，they spent some fun time together singing，dancing and performing，which appealed to them greatly and made them burst into laughter.
They all found the visit an unforgettable experience，through which they not only knew more about the festival but also realized the elderly need to be treated with respect.
假定你是李华，你校上周举办了针对外国交换生的中国国画大赛，请你为校英文报撰写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.比赛过程及结果；
2.比赛影响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.标题已给出，不计入总词数。
达标检测
A Traditional Chinese Painting Contest for Exchange Students
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文
A Traditional Chinese Painting Contest for Exchange Students
Last week witnessed a traditional Chinese painting contest among foreign exchange students in our school.
More than 50 candidates actively participated and submitted their remarkable entries，including landscape painting and flower and bird painting works.After a careful selection process,20 outstanding works were awarded for their innovative patterns and fantastic skills，which are now on display on the school website.
返 回
The contest turns out to be a big hit.Not only does it provide a platform for exchange students to showcase their talent，but it also further stimulates their eagerness to deepen their understanding of traditional Chinese culture.
本课结束Section Ⅴ　Writing Workshop
Activity 1　Read for details [细节把握]
Read the news report on P18 and choose the best answer.
1．Who attended the first Community Street Festival
A．People who were all families.
B．People who were mainly children.
C．People who came from 20 countries.
D．People who were from the nearby communities.
答案　D
2．What can people enjoy in the event
A．Watch wonderful performances.
B．Enjoy delicious food and drink.
C．Communicate with people from different communities.
D．All of the above.
答案　D
3．What was the most exciting part of the festival
A．Singing and dancing by the adults.
B．Food and drink served by outlets.
C．Performances by the famous singers.
D．Music and dance by a group of children.
答案　D
4．What is people’s attitude towards the festival
A．Indifferent. B．Favorable.
C．Disapproval. D．Not mentioned.
答案　B
Activity 2　Read for structures [文章架构]
The news report has three parts.Match each part with a function.
Part 1(Para.1)　　　　　　A．Body
Part 2(Paras.2－3)　　　　B．Round-up
Part 3(Para.4) 　　　　　　C．Lead
答案　Part 1　C　Part 2　A　Part 3　B
Activity 3　Read for language features [增分靓句]
Find out sentences with Adverbs of Degree in the news report on P18.
答案　(1)The festival was highly successful...
(2)The performers were rather good and well received by the public.
(3)People attending the event were mainly families.
(4)The acts appealing to children were particularly popular.
本单元的写作任务是写一篇新闻报道。新闻报道是关于最近发生的重要而新鲜的事情的报道或评述。它一般分为四个部分：标题(headline)、导语(introduction)、主体(body)和结语(end)。每部分特点如下：
1．标题是新闻报道的题目，是对有新闻价值内容的浓缩、概括、提炼和再创造。
2．导语是消息开头的第一段或第一句话，它简明扼要地揭示出报道的核心内容(包括时间、地点、人物、事件)。
3．主体是在导语之后对新闻的进一步扩展，补充更加详实的细节，使新闻报道内容更加充实。
4．结语一般是最后一句话或者一段话，通常对全文内容进行概括性的总结或对新闻事件的发展趋势作出预测。
新闻报道的语言要正式简洁；时态一般是一般过去时和一般现在时结合。为了让读者对整个事件有一个清楚的了解，新闻报道必须包含五个要素，即时间(when)、地点(where)、原因(why)、人物(who)、事件(what)。
1．常用开头语
(1)It is reported that.../As is reported，...据报道……
(2)On the morning of...，China successfully sent up...
在……早上，中国成功地发射……
(3)With the rapid increase of China’s population，...problem is becoming more and more serious.
随着中国人口的快速增加，……问题越来越严重。
2．主体部分常用表达
(1)Witnesses said...lasted for...hours.目击者说……持续了……个小时。
(2)Further details of what happened are still unclear.
事件的进一步细节尚不清楚。
(3)The whole nation was shocked at the news.听到这个消息全国人民很震惊。
(4)The conference urges the governments of all countries to take necessary measures to get rid of pollution.
大会敦促各国政府采取必要措施消除污染。
3．常用结束语
(1)In my opinion，measures should be taken by the government...
我认为，政府应该采取措施……
(2)It is high time that the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve...
有关当局是时候该采取恰当措施来解决……
(3)I believe we can certainly overcome the disaster with the public and the government working together.
我相信在公众和政府的共同努力下我们一定能解决这场灾难。
假设你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，最近你校组织留学生到敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。假设你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则新闻报道。
1．时间、地点；
2．活动内容：打扫卫生、表演节目；
3．留学生的体会。
注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一步　审题谋篇
审题
写作要求是写一篇新闻报道，报道在敬老院过重阳节的活动。写作时应注意下面几点：
1．确定文体：这是一篇新闻报道。
2．主体时态：以一般过去时为主。
3．主体人称：以第三人称为主。
谋篇
第一段：导语：简要叙述报道的核心内容；
第二段：主体：具体说明活动的细节；
第三段：结语：对该事件作出评价和总结。
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(含本单元词汇)
1．出发set out/off
2．继续做某事proceed to do sth
3．花费时间做……spend time (in) doing...
4．难忘的unforgettable
5．吸引某人appeal to sb
6．突然大笑burst into laughter/burst out laughing
连词成句
1．On the Double Ninth Festival，six foreign students visited the nursing home.
在重阳节这一天，六个留学生去拜访了敬老院。
2．The six foreign students are studying in our school.
这六个留学生在我们学校学习。
3．They set out for the nursing home by bus at 8：30 am and arrived an hour later.
他们上午8：30乘公交车出发去敬老院，一小时后到达。
4．On/Upon arrival，they presented the elderly with flowers and fruit.
一到达，他们就向老人献上鲜花和水果。
5．After everything was done，they spent some time together singing，dancing and performing.
做完这些后，他们一起唱歌、跳舞以及表演节目。
6．They all found the visit an unforgettable experience.
他们都觉得这次拜访是一次难忘的经历。
7．Through the experience，they knew more about the festival and realized the elderly need to be treated with respect.
通过这次经历，他们对这个节日有了更多的了解，同时也意识到老人需要得到尊重。
第三步　句式升级
1．将句1和句2用定语从句合并。
On the Double Ninth Festival，six foreign students who are studying in our school visited the nursing home.
2．将句5用with复合结构改写。
With everything done，they spent some time together singing，dancing and performing.
3．将句6和句7用非限制性定语从句和not only...but also...句式合并。
They all found the visit an unforgettable experience，through which they not only knew more about the festival but also realized the elderly need to be treated with respect.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语新闻报道。
参考范文
Foreign Students Spent the Double Ninth Festival with the Elderly
On the Double Ninth Festival，six foreign students who are studying in our school visited the nursing home.
They set out for the nursing home by bus at 8：30 am and arrived an hour later.Upon their arrival，they presented the elderly with flowers and fruit.And then they proceeded to help the elderly clean their rooms and sweep the floors.With everything done，they spent some fun time together singing，dancing and performing，which appealed to them greatly and made them burst into laughter.
They all found the visit an unforgettable experience，through which they not only knew more about the festival but also realized the elderly need to be treated with respect.
假定你是李华，你校上周举办了针对外国交换生的中国国画大赛，请你为校英文报撰写一篇报道，内容包括：
1．比赛过程及结果；
2．比赛影响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．标题已给出，不计入总词数。
A Traditional Chinese Painting Contest for Exchange Students
参考范文
A Traditional Chinese Painting Contest for Exchange Students
Last week witnessed a traditional Chinese painting contest among foreign exchange students in our school.
More than 50 candidates actively participated and submitted their remarkable entries，including landscape painting and flower and bird painting works.After a careful selection process,20 outstanding works were awarded for their innovative patterns and fantastic skills，which are now on display on the school website.
The contest turns out to be a big hit.Not only does it provide a platform for exchange students to showcase their talent，but it also further stimulates their eagerness to deepen their understanding of traditional Chinese culture.

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