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Section Ⅴ
Writing Workshop
CONFLICT AND COMPROMISE
UNIT 11
内容索引
Part 1　品读文本学写法
Part 2　熟悉技法练写作
品读文本学写法
Read the passage on P40 carefully and choose the best answer.
1.Which is NOT mentioned in the passage as unhealthy product
A.Fast food.
B.Tobacco.
C.Computer game.
D.Alcohol.
Activity 1　Read for details [细节把握]
√
2.According to paragraph 2，which is the second factor that causes death in some countries
A.Obesity.
B.Smoking.
C.Drinking alcohol.
D.Unhealthy product.
√
3.How is the passage mainly developed
A.By inferring.
B.By listing examples.
C.By making comparisons.
D.By analyzing causes and effects.
√
4.Which opinion might the author agree with
A.The money made from unhealthy products should be used for charity
　work.
B.Banning TV advertisements for unhealthy products is only beneficial to
　individuals.
C.Advertisements for unhealthy products and activities don’t have a bad
　influence on children.
D.The government should take stricter measures to ban advertisements
　for unhealthy products.
√
Activity 2　Read for structures [文章架构]
Complete the structure of the text by putting the different parts in the correct order.
d
a
b
c
Read the passage on P40 carefully again and find out the persuasive sentences.
Activity 3　Read for language features [增分靓句]
答案　1.Undoubtedly，unhealthy products harm our health.
2.It is clearly desirable to limit TV advertisements for fast food.　
3.However，surely this is a false argument.
4.Furthermore，it is not right to make money from activities which harm human health.
5.To conclude，laws to ban TV advertisements for unhealthy products are beneficial to society.
返 回
熟悉技法练写作
本单元的写作任务是写一篇正反观点对比类议论文。议论文是对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论，表明自己的观点和看法的一种文体。论点、论据和论证是议论文的三要素，论点是作者对所论问题所持的见解和主张；论据是用来证明论点的理由和根据；论证就是用论据来证明论点的过程。一般来说，正反观点类议论文每段应有主题句(topic sentence)，结尾往往会提出自己的看法、意见或建议，表示对某一现象或论点的赞成或反对。此类议论文常用以下形式安排文章：
【注意事项】
1.论点要鲜明；论据要充分；论证要条理清晰。
2.文章安排逻辑性要强，推理要严密。
3.主要使用现在时态。
4.结合题目要求阐述相关的观点，切忌随意发挥。
常用表达
1.引出讨论话题
(1)Recently we have had a heated discussion on...最近我们就……进行了激烈的讨论。
(2)According to a recent survey...
依照最近的一项调查……
(3)Opinions are divided on the question.
在这个问题上意见有分歧。
2.陈述正/反方观点及论据(理由)
(1)Some students are for the idea，while others think otherwise.
一些学生赞成这个想法，而另一些学生则不这么认为。
(2)However，there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.
然而，有很多人对这件事持不同的看法。
(3)It has more disadvantages than advantages.它的弊大于利。
(4)Some hold the view that...，while others think that...
有些人认为……，然而另一些人认为……。
3.归纳总结或发表自己的观点
(1)Therefore，we can draw the conclusion that...因此，我们可以得出……的结论。
(2)I hold the belief that...我相信……
(3)Taking everything into consideration，we should make good use of the precious resources.
考虑到一切，我们应该好好利用宝贵的资源。
(4)As far as I am concerned...就我而言……
4.连接词汇与句式
(1)表示并列：what’s more，in addition，as well，besides，furthermore，moreover，what’s worse
(2)表示因果：therefore，for this reason，thus，consequently
(3)表示转折：but，however，on the contrary，instead
(4)表示时间顺序：later，afterwards，from then on，eventually，in the meantime，then，at the same time，after a while，at present，after that，finally
(5)表示列举：first，to begin with，secondly，first of all，then，next，finally
(6)举例说明：such as，for example，for instance，take...for example
(7)表示让步：nevertheless，still
(8)表示对比：on the contrary，in contrast
(9)陈述事实：in fact，actually，as a matter of fact，to tell you the truth
(10)表示总结：in a word，in short，to sum up，in conclusion，on the whole，to conclude，in brief，in summary，in general，all in all
(11)表示意义重复：that’s to say，in other words，to put it in another way，to put it differently，similarly
(12)表示强调：above all，more importantly，indeed，without any doubt
分步演练
当前不少文学作品被改编成电影，有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or Book，Which Do You Prefer？”为题，按照下列要点写一篇80词左右英语短文。
1.看电影：省时、有趣、易懂；
2.读原著：细节更多、语言优美；
3.我的看法及理由。
参考词汇：原著original work/book in the original
第一步　审题谋篇
审题
写作要求是写一篇对比正反观点的议论文，对比选择看电影和选择读原著的不同观点。写作时应注意下面几点：
1.确定文体：这是一篇对比正反观点的议论文，写作时注意议论文的写作特点。
2.主体时态：以一般现在时为主。
3.主体人称：以第一和第三人称为主。
谋篇
本文是一篇正反观点对比类议论文，内容可分为三段。论点要鲜明，论据要有说服力。
第一段(引言段)：简洁明了地提出问题或现象；
第二段(主体段)：分别提出并论证正反两方观点与论据；
第三段(结尾段)：用一两句话明确阐述自己的观点，并发出呼吁或号召。
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(含本单元词汇)
1.详细的信息
2.生动优美
3.热衷于
4.更喜欢
5.一些人……其他人……
6.就个人而言
___________________
__________________
___________
__________________________
______________
________________________________
detailed information
vivid and beautiful
be keen on
prefer/have a preference for
some...others...
personally/as far as I am concerned
7.坚信
8.以……为原型
9.改编自
______________
____________
____________
firmly believe
be based on
adapt from
连词成句
1.Films __________________________ or books in the original，which do you prefer
你更喜欢原著还是由其改编的电影？
2.As to this question，_____________________________________.
对于这个问题，不同的人有不同的观点。
3.Some of us argue that __________________________________________
_____________.
我们中的一些人认为看电影比看原著更好。
which are based on books
different people have different opinions
it is better to see the film than to read the book in
the original
4.This is because it takes less time _________________________________
________.
这是因为通过电影来了解整个故事所需时间更少。
5. _____________________________________________________________
但是，其他人持相反的观点。
6.They think that they ________________________________ from the original book.
他们认为他们能从原著中获得更多详细信息。
to understand the whole story through
a film
However，others have just the opposite opinion.
can get more detailed information
7. _____________________________________________________________
就我个人而言，我更喜欢读原著。
8.I think reading originals ________________________________________
______ and not to be influenced by the adaptations.
我认为读原著让我能更好地理解作者的思想，并且不受改编的影响。
Personally，I have a preference for reading the originals.
enables me to better understand the writer’s
idea
第三步　句式升级
1.将句1中的定语从句改成过去分词作定语。
_______________________________________________________________
2.将句2改为when it comes to...结构。
_______________________________________________________________3.用The reason is that...句型改写句4。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Films based on books or books in the original，which do you prefer
When it comes to this question，different people have different opinions.
The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story through a film.
4.用同位语从句把句5和句6合并成一个句子。
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________ 5.用现在分词作状语把句7和句8合并成一个句子。
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________
However，others have just the opposite opinion that they can get more detailed information from the original book.
Personally，I have a preference for reading the originals，believing that it enables me to better understand the writer’s idea and not to be influenced by the adaptations.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。
参考范文
Film or Book，Which Do You Prefer
Films based on books or books in the original，which do you prefer？When it comes to this question，different people have different opinions.
Some of us argue that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story through a film.Besides，the film is usually more interesting，and it is easier to follow.However，others have just the opposite opinion that they can get more detailed information from the original book.Meanwhile，the language in the book is possibly more vivid and beautiful.
Personally，I have a preference for reading the originals，believing that it enables me to better understand the writer’s idea and not to be influenced by the adaptations.
假如你是红星中学高二学生李华，请你给某英文报社编辑写一封信，告诉他你校发起的一次有关出国学习的讨论，信的内容包括：
1.介绍讨论的相关内容(如留学的支持者与反对者的观点等)；
2.表明你自己的观点。
注意：1.词数80个左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
达标检测
参考范文　
Dear Editor，
I’m writing to tell you a discussion in our school about whether to study at home or abroad.
With the development of society，many people apply to study abroad at present.On the one hand，many people side with those (who are) studying abroad.As far as they are concerned，not only does being exposed to foreign cultures help to gain a global perspective，but also it strengthens language competence.On the other hand，
there is no denying that studying abroad will cost an arm and a leg.
Initially，people don’t know how to behave themselves if they are not mature enough.With no relatives or friends comforting and motivating them，they will have great difficulty making an adaptation to the unfamiliar surroundings.
As far as I know，whether to study abroad or not depends on what expectations you have of yourself.
Looking forward to knowing your opinion.
Yours，
Li Hua
返 回
本课结束Section Ⅴ　Writing Workshop
Activity 1　Read for details [细节把握]
Read the passage on P40 carefully and choose the best answer.
1．Which is NOT mentioned in the passage as unhealthy product
A．Fast food. B．Tobacco.
C．Computer game. D．Alcohol.
答案　C
2．According to paragraph 2，which is the second factor that causes death in some countries
A．Obesity. B．Smoking.
C．Drinking alcohol. D．Unhealthy product.
答案　A
3．How is the passage mainly developed
A．By inferring.
B．By listing examples.
C．By making comparisons.
D．By analyzing causes and effects.
答案　D
4．Which opinion might the author agree with
A．The money made from unhealthy products should be used for charity work.
B．Banning TV advertisements for unhealthy products is only beneficial to individuals.
C．Advertisements for unhealthy products and activities don’t have a bad influence on children.
D．The government should take stricter measures to ban advertisements for unhealthy products.
答案　D
Activity 2　Read for structures [文章架构]
Complete the structure of the text by putting the different parts in the correct order.
Activity 3　Read for language features [增分靓句]
Read the passage on P40 carefully again and find out the persuasive sentences.
答案　1.Undoubtedly，unhealthy products harm our health.　2.It is clearly desirable to limit TV advertisements for fast food.　3.However，surely this is a false argument.　4.Furthermore，it is not right to make money from activities which harm human health.　5.To conclude，laws to ban TV advertisements for unhealthy products are beneficial to society.
本单元的写作任务是写一篇正反观点对比类议论文。议论文是对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论，表明自己的观点和看法的一种文体。论点、论据和论证是议论文的三要素，论点是作者对所论问题所持的见解和主张；论据是用来证明论点的理由和根据；论证就是用论据来证明论点的过程。一般来说，正反观点类议论文每段应有主题句(topic sentence)，结尾往往会提出自己的看法、意见或建议，表示对某一现象或论点的赞成或反对。此类议论文常用以下形式安排文章：
注意事项
1．论点要鲜明；论据要充分；论证要条理清晰。
2．文章安排逻辑性要强，推理要严密。
3．主要使用现在时态。
4．结合题目要求阐述相关的观点，切忌随意发挥。
1．引出讨论话题
(1)Recently we have had a heated discussion on...最近我们就……进行了激烈的讨论。
(2)According to a recent survey...
依照最近的一项调查……
(3)Opinions are divided on the question.
在这个问题上意见有分歧。
2．陈述正/反方观点及论据(理由)
(1)Some students are for the idea，while others think otherwise.
一些学生赞成这个想法，而另一些学生则不这么认为。
(2)However，there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.
然而，有很多人对这件事持不同的看法。
(3)It has more disadvantages than advantages.它的弊大于利。
(4)Some hold the view that...，while others think that...
有些人认为……，然而另一些人认为……。
3．归纳总结或发表自己的观点
(1)Therefore，we can draw the conclusion that...因此，我们可以得出……的结论。
(2)I hold the belief that...我相信……
(3)Taking everything into consideration，we should make good use of the precious resources.
考虑到一切，我们应该好好利用宝贵的资源。
(4)As far as I am concerned...就我而言……
4．连接词汇与句式
(1)表示并列：what’s more，in addition，as well，besides，furthermore，moreover，what’s worse
(2)表示因果：therefore，for this reason，thus，consequently
(3)表示转折：but，however，on the contrary，instead
(4)表示时间顺序：later，afterwards，from then on，eventually，in the meantime，then，at the same time，after a while，at present，after that，finally
(5)表示列举：first，to begin with，secondly，first of all，then，next，finally
(6)举例说明：such as，for example，for instance，take...for example
(7)表示让步：nevertheless，still
(8)表示对比：on the contrary，in contrast
(9)陈述事实：in fact，actually，as a matter of fact，to tell you the truth
(10)表示总结：in a word，in short，to sum up，in conclusion，on the whole，to conclude，in brief，in summary，in general，all in all
(11)表示意义重复：that’s to say，in other words，to put it in another way，to put it differently，similarly
(12)表示强调：above all，more importantly，indeed，without any doubt
当前不少文学作品被改编成电影，有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or Book，Which Do You Prefer？”为题，按照下列要点写一篇80词左右英语短文。
1．看电影：省时、有趣、易懂；
2．读原著：细节更多、语言优美；
3．我的看法及理由。
参考词汇：原著original work/book in the original
第一步　审题谋篇
审题
写作要求是写一篇对比正反观点的议论文，对比选择看电影和选择读原著的不同观点。写作时应注意下面几点：
1．确定文体：这是一篇对比正反观点的议论文，写作时注意议论文的写作特点。
2．主体时态：以一般现在时为主。
3．主体人称：以第一和第三人称为主。
谋篇
本文是一篇正反观点对比类议论文，内容可分为三段。论点要鲜明，论据要有说服力。
第一段(引言段)：简洁明了地提出问题或现象；
第二段(主体段)：分别提出并论证正反两方观点与论据；
第三段(结尾段)：用一两句话明确阐述自己的观点，并发出呼吁或号召。
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(含本单元词汇)
1．详细的信息detailed information
2．生动优美vivid and beautiful
3．热衷于be keen on
4．更喜欢 prefer/have a preference for
5．一些人……其他人…… some...others...
6．就个人而言personally/as far as I am concerned
7．坚信firmly believe
8．以……为原型be based on
9．改编自adapt from
连词成句
1．Films which are based on books or books in the original，which do you prefer
你更喜欢原著还是由其改编的电影？
2．As to this question，different people have different opinions.
对于这个问题，不同的人有不同的观点。
3．Some of us argue that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.
我们中的一些人认为看电影比看原著更好。
4．This is because it takes less time to understand the whole story through a film.
这是因为通过电影来了解整个故事所需时间更少。
5．However，others have just the opposite opinion.
但是，其他人持相反的观点。
6．They think that they can get more detailed information from the original book.
他们认为他们能从原著中获得更多详细信息。
7．Personally，I have a preference for reading the originals.
就我个人而言，我更喜欢读原著。
8．I think reading originals enables me to better understand the writer’s idea and not to be influenced by the adaptations.
我认为读原著让我能更好地理解作者的思想，并且不受改编的影响。
第三步　句式升级
1．将句1中的定语从句改成过去分词作定语。
Films based on books or books in the original，which do you prefer
2．将句2改为when it comes to...结构。
When it comes to this question，different people have different opinions.
3．用The reason is that...句型改写句4。
The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story through a film.
4．用同位语从句把句5和句6合并成一个句子。
However，others have just the opposite opinion that they can get more detailed information from the original book.
5．用现在分词作状语把句7和句8合并成一个句子。
Personally，I have a preference for reading the originals，believing that it enables me to better understand the writer’s idea and not to be influenced by the adaptations.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。
参考范文
Film or Book，Which Do You Prefer
Films based on books or books in the original，which do you prefer？When it comes to this question，different people have different opinions.
Some of us argue that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story through a film.Besides，the film is usually more interesting，and it is easier to follow.However，others have just the opposite opinion that they can get more detailed information from the original book.Meanwhile，the language in the book is possibly more vivid and beautiful.
Personally，I have a preference for reading the originals，believing that it enables me to better understand the writer’s idea and not to be influenced by the adaptations.
假如你是红星中学高二学生李华，请你给某英文报社编辑写一封信，告诉他你校发起的一次有关出国学习的讨论，信的内容包括：
1．介绍讨论的相关内容(如留学的支持者与反对者的观点等)；
2．表明你自己的观点。
注意：1.词数80个左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考范文　
Dear Editor，
I’m writing to tell you a discussion in our school about whether to study at home or abroad.
With the development of society，many people apply to study abroad at present.On the one hand，many people side with those (who are) studying abroad.As far as they are concerned，not only does being exposed to foreign cultures help to gain a global perspective，but also it strengthens language competence.On the other hand，there is no denying that studying abroad will cost an arm and a leg.Initially，people don’t know how to behave themselves if they are not mature enough.With no relatives or friends comforting and motivating them，they will have great difficulty making an adaptation to the unfamiliar surroundings.
As far as I know，whether to study abroad or not depends on what expectations you have of yourself.
Looking forward to knowing your opinion.
Yours，
Li Hua

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