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Section Ⅴ　Writing——描述一次经历
[语料积累]
首段:开门见山,引入话题
1.Last Sunday when my parents went out shopping,a good idea occurred to me:why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning
上周日,当我父母出去购物时,我突然想到一个好主意:为什么不彻底打扫一下屋子呢
2.Last Sunday witnessed an exciting party where everyone was dressed to the nines and the atmosphere was electric.
上周日,我们见证了一场激动人心的聚会,每个人都打扮得漂漂亮亮,气氛一片热烈。
3.There are many wonderful experiences I am proud of in my life,of which one impresses me most.
在我的生活中有很多精彩的经历,其中一次最让我印象深刻。
4.In order to leave some impressive memories for all of us before graduation,our class made a special video to express our appreciation to our school.
为了在毕业前给我们所有人留下深刻印象,我们班制作了一个特殊的视频来表达我们对学校的感激。
主体:具体叙述发生的事情
1.I put all the books,newspapers and other things in place,then wiped the dust off all the furniture,and at last swept the floors.
我把所有的书、报纸和其他东西都有条理地放好,然后把家具上的灰尘都擦掉了,最后打扫了地板。
2.One group was responsible for picking fruits,the other packed up the fruits.
一组负责采摘水果,另一组打包水果。
3.Inspired by the fantastic scenery,I determined to paint a landscape featuring a calm lake surrounded by vibrant flowers and solemn trees.
受到奇妙风景的启发,我决定画一幅风景画,画的亮点是一个宁静的湖泊,湖泊周围是生机勃勃的花朵和庄严的树木。
尾段:表达感受或打算
1.Through this activity,we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is.
通过这次活动,我们知道农民有多辛苦、食物有多珍贵。
2.What really counts is the enjoyment the match itself brought us and awareness of teamwork it promoted in us.
真正重要的是比赛本身给我们带来的乐趣和团队意识的提高。
3.In a word,success is important,and so is failure,because it’s the mother of success.
总之,成功是重要的,失败也是,因为失败乃成功之母。
[典题示例]
假定你是李华,上周末你和同学去参加了扬州市美术馆主办的印象派画展活动,请你给美国朋友 Toby写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
1.参观内容;2.你的感想。
参考词汇:Impressionist art exhibition 印象派画展
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Toby,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you have similar experience Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
1.审题谋篇
(1)开头:________________________________________;
(2)主体:________________________________________;
(3)结尾:________________________________________。
交代参加画展活动的背景
叙述参加画展活动的内容
发表对参加画展活动的感想
2.要点翻译
①Last weekend,I attended an Impressionist art exhibition,which _____________________________________________ Yangzhou Art Museum with some classmates.
上周末,我和一些同学一起参加了扬州美术馆举办的印象派艺术展。
②We _______________________________________ the vibrant colors and loose brushstrokes of Monet,Renoir,and other masters.
我们被莫奈、雷诺阿和其他大师的鲜艳的色彩和大胆的笔触吸引。
was hosted by
were fascinated by
③It was like _______________________________________ of light and shadow,and captured fleeting moments of beauty.
这就像走进一个光影交织的世界,捕捉到转瞬即逝的美丽瞬间。
④The experience ____________________________________________ art and its ability to transcend borders and time.
这段经历加深了我对艺术及其超越国界和时间的能力的欣赏。
⑤I _______________________________________ the artists’ emotions and the natural scenes they portrayed.
我感到与艺术家的情感和他们描绘的自然场景有着深刻的联系。
stepping into a world
deepened my appreciation for
felt a profound connection to
3.词句升级
(1)用分词短语作定语升级句①
Last weekend,I attended an Impressionist art exhibition __________________________________________________________.
(2)用分词短语作状语升级句③
It was like stepping into a world of light and shadow,
______________________________________________________.
hosted by Yangzhou Art Museum with some classmates
capturing fleeting moments of beauty
4.连句成篇
【参考范文】
Dear Toby,
I hope this email finds you well.Last weekend,I attended an Impressionist art exhibition hosted by Yangzhou Art Museum with some classmates.And we were fascinated by the vibrant colors and loose brushstrokes of Monet,Renoir,and other masters.Actually,it was like stepping into a world of light and shadow,capturing fleeting moments of beauty.
In conclusion,the experience deepened my appreciation for art and its ability to transcend borders and time.Additionally,I felt a profound connection to the artists’ emotions and the natural scenes they portrayed.
Do you have similar experience Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Yours,
Li Hua
[随堂演练]
假设你是李华,得知你的新西兰笔友Mike 一直从事志愿活动,你很钦佩。请你给 Mike写一封信,分享自己近期做志愿者的一次经历。内容包括:
1.志愿者经历;
2.你的感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
Making contributions to society is always our mission.The following one really makes a difference.
To offer assistance to children with disabilities in a special school,we visited them last weekend with books,magazines and digital appliances donated by the students in our school.On seeing us,the children all rose to their feet to meet us with smiles.It was their eyes
full of anticipation that made me determined to help make their dreams a reality.
That’s all.What about yours
Yours,
Li Hua

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